#2 tu hai ki nahi,last pt on pg 75 updt on 5/11

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Hi everyone,another closed thread of another story.updating the prologue,part 1 will be updated soonish.


PROLOGUE

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Raman was crying bitterly looking at ishita's pic decorated with garlands while incense stick was lighted infront of her pic.


Toshiji came and sat next to raman and said -chup ho jaa, puttar. Kitna royega. Teri ishita bhi tujhe aise dekhegi toh usse bura lagega.


Raman -toh kyun chod kar chali gayi toh mujhe. Uski himmat kaise hui apne raman ko akele chodne ki maa. He said crying bitterly while Toshiji hugged him tight and said -puttar, naseeb ke aage kiska bas chala hai. Ho sakta hai uska saath itna hi ho. She was saying while ishita's soul was standing beside them, trying to say something but no-one could hear her.


Ishita -raman sunuge naa. Main mari nahi hoon, I am alive. Please listen to me. She was saying and crying while no one can hear her.


After a week,


Doc-kya hua aapke bete ko.


Toshiji -hallocination, Pichle hafte iski biwi ko maut ho gayi. Tab se nashe mein dhutt rehta hai, aur do din se keh raha hai ki isse ishita dikh rahi hai.


Raman -maa, woh mera hallocination nahi hai. Jisse maine dekha woh ishita hi thi. Meri ishita. Ishita, jaan, madrasan bata naa, tu yahin, bata naa sabko, tu hai ki nahi.


Ishita cried and said -main yahin hoon raman, bas aap hi mujhe nahi dekh paa rahe. She said crying seeing her raman crying bitterly craving for her.


That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

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Index

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PART 1 scroll down

PART 2

PART 3

PART 4

PART 5

PART 6

PART 7

PART 8

PART 9

PART 10

PART 11

LAST PART

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PART 1

Psychologist look at Raman thourougly and said-i think problem bahut badi hai.yeh apni biwi ki maut ka sadma bardasht nahi kar paayen hai,aur issliye unhe har jagah feel kar rahen hai.

Raman-rubbish,aisa kuch nahi hai.main ishita ko dekh raha hoon ,kyunki woh hai .woh zinda hai,mujhe dikh rahi hai.pagal aap sab ho gaye hai jisse woh dikh nahi rahi,yaa shayad aap sab usse dekhna nahi chahte.but I want to see her,feel her,aur sirf issliye woh mujhe dikh rahi hai .meri jaan,meri ishita,mari nahi hai .kahin nahi gayi hai,woh yahin hai ,yahin mere paas.bolo ishita,inn sab ko batao ki tu yahin hai,bol,tu hai ki nahi ??he screamed looking around while ishita's soup who was standing there only said-main yahin hoon,raman.please dekhiye mujhe,suniye mujhe.main mari nahi hoon,zinda hoon,bas aap tak pahunch nahi paa rahi hoon.please aap mujh tak pahunch jaiye .she said crying feeling helpless.

Toshiji -samajhne ki koshish kar ,puttar.ishita nahi rahi ab iss duniya mein.main nahi kehti ki bhool jaa usse,kyunki main jaanti hoon yeh mumkin nahi ,tu bahut pyaar karta tha usse,but kam se kam uski yaadon mein yun paagal mat ho.think about us also ,hum bhi hai tere kuch.

Raman look at his mother and said-please don't cry,maa.main jhooth nahi bol raha .ishita sach mein zinda hai,I am seeing her,aapko kya lagta hai main paagal ho gaya hoon.if u think so then send me to mental asylum,but sach yahin hai ki meri ishita zinda hai and I can see her around .he said getting aggressive when doctor told her to stay silent.

Doc-aap please relax hoiye ,Mr bhalla.

Raman-aapko bhi lagta hai main paagal ho gaya hoon,isn't it.but that's not true,main pagal nahi hoon,ishita zinda hai.he said getting hyper when doctor said -achcha,main samajh gaya ishita zinda hai .achcha tell me something about ur ishita,ur wife.bahut pyaar karte the naa aap unse.he said and raman's expression changed.

Raman-karta tha nahi,karta hoon.aur hamesha karta rahunga.actually woh hai hi aisi ki kisi ko bhi usse pyaar ho jaaye and I am not an exception.he said smiling while ishita too smiled hearing him.

Raman-aapko pata hai woh bahut khoobsurat hai,bahut jyada.matlab itni ki nigahein tham jaaye.meri bhi nigahein tham gayi thi,jab Maine usse pehli baar dekha tha.

