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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 8


Superbly Fantastic


Maan and Geet enters the mall and she has not been to huge malls

well that's okay ,

Maan was just blown away with her expressions then the bangles on her

and he swore to himself that those bangles were only for Geet

seeing the salesman putting the payal on her leg but the manner in which it was done

made Maan furious his possessiveness and protectiveness came out

I like that Maan tells Geet he likes been close to her as she is the first

oh Geet is angry on Maan for scolding her all the time but now his

little confession on wanting and liking to be close to her hopefully

changes her thoughts about him

Thanks for the comment dear 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: crazymaneetian

quite a short update but volumes happened in this....i had never thought of the class angle in this story before...i mean I can understand it in the case of jewellery but not in terms of a mere scarf...this makes their class difference huge.anyways when hasn't maaneet love overcome such differences. love maan's confession- hinest, tothe point and straight from the heart. ab geet finace wala bomb na phod de.

She is from a middle class family.... And any girl from middle class wouldnt accept that much cost of a scarf... Even me too if u say that the mere cost of a Scorf is more than thousand than I wouldn't take it 😆😆 so the same with geet she considers it taking in a small shop with 500 than 1k in that huge malls!! Thanks for the review dear 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Maan is getting affected more and more. He got her the bangles. We can foresee a set of payals too.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Maan is getting affected more and more. He got her the bangles. We can foresee a set of payals too.

you will get to know what he will do ! it may be expected or the unexpected !😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Be Mine



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part 9



previous part : she looked side ways to see him holding her duppatta.....he moved close to her his front touching her back “I don’t like it when you are touched by other man than me.... i don’t know what i feel for you.... but i like it when i am with you.... when i am this close to you...i was never been close to any other women than you......it feels amazing to be with you Geet...sach keh raha hoon” he said in husky voice close to her ear..... his lips touching her ears lightly.....she gasped and her hear beart was racing hearing him......



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She gasped hearing his words and turned her head slightly towards him to see his face inches away from her and his eyes looking at her lips.....she immediately moved away from him not knowing how to react .......she was uncomfortable and uneasy under his intense gaze .... she couldn’t believe what is happening around her...the man she thought dislikes and hates woman is saying her that he likes her and wants to with her!? hey babaji inhe kya ho gaya hain kya iss tandi mousam ke saath saath inka dimak bhi feeze hogaya hai kya !? she looked pouting....




Maan was shocked himself...he couldn’t believe he just confessed her that he likes her and wants to be with her ! the possessive side of him got better of him and unaware of it he just said it all what was in his heart all the time !!! yes he liked to tease her and to make her laugh in his childhood ! there was no one who could compete with him but she did and even got first in class for that....and that made him proud..... he felt sad when he left the school all of a sudden.... he went off from there just because his mother thought that the school was not much of their level and made him to join in one the best rich schools in city ..... he couldn’t say no to her.... he loved her at the same time he didn’t like her belief in saying the rich ones always should maintain their class.... his mother always used to bind him with one of his father’s clients daughters and he disliked it very much and always stayed away from bussiness parties.... as the time went by he forgot about geet ..... he forgot that he liked the only girl after his mother and his grand mother!!! But his life was not same anymore.... he maintained his distance with girls.... many of his friends yash, adi suggested him to go date with girls so that he too could have a love marriage just like them.... but he dismissed them saying he wont believe in love and all...and it was fully a waste of time!! But after seeing geet in Yash’s engagement... his heart felt peace like he knew her from a long time ... and he was surprised to see it was his cry baby geet! ....then he felt all the unfamiliar feelings in him which he knew never existed in him.... after knowing her in just a week he felt all this feelings concern, care , jealous, sarcastic, flirting and possessive and then he said that he like her without his knowledge !! So now he wants to give a chance to himself and he smirked thinking i will make you fall for me miss geet handa and i will ask you to BE MINE !!




He sighed it is hard to make her fall for him but he will make sure that she falls for him and he will make her to accept that she loves him!! He looked around to see the room empty frowning he went ouside!




Geet was returning the payal to the salesman saying she wouldn’t need it “but maam it looks good in your ankles and you wanted to buy before than what happened now” he asked looking confused....



he was scared of maan’s anger at that time and now he was asking as it is his job to impress customers and make them buy the things


“It is none of your bussiness it’s totally our wish wish to take it or not Maan said coming behind her putting his hand on geet’s shouder.... Geet’s mad now what does he think of himself first he blasted on that poor guy unnecessarily and now he is saying him that there is no need to buy that payal .....Huhhh...she moved away from him “this payal is good can you pack this” she asked smilingly showing the other payal.


