RagNa/AshNaSS:TrueLove Always have the habit of COMEBACK COMPLETED on

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Teaser


At court


Nearly 35 years old men and 30 years old lady stand opposite side of witness box


Judge: so you're ready to give your wife divorce ....are you sure??


Men: yes mam....her happiness is mine...and I don't want to put her in trouble if she didn't like living with me I'm OK with that....but I'm unable to see hatred for me in her eyes when I always found unconstitutional love for me but now a days I lost it





Other side girl stand strenly and said with cold tone


Lady: don't say such a lovely dovely words to me ...I don't want to live with you when you slept with....


Hearing this tears roll down on his cheeks for his sin which he done to his life ( wife)



Lady:now you yourself heard him ....I want divorce immediately


Somehow judge felt bad for that men


When she about to declared she will give them divorce


They heard 3 years old baby girl crying for her dad


Dad.....


Men closed his eyes with heavy heart unable to hold his angel in his arms when she crying for her dad



Judge: for your baby you both have to live 6 months under one roof


If you didn't change you're mind after 6 months I'll give you both divorce


Lady with shouting tone: what me KALPANA wants to live with him that too 6 months no way I didn't want to living with CHEATER like Mr.Raghav Singhania


Judge firmly: the court adjoin


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi guys

This is my new TS

for this forum active

I'll update first chapter at Sunday

Hope you guys like teaser

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Superb start will wait for Sunday

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Wow this forum is still active. I thought it was closed but still open which is great. I hope to see your next update soon. Teaser very promising!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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At morning


" Appu....."


His eyes fluttered open when he heard his 3 years old angel crying for her dad....within a fraction of second he went to his wife room which is next to his where his angel is crying for her dad


He about get into the room but stopped in midway when her words ringing in his ears" don't come to my room Mr. Simghania,stay away from me and my daughter " other side his thought broken when he again heard his daughter crying without wasting a second he entered into the room and took his angel in his arms for his heart melting the baby stop her crying session when she felt her appu warmth and lean on his chest,other side he caress his angel cheeks " my baby doll"..." Appu..." And her says him where you left me alone appu " ...understanding her words which is spoken by her words " I am always there for you Angel.... I just went out for coffee" ....she poked her dad cheeks and he swrill her to make her happy


Both dad and daughter moment stopped when he heard a voice behind " what brings you here Mr. Singhania" raghav turn and see his angry wife at the entrance with long step she came near to him and said " put my daughter on crib" she ordered to him...." Kalpi..." ,for you it's kalpana kapoor Mr.singhania can't you hear me how many times I have to told you just stay away from Me and my daughter"


Raghav: I konw kapi and it's kill me to seeing hatred for me in your eyes not love and AshNa is crying and I saw you no where that's why I came here


KalpanA: she is my daughter Mr. Singhania I'll tale care of her ,we just don't need your care moreover you didn't care about us it's just that you act like that....



Raghav: with angry and broken voice act....do you really think I'm acting kalpana saying that he about to hold her arms but stopped when he heard


Kalpana: don't touch me Mr. Singhania I'm already feel like burning myself to fall in love with someone who is cheater and I made a mistake that's marrying you I just don't want to see a cheater like you near my daughter


" CHEATER"


this words kills raghav bitterly without saying anything he left from there with heavy broken heart


Raghav entered into his room with tears rolls down on his cheeks...kalpi each and every words is killing him to the core " how could you say like this kalpi...how you declare me as a cheater I didn't not in my sense that day...how could i make you understand myself"



But smiled forms into his lips when their lovely moments flashed in front of him


Flashback


Morning sun rays hits his face through the window he pulled his wife to him who is Laying beside him naked after their heated love making last night., kalpi buried her face more into raghav chest other side raghav pulled more kalpi to him they once again found solace into each other arms


Soon their sleep got disturbed by their 2.5 years old baby girl crying sound.... "AshNa wokeup " saying that kalpi about to get off from bed but raghav pulled her by arm ,her soft hairs falls on raghav face which make him closed his eyes dreamly raghav caress her cheeks lovingly other hand make pattern on her bare back