Doc-really,kahan mile the aap dono,bataiye mujhe,he said signalling toshiji to wait outside .toshiji nodded and went out of the room while Raman started telling the doctor their love story.

Raman-hum pehli baar ek meeting mein mile tha.ek multinational project ki tender bidding ho rahi thi,woh apni company ko represent kar rahi thi aur main apni .wahan pehli baar dekha tha usse,blue colour ki saree the,khule lambe baal,gehri khoobsurat aankhein aur unn aankhon mein doobta main.usse dekhne ke baad jaise kuch hosh hi nahi raha,ki kahan hoon aur kyun,I was just so lost in her while she was busy in her work,pure professional aur main aashiq bana baitha.aur phir wahin hua joh hona tha,I lost the tender to her,like I lost my heart to her.everyone was congratulating her while I was waiting for her to be alone .after all went ,I went to her.i congratulated her and she said thank u in her sweet voice .Maine khud ko rokna chaha but couldn't and I asked her for dinner.at first she was hesitant but then got ready.shayad main bhi usse achcha lagaa tha.we started meeting,pehli mulaqat phir dusri and then we start meeting everyday.slowly we fell for each other and finally one day I proposed her.usne haan kar di and I started feeling like the most lucky man on earth.he said smiling while ishita too smiled hearing him.

Raman-just after proposing her,next day I met her parent.at first they were not ready as I was out of their community,but phir hamara pyaar dekh kar maan gaye.on fifth April ,we got married.bahut khush tha main uss samay aur phir uske baad ka har pal bahut khoobsurat tha.teen saal,pure teen saal humne khushi khushi bitaye and then this accident ,he said and paused.

Doc-kya hua tha,kaise hua tha woh accident .bataiye mujhe.

Raman-ishita ko ek site visit karne jaana tha.she wasn't feeling good toh Maine mana kiya,but as she was much committed to her work,she was adamant to go.hamara jhagda bhi ho gaya tha iss baat par.aur woh subah -subah mujhe bataye bina chali gayi.u know,I was really angry,aisa koi karta hai.but phir shaam ko uska phone aaya,main bahut naraaz tha,baat bhi nahi kar raha tha.then she said she has a surprise for me .koi aisi khabar jisse sunn kar mera saara gussa chala jaayega.i pretended to be angry but had my all ears to hear the news.she was about to say something when I heard a huge sound aur phir sab khamosh.sab kuch khamosh ho gaya.i got to know,turn lete samay car disbalance ho gayi aur khaayi mein jaa giri.and I lost my jaan,my ishita.he cried while she too cried hearing his words.

Ishita-i am sorry,raman.meri galti thi .mujhe nahi jaana chahiye tha ,aapne mana kiya tha but still I went and couldn't even give u the biggest news of our life,that I am pregnant.main maa banne wali hoon aapke bachche ki .I ruined everything,I ruined everything,Raman.even before getting the happiness,I destroyed everything.main aapko bata nahi paayi ,aur aaj aap sunn nahi paa rahen mujhe.i am sorry ,raman.really sorry.she said crying on her helplessness.

That's all for now,enjoy.

Edited by cutieruhi - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Emotional prolouge

Waiting for update eagerly

Pls update soon

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Interesting prologue.. .update soon

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Very emotional and interesting update dear

Eagerly waiting for next update soon dr

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Emotional update

Continue soon

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Awesome update

Physiologist said problem is big raman is in shock due to his wife death raman said he is not mad he is saying true his wife is alive he can feel her he can see her he asked ishita to tell them ishita was helpless toshiji said she can understand he loves ishita so much she is not asking him to forget her but don't get mad think about them Raman asked him mother not to cry he is saying true he was getting hyper physiologist asked him he loves his wife so much na raman said yes from their first meeting physiologist asked him to tell his love story toshiji was sent out of the room raman started telling him how they met first time how he lost his heart to her in first meeting itself and how he asked to come on dinner date with him she agreed slowly they started meeting daily they fell in love and told their family but her family was not ready first but seeing their love they agreed how they got married and they were so happy in their life till that accident physiologist asked what had happened he told him how ishita was not feeling good that day he asked her not to go on work but she was not ready how they fight how she went without telling him he was angry with her he got call in evening she wanted to give him some good news but before that her car banged in truck and car fell down somewhere ishita was standing their said she is going to become mother of his kid she should have listened to him that day she is sorry she was not able to give this big news to him poor Ishra curious to know where is ishitas body how raman will bring her back

Pls update soon

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Awesome chappy Di

Emotional too

Update soon Di

Thanks for Pm Di

Sorry for the late reply Di

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Nice update

Pls update soon its a request

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