Barrister babu: ff--chap 1

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Posted: 5 years ago
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There are no ff in the forum for some days....so thought of writing something...



Over voice

India speaking….

Chandni Raat!!!

Bosonto kal (spring season in bengali)…

Aur study ki vo khuli khidki se aati hui phurphurati hawa…

Prakiti ki aatma mai mano prem Chaya hai aaj. Parphir bhi ye hamari Anirudh ko sokoon na de pai. Kitabo se bhari us kamre ki timtimati roshni mai mera yodha, jaise bikhra para hai. Are vo to apne bikhresapno ko sametne ki koshish kar raha hai. Aur bidhambana dekho gyan ki us kotrimai bhi vo apne prasno ki katar lagai baitha hai.

Aakhir, use koi samajta kyu nahi?

Aakhir koi ye kyu nahi puchta , ki vo aisa kiyakyu?

Aakhir koi aisa aanyay sehe bhi kaise leta hai?

Kya uska pyaar bhi use samajne mai aasamarthhai?

Are mere bacche…saiyam bandh…yeh to samay kipariksha hai…paramparagat rup se chali aarahi, ye sare ghisi piti prathao kobadal na hai tujhe…use ek naya rup dena hai…tujhe to samay badalna hai….auraisa badlab lane ke liye….sabhi ko samay ki aag mai jal, talwar ki tarah apnadhar barana parta hai…

Ye raat sirf Anirudh hi nahi, iss khele ki ekaur khiladi bhi pareshan apne pati babu ke kamre mai, muh phulai baithi hai.

Bondita:“ Kya maa, yeh kaha bhej dia mujhe? Na koi khane ko puch ta hai aur na hi koithik se bat karta hai. Kisi kobhi dekho ye bare bare aakhe kar mujhe dekta hai.Aur vivah ke baad sab ko yeh saree hi kyu pehena parta hai? Aur itna bharibhari gehena bhi. Maa, mujhe to iiha dar bhi lag raha hai.”

pov ends....


Agle din subhah...

Anirudh's pov.

" Bihariii...Bihari..." kaka ki moholle jagane bali awaj jab mari nid khuli to pata chala, vo larki kamre mai nahi hai. Aj phir se vo larki gayab. Ye jaroor bihari ki galti hogi...kal bhi to yeh aisa hi kehe raha tha.

" Bihari, tumne dekha nahi hoga thik se...kal bhi tum aisa hi kehe rahe the....par mai jab gaya vo to kamre mai hi thi na..."

"nahi malik,mai sahi dekha, vo lar...mera matlab bahu rani kamre mai nahi hai."

"rehene do bihari, main hi dekh ke aata hu."

Jate jate phir se kaka ki dahard "samjha dena use Anirudh, yeh roy chaudhariyo ka ghar hai, yeha niyam ka ulanghan main bardast nahi karunga."

Ab to gussa mujhe bhi aa raha hai...pata nahi kaha gai? or upar se kaka. Kya unhe samajh nahi aata, bachi hai vo? niyam niyam ka rag aalap rahe hai. khair, kabhi kabhi mon rehena acha hota hai.

pov end..


anirudh's room

Anirudh: "yeh kya hal bana rakha hai kamre ka.....aur phir se vo kal vali badbo....aj to bihari bhi yaha nahi...aur yeh larki kaha gayi"

tabhi kirki se aawaj ati hai...Bondita enters the room through window.....



A/n: again a disclaimer......not very good in writing.....just a small try to pen down all the thoughts.....do comment and share ur views.....it really does help in improvement...


I just wanted to cover the whole journey of Rudhita......Ani's proper realisation of his responsibility....a slow growth in their relation etc....if anyone has any scene idea....do msg me.....I would like to include it in the story....u can say it as a shared story writing process...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Heh! Great work friend. Please update the next chapter soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello dear

Sounds pretty good

Bit busy unfortunately so cant give detailed comment

Will get back to you

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Great story line dear......🙂🙂🙂🙂

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