**Her Old Wounds ** **MishBir TS** Completed - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Will surely do! Thank you for reading and commenting <3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Emotional read it was. Wonderfully penned. Would like to read more.


Thank you for the compliment. Will surely update it soon!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: vardhinirosid

Such a brilliant writing👏😍 I really loved it..I felt like watching entire scene infront of my eyes..I really wish some thing like this happen in show, and please write next part on abir n misthi..how abir try to pacify her..


Thank you for the lovely comment! I am glad to know I was able to touch the right cord.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: screen22

Brilliantly written and so emotional that you can feel Mishti’ s pain in every word said.

she as 14 years to make up for.


please continue soon👏



Thank you for reading and commenting!! I will definitely continue it soon <3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: .IamShonali.


Thank you for reading and commenting!! I will definitely continue it soon <3


Thank you for this wonderful read! So loved it!!!

Mishti's pain, hardships and insecurities are never given the due limelight that they deserve in the show! It is always about how others suffered due to her presence in the house!

We are never going to see something like this in the show, ever! So thank you for penning down inner turmoil and pain of Mishti that she has been hiding for so long...


And as for Abir, he has failed big time as a husband by leaving Mishti alone at the resort and I am not sure how he is going to make it up to her.

He, in a way, again chose his Nanko over Mishti!

👎🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: SheThought


Thank you for this wonderful read! So loved it!!!

Mishti's pain, hardships and insecurities are never given the due limelight that they deserve in the show! It is always about how others suffered due to her presence in the house!

We are never going to see something like this in the show, ever! So thank you for penning down inner turmoil and pain of Mishti that she has been hiding for so long...


And as for Abir, he has failed big time as a husband by leaving Mishti alone at the resort and I am not sure how he is going to make it up to her.

He, in a way, again chose his Nanko over Mishti!

👎🏼


Thank you for your reply. I am sure makers will try to implement something when they find the right time for the merger. Till then we can play around with imaginations! <3


Thank you once again for replying

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Teaser for Part 2:


"Sometimes we expect love to work as a medicine. And sometimes, it is just acting as a placebo and we don't even realize it"

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very nice.. This kind of Scene is really needed in the show.... Abir should definitely know Mishti's pain...he should know how deep it is ....Please continue to write... I just imagined Rhea Sharma in your writing.. It was fabulous

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Myviews_yrhpk

Very nice.. This kind of Scene is really needed in the show.... Abir should definitely know Mishti's pain...he should know how deep it is ....Please continue to write... I just imagined Rhea Sharma in your writing.. It was fabulous


Thank you for the compliment. I think for Abir as a character, for somethings he doesnt really understand till he sees them happening. So I guess I just used this as a way for him to know and understand Mishti's issues.


I am glad you could imagine her.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: .IamShonali.


Ashiii <3 <3 <3

I know girl!! LONG LONG TIME!!!


Honestly speaking! I was pretty nervous. I have been wanting to work on this theme ever since I started watching this show but I never found the right starting point. I guess I should be thankful to makers to give us the resort track for me to be able to twist it towards my imagination. I hope I was able to touch the right chords. Looking at the response I am getting here and on twitter, I am happy that everyone has liked it so far.


I will definitely continue this one as time permits.


And hey!! I am reading your story too!! Please continue and post when you can. I cant wait to know the mystery!

Shona..❤️


You have no reason to be nervous dear. You write so well. So just put your thinking caps on and start writing. 😆

Yeah, even I wanted to write in this theme since long. And I'm glad that you did. I love reading your works. I'm also writing a TS on the current track. Planned it to be an OS, but it just kept getting long. 😆 Hopefully the first part will be updated today.


You did touch the perfect chords, Shona. You always do when it comes to penning down the emotions of a character. And I absolutely loved it! ❤️


I'll be waiting for the next part. 😊


Thanks dear! I'll definitely continue the story. I'm glad you liked it. 😳

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