love vs hate. Rt and Mc ff chp 17 posted on pg 10 - Page 4

Originally posted by: meenachem

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Thats a big twist in the tale. Saiba is the murderer of Veer's parents? How did that happen? so now they get married and go away from each other.

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Originally posted by: coderlady

Thats a big twist in the tale. Saiba is the murderer of Veer's parents? How did that happen? so now they get married and go away from each other.

Vijay was shocked at the story that turned out, he didn't know the decision he took years ago to change Nandini name to saiba was his biggest mistake, he sat in the couch holding his head in his hands, it was his mistake that they meet and fell in love, but he changed her name to protect her from the curse the name held if he hadn't no matter where they would have gone it would hunt her and the fact she had spent 2 years in a child remand home.

"Saiba, why did you marry him why," Vijay interrogated.

"So he could beg me to leave him," said saiba angrily.

"What you mean, I don't understand, " said Vijay confused.

"I know everything dad, grandfather had told me everything when I came back from canada, when we turn 24, we have to go back to our kingdom and resume our duties but since I am a girl I have to first impress the elders and the people of the state, but at the same time, the prince of Jodhpur will set on the throne as soon as he gets 24 and he has to get married at the age of 26 and give birth to the heir if he wants to remain a king, but if somehow he doesn't he will be thrown out of the palace and won't be considered a prince or king," said saiba.

"But that law goes same to you said," Vijay eyebrows raised.

"Yes, but I am a girl I won't be given the throne that easily I will have to prove my ability but if I fail to impress the elders than they already have the heir to the throne your nephew and my cousin," said saiba.

Vijay was shocked hearing her, she was declaring every word like she is been planning for ages.

"How long have you been planning," Vijay asked?

"Since the day I found out who he was," said saiba.

"so you are just going to use this law to get your revenge, saiba this is not right you have the right to sit on that throne you are my daughter and I will not let anyone take that right from you, " said, Vijay.

"dad, if I decide to take the throne I have to get married to someone in our royal family and since your cousin is the last family apart from us I don't have any choice but marry him but I can't do that because I am already married to the enemy it's the last way for your nephew to take up the throne," said saiba.

"And let's just say you impress the elders and they decide to make you a Queen what than what will you do," said Vijay.

"I will take the responsibility of Queen and when the time comes near for me to produce an heir I will step down and let your nephew take over but under any circumstances, I will not divorce veer," said saiba.

"But there is one more way since you are married to the enemy our kingdom respect the sacred rituals they will consider once accepting veer as the son in law and both states won't have any other choice but unite as friends," said, Vijay.

"what, what are you saying dad, " said saiba confused.

"I am saying that your marriage to veer could end the long bloody war between jodhpur and Mewar and your child will rule both kingdoms as it will be the heir to both of throne," said, Vijay.

"you really think I would forget that veer killed mom and move on with him for the sake of the kingdoms," said saiba.

"saiba don't forget you are blamed for his father death too, no one on this earth knows what exactly happen that day when we found you both of you had guns in your hands both of were blaming each other for the deaths I tried to find out from you but you were in shock I did everything to make you remember but you couldn't and the same goes for veer said," Vijay.

"if I did remember don't you think I would have told you dad but the truth is there is nothing to remember it's clear as water veer killed my mom and in shooting him his dad got killed, don't you think I regret it all my life killing an innocent man it kills me dad but I was only 10 years old," said saiba.

"saiba,".......before Vijay could say anything further.

"my name is Nandini Rudra prathab and now you can call me by that name dad," said saiba announced.

"Is this your last decision Nandini," said, Vijay.

"yes, it's my last decision," Nandini declared...
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Veer's house.

Veer was sleeping on his back, a bottle of alcohol was next to him, the windows shut closed not letting any light to come in.

The door slowly opened and anjali came in, she looked at veer and hot tears dropped from her eyes, he was not the veer she knew, the uneven beard, his missed up hair, the alcohol, the stingy clothes, it just broked her heart, but she will not let him destroy his life. She looked around the room which was more like a storeroom, and her eyes fell on the covered painting, she went and took off the cover and saw a girl which looked not less than a fairy everything looked so natural in her.

Aunty told her everything when she came in the afternoon every detail from their first meeting to the last but she knew something was missing, some pieces from veers life were missing and she had to find out what are they and where are they even if she had to go to the past, She covered the painting and opened the curtains, to let the light come in.

"Oye, veer get up it's 12 in the afternoon," said anjali waking veer up but it was no use.

"VEEEERRRRRR!!!!!," anjali screamed in his ears and veer opened his eyes rapidly and sat down.

