MG: kismat se tum humko mile ho|Teaser pg 7| Nov 6

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Tum pagal ho ye kya kar rahi ho.. he held her back. There were priests, her family everyone in front of her. The rituals were ready all she wanted now was to get married. Dressed in a dark red banarsi saree she was looking very beautiful, some gold jewellery adoring her making her give a regal look but not that he liked it at all.



He hated it.. she was marrying and he was the bloody reason she was taking this stupid step.


Chodiye hame.. ye kya kar rahe hain aap.. shubh muhurat nikal jayega.. please jaiye yahan se. She begged and turned and saw that everyone was looking at her and at him.


Geet dekho meri baat suno. I know we should have talked. Par please ye mat karo.. ye kya pagalpan hai.. aur shadi.. tum bhool gayi what I told you. This is all superstitions. Sab dakhiyanusi baatein hai geet. He tried to explain to her again and in a moment of anger he turned and shouted on the pandit.


Aur aap Panditji.. sidhe sade logon ko pagal bana rahe hain paison ke liye. Aap aisa kaise kar sakte hain.. band kariye ye sab. He shouted and looked at the his love. He tried hard to made her agree but she didn't agree.


Geet jaan please don't do this.. you want to marry na, then we will marry now. Mein karunga tumse shadi par tum kisi ped( tree) se shadi nahi karogi. He gave her the ultimatum. She wanted to cry at that moment.


He was there and loved her. He knew that all she wanted in her life was to marry and have a family. A family, husband, children but her dream was shattered. She was rejected by many because she herself denied to get married to an inanimate object because of some Kundli dosh. Her family didn't agreed to many proposals and when she hopelessly fell in love, she wanted him.


Only him and for that she was ready to forgo her ideals, her thoughts, her oath to never succumb to the words of priest but for him she was doing it.


She wanted to cry that moment, he will marry her without any pre-requisites. He was against her own decision but she was adamant. She went closer to him and cupped his cheeks.


Maan hum aapse bahut pyar karte hain. Aur aapse shaadi bhi karna chahte hain. Par aap nahi jante agar humne aaj ye shadi nai ki toh aage jakar aapki zindagi khatre mein padh sakti hain.. hamari kundli mein dosh hain Maan. She tried to explain him. Her family members were looking at her. They have seen the man for the first time in their life. And what shocked them was the open confession of both of them.


Kundli dosh.. kaisa dosh.. kahin hamari shadi ke baad mein mar jaunga. Ya business mein loss hoga, ya bimar ho jaunga.. aur bhi kuch hai. He listed the possible reasons. She wanted to stop him and tears fell from her eyes, how can he say such things. Instead of listening to her anymore and before she could say anymore. He went towards the priest and threatened him.


Manglik dosh hai mujhme pandit ji ab bataiye meri patni kitne din zinda rahegi.. he questioned and before the priest could answer he took his beloved and left.


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Congrats on the random shot! love when u post these shots

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outstanding update. well written!

this is reality!

some people believe in these superstitions.

liked that Maan tried to stop Geet from marrying a tree!

she loves and cares so much for him that she is willing to marry her tree and go against his ideals.

great that Maan does not believe in these things.

Geet states her reasons but Maan explains!

he handled the matter well!

his question to the priest was apt!

will Geet agree?

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on the random shot! love when u post these shots

Thank you Chetna 🤗

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

outstanding update. well written!

this is reality!

some people believe in these superstitions.

liked that Maan tried to stop Geet from marrying a tree!

she loves and cares so much for him that she is willing to marry her tree and go against his ideals.

great that Maan does not believe in these things.

Geet states her reasons but Maan explains!

he handled the matter well!

his question to the priest was apt!

will Geet agree?

update soon


Let's see if geet will agree

I don't have any reasons to post this on forum. If I will write it further it will be on blog. Will definitely send u the link.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I love it when opposite gender understand the feeling of us

I really don't know why and how society believe these things

Maan came stop her for marring

Nobody knows when they will left this world nobody can tell future some people makes money telling lies to simple people

Never believe those people

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Originally posted by: fariya20

I love it when opposite gender understand the feeling of us

I really don't know why and how society believe these things

Maan came stop her for marring

Nobody knows when they will left this world nobody can tell future some people makes money telling lies to simple people

Never believe those people

I agree with you but these things affects too.

I am glad u like this random shot fariya

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Originally posted by: suhaaana

I agree with you but these things affects too.

I am glad u like this random shot fariya

I like to read topic which related to reality of society glad you write bravely as many left topic thinking offended topic

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Originally posted by: fariya20

I like to read topic which related to reality of society glad you write bravely as many left topic thinking offended topic

I am feeling so shy now 😳

Thank you

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