IPKKND Because opposites attract C14 conclude p34 23rd Sep - Page 22

Very nice story.....I hav a feeling that it ended too soon.....can u plz extend it some more.....very beautifully written......

You ended this story rather abruptly but it is your style and i loved it ..Maybe later on we can peep into their life

Originally posted by: ranogill

You ended this story rather abruptly but it is your style and i loved it ..Maybe later on we can peep into their life

Thank you for your kind words

That was beautiful ending.. siblings.. but can't blame them they wanted to see ArShi together and happy.. loved the end.. looking forward to see what can you bring more in this.. Thanks for this wonderful story 😊

Originally posted by: pup03

That was beautiful ending.. siblings.. but can't blame them they wanted to see ArShi together and happy.. loved the end.. looking forward to see what can you bring more in this.. Thanks for this wonderful story 😊

Thanks

Sad this beautiful story has come to an end. I would say the story was gaining momentum but you ended it abruptly .No problem that’s your style of writing . I felt that all that you wanted to convey through this story had been done hence the closure.

Awesome story