"What the bloody hell, what kinda way is this to wake up someone," said veer angrily.

"It's anjali way veer," said anjali.

Veer looked at her and turned around to look for his bottle he picked it up and start to open.

"stop it veer, what the bloody hell is wrong with you," said anjali angrily.

"give me the bottle back Anju," said veer.

"no never," said anjali she hit the bottle on the floor and broke it and next on the table there was a jug of ice-cold water with ice cubes in it she went brought it and poured it on veer's head, veer shivered and stood up and looked at anjali, he gazed few minutes and suddenly he put his arms around her and embraced her.

"where were you Anju, I missed you so much, where the hell was my best friend when I needed her so much," said veer sadly.

"I came veeru, but you refused to see anyone I waited and tried to see you but at last, I had to give up," said anjali closed to tears.

"and just like everyone you gave up on me, first Karan than dad, and you too, you were my friend couldn't you do the same thing you did today," said veer.

"I am sorry veeru, I am really sorry," said anjali.

veer backed away and looked at her he had missed her a lot but he never told anyone but he was glad she was here.

"Veer what have you done to yourself look at you, no one gave up on you but you turned your back on everyone", said anjali.

"You don't know anything anjali," said veer.

"I do know what happen in Canada aunty told me everything but how long will you give the punishment to your family because of her, veer this is not done, think about your mom you are killing her, your dad just looks at your bedroom door everymorning in hope you would come out and be with him, talk to him he has given all his life for you but you disappoint him veer, your mom, your brother no one has neglected you veer it's you who has turned his back on everyone, " said anjali.

There was silent for seconds, veer thinking about what anjali said he couldn't deny but it was true.

"you will get sick when was the last time you took shower veer, you sting," said anjali.

veer looked embarrassed, he took a sniff from his jacket and nearly fainted he took out his jacket and threw it on the floor.

"I need a shower," said veer.

"yes you need a shower but you also need Lysol, harpic, detol, lifeboy, only then you will get clean up, " said anjali.

veer was about to say something but got quite rushed off to the bathroom leaving anjali smiling smiling.

anjali called the servants to clean the room before veer comes out, 5 servants with water, brush, mop, Lysol, and a huge garbage plastic bag for the alcohol bottle, soon the room transferred from a storeroom a rather filthy one, bed sheets changed, curtains changed everything was brand new.

"that's all thank you all," said anjali to the servants.

"but what should we do with the painting," the servant asked looking at the painting.

"Leave it there and put the red cloth on it," said anjali.

"ok, mam," the servant said.

veer came out and looked at the room thinking he might have been in the wrong room, it looked so clean, he took deep breaths even the air looked fresh and clean maybe he was somewhere else but when he saw the painting he knew he was in the right room.

"What you think," anjali asked.

"Clean," said veer.

"And so do you," said anjali.

"Now wear clothes and come down," said anjali.

"No, I am fine here," said veer.

"No, if and but get ready and come down otherwise you won't see me here in next 5 minutes," said anjali.

"Ok," said veer giving up.

On the dining table.

"Good evening everyone," said Anjali.

"Good evening dear," said vishaka.

"Good evening," said, Karan.

"Good evening," said Sumer.

"Anjali isn't veer coming down," Sakshi asked hopefully.

"You are wasting time vishaka when has he joined us these last 3 years," said Sumer before anjali could answer.

"Yes, mom besides he is already busy destroying his life," said Karan.

they heard footsteps they turned around and saw it was veer, everyone eyes and mouth fell open, wearing a white shirt and white pant, brushed hair, no one could stop gazing.

veer took his seat, the servant served him food he just looked at the food and started to eat.

everyone just looked at him like they have seen a ghost, vishaka was close to tears looking him like that, while after ages Sumer and Karan smiled at him.

"Eating without me," said a voice behind them.

Sumer was about to eat a morsel when he stopped in mid-air with the shock of hearing the voice, vishaka began to shake badly, veer looked at them and then the voice, it was none other than Abhimanyu sing.

Sumer and vishaka both got up and went in front of him and bowed in front of him.

"Your highness you should have called I would have come to the airport myself," said Sumer.

"It's okay son, I am glad I came without informed otherwise I wouldn't have seen how good you have taken care of my grandson," said the old man.

veer came and touched his feet and his grandfather hugged him.

"How are you grandpa," said veer?

"I am good now seeing you," said Abhimanyu sing.

"How is grandma," veer asked?

"She is good but she is dying to see you," said Abhimanyu.

"We have talked about it grandpa," said veer.

Anjali slowly left the dining room thinking they would need their privacy.