Now maan is glaring at her she still wants to buy that the payal... “Geet chalo hum nahi lenge” he said sternly holding her wrist dragging her out


par she said running trying to catch up his pace


par var kuch nahi chalo yahas varna mai tume yahi chod kar chala jaunga” he said without looking at her .... now her control snapped...


she removed her hands out of his grip and glared at him “then why are you here now.....i don’t want to come with you” she pouted cutely folding her hands looking away from him!


Maan’s eyes widened hearing her composing himself he said “kahi mai tum dono ke bech mai tho nahi agaya hoon....you are so much into that payal he gave right !? kyu na tum uske paas jao aur payal leloo vo bhi FREE mai.... you do whatever you want i dont care” he said sarcastically he was not even hiding the fact that he is jealous !! moving opposite side of her he went away.....


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Geet’s jaw dropped down hearing him and watched his retreating back ..... dusht danav.....khadoos... aisi bade bade karke aanke dikata hain....golliyon ki tarah huhhh and how could i even like this angry, arrogant, rude person aarghh pyaar kare mere jooti i loved that cute boy of version of him not this khadoos version ! muttering this she moved the opposite side he went !



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It is been 15 mins since she was waiting for him outside the mall sitting on a bench..... the snow fall is making difficult for her to see the parking lot ! she is as stubborn as him she dont want to go to him unless he comes there and asks for a forgiveness !....she was shivering rubbing her hand on her bare arms to stay warm.... the morning ride on the bike made her feel cold now she’s shivering like a leaf..... it’s making her dizzy .... that riding and now remaining in the snow is taking a toll on her.... her eyes started getting close... she stood up suddenly seeing a shadow... she recognized him as maan... “maa...maan” she wispered then collapsed in the white show...




Maan was feeling silly by remebering their arguement... he regretted shouting at her... he wanted to make her fall for him ! then what he did now !.... frustrated he ran his hand through his hair and moved back to find her but she is not there!.... he searched everywhere in the mall but couldn’t.... he asked the shop manager and he said he had seen her going out towards parking lot.....

He looked for her everywhere but couldn't find her!! Where is she..... Oh God what did I do !? I shouldn't have shouted at her!!!!.... I This Snow fall and this dark Night is making him difficult to find her.... he moved Further searching for her in the White Snow Fall and his foot hit by the object under him and looked down to see what it is.. His eyes widened in horror he Shouted at once "GEEEEEEETTT".......



precap : he lifted her shivering form in his arms and moved inside his farm house !!


sorry for such a small update but will try to update sooner ...

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Edited by Kuttisri - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Ye me first

Maan ne j ho kr kitna kuch keh dia geet ko

Aur geet behosh ho gyi thndi ki wajah se

Thank God maan ne dek Lia geet ko

Wating for nxt

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hello Sruthi...


Happy Holi, Dear...

Nice that you updated...I was anyway thinking of catching up with the story...🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 1


It's cute to see little Maaneet fighting and teasing each other...

Geet did not expect him to leave without meeting her...It's sad...but I am hoping Maan was as affected as Geet was because of their separation...


Oh, Geet really did fall for him...nice to see her having feelings for him even after 10 years...

so sweet to see her recognizing him...


Geet misunderstood Maan to be Meera's fiancee...oh...

Maan also felt her be familiar...

Interesting start...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 2


Felt read badly to see Geet crying so much over a misunderstanding...Poor Geet...can't imagine the pain she must be feeling after seeing her first love getting married to her best friend and that too love marriage...


Finally, Maan knows that Geet is his cry baby...him saying "My Cry Baby" was too cute...

Maan thinks she doesn't recognize her but I am sure he is attracted to the feisty Geet...


Maan feeling possessive for his Geet is always a treat to watch...


DORI scene was dreamy

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 3


Maan who has always maintained a distance from girls cannot run away from the attraction he feels for his cry baby Geet...he notices her so keenly...he is gone case now...


Meera trying to play cupid between both Maan and Geet would be fun to watch...


Love how Maan doesn't leave a chance to tease Geet...

Pinky and Adi are cute...so are Meera and Yash


Geet really was surprised and relieved to know Maan is not Meera's fiancee...


So Geet expressed about her love but she lied that she moved on...anyone can see that Maan still affects her so much

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