MayRa/ShivJen DT #55 "Tum tak Sirf Maya Aayegi" - Page 16

Originally posted by: dewdrops.16

He would be angry on MJ only.He is not someone who will blame Maya.Remember how he supported Antara when her pictures were leaked and he blamed MJ only.

True, Rudy boy is a gem. But there was no need to kill Rishi, or separate MayRa. There were 7 sinners, bring each sinner down per month. Fake separation would also work them. (like AdiYa, but not how they executed it)

Originally posted by: CursedSoul

Even Rudra could handled a little bit shrewdly in the thought process which was badly needed after Shaadi track. They lacked there, story could have more vengeance and painful right from that track. Their story was always great in writing but execution lack at some extent which they can still pull out the string cs there's slot still to explore for their magnetic complex written up characters.

Perfectly put👍🏼

And this type of concept is never for general audience cs they never like nor empathize with this kind of character be it can swim all the ocean of pain to put effort fir capturing their hearts

Not true. Gone girl, BH1, Baazigar, EHT, Asur, Hannibal, Dexter , etc. have worked

Originally posted by: pranurosid

Plz elaborate

there are these games on play store, where there are stories and you play the lead charcter. You get to say what she says, what she wears, etc.

Like imagine Maya killing Rishi scene but you are Maya, and there comes an option,

1.Kill Rishi

2.tell him the truth

3.break his heart

And then you chose what you want to do, and that is the turning point of the story (I think, coz I never played them, my friend was playing and suggested me to try, but consumes loads of net)

Originally posted by: tournesol

True, Rudy boy is a gem. But there was no need to kill Rishi, or separate MayRa. There were 7 sinners, bring each sinner down per month. Fake separation would also work them. (like AdiYa, but not how they executed it)

Well said👍🏼

Originally posted by: tournesol

True, Rudy boy is a gem. But there was no need to kill Rishi, or separate MayRa. There were 7 sinners, bring each sinner down per month. Fake separation would also work them. (like AdiYa, but not how they executed it)

I wanted her to tell Rudra the truth herself.Even if she did not take the name..the matter should have been told by herself only

Originally posted by: CursedSoul

Actually their version is intriguing and that's make it kinda appear like novel... Some of execution was not upto the mark and some loopholes also messed some of portion in the story. Written and execution process are different, they lack that in some bits I will say cs I watched the drama binge from first epi to 62..

Rishi death was inevitable cs that is main theme of connection for revenge and romance otherwise Mayra lacked that soul of pain...

Connecting from TV audience perspective u can't expect them to love something which is not their route firstly cs they are habitual to day to masala type of concept which get then interlinked by each episode but then u loose the credibility of suspense..

Vikram was no needed to stretch in the story apart from manvi to Maya angle. Even it was not necessary to kill her father/ brother in the very concept. This part were extra only..

Even they could show the connection of MJ with his sons more which could capture audience more to stay rooted for witnessing downfall of him.

In the very first episode they should he loved his sons and they appear world to him, cvs could have executed that emotion at a greater extent but they never did. They should have stopped dadi in this linkup to maintain MJ concept.

Even Rudra could handled a little bit shrewdly in the thought process which was badly needed after Shaadi track. They lacked there, story could have more vengeance and painful right from that track. Their story was always great in writing but execution lack at some extent which they can still pull out the string cs there's slot still to explore for their magnetic complex written up characters.

And this type of concept is never for general audience cs they never like nor empathize with this kind of character be it can swim all the ocean of pain to put effort fir capturing their hearts..

Sorry if I sounded mad in this long due🤔

You made complete sense. It's dark show, so there would be elements of that. Some blunders made the story weak in terms of dark show also, the way revenge was planned, there were lots of loose ends, Dadi shouldn't have left, she was needed at the mansion after MayRa wedding. Rudra's smartness went into a long vacation. I didn't mention Rishi's death in blunder because it showed how brutal Maya can be in her revenge, establishing her lack of mental sanity. But that death was brutal. If he was left alive then the story would have taken another equally intriguing path.

Originally posted by: dewdrops.16

Triangle kahan...yahan to pentagon baan gaya🤣

Hexagon ya decagon bhi ban jayega in time 🤣

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

Pushpavalli is damn toxic, but you want to finish it, for the heck of it.

But Kahaanibaaz on youtube, I went into distress for straight 10 minutes last night😭

Aww.. don't cry 🤗 I still want to see how they executed it, because it's not easy to write about a mentally unstable character.

Did they stop reporting BARC TRPs? Aaj TRP day hain na

Originally posted by: dewdrops.16

Triangle kahan...yahan to pentagon baan gaya🤣

Diya

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Antara➡️MJ Ananya

⬇️ ⬇️

Rishi➡️ Maya↔️Rudra⬅️Rajeev➡️Aditya

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Vikram

Have fun👍🏼