"Mom, dad you don't have to stand with your heads down," said veer looking at his parents.

Vishaka and Sumer relaxed and looked at them.

"We will leave you alone your highness," said Sumer.

"No, dad, you don't have to," veer declared.

"I am sure you have told him about who he is Sumer," asked Abhimanyu sing.

"The prince knows very limited things, your highness I told him very little things because I thought it was far best for you to tell him," said Sumer.

"I am not a prince for you dad, don't you dare call me that," said veer angrily.

"Veer I know you love them as your parents but they are just your caretakers, you were sent here with them to protect you from enemies I told Sumer to change his surname to sing and raise you as his son," said Abhimanyu.

"And now you are asking me to treat them as servants, grandpa relationship doesn't work like that, this is my family and my parents, my brother and I will not forget that," said veer.

"Call them whatever you want but you have to come back to jodhpur, in few days you will be 24 and you have to take over the kingdom," said Abhimanyu.

"Forget it, grandpa, I will not return and I will not take over some kingdom," veer announced.

"Veer you are our last heir, if you refused then we will have to bow in front of the enemy and hope they have mercy on us veer don't destroy our last hope," said Abhimanyu.

"Vishaka you tell veer, make him understand what will happen if he doesn't return," said Abhimanyu pleading.

Vishaka came near to veer put his hand on his shoulder.

"Veer listen to me carefully, years ago when we left jodhpur with you, a lot of our enemies started to look for you, Jodhpur is not just About the people or hope for their heir to return, it's about the enemies that are waiting to take over, after we came here enemies tried to take over the kingdom destroyed everything, assaulted women's and girls, in search for you a lot of people died including my family only my small brother was left alive because they thought he was dead and the king saved him and took him to the palace," said vishaka crying.

veer put his hand on her hand.

"Every kingdom has a rule which cannot be changed, if they have an heir to the throne than he has to be declared on his 24 birthday if god forbidden if it doesn't happen than the enemy will take over and they have no other choice but to surrender everything every being," said vishaka.

veer turned around and hugged vishaka tightly and then looked at her in the tearful eyes.

"Who did all this maa who is after out kingdom," veer asked?

the king of Mewar sumaishwer Rudra prathab, Abhimanyu sing declared.

veers eyes burned in the fire, he closed his fists in rage, when he opened his eyes he looked at his mother.

"Is it true maa," veer asked vishaka clenched his teeth.

"Yes, veer its true," said vishaka.

"After your father was killed we have been giving our lives to protect you in the hope you would return one day," veer said Abhimanyu sing.

"But why dad grandpa why did they kill him," veer asked.

"They killed him because they knew even if they do kill you, Raghu veer will give birth to another heir so for them, it was important for your father to be killed rather than you, once they succeed in killing him their path to you was clear, " said Sumer.

"That's why they used their princess to achieve their goal," said vishaka.

"And you succeeded in killing her mother," said, Karan.

veer got shocked if Nandini hands were covered with his father death than his hands were too with her mother blood.

"Maa, why don't I remember what happened that day all I remember was seeing her killing dad and in return I wanted to shoot her but her mom got killed why don't I remember anything else," said veer helplessly.

"Because you were in deep shock, we tried so much for you to recover but we failed every time we couldn't recover your memory back when you came from Canada and told use about Nandini and us but than also you couldn't remember what happened that day, "said vishaka.

"When that tragic happened we made you disappear from there put you underground so once this matter gets clear we would bring you out said Sumer.

"What about my mom what happened to her," veer asked.

"She died in a car accident," said Abhimanyu sing sing.

But vishaka and Sumer exchanged looks as if it was a lie.

"Ok fine I will come back to palace," said veer.

"No, you can't say," Sumer.

"Why not Sumer," said Abhimanyu.

"I am sorry your highness but veer is not ready, we have to prepare him like you prepare a solider, we still have time and he has to prepare to face any danger that comes his way," said Sumer.

"Right you are Sumer than it's decided to bring the best trainer here, train him as hard as you can but promise me you will bring to the palace on his 24 birthday," said Abhimanyu.

"I promise you, your highness, I won't disappoint you," said Sumer.

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Nandini house.

"Who are these people dad," Nandini said curiously?

"These are our loyal trainers from Mewar since you decided to take your duty I decided to train you because there will be danger in every step you take, we have little than a month for you to train yourself so you have to start from today Nandini," said, Vijay.

the trainers bowed in front Nandini, she tried to smile. but none came, she thought about veer, you have seen my love suryaveer sing and now you will see the revenge of a lover Nandini thought.

