hi every one!
a whole lot of creative minds on IF have put stories for the contest which are excellent. but iamsure like me thers must have created other options too nd the best one was entered in the competition. then why waste our efforts lets put the non entries on this topic & share our creations with other IF members & see how they respond. in this post i am pputting my two other attempts that i made.
Comedy scene
Disha: Ruk jao! …….Dushyant Kumar Sehgal nahi tumhara naam Dhakan Khopdi Seagul hona chahiye tha. Itna bada business chalate ho aur yeh bhinahi samajhte ki agga main, yani ki Kanaka ki model sindhur laga ke aur mangalsutra pahen kar ghoomongi toh shaadi shuda aurten tumhare gehne jyada kharidengi.
DK: tumhari baat mein dum hai aur haath mein bhi.
Disha: Haan! par tumhari budhi thodi kaam hai.
Song: Mein kay karon ram mujhe budha milgaya
Romantic scene
Dk: Disha tum sindoor laga ke mujhe aapne karib ane ke liye kyon uksati ho. Ponch do ise yeh mujhe tumhara pati hone ka ehssas dilata rehta hai. Mein bhool jata hoon ki humari contract marriage hai.
Disha: Nahi DK! Mat poncho ise. Kya tum ne kabhi yeh jaan ne ki koshish kari ki mein……mein yehi chaahti hoon,….. ki……tum mere kareb aao….. mera haath tumhare haath mein hamesha rahe.
Dk: Disha???? Tumne mujhe yeh pehle kyon nahi bataya. ……….Lekin disha hum abhi shaadi nahi karsakte. Humari kisamt mein abhi bhi intezar hai. Toh pls meri baat man lo.
Song : Hmmmmm Lamhon ki gujarish hai yeh pass ajayen hummmmmmmm, humm tum,…… tummmmmmmmmmm, humm tum
Please do tell me how did u find it
luv
Rang
