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Posted: 4 years ago

Happy New Year.... please continue 

Posted: 4 years ago

will be picture perfect when updates are posted 

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by cutical


Di welcome back hope u continue  ur other stories plz di conplete  ur stories😭 speacily ur mine sauda dil ke kalm se waq badlte rishtoon ki dastaan  plzzz😭


i just dont getting time 

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by khwaishfan


shot 2

tremendous update! amazingly written! 


feeling for Geet! I agree that its not easy for a girl to accept a new life and place! her husband she be there supporting her!


why do things change after marriage?


perhaps Maaneet need to go for s holiday! 



 


thanks

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by khwaishfan


will be picture perfect when updates are posted 


random shots hai 

Posted: 4 years ago

SHOT # 3

My days is incomplete without tears, I don’t getting when I start thinking so much.. how I leave here in his house like this… small-small fights , never ending issues, lack of love, attention, care, time… actually you never realize anything after telling or sharing with you everything’s…

 My day start with you and end with you, but what about your???????? I don’t know

I don’t getting how much I need to understand you

Time passing like usual, but for me suffocation level increasing

One day all things passed good another day again same things happened

I not able to understand own self, I am wrong or right?

 

We just sitting and watching TV happily, suddenly he start complaining about my food…

Geet : ok I tried

Maan : how much you tried?

Kitne time se you are cooking

And still

You not able to make food properly

Geet : I tried more

Maan : ek mahine me na khana banana aa jaata hai

Par tujhe kitne mahine ho gye hai

You still

When you can gossip with your aunties

Kya unse khana banana nhi sikh sakti

Geet : kh toh rhi hu

Jis dang se mumma khti hai

Waise nhi ho paata mujhse

Maine maasi se bhi pucha tha

Ab nhi ho rha toh mein kya karu

Maan : baki cheezo me toh dimag bhut chalta hai

Khud se kuch soch

Ya bs sone ki lagi rhti hai tujhe din bar me

Geet : aapki problem kya hai

Jaise mujhse hota hai am doing

Isse jyada mein nhi kr sakti

His anger reached when she give answer , he hold her neck by right hand and raised left hand to slap her, she bend back and said ye Galati mt kr dena

Saying this she left to room….

.

Something broken inside, Her heartbeat raises….

When he come inside , she asked or just want he accept the mistake…. But its not happen…

Maan : mujhe aur gussa mt dila

Geet : hath mt laga dena

Nhi toh aapke sath acha nhi honga

Maan : mere pass aa mein batata hu tujhe

.

.

Full night passed, but some fire inside the heart burning her….

Kuch tuta us din

Dil tuta tha uska

Bs ek sorry toh hi chahti thi mein inse

Aur kya chaha

Par inhe toh ehsaas tk nhi

Inka thoda sa mis-hold krna mujhe kya ghav deke gya

Its normal for him

.

Par mere liye nhi tha

I not able to take breath in that four walls that night and next day

I need fresh air

.

.

Time pass out

I get normal for him, for my love for him

He never said sorry

Just distance helps me to overcome

But in deep of heart, nishaan aaj bhi hai

.

God create the situation, I come to my mom home for few days and able to forgive him without asking by him forgiveness….

.

Its not easy to live like this… sometime I want CAN I LEAVE HIM

But no one is able to understand my problem

No one

Kya kahu

Kisse kahu

Na jaane kitno se share krke dekh liya maine

Suna toh bs ye

ADJUSTMENT

Or

LEAVE HIM

.

Both situation suffocate me

.

Kya nhi hai tumhare pass

Acha sasural hai

Pati maarta nhi hai

Koi bad habit nhi hai

Khane ko acha milta hai

Pehanane ko kapde hai

NOW MORE WHAT YOU WANT

.

Humare ghar ki bahu roado pe nhi firti hai

Tell me

What a wife wants from husband

???

 

Posted: 4 years ago

HEY FRIENDS TELL ME ONE THING, 

AB HEADING KAISE CHANGE HOTI HAI

EDIT ME HEADING TOH AA HI NHI RHI 

Posted: 4 years ago

Shot 3

emotional update! beautifully written.

feeling for Geet.

sad seeing what she is going through! 

hate that Maan does not understand her.

how dare he try and slap her?

why must women always be treated like this?

great that Geet stood her ground.

her feelings are well portrayed.

women are expected to adjust but men.....

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago

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