Kalpi: raghav what are you doing it's morning raghav


Raghav: is it big sin to romance your wife at morning said raghav while nuzzling kalpi on her neck


Raghav let out a loud moan when he inhaled his and kalpi's mixed fragrance


Kalpi almost lost in his touch somehow she completely said " but ashna is crying raghav" said kalpi with heavy breathing because of raghav continues sucking session on her bre*st


Kalpi slide her hands intobraghav uncontrolly and pulled raghav more closure to her bre*t


Soon raghav wrapped kalpi legs around his waist and about to enter into her but stopped when he heard " ashna raghav she woke up " ,raghav replied " manju ( their maid) will take care" saying that raghav made wild passionate love making


After one hour


Raghav put his head on kalpi brea*t and kalpi caress raghav hair who is breathing heavily because of their passionate love making


Raghav is getting ready to go office other side kalpi put their baby in bed who is playing with Teddy bear



Kalpi phone is started to ringing and flashed a name " Sammy"


Kalpi with happy tone" hi Sammy how are you Sammy ...now only you remembered me right?? How could you forget your jaan "


Kalpi each and every word get noticed by raghav somehow he didn't liked the way kalpi is talking to sammy it's is the first time that he saw kalpi is so attached to someone



Kalpi on phone " you're coming India next week.... Wow it's awesome Sammy I'll be waiting for your arrival " saying that kalpi disconnected the call


At office


Girl on phone: I'm sure today I'll make him fallen in my trap


On phone: it's has been one month pakhi I had sent you there to trap raghav into your plan but still now you done nothing if you give me what I want I'll give you double payment pakhi


Pakhi in surprise tone double payment


Pakhi: today I'll won


Pakhi adjusted her dress before entering raghav cabin


Pakhi: may I get in sir


Raghav: get in pakhi


Give a Singh file


Pakhi leans towards raghav to bring file to him because of her transparent dress her upper part of breast is clearly visible to raghav


Raghav closed his eyes angrily " how many times I told you ms.jadhav behave yourself in singhania construction I don't want someone who is cheap like you " with a discussed look raghav turn his face other side


Pakhi : sorry sir


Saying that she about to get out of from raghav cabin but stopped when she heard raghav words " and one more think if I saw you again like this I'm sure I'll fire you pakhi now get out of my cabin" saying that raghav turn his face other side


Pakhi mind voice: today also I lose but I have to keepatientmotive away for sometimes what if he'll fire me then I'll lose my double Payment...I have to patoent





After one week


Raghav have his breakfast at dinning area and kalpi served him


Suddenly kalpi felt someone hands around her waist soon her feet lost the touch on floor


He swrill kalpi other side kalpi smiled happily when she know that person


" Sammy " you're back


Sammy : yes Japan I'm back saying that he left a heart warmth kiss on kalpi forehead



Other side raghav clenches his fist angrily for their closeness



Raghav angrily : kalpana can you serve food for your husband I'm getting late


Kalpi totally avoid raghav words



Kalpi: raghav this is Sammy my college mate and my close friend saying that kalpi held Sammy arms


And Sammy he is my husband raghav you know na



Sammy: I know everything about you kalpi after all you're my jaan saying that Sammy give side hug to kalpi


And now raghav totally pissed off their talks


Sammy: jaan where is Ashna


Saying that he about to go to stair but kalpi stopped him in midway saying " she is sleeping don't disturb her Sammy we will see her later"


Without saying anything to kalpi raghav left to office which is unnoticed by kalpi as she lost in talks with Sammy where she found brotherly figure


It's has been one week that Sammy returned to India... Other side raghav started to avoid kalpi which is not unnoticed by kalpi


