PRANBIR OS: ARDOR (please read NOTE)

Posted: 3 years ago

This OS takes place after Ranbir had a fight with Prachi in the serial/show but then had dropped her home.When Prachi had fallen into his arms.



                   OS:ARDOR


He had dropped her home.He stood waiting in the car,she had forgotten her file.He came out of the car to give it to her.She lost her balance, slipped and landed in his arms.He was lost.


Ranbir:Did you feel something??

Prachi:No. Kyu kya hua?

He shook his head.



He drove back to his house.


Had she heard? he wondered. 


For hours he had wondered and contemplated.  He hadn't been thinking when those words had slipped from  his mouth. He only hoped that she couldn't read the undercurrents.


He was standing in his balcony with the guitar in his hand. He was strumming a tune and the lyrics were dancing in his head.

The lyrics of the song which Ranbir was strumming on his guitar and humming are:


https://youtu.be/v4peso5bOY8


(PLAY THE SONG IN THE BACKGROUND WHILE READING FOR A BETTER EXPERIENCE)


She  invaded his thoughts,spoilt his peace and drove him crazy. Just because he had said those words did not mean he meant them. But then again, if he said he didn't say those words, he would be lying. It was all a confusing mess.


She had created havok in his life, and since then, he had never been the same again. He couldn't think of a day, a minute of his life that didn't have her in it. She was there with him in the college, at. work,heck he dropped her home maximum times

She found fault with his way of talking, dressing, his sense of responsibility, she challenged him,called him with various names yet he had uttered those words tonight.They both had this conversation of them being unsuitable for each other a 100 times.


Maybe Aryan wasn't so stupid after all, he thought, pestering him about Prachi all the time, forcing him to analyze his reactions towards Rhea.


Rhea should have been the one invading his dreams but it was Prachi who gave him nightmares that had ruined his nightly sleep and he was never forgiving her for that. 


Seeing his actions today he was sure he was falling head along into madness but he wasn't about to let people know. He started strumming his guitar to calm down his jittering nerves.


He rememberd telling Aryan that he would speak to dad and make Prachi leave her job but he didn't want Prachi to leave. And tonight when he had said those words something had changed. She didn't know, he hoped she didn't. He, himself didn't know what he was supposed to do. Never before had he felt a emotion for someone he claimed to hate.


He remembered the time when she had thrown ink on his shirt. The beating of his heart when he had taken off his shirt, the horrible sense of absence when she had said she did not feel anything being so close to him with him, was proof of that. 


What she had done to him, he did not know. Hope. Belief. Desire. All things that he  knew he should feel for Rhea were here. He had helped her various times.Yes, she now considered him a good person but only for his family.Yet he didn't understand at that time.At that time it was helping his chief, standing up for what is right or being someone whose family was proud of him.


 When he had heard  his Dida,his mother and Aryan speaking of some change in him he had laughed and shrugged it off at first, but now those words spoke the truth of his feelings. She was slowly turning into those people who held pieces of his heart and one of the few who had enough of him to break his heart. 


For days now he had been hiding, running, ignoring the answer when it had been dancing right in front of his eyes and he was sure he was going to turn a blind eye to this incident as soon as the day approached and his wave of madness would surpass him

At first, it was fear. Ranbir knew almost everything related to girls,dating and being famous and there was little that  knew about these stupid thoughts, and he found that hard to deal with. But he would not think about those feelings, those confusing thoughts.He was going to end up with the girl whose picture he had in his cupboard.He was going to land up with that girl who carried modern dresses with ease.He was...........loosing it.


In broad daylight he was always sure of Rhea but in the night when the inhibitions had shed away and there was a uncanny tranquility, Prachi had began to crawl beneath his skin and she had no damn idea.

Edited by ican - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

NOTE



Guys I know all the pranbir fans are out there loyal as ever.

I know there are many posts saying the TRPs are low , the story is being stretched, characters are being copied.


But guys please don't go on defending the show.The people who think so will continue to think so.It only wastes our energy and then there is taunting and war of words.




People have different reasons for liking KKB2

I will say the truth

The only reason I liked it was it was refreshing to see a male lead fall in love much earlier and harder.


So guys just keep watching what you love and let people keep posting what they want.The most pleasing answer is your silence. 

Edited by ican - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Beautifully written.. loved it!! You should write more often.. I could imagine the whole scene such is the beauty of your writing

Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful OS. You have beautifully described his state of mind as he was hurtling towards the unknown.

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by swetamwari


Beautifully written.. loved it!! You should write more often.. I could imagine the whole scene such is the beauty of your writing



You are very sweet

Thank you so much

Check out the index for more stories

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/152973274

Edited by ican - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Nandini25


Beautiful OS. You have beautifully described his state of mind as he was hurtling towards the unknown.


Thank you.

See the index

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/152973274


It is slowing getting filled with so many wonderful stories and authors.


Hope more readers and authors come forward. 

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by ican



Thank you.

See the index

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/152973274


It is slowing getting filled with so many wonderful stories and authors.


Hope more readers and authors come forward. 


U r welcome.

Yeah. Nowadays, so many readers and writers are coming forth. I'm really happy to see this. Hope so too.

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by swetamwari


Beautifully written.. loved it!! You should write more often.. I could imagine the whole scene such is the beauty of your writing



Did you also listen to the song along with reading the OS?



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