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Posted: 5 years ago

So the proposal is from Dev. But he will never run into her when she is at the farmhouse with Maan.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: swapna.p

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

Ty for the comment :)

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

splendid banner.

Chapter 10

oh no Geet is unwell. glad that Maan reacted quickly and took Geet to his farmhouse. can understand Maan's tension.

Thank God Maan arranged for the doctor. liked that the doc assured Maan.

so Geet's dad has saw a boy for her. well Rano's concern is reasonable. at least Mohinder will not force Geet.

well Geet does respect her dad.... so can understand her dilemma. but Geet will not go against her dad.

so that's why Geet was tensed.... the guy is coming to Shimla to meet Geet. its Dev....

what will she do? how will Maan react?

loved that Maan takes care of Geet.

nice that he knows his limits.

Thanks for the lovely comment Chetna.... Glad you liked the banner 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 10


Fabulous


Maan was scared for Geet seeing her pale face her shivering lips and body

while her wet clothes too contributed to her shivering

been in the snow Geet was frozen with cold and this really made Maan fear for her

taking her to the Khurana Farmhouse and ensuring that she stay in warmth

have hot soup Maan waited for her to be back to normal

while on the other hand Geet's parents are talking about her marriage alliance

so Geet's father had spoken to her about that and Geet knowing this she will

stay away from Maan as much as possible

Geet's mother feel the alliance and everything is happening to quickly

but Geet's brother Mohit feels Geet is of age to marry now

so the guy Dev had to spend some time with Geet

this twist is surprising but I wonder now will Maan just let Geet free to marry

or will he fight for her


Precap is Interesting seems like Geet thinks Maan had changed her clothes

Thanks for the comment Taahir 🤗.... We Will see what he will do.... Abhi Abhi pyaar Ho raha vuse... He is somewhat confused with his feelings for once he Gets to know that he loves her.... Then you know what he will do just 😉

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Posted: 5 years ago

Great update

Geet father choosing dev for him and she love maan how will maan reacts

I don't think geet refused marring gdev as she is not want her father angry

And she knows the status different between them won't let it happen

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: janu2006

Great part

Just read your story.. Very interesting

Maan getting possessive for Geet hope he manages to talk to her

Also Geets family bring Dev in picture now

Waiting to read more

Cont soon

Hey Janu thanks for the comment... Glad you liked it

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Posted: 5 years ago

Be Mine



part 11



previous part : he kept his arms on either side of her and kissed her forehead slightly “aanke kholo geet...i want my feisty geet who fights with me....i dont like this ” he whispered looking at her....she stirred in her sleep he immediatley moved away fearing she may think wrong of seeing him close to her .... but she didn’t wakeup... he moved towards the couch and sat there looking at her as if his staring will wake her up !



Maan was awake the whole night he used to get up and see that whether she is awake or that if she needs anything then he could help her ! but would be disappointed when he sees her sleeping peacefully....he wants her to get up and make sure that she is fine....he doesn’t know how she will react in the morning will she blame him for her condition!!?



How will she react when she sees that she is alone with him in this farmhouse ... he hoped that she will not create a drama knowing her nature she will definitely create some drama..... he sighed putting his face in his hands ....he rubbed his eyes....which were now looking slight red indicating he hadnt slept a blink !! he looked at his watch showing it’s 6 in the morning.... he just then remembered that he hadnt called his friend yash to say about this.... he immediately took his phone on the table situated on the bedside table before her...




He looked at her face which is glowing now....few strands of hair escaped from her pony disturbing her sleep....he took slow steps towards her lost in her....he stretched his hand and put those strands behind her ear.......he noticed her jhumkas and thought that it looks beautiful to her ...simple and beautiful just like her ! just then his phone vibrated...he moved away from her and looked at the screen to see yash calling... uff i thought to call him but what was i doing ! he muttered and took the call moving outside the room



Helloo yash



Hello Maan where are you... thank god you answered my call ...where were you why didnt you lift the phone... how is geet ...!? yash screamed in a tensed voice .... he was about to continue but maan cut him off.



Yash relax .....we are fine just that geet was stuck in a snow and we had to stay here...im in my farm house now... sorry that i couldn’t call you....



