Akdha Dark ff Game of Destiny chapter 43 on page 136 - Page 50

Chapter 35

Good chapter

Finally rahim entry😳 he is soo cute and intelligent, jo-rahim part was too good😃

Avantika & Maan - can feel there problem, to go against their own people.

jalal was missing her badly, jo-ja discussion on zahir part was good, she made good point "Maybe, he's loyal to you"! "but me"?..

The war part was very emotional, feeling bad for maan.
"There's difference"! He dream to unite Bharat"! He didn't desire to conquer"! If you wish to compare than do it with Alexander who dream to conquer the World"! - How true this words are.

Ajmer part was good - those are really traitor.😡

Uff this news saddened me too jo - ek aur shaadiNathi bai
She is jealous😆she missed him alot but she is not happy hahaha🤣as she is confuse with her feelings as well as the lose of bikaner's.

Thanks for the update.

Chapter 36

For me this chapter was really shocking but awesome at the same time😲❤️

Starting with rahim cutiee was very much good, the conversation between them for holi celebration saddened jodha, but dont worry as rahim & ja is there to make her happy😉

Jalal came but jo didn't went to welcome him as she was angry, jealous, sad and what not😆
So he came to meet her at practice arena the conversation between them ufff(they both are idiot)

Jo is having fever and jalal hold her in his arms and take her in her hojra ooooo wow😳

"I don't care let them think whatever the hell on earth they want"! - i love this line😆

she pretend to be unconscious🤣"Did it race a little bit more when i snuggled closer"? - yes it is🤣😳💔

The shocking part is here - "You're diffrent you're mine and i love you Jodha"! he really confess it, i mean admit it that he love her ryt ?, i just can't believe it actually he really admit it.😲😳

I was having your thoughts in heart and mind - he admit that he has heart too ufff, what a unexpected confession rashmi.

Flashback part of jalal & Nathi bai (I don't know why but i also feel jealous when jalal says - "Subhan Allah", What a beauty) i know i know she is his wife but i can't tolerate anyone other than jodha🤣😆
"But she's beyond compare"! Ofcourse she is precious gem (one n only)😉

He didn't left her thats nice, he loves her very much, he can ignore anyone for her😊

Jo & Nathi bai's conversation was good. Jo is insecure but she is following her mother advise, which is very good.

Khel angan part was damm good, the conversation between them is always very meaningful. She won the game of chess. Jalal always appreciate jo's advise, he know if she is saying something than it should be never neglected as there is hidden message always which will be always helpful.

They went to Zahara bagh hand in hand😳 She demanded that she wants to go the jharokha with him. (Is she getting drown in the game of power"? Will she change like everyone in his life"? Perhaps it's the way to test her"! Even if she failed he will never let her go away from him) -😉 He is madly in love with her for sure.
Oh so he bring the necklace for her how sweetalso he wants to make her wear😳 he hugged her🥺 (Last time as i said moka dekha nhi k flirting chalu)🤣
And here comes most shocking part jodha's confession ? Seriously rashmi you are giving back to back dhamaka's🤣 i read 2 to 3 times to confirm that it is true or not (in jalal confession too)😆

"Cause I want this"! It's matter of my sole interest"! This is what concerned me"! This is What I want"! And your majesty "! I am the only one who is worthy to get place here"! - she really said it, she admit it that she wants his heart only.
Rashmi you stop this update on very wrong time 😭 but eventually it will increase the excitement more for next chapter.😃
Fabulous update seriously loved it😃

Thanks for this back to back two updates.😊

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy Di

Glad you enjoy dear 😳

Confessed indirectly

Yup they did 😃

Update soon Di

I Will try 😊

Thanks for Pm Di

Your welcome🤗

Thank you so much🤗🤗

for being first one to comment

Originally posted by: ritujajadhav

It's ok dear take your time and then update. No hurry. You have your daily life also.☺️☺️

🤗🤗For understanding 🤗

I am working on it just got little of track 😆

Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: Jjlove

I loved the update🥳🥳

Wow you like it so much

Thank you 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Jodhaaaa feels for jalal☺️ aur jalal toh phle se krta tha..they r getting closer

Indeed she does and about him all knows 😆

Huqqa begum ab jalegiii😈😈 when Jodha will sit in jharoka

I didn't even gave her space in this update yet the first you have is about her 🤣 anyway yup she will be and many more

It's great to see the bond jj have developed over the period of time gradually..ur writing skills r amazing

Thank you so much🤗🤗 for your appreciation 😳for my work🤗@ underlined are very right I was taking story forward in this way only and I am glad you're liking it 😳thank you 🤗

I just check the forum daily to see the update of stuti (i know u also love her story) and yours

She's fabulous author and indeed I love her work 😳honestly I to come to take a look at her work😆 I am glad you like mine 😃

The story and characters has developed very much..jj have came long way from their first meeting...u make it feel like i have lived with them

This is your first ever long review on my work and you ruled ❤️it for me thank you 🤗yes I wanted this to be light hearted but gripping one didn't wish to rush with them and their relation and I am glad it's enjoyed by everyone😳

Love ur story❤️❤️

Thank you 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Chapter 35

Good chapter

I am so glad you like it 😳Thank you Divya di 🤗

Finally rahim entry😳 he is soo cute and intelligent, jo-rahim part was too good😃

Yes 😎my favourite character in JA I am very happy that you enjoy the part of Jo Rahim scene

Avantika & Maan - can feel there problem, to go against their own people.

