[Tera Mera Pyaar] NEW UPDATE chapter 40

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guyS its tahmina here . i have decided to put all my updates for my FF[tera mera pyaar] into one topic thnXX to mandy... So PLZ READ IT ND LEAVE CMMENTS!!**TELL ME IF U LIKE IT OR NOT..HEHEHE

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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg.. i luv it.. well done nd keep it going..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Tahmina....
Ok I finished it now...and I really love how you started your FF...hehe!
Everything is too good.
Gonna PM you....wait.... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey thnX 4 de cmments guyS all of u i love u guyS im guna be updatin soon in a while so u guys CAN ENJOY~ jus wait a little!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 5
Recap- Vidya and Shalu gets a scholarship and gets transferred to Delhi University.Sagar found out that he has to go to Benaras for a business contract with his dad,chinu and aniket. Sagar and Vidya meet in the water and they get into a fight.

After Sagar and Chinu takes their baths in the Gangha ghat, they wear their clothes and head out to go to other places. they start cheking out places when Chinu spots a baba on teh side of the road answering peoples questions and predicting their future.
C- dadaa, chalye waha jaathehain. He then points to the baba. Sagar sees the baba and starts to laugh.
S- Chinu, tu kya baccho jaisi baath karthehain. Ye sub bukwaas hai, kya woh baba kehdenge ke mera bawishya kya hai?....ye sub paiso kilye karthe hai.. Sagar begins to walk away when Chinu grabs him by the hand.
C- dadaa, please kumsekum ek baar jaakar toho dekhye?! Sagar is annoyed but then after a while he agrees to go.
S- teek hai, chal. Chinu was happy hearing Sagar saying yes to go.They both start walking towards the baba and appears in front of them with their greetings.
C- Pranam[greetings] baba! Baba acepted his greetings by putting his hand to the side of his face. Chinu noticed Sagar minding his own business, looking at other stuufs not caring about the baba. Chinu hits him on the head and tells him to greet baba.
S-[says it in an uniterested way] pranam baba....baba accepts his greeting but then takes a good look at Sagar. Sagar asks Chinu why Baba was staring at him like that. Chinu was also confused.
S- accha chinu main teek tho lagrahi hon na?
C- haa aap bilkul thik lagrahe hain
S- tho phir yeh baba mujhe aisa kyun dekhre hain? Chinu did not have an answer to that. Before Sagar can ask wats rong to baba-----
Baba- baccha, tere zindagi mein ek ladki aanewalihai, jo tere zindagi ko roshan karega. Sagar is confused as to why he said that.
S- par baba maine to aap se kuch bhi nahin pooncha to phir-----
Baba-[cuts Sagar off] maine jo kaha bilkul sach hai, tere aankhon me suk kuch likha hai. Sagar finds a mirror on the side of the roas hung up and goes in front of the mirror.
S-[talks to himself] kya such much mere aankhon mein.....nahin nahin yeh nahin ho saktha. aaahhh,[sighs] arre Sagar bacchu tu kitne handsome dikhrihai, yeh baba bhi tujhpar fida honelaga. He then laughs and drags Chinu to leave with him. Both leave,LEAVING baba there smiling.
Baba- [talks to himself but talks bout sagar] jald hi aayega woh ladki , bohoth jald aayega.
Scene Shifts
Vidya and Shalu are packing their stuff while Chacha and chachi are are waiting for them in the car.
Sha- jaldi kar Vidya, deri horahi ma aur papa intezaar karehe.
V- ha, ha, abhi ayi. She took her mp3 player in her ear, tok her luggage and started to folow Shalu out of their room. While Vidya and Shalu were walking towards the door, Vidya saw her mother in tears. Vidya puts her luggage down and runs towards her mother.
VM-[in tears] apna kyal rakhna, aur phone karthe rehna. Vidya hugs her mother again and starts to cry.
V- main apna kyal rakoongi, aur phone bhi karoongi. tum apna kyal rakhna.. i love you ma.
VM- i love you too beta.
After hugging her mom, Vidya picks up her luggage, got on teh car and left.