At night


Kalpi: raghav are you OK ??? Baby


Raghav while watching TV : yeah of course I'm fine kalpi


Kalpi: don't you notice raghav now a days you're avoiding me am I done anything to you raghav if I ever done please forgive me raghav saying that kalpi about to hug raghav but stopped when she heard " I feel sleepy kalpi " saying that raghav laid on bed and showed his back to her


Kalpi: do you know raghav tomorrow is AshNa 3rd birthday... We have put a party just like last year


Raghav: I'm very well know kalpi tomorrow is my daughter birthday


Kalpi with confusion: your daughter she is our daughter raghav


Ignoring her words fully


Raghav: and i already invite my friends and business partners


Kalpi: do you invite Sammy raghav asked kalpi with hope that he'll invite him


Raghav angrily: I clearly says kapi that I invite my friends not someone who I didn't know ...now please let me sleep peacefully kalpi tomorrow I have a important meeting saying that he show his back to kalpana



Kalpana stares raghav confusingly " what is bothering him,why he behaving like this" with this thought unknowingly she slept


At party night


Ashna cut her three layer chocolate birthday cake and she feed her appu first after all she is his angel which make raghav somehow happy and proud other side kalpi pout her lips " your appu is always first for you " ..." Ammu ..." With a smile ashna feed a cake to kalpi,," can I get cake ashu saying that Sammy saw ashna with pouted lips " Sammy uncle ....forrrr youuuuu" saying that ashna feed a piece of cake to Sammy


Soon everyone started to enjoyed the party


Other side raghav sat on the drinking area while sipping his drink he heard " raghav can we have a dance " saying that she pull raghav arm but he denied " no kalpi I didn't feel like to dance " saying that he release his arm from kalpi grip feeling dejected kalpi stand silently near raghav


Suddenly Sammy comes near to kalpi and held her arm " kalpi come let's dance you know na I love to dance with you " saying that he drag kalpi to dance floor" no Sammy I didn't feel like to dance you go and enjoy " ,sammy " of course I'm going to enjoy kalpi with you only " saying that he drag kalpi to dancefloor forcefully



While dancing raghav and kalpi eyes didn't left each other,raghav tighten his grip on the glass angrily " how could you dance with someone kalpi in front of me " saying that drunk more drinks unknowingly


Feeling suddenly nauseous kalpi covered her mouth with her alms and ran to washroom followed by Sammy with worried


Sammy: what happened kalpi....


Kalpi: don't know Sammy but I feel nauseous saying that kalpi vomited


Sammy caught her waist when she about to fall without wasting a second Sammy carried her to ragna room


Other side sensing kalp,Sammy absence raghav search everywhere but his fumed in angerbwhen he saw Sammy carried kalpi to their room


Without wasting a second raghav followed them



Sammy: I think you're weak kalpi can I call doctor


Kalpi holding her head: no Sammy I'm fine ..you go...I'll take care


Sammy about to leave but stopped when he heard " ouch" what happened kalpi ...


Kalpi: something got into my eyes


Sammy : let me see saying that Sammy blow her eyes


For this moments raghav entered into the room


His heart shattered into thousand pieces when he saw them behind( he misunderstood their position)


With heavy heart raghav leave the mansion


Flashback ends


Raghav come out from their memories when he heard his wife words


Kalpi on mobile


Kalpi: I Can't stay with him ....do something quickly... I just hate to see his face front of me....this six months didn't going to change my mind I want divorce from him...I don't want cheater like him near my daughter and me


Saying that she disconnected the call


Raghav heard her words behind the fall with heartbroken







Edited by vanajaragna - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Great start loving it thanks for pm

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome but painful. Waiting next part

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome start so someone sent Pakhi to trap Raghav and presents shows she succeeded to create mu between them

Will wait for next update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: rachufan

Awesome start so someone sent Pakhi to trap Raghav and presents shows she succeeded to create mu between them

Will wait for next update

will update coming Sunday dear
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Posted: 5 years ago
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After so many days some one posted abt ragna..

Thnx

Very nice... Jealous raghav did mistake...

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