Yes 😒and knowing it's for one they don't like at first make it worse but that's what politics do 🤔 there's very little they could do about it

jalal was missing her badly, jo-ja discussion on zahir part was good, she made good point "Maybe, he's loyal to you"! "but me"?..

I make her part and point reasonable very much that it's worry me I can do justice to Ja points or not 😆 yes Ja is missing her badly whipped in love 😆

The war part was very emotional, feeling bad for maan.
"There's difference"! He dream to unite Bharat"! He didn't desire to conquer"! If you wish to compare than do it with Alexander who dream to conquer the World"! - How true this words are.

Awe Divya di thank you 🤗well it was war part 😊so it was ought to emotional 😊I am just glad I could make everyone feel for them 😳by that part it's really every author goal to make readers connect with story and I think I started achieving it little bit

Ajmer part was good - those are really traitor.😡

True 👍🏼And they're no longer Alive anymore 😎

Uff this news saddened me too jo - ek aur shaadiNathi bai

Honestly I didn't expected such a reaction by anyone 😊knowing he already have many women in Harem but Akdha fan's Can't tolerate anymore I realised now 🤣 but don't worry it will have positive impact on their relation 😳

She is jealous😆she missed him alot but she is not happy hahaha🤣as she is confuse with her feelings as well as the lose of bikaner's.

"Bang on so true she's truly at loss of idea 😆how to express herself as both news were truly shocking and got to have grave impact on her but one thing was true she was feeling bad 👏 Lose of Merta Divya di 😳

Thanks for the update.

Welcome 🤗

Thanks for such a lovely warm review Divya di 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Chapter 36

For me this chapter was really shocking but awesome at the same time😲❤️

Really 😃well that's best line and truly heart stealing word to start the review👏 I must admit 👍🏼thsnk you Divya di 🤗🤗🤗 I am so glad you find it surprising and amazing at the same time

Starting with rahim cutiee was very much good, the conversation between them for holi celebration saddened jodha, but dont worry as rahim & ja is there to make her happy😉

Can't disagree on it truly well said Divya di 👏or I should say well predicted 😉it's really make me so happy to know you enjoy every little scene of Update spacially when it's come to our lead 😎and you pay extra heed to understand it 😃nothing absolutely nothing can inspire me to write next update quickly than your awesome review 😃 thank you 🤗

Jalal came but jo didn't went to welcome him as she was angry, jealous, sad and what not😆

So he came to meet her at practice arena the conversation between them ufff(they both are idiot)

They both are idiot 😲 well you're right about Jo emotion and of-course he knew she will come to arena for sure so there he was practicing alone more like waiting for her it was to make update light hearted 😎

Jo is having fever and jalal hold her in his arms and take her in her hojra ooooo wow😳

Yes how he can let our heroine be on own when she's sick 😳more likely how I can let him play ignorant to our heroine 😈

"I don't care let them think whatever the hell on earth they want"! - i love this line😆

It's ja who said so it must be like by you😆 most importantly it's speak of his Authority as Emperor the red blood Alpha male in him won't care about other when it's come to her😎

she pretend to be unconscious🤣"Did it race a little bit more when i snuggled closer"? - yes it is🤣😳❤️

This is just start Jo is yet to know what more raced in him😉 when she's with him close but Akdha fan already does 😆

The shocking part is here - "You're diffrent you're mine and i love you Jodha"! he really confess it, i mean admit it that he love her ryt ?, i just can't believe it actually he really admit it.😲😳

Yes he did 😎"He did apperantly to himself 😳as she was sleeping 😆 I ain't in mood to make it direct confession yet but it's not far 😃

I was having your thoughts in heart and mind - he admit that he has heart too ufff, what a unexpected confession rashmi.

It's unexpected for sure😊 but 22 days sepration😒 him missing her yearning for her made him wonder about things he feel for her very much top of it his heart is very stubborn 😆but it's just Admittion to himself I mean he did spoke out verbally 😎but she didn't heard it yet

Flashback part of jalal & Nathi bai (I don't know why but i also feel jealous when jalal says - "Subhan Allah", What a beauty) i know i know she is his wife but i can't tolerate anyone other than jodha🤣😆

Honestly Divya di I was fearing for this 😆 ki don't know what Akdha fan will do 🤔if they read this flashback that's why I gave those two unexpected surprise which you mentioned above to protect myself 😆 even I can't tolerate anyone but it's historical fiction so I had to do this mainly cause it's demand of my story plot 😎

"But she's beyond compare"! Ofcourse she is precious gem (one n only)😉

@ Underlined True👏 can't disagree more on this 👍🏼

He didn't left her thats nice, he loves her very much, he can ignore anyone for her😊

People can die for love if he cannot ignore others for her then it's pity 😆so he can as he's emperor after all 😎 more over he loves her as he admitted to himself 😉

Jo & Nathi bai's conversation was good. Jo is insecure but she is following her mother advise, which is very good.