Precap[ sagar and vidya meet again in college] =]]]]]]]]]]

PLZZZ LEAVE CMMENTS!!!!! TEL ME IF IT IS GOOD SO FAR!!
LOVE Y'ALL
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Tahmina!
The mirror part is funny...hehe.
So waiting for SV to meet again! 😳
Lovely update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 6-
KK guys its been a long tim ebut i tried my best to make tit good!!! plZ leave Cmments!!!!!!!!!!!

Sagar,Chinu, Aniket and their father came home all tired from their meetings.
SF- ab tum log jakar aaraam karlo.Chinu and Aniket were headed towards their rom, Sagar following just when Sagars father called him.
SF- Sagar beta ruko.....Just then Sagar stopped and looked back towards his dad.
S- gee dad kahiye kya baath hai?
Sagar sat down next to his father and looked at him.
SF- tho kaisa laga hai tumhe woh meeting? Sagars father was curious as to what Sagars reply might be
S-hmmm..thik tha. main aaj bohoth kuch sikha hoon. Such mein main bohoth kush hoon ki yeh contract mila hai. Lekin dad main ab thukgayee hoon.
SF-[laughs] abhi se thukgayeho? beta abhi tho kuch nahin....jab tumhe degree milkar office main jaana hoga thub jaake bolna ki tum thakgayeho tum.....aur waise bhi tumhara biwi bhi to hoga tumhare thukan[tiredness] ko dur karne kilye....Sagar looks at his father annoyed and decides to go upstairs.
S-[ignores the topic] dad main abhi sojathe hoon.....kuch der baad delhi pe jaana hoga aur sath saath college bhi to jaana hai na?...[he smiles at his father and leaves up de stairs]
Sagars father knew that Sagar ignored the topic and left. And so he smiles at himself.
SF-[thinks] Sagar abhi naadaan hai, lekin ek din aayega ke woh kisi ladki par apna jaan or jahaan denge. Thub aayega humare ghar ka dulhan.[smiles]
IN SAGARS ROOM====>>
Sagar comes out of the bathroom wiping his head with his white cotton towel. He is dresed in his blue pajama pants and a whte t-shirt. He goes in front of the mirror and starts to comb his hair. Then he looks ar himself and starts to smile
S- tum ithni handsome shareef kyu dikhthi hai?....tu toh asla mein nutkut aur naughty hain.....or thora thora naadaan bhi hai...hahaha...jus then he rremembers Vidya cursng at him and insulting him.
Sagars flashbacks of vidya insulting him--->[V- Dekkhe nahin chul sakthe, amin puja karithi aur tum kaha se tapak gaye?! maine koi galath kaam nahin kiya!! bathameez kya there bap ne tujhe kuch nahin sikayi kis tara se ladki ki saamne baath karthe he? kute[dog] ki aulaad!] As sagar has his flashbacks and finally smiles to himself. he slowly brings his gaze to the mirror again and says:
S- tho bohoth bathameez bhi hai....atleast woh ladki to yehi kaha. he goes on his bed to lay down while he sees his clothes on the bed, what he wore after taking a swim in the gangha ghat. He was going to put it all in the closet when he saw something dangling off his shirt. It was an earing.
S- yeh earing mere kapre mein kya karehe?. Sagar then touches his ears to check whether he wears earings or not.
S- mein tho nahin pehenthi tho pir----- Jus then he remembered Vidya.
S- O tho yeh uska earing hai. Pekdethi hon isse. He then throws it into the garbage and goes to sleep.
LATER THAT NIGHT IN CHACHA-CHACHI'S HOUSE IN DELHI.
Vidya went up the stairs in excitement to go see her new room and was surprised entering her new room.
V-[talks to herself] wow, kitne bara kamra hai!!!!! yaha bohoth mazaa aayega!! Just then Shalu comes in the room and she heard what Vidya was saying.
Sha- Vidya, juldi se soja bohoth raath hochuki hain. Kal subhe jaana hai college main.
V- ha baba mein jaarihoon..gOOd night! Shalu then walks away leaving Vidya alone in her room. She was unpacking her clothes to find her night clothes when she spotted a white silk nighty.
V- chi! yeh mere kapre ke beech main kya karehe. She then takes out a soft salwar kameez to wear and throws the nighty in to her closet. She then head to the Bathroom and takes a shower.
IN SAGARS ROOM==>
