ff:kyun ki updt p10 pg17 29/6/08

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi guys..

here's my new ff...to b frank..i've started many ff's but nuthing has ended till date..bcos of less readers and of course..bcos of less readers i forgot abt the story..and how to continue it......well..i really hope tht this one will hav an end...its short ff....and i wont be able to update everyday...but ya..i'l reply to ur comments...sry i said tht bcos my xams r goin on..thts y....hope u all understand...

The characters will be the same as in the show..and their behaviours too.....hope u all like it...and ya..gauri has her mother alive in this..dont rem wat her name is in the show..here i've named her kalpana...

i can promise the end of the story......as long as my readers reply bak.....for a while the story wil move in gauri's point of view..later on it will be common......

Part One

I was tensed sitting in the last bench of my classroom. Dont know wat he's gonna tell for sitting here. I started sweating. But no1 noticed me. No one cared to ask me or make me feel better. I was scared to look at the door. But i had to. I tried very hard and took up some courage and looked at the door slowly...Now i was getting tensed more and more..Oh my god..Thank god, Its ipshita..I can tell her wat i feel..tht i am scared..She came as usual..happy always..i've never seen her scared or sad..but y am i always like tht? Y am i not like ipshita..She came to me.."Hi gauri...."....i replied bak softly.."Hi ipshita...."" are tumhe itni subah subah kya hua??Are u all right??" I wanted to say no immediately...but i dont know wat made me say.."Ya...Mein teek hoon..." She sat beside me....after abt 5 mins..neena looked at me...and found tht sumthing was wrong...she knows the reason...bcos this is wat happens every morning..." Tum phir se shuru ho gayi gauri???" " mein aur kya karti..tum hi batao..." " tum usse saaf saaf kyun nahi kehthi ki..." " meine bahut baar khoshish ki..lekhin tum toh jannti hi ho..ki..." "ok baba....aaaj mujh par chod do...mein usse baat kar loongi....".." tum kya karne waali ho neena???kuch problem toh nahi hogi naa..." "are tum kyun chintha karti hai..agar hui bhi toh hum principal se complaint kar dethe hain...ok??..." " neena...uski koi zaroorat nahi hai...tum aisa kuch bhi nahi karogi...okkk???"...just then she raised her brows and signaled me to look at the entrance.....there he was standing..with his one book in his hand...wearing those cool glasses....in his cool outfit....and the first thing he did was look at me...my eyes bcame wide open..i turned around to look at ipshita...she was looking at me with her naughty smile and winked at me...i closed my eyes tight....i heard a big BANG on my bench...i didnot hav the courage to open my eyes...but i felt tht someone was holding my hand....and suddenly i got pulled...and now i was facing him..thts him...son of one the board members of the college and my baba's best frnd's son.....SHIV KAPOOR......

precap: Woh actually...meine pehle hi kaha tha usse..ki mein yahaan bait loongi..lekhin woh maane hi nahi aur.....but i got too scared to look into his eyes and continue....and suddenly he...

hope u all liked it..plss do reply bak....am gonna continue the ff...on its basis.....and i'l reply to each and every comment i get.....pakka...

this is to help who start afresh with the ff

part 2 -page 3

part 3- page 5

part 4 -page 6

part 5 -page 8

part 6 -page 9

part 7 -page 11

part 8 -page 13

part 9 -page 15

part 10 -page 17

LUV NANDINI

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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh man that was good 👏 👏 👏 n i love ur first part it was very wicked 😉 😉 ..............plzzzzzz cont soon will be waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kalsang_11

oh man that was good 👏 👏 👏 n i love ur first part it was very wicked 😉 😉 ..............plzzzzzz cont soon will be waiting

thnx a lot....ur the first to comment...will surely cont soon....keep commenting..

LUV NANDINI

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice FF pease do continue 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeah..do continue..liked the first part already...i wanna noe wats going on...seems like theres an interesting story about to build up..i cant wait...do go on!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow!!!great start....
dont worry i'll be ur regular reader bcoz u made my entry in ur ff 😉
how about u make anupam fall in love with me 😉
i would have thought of it in my ff 😆
awesome start.....gauri scared of shiv...now thats wat i m looking forward to...
all the best for ur exams....i m over with mine,so i m enjoying!!!!hehehe....
i guess we'll be gr8 friends!!

love
nihita aka neena
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Posted: 17 years ago
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will sure keep writing..with all ur supports....

LUV NANDINI

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pia.

nice FF pease do continue 👏 👏 👏

keep commenting...and i'l keep on continueing.....

LUV NANDINI

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveabletwinz

yeah..do continue..liked the first part already...i wanna noe wats going on...seems like theres an interesting story about to build up..i cant wait...do go on!!!

well i've tried sumthing similar to kekta serial...so u c..interesting..with many twists in the story.......

LUV NANDINI

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihita

wow!!!great start....
dont worry i'll be ur regular reader bcoz u made my entry in ur ff 😉
how about u make anupam fall in love with me 😉
i would have thought of it in my ff 😆
awesome start.....gauri scared of shiv...now thats wat i m looking forward to...
all the best for ur exams....i m over with mine,so i m enjoying!!!!hehehe....
i guess we'll be gr8 friends!!

love
nihita aka neena

ur entry??didnt get tht..still..hav i mentioned neena anywhere???if so..i'm so sorry...it shud be changed to ipshita...not tht i dont like tht name....actually while writing the first part of this ff..i was in a dilemma of in which forum i shud post....Kahe Naa Kahe on 9X or KAA....after a long time....decided it to be KAA.....and the neena was for KNK..tht char is there in tht serial...frnd of the lead heroine...i hope u r not upset...but if u say....neena's entry will surely occur.....kkk??

sry once again...and ya..keep reading...and commenting...

LUV NANDINI

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