Omg i hope she is fine... shall we come there !? he asked in a worried tone



No it’s fine we will reach there soon whenever geet wakes up ! dont worry she is fine maan assured him...... saying ok and be carefull yash cut the call !!



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Geet got up and looked around to see herself in an unknown place.... the place looked looked royal to her...but her mind panicked there where many thoughts running in her mind... she remembered all the moments with maan.... how he left her in anger and her waiting in the parking lot.... snowfall and finally her fainting.... she gulped did someone kidnapped her when she fainted was the first thought that came in her mind !! she immediatey stood up and frowned looking at herself in a kurta reaching just below her knees.... just then she heard maan’s voice.



Maan entered into the room to see that geet woke up ....he sighed in relief



“finally princess is awake from her deepsleep...i was wor...” but he stopped when he looked at her stunningly....her face glowing as sun rays directly fell on her from the window side nd kurta reaching just below her knees.... his eyes looked down to see her creamy long legs.... he then looked into her eyes to see she was uncomfortable and was pulling the kurta downwards as if it will strech with her pulling ! he immediately faced his back towards her noticing her nervous state.



Geet felt uncomfortable by his intense gaze on her.... she then thought who changed her clothes she was horrified even to think of maan changing her clothes..... Even if she loved him she knows her limits... she couldnt think of Maan touching her in that way.... not at once she thought that she will be in this situation just because of him....why did he fought with her and even if she waited for him in the parking area why couldn't he come... Did his ego more important to him than her! And How dare he change her clothes that is the last string to her .....


she felt her temper raising how could you do this she said in a low deep tone which said she is in a deep pain by all the situations around her....like she is tired of things happening around her.... it is like she couldn’t control the things around her....her feelings her wishes were not in her hands but others... Her inner turmoil was making her say things !!



Maan turned immediately listening to her.... he frowned when he saw her holding her head.... he swiftly moved towards to hold her but she moved away as if his touch burned her.



Door rahiye mujse... how dare you ... she screamed looking at him with her red eyes.... maan was confused hearing her he couldn’t understand what happened to her suddenly .... is she angry with me...off course she will be but why this much he thought and looked at her he was taken aback looking at her eyes.... they showed immense pain and anger !



What he asked confused



How dare you to touch me and change my clothes..... mere dress kaha hain aur yei kurta kahase aaya... where did you brought me..... i was a fool to come with you.... she was blabbering continously not knowing how her words made him angry !! he moved towards her and holded her arms in a tight grip.... she stopped when she felt his tight grip and looked into his eyes



“chup bilkul chup..... kya bakwas kar rahi ho tum... muje koi shoq nahi hain tume chuneki aur rahi baat kapdonki tho...... you were sick from cold and was shivering like a leaf and i brought u here in my farmhouse nd told the maid to change your clothes” he said it all breathing heaving... at once he jerked her away and glared at her.... “thanks i didn’t knew that you have this very good opinion on me” saying this painfully he moved out of the room.


She looked at his retreating form guiltly she shouldnt have said all those words to him.... she knew him well and how she thought that he couldnt do something like that “hey babaji i did wrong by accusing him and shouting at him ! ab mai kya karu...i will apologize to him haina babaji ” she said with tears continuously flowing from her eyes



She took her clothes which were neatly folded and ironed on the bedside and rushed into the washroom.... she took her bath and got ready by 20 minutes and came downstairs....she looked here and there for maan but he was nowhere to be seen she pouted.... just then she looked at the kitchen side to see maan making something “Chal geet time to manofy him... gusse mai tho laal mirchi ki tarah hota hain !! and you should be sweet with him so that uska gussa toda kam hojay” she slowly tip toed and stood behind him.....



Precap : kya hum dosth nahi ban sakte !!! 😆


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Edited by Kuttisri - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Geet blame maan

Bt maan me sab bta Diya ki usne nhi maid me change kiye uske clothes

Chlo geet madam time to manofying maan Babu

Gud luck

Wating for nxt

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Posted: 5 years ago

maan is hurt by geet's accusation

geet realised her fault n now trying to apologize him

will ti work

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you all For liking and commenting on the previous part.... I will Post the next update soon 🤗

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