Sagar was sleeping when he suddenly thought of Vidya. He kept remembering what Vidya told him wile insulting him. He started to remember her face which looked like the moon, her two eyes which was a reflection of perfection and her lips luscious as a rose. Sagar was smiling while he was remembering but then he stopped when he noticed he was actually thinking about the girl who insulted him.
S-[talks ti himself] vaise, woh ladk kon thi?i bohoth hot thi, thik tarase do[two] baathe bhi nahin kiya.......nahin nahin yeh kya kehrehi thu Sagar bachu, chor ye sub baathe. He then smacks himself and goes to sleep.
IN VIDYAS ROOM==>
Vidya comes out wearing a soft yello-white combination salwar kameez with her wet hair. She then goes on the bed and sits down to writei n her diary. She then remembered what happened with her and Sagar. She starts to remember what she told him.
V- yeh maine kya kiya, bohoth kuch kehdiya us ladke se? watever...Vidya then turns the light off and goes to sleep.
NEXT MorNING===>
Sha- VIDYA!!!!!!!!!! chalona phirse deri honeka iraadha hai kya?
Vidya is seen putting her earings on matching with her pink and white salwar kameez. She let her hair down which was completely straight.[completely ravishing]
V- aaaayyyii!! sHE GOES DOWN THE STAIRS AND takes her bag and leaves with Shalu. In 30 minutes they arrive at the college and start to walk inside since they say other people walk in also.They both go different ways to their classes since they dont have the same class.
Sha- accha vidya main tujhse baad mein miltha hoon, mera class is taraf hain.
V- thik hai, bi! Shalu then leaves the other way and is not seen anymore. Vidya takes the elevator to the 3rd floor and comes out of the levator when she bumps into someone, which forces her to throw her books on the floor. She then bends down and also that person beds down to help Vidya pick her books up. She then picks her head up and see's Sagar. She is shocked and looks surprised.
V-[thinks to herself] arre? yeh tho woh hai........ She then decideds to talk.
V- Tum?????? Sagar then picks up his head also and see's Vidya. Sagar and Vidya start to stare at eachother in shock and surpise.
S- Tum???......o tho yaha hak tum mera picha kiya?
V- bilkul nahin...main aur tumhara peecha...kabhie nahin! they both try to get up but struggle because Vidyas necklace is stuck to his rudraksh on his neck. They both look at eachother in the eyes, and they beame lost. Vidya's chest was so close to his heart, that she felt his ehartbeats.
V- ummm.... Sagar then snaps out of it.
S- umm....main nikhaalthi[take it out] hoon...He then places his hand on her neck taking his chain out of her necklace.
S- nikhaaldiya....they both get up and hesitate to talk. Vise main Sagar hoon...aur im sorry jo us din maine tumhe-----
Vidya began to understand why he was apologising.
V- its okay, maine kuch ziada boldiya tumhe, or yaha thak ki maine tumhare baaap ko bhi gaali di. im srry....
Sagar laughs at her for being so sympathetic.
S-Its ok koi baath nahin...abhi thak tho tumhare naam nahin butaaya?
V- o im srry main Vidya hoon.
S- oo like de name tumhara naam bhi oothnee sundur hai[starts walking close ot Vidya] jaise ki tum ho.....he winks at her
V- yeh tum kya kareho? Mujhse door raho....varna accha nahin hoga. Sagar doesnt listen to her and starts to move closer.
S- vaise bhi tumhe tho sazaa bookuthna hoga mere papa ko gaali dene kilye.....starts to grin.
V- sazaa? kaise sazaa?....starts to get curious
Sagar then slowly moves his hand to her waist and pinches it really hard.
V-OOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW!!
Sagar then laughs and winks at her, then leaves leving her alone in pain.
V- tumhe Choroongi nahin main Sagar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Precap- Sagar and Vidya both get in trouble by the dean

plZ *** leave COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnX sonali di<33333333333

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Irika

wow nice update plz cont soon

thnXX so much Irika

ill continue soon<333333

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome update....got to admit ur brains full of imagination... 😃
plz cont soon .... 😳

...Narmeen...

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