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Muskaan998899

@Muskaan998899

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Posted: 5 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: justchillalways

Please update. Waiting for the next part. It is a very good start and wanna see where Ronakshi r going

Yeah I am already working on it and will update by or before Thursday bye.

Lots of love,

Muskaan

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Muskaan998899

@Muskaan998899

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Posted: 5 years ago

#12

I am starting it as a dialogue play as paragraphs become very lengthy with very little content.

Ro: aww I know par this is important u will have to get up.

So: acha I get that it is important but ROHIT where are we actually going.

Ro: aree Sona waise toh u are always dramatic and filmy but suprises ke peeche ke emotion ko samagh nahi Sakti .

So: achatoh surprise hai aise pehele nahi Bata skate the I would have understood.(sonakshi said this to defend herself self pretty innocently but ROHIT who knew her better than herself understood this and decided to let let it remain this way)

Ro: aacha okay BABA ab jao Aur taiyaar ho jao

So: ROHIT itna special occasion hai ki mere doctor surgeon ne mere lia surprise plan kiya hai toh I should look nice na ek nahi dress toh banti hai tum pehele bol dete toh I would have bought a new one na. (ROHIT who was listening to his wife’s rants started smiling )ROHIT tum ko hassi kyu aa Rahi hai main itni serious bat bol rahi hoon?

Ro: sona woh kya hai na I know my wife very well and have kept a new dress for her in the bathroom par wo change KARNay ke liye JATIN hi nahi hai.

(Listening to this she immediately runs to the Washroom ROHIT also follows her after a glimpse of sight in front of her sh3 was awestruck and turns behind to find ROHIT staring at her she immediately went n hugged him as tight as she could )

(While still in the hug)

Ro: tume pasand Aaya?

So: hmm...

Ro: bas hmm acchi nahi LAGi kya ?

(Pulls out of the hug finding sona with tears in her eyes)

Ro: sona tumhe dress aachi nahi lagi to we will get a new one bas tum ro o mat

So: pagal dress boho acchi hai

Ro: sona fir tum ro kyu rahi ho ?

So : ROHIT yeh aasu khushi ke hai kyu ki I have never been loved like this before u know dad used to pamper me like this when I was little but after he left us I had a lot of responsibilities to look after and I spent my entire life with my family who used me as a money mule and after all this I found you who loves me for who I am n I love u loads for this

(ROHIT after listening to this could not help but to take his sona in his embrace)

Ro: sona I know that things have not always worked out well for you but now u are mine and ur happiness and ur sorrows both are mine so stop worrying about it because trust me sona main hoon tumhre saath hamesha

(By now sona had stopped soobing and pulled out of the hug)

So: ROHIT main ready ho JATIN hoon or else we will get late

Ro: okay madam aapka hukum sar aakho pe

(Sona after hearing this could not help but give out a soft chuckle and seeing her laugh ROHIT could not help but smile )

Ro: aacha to go get ready I will change in the room

So: okay sure

(After some time sona comes out dressed in the blue dress ROHIT had given with open hair and light makeup looking like an angel which she really was to ROHIT.rohit as soon as he sw her started staring at her which made her blush lightly )

Ro: beautiful

So: (she who was looking as red as a strawberry )chale?

Ro: Haan sure

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Aacha before u throw tamatars on me for writing such a short update I want to tell you that this was just like a bonus part as I really wanted to them to have this heart to heart conversation before moving ahead in their relationship but as it was not shown on the show it is here.as promised the next part will be here within 2-3 days all thanks to covid 19 so bye take care of your self stay at home stay safe

With loads of love, Muskaan ❤️