I am glad to know you like it 😳even though I didn't stretched their conversation much😊 cause I wanted it to be short just to show the effect this going to have Mainavati advise going to play very good role in the life of Jo Ja and in this story that phase shouldn't be missed 😉

Khel angan part was damm good, the conversation between them is always very meaningful. She won the game of chess. Jalal always appreciate jo's advise, he know if she is saying something than it should be never neglected as there is hidden message always which will be always helpful.

Thank you Divya di🤗🤗🤗 I thought people will get bore by Khel angan part 😆but I am so happy you like it and enjoy yes their conversation is always worth paying attention cause in their conversation laid wise advise which effectively work on their life 😎 what to say about Ja he have wisdom to understand and see the potential in others he's good at that he know Jo is capable and very smart in matter concerning her and him 😉 so he don't ignore her in anyway😆

They went to Zahara bagh hand in hand😳 She demanded that she wants to go the jharokha with him. (Is she getting drown in the game of power"? Will she change like everyone in his life"? Perhaps it's the way to test her"! Even if she failed he will never let her go away from him) -😉 He is madly in love with her for sure.

Yes 😃yes he's 😛 it's just matter of time when he will express in more favourable way most importantly this is what all of us waiting for isn't it 😆

Oh so he bring the necklace for her how sweetalso he wants to make her wear😳 he hugged her🥺 (Last time as i said moka dekha nhi k flirting chalu)🤣

Yes he did 😃but why this broken emogi "? did you used it by mistake 😆 nevertheless he he ordered to make another just like the necklace she gave and gifted her 😉 perk of being Emperor he received it within day 😆 and @Underlined lines are 🤣 epic yup truly said more over this is what we love about Ja isn't it 😆

And here comes most shocking part jodha's confession ? Seriously rashmi you are giving back to back dhamaka's🤣 i read 2 to 3 times to confirm that it is true or not (in jalal confession too)😆

Indirect confession 😉Oh my really thrice 😲oh it was truly unexpected then 😆 or else no chance for reading it thrice I am glad I give surprise in the update I was bored by not getting way to bring twist so I write this and I am truly enjoying the result by your ❤️ ruling review

"Cause I want this"! It's matter of my sole interest"! This is what concerned me"! This is What I want"! And your majesty "! I am the only one who is worthy to get place here"! - she really said it, she admit it that she wants his heart only.

Yup she did said it 😛 didn't you said it back 😉when you answer my queries that (I want jo to be more open with jalal in terms of her own liking and wishes). So here you go I did exactly that 😉 she spoke about the matter which concern her what she want and I am glad 😳it could pleased you Divya di 🤗

Rashmi you stop this update on very wrong time 😭 but eventually it will increase the excitement more for next chapter.😃

After giving another marriage track of Jalal 😆I wanted to give this one sooner 😆for Akdha fan hence dedicated this one mostly on Akdha 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗Thank you so much Divya di 🤗i an so so happy to see your amazing long heart warming review it was truly one of best moment ❤️❤️❤️love you 🤗for this 😘😘😘thank you🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Fabulous update seriously loved it😃
Thanks for this back to back two updates.😊

I am so glad 😳you enjoyed reading it and give such wonderful feedback thank you Divya di😘😘 I cannot even express in words😃 how greatful I am to you for this 🤗

Beautiful chapter n jodha feel for jalal n jalal already like her n rukaiya is jealous of jodha bcoz both jodha n jalal both bond become strong n thnxx for pm me

Originally posted by: ritujajadhav

"You're angry on me isn't"? Of-course you are"! Or else why you won't come to meet me"!...

Of course she is.... After all who will like that her husband got married again.

Well said 👏No one 😆but in that era it was different they like or not hardly mattered back then 😒 and i mention about this further in the update itself by Ja pov

"You're my Queen the empress of Empire my Wife companion of my life Jodha"! Nothing and no one no absolutely no reality of life can stop you or me"! from being honest with each other"! You can ask or say anything to me"! not because you're my wife or queen "! but because you have it in you as person to do so"!

Wow how cute....☺️☺️ That's true now they should start sharing their thoughts with eachother.... I know they understand their thoughts by reading their eyes but still

Yeh Dil maange more isn't it😉 a very understandable wish😳 i am glad you enjoy this part and fine it really lovely i will be working on this more now 😉 I will try to give more scene as such

(The sword fall on floor from her hand, he swept her off her feet in his arms ,without any prior notice. Her hands