"Dad call grandpa and tell him I will be coming on my birthday and one more thing tell him to send this news to the enemy," said Nandini.

Vijay looked at his daughter and could easily see why she said that, but she doesn't know that he is getting ready for the war as well.
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veer's house.

"Sumer I don't know how long will we be able to hide this truth from the king that veer is already married to the daughter of the enemy," said vishaka.

"I don't know either vishaka but we have to hide, let's go and talk to veer," said Sumer.

veer was in the living area talking to Karan and anjali after such a long time they had seen him smiling and being normal. veer grandfather left for jodhpur in hope veer would come soon and he said he will send in the best trainer he has in jodhpur, we had forgotten about anjali presence they apologised for that but since vishaka had told her about veer she understood and she had left before she could hear anything God bless her Sumer thought. But veer being her friend told her everything later.

"Veer we need to talk to you," said Sumer.

"What is it dad," said veer.

"Veer before anything starts you have to promise me you will never let anyone know you are married to the princess of Mewar," said Sumer.

"Why dad," said veer.

"Because I am telling you please listen to me," said Sumer.

"No, Dad, I wanna know why," said veer adamantly.

Sumer and vishaka got quite and looked at each other.

"What happened, aunty, why don't you want anyone to know," anjali asked.

"Yes, mom why," Karan asked.

"look veer this enmity between the two families was born even before your great, great grandfather, my father used to tell me that this bloodline was hundred years old but once your forefathers sat together and decided to bring a solution to this war the elders of both kingdoms finally found the solution to end the war," said Sumer.

"And what was that dad, " veer asked.

"The solution to the war was if a young boy and girl from the royal families from both states end up marrying for the sake of true love than the war will end and the boy and girl will get equal right on both kingdoms and their child will be heir to the throne of both of kingdoms," said vishaka.

veer got silent, unable to think anything.

"But the condition was based on true love and to be each others half soul, both at the same time both kingdoms had enemies in their own houses and so in those days they set one more law and that was the marriage of the Prince at the age of 26," said Sumer.

"What!!, dad what are you saying," said, Karan.

"I am saying that if veer doesn't get married at the age of 26 and give birth to the next heir than he will be no longer consider the king and will be thrown out of the palace with the entire family," said vishaka.

"What that's the stupid thing I have ever heard," said anjali.

"Yes, and if this happens then we longer have any right on jodhpur and we have to surrender it to the enemy," said Sumer.

"Does this rule apply to Mewar also," veer asked.

"Yes, it does," said Sumer.

"Is there anyone else in Mewar that has some right over the throne after the Princess veer asked.

"Yes, there is," said a voice behind them.

they all looked at him wearing black patani clothes, a black cloth was tied around his forehead and a sword in his hand. he came in front of veer and bowed his head.

"My name is Ali your highness and I was sent here to train you," said the man.

"Tell me what you know about Mewar heir," said veer.

"Vijay Rudra prathab has a nephew second in the line to the throne but the first right is, of course, his daughter's Nandini Rudra prathab but before she gets the throne she will have to empress the elders and the people of the Mewar and than only she can get the Thorne, " said Ali.

veer was shocked he didn't know he had made such a big mistake marrying Nandini he didn't remember anything that time and he wasn't aware of any of this but he knew Nandini had known about all this and that's why she wanted to marry him in the first place her revenged started the day she knew who he was.

"But what if she doesn't empress them than," asked Karan.

"Then her cousin will be announced as the king," said, Ali.

"but that's good right," said anjali.

"No, it's not," said veer.

"what you mean veer," said anjali.

"she doesn't care about the throne because even if she does fail to impress the people she dosnt care because they have an alternative but that's not her target," said veer.

"Then what is veer," vishaka asked.

"Me, she will do anything to sit on the throne mom because she wants me to beg her for the divorce so I can marry someone else, but she will never let that happen, and when it comes for me to give an heir to the kingdom I will fail miserably and we will have no choice than to surrender ourselves to her and she is not in any mood to leave me so soon," said veer.

"You mean she is doing all this just so she can drop you in her feet," said anjali.

"Yes, she will get the throne but she will leave it to her cousin after her motive is full filled once I bow in front of her," said veer.

"I can't believe this, she has already pushed us to the corner, she has already won the first and important round, " said sumer.

"I am sorry your highness but I have heard from elders they say, "

The revenge of the lover is more dangerous than the enemies, enemies attack your body but the lover turned into enemy attacks your soul.......

Veer has not completely understood nandini's plan. will he ever trust her?

from saiba to nandini...damn the transition is really strong ...superb update