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Ya finally ho gaya😆
Is bar na main ek sitting mein nahi likh payi....thoda thoda karke 3-4 din mein likha.....to ho sakta hai continuity and flow mein thoda ajeeb lage😔
Ya finally ho gaya😆
Is bar na main ek sitting mein nahi likh payi....thoda thoda karke 3-4 din mein likha.....to ho sakta hai continuity and flow mein thoda ajeeb lage😔
This has got bit different style from your other write ups .I liked how they were settled in life like any other normal couple and how Neil being there for her or her being there for him in all situations. Glad you about Ashok to the picture .I want to see this in show .Mini having one final talk with her dad and Neil Ashok face Off. ( I remember we girls had discussed in DT earlier how Ashok is the one who had sent Neil in Mini's life and that's something Neil is hidding 😆 we girls there had discussed all possibilities .Even saroj mami hiring Neil 🤣)
Am waiting for the next update Anjali. Ashok and Neil encounter and how Mini is going to deal with this now .
Originally posted by: N_sharmaa
This has got bit different style from your other write ups .I liked how they were settled in life like any other normal couple and how Neil being there for her or her being there for him in all situations. Glad you about Ashok to the picture .I want to see this in show .Mini having one final talk with her dad and Neil Ashok face Off. ( I remember we girls had discussed in DT earlier how Ashok is the one who had sent Neil in Mini's life and that's something Neil is hidding 😆 we girls there had discussed all possibilities .Even saroj mami hiring Neil 🤣)
Am waiting for the next update Anjali. Ashok and Neil encounter and how Mini is going to deal with this now .
Ya even i wanted mini ashok direct talk. I expected it during that letter fiasco but then leap happened
Here as i have already established neil's character so it wont take any surprise or dramatic turn now. He will be plain simple neil only. In fact o suddenly felt i have not shown his life at all apart from their love story so tried to show in bits how his life was in delhi through this chapter.
@bold in what way it is different? May be it was not written in one stretch thats why. Or you find any other difference?
Originally posted by: anjali0111
Ya even i wanted mini ashok direct talk. I expected it during that letter fiasco but then leap happened
Here as i have already established neil's character so it wont take any surprise or dramatic turn now. He will be plain simple neil only. In fact o suddenly felt i have not shown his life at all apart from their love story so tried to show in bits how his life was in delhi through this chapter.
@bold in what way it is different? May be it was not written in one stretch thats why. Or you find any other difference?
Yes ,I felt as if you have written it in bits , bits.
In your previous write ups there was kind of speed ,flow I felt .It was continuous but then I also thought may be you have written this way purposely 
MiNeil are already married.
They are no more newly married couple.So phase has to be like this .They are like normal couple now so that's why I mentioned also same in my previous comment I liked the normalcy you bought in their life .
Originally posted by: N_sharmaa
Yes ,I felt as if you have written it in bits , bits.
In your previous write ups there was kind of speed ,flow I felt .It was continuous but then I also thought may be you have written this way purposely
They are no more newly married couple.So phase has to be like this .They are like normal couple now so
Well both assumptions are correct😆
First it was written in bits and parts that also in 3-4 days and second the honeymoon phase of mineil marriage is over now they are becoming as normal as any other couple. Unki relationship mein ek maturity aur tehraav aa gaya hai bas yahi dikhane ki koshish ki hai.😳
Originally posted by: anjali0111
Well both assumptions are correct😆
First it was written in bits and parts that also in 3-4 days and second the honeymoon phase of mineil marriage is over now they are becoming as normal as any other couple. Unki relationship mein ek maturity aur tehraav aa gaya hai bas yahi dikhane ki koshish ki hai.😳
Yes. That normalcy beauty here was good Anjali .I hope you didn't get offended by my comment. I know it's tough to write even a single page it takes so much of one's time .
Originally posted by: N_sharmaa
Yes. That normalcy beauty here was good Anjali .I hope you didn't get offended by my comment. I know it's tough to write even a single page it takes so much of one's time .
Arre offend hona toh durr ki baat hai mujhe achhe lagte hain tum sabke comments aur suggestions😳
Anjali 🤗
MiNeil bade busy hogaye hai apne apne kaam mein 😎
Day to day life mein
Bilkul pati patni bangaye
Accha laga kaise tu ne fatafati unke life style toh dikha diya
Hum tum MeNeil
Muhje sab se accha laga ki yahan iss baar mini neil ke duniya mein gayi.
Uske duniya ko dekha
His past life .
Abh tak Neil mini ke world mein tha
Mini ka problem, life style ,ghar , restaurant , pati patni mode mein kho gaye the dono.
Mini ne kabhi Neil ke life ko dekha nahi tha
Iss baar dekha aur feel b kiya
Ye Sundar tha yaar
Kabaddi game 🤣
Mast add kiya usse yahan.🤣
Mini ek number ki hogayi hai sab Neil ka kasoor hai☺️🤣
Abh bhukto Neil ☺️🤣🤣
Unka iss baare mein direct talks accha tha .
Iss match ki waja se kahi koi result toh nahi aayega na future mein ? 🤪🤣
Ashok ki entry kardi 😈
Jamai aur sasur ji ki mulakat ho gayi
Kya hoga abh ?
Will mini be ever be able to forgive her dad ?.
Iss mein Neil ka kya part hoga ?
Interesting
Anjali 🤗
MiNeil bade busy hogaye hai apne apne kaam mein 😎
Day to day life mein
Bilkul pati patni bangaye
Accha laga kaise tu ne fatafati unke life style toh dikha diya
Hum tum MeNeil
Muhje sab se accha laga ki yahan iss baar mini neil ke duniya mein gayi.
Uske duniya ko dekha
His past life .
Abh tak Neil mini ke world mein tha
Mini ka problem, life style ,ghar , restaurant , pati patni mode mein kho gaye the dono.
Mini ne kabhi Neil ke life ko dekha nahi tha
Iss baar dekha aur feel b kiya
Ye Sundar tha yaar
Kabaddi game 🤣
Mast add kiya usse yahan.🤣
Mini ek number ki hogayi hai sab Neil ka kasoor hai☺️🤣
Abh bhukto Neil ☺️🤣🤣
Unka iss baare mein direct talks accha tha .
Iss match ki waja se kahi koi result toh nahi aayega na future mein ? 🤪🤣
Ashok ki entry kardi 😈
Jamai aur sasur ji ki mulakat ho gayi
Kya hoga abh ?
Will mini be ever be able to forgive her dad ?.
Iss mein Neil ka kya part hoga ?
Interesting
Bold
🤣🤣
Mujhe Teri yaad aayi or me has rahi thi 🤣
Kabaddi padhne ke baad
Seriously mast add kiya h 😆
Anajali mast update h🤗
Ashok khurana ko closer chayiye mini ko such me
Waiting for next update
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