MayRa OS- Meant To Be - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: cuteariya

awe what beautiful OS

rudra got to know abt his parents & punished them fr what they did to maya👏

mayra got remarried & really happy❤️

wow maya got pregnant & mayra was so happy😃

poor maya still felt guilty & also scared to lose her baby once again🥺

glad rudra is with her🤗

loll maya's mood swing & rudra handling her🤣

finally mayra got their baby girl

wow rudra name her misha❤️

awe rudra is so naughty😉

hope u will write more on mayra🤗

Thank you so much for your review dear❤️

Means a lot🤗

Yeah, it is natural for Maya to get scared for her baby because she has faced a lot of hardships in the past and lost her unborn baby too jiske baare me usne kitne sapna dekhe the

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Posted: 5 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

So beautiful

Absolute dream end rather happy ever after for Mayra❤️ Loved it. Please wrote more🤗

Actually the title of this OS was originally Happily ever after but I changed it because it was written for some other couple

Thank You so much dear for your love🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sh18

Very beautiful written and so many simple yet emotinal moments!!! 👍🏼❤️

Wish we could see this in the show as well...I was almost imagining their while I was reading this

Thank you so much🤗

Yeah I want that cute and simple Manvi back at least infront of Rudra

Because Maya is a farce, an illusion and only Rudra can bring out Manvi that is Maya's true self

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Posted: 5 years ago
#14

Love love love it! whatever the ending may be, to me, this is my happy ending for them.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Rara22

Love love love it! whatever the ending may be, to me, this is my happy ending for them.

Thank you so much dear🤗

I am happy that you liked my work❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#16
I know it doesn't match with your level and taste 😉

Because jitna maine tumhe jaana hai

You don't like mushy romance right?

Edited by Devakshilover - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#17

Ankita this is so beautiful.. amazing work 👏

Loved it..❤️

thank you so much..you made my day..🤗

After a stressful day your OS is like a breath of fresh air.

Read it twice and still want to read again.

MayRa are ❤️

n the way you have written is amazing.

While reading I was imagining MayRa/ShivJen in the scenario..😆

Keep writing more and more.. Keep your creativity flowing..👍🏼

Edited by dusk2dawn - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

Very rarely we used to get a chance to read such an amazingly written story Ankita.🤗(Can I call you like this?)

With full of these emotional expressions, Maya and Rudra live in front of our eyes while running through the lines forward! So natural, as natural as many recollections bring back those past smiles afresh on the readers' lips! Wah... simply grabbed the heart of your reader with the authority to dip it into your excellent literary work and resisting to give it back to us?!! Now I am not going to leave you to sit aside with silence!! Here is a friendly demand, a reader's command, a fellow human's request .... write Devi write more, you have immense talent, pleading you dear, don't allow it to drip aside.

You have given a romantic touch to this otherwise a revenge oriented dark story, simply turned the story with your magical fingertips!!

Normally, whenever my friends ask me to comment on their OS or FF, ritualistically I will write a few lines due to the respect I have towards writers and their expressive power, but here I got a precious gift, thank you dear... thank you very much.👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Very rarely we used to get a chance to read such an amazingly written story Ankita.🤗(Can I call you like this?)

With full of these emotional expressions, Maya and Rudra live in front of our eyes while running through the lines forward! So natural, as natural as many recollections bring back those past smiles afresh on the readers' lips! Wah... simply grabbed the heart of your reader with the authority to dip it into your excellent literary work and resisting to give it back to us?!! Now I am not going to leave you to sit aside with silence!! Here is a friendly demand, a reader's command, a fellow human's request .... write Devi write more, you have immense talent, pleading you dear, don't allow it to drip aside.

You have given a romantic touch to this otherwise a revenge oriented dark story, simply turned the story with your magical fingertips!!

Normally, whenever my friends ask me to comment on their OS or FF, ritualistically I will write a few lines due to the respect I have towards writers and their expressive power, but here I got a precious gift, thank you dear... thank you very much.👏

Yeah, you can call me however you like

Oh my God!

I can't express how delighted I am right now

Thank You so much for loving my work and expressing your views that too going out of your way

I really appreciate it. Can't thank you enough

And I will definitely try to write more

Btw I have one question. How do you know my name?


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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

Yeah, you can call me however you like

Oh my God!

I can't express how delighted I am right now

Thank You so much for loving my work and expressing your views that too going out of your way

I really appreciate it. Can't thank you enough

And I will definitely try to write more

Btw I have one question. How do you know my name?


After reading the story, I normally prefer to read the comments too! 😊

Someone addressed you as Ankita, prior to reading that, I wanted to call you as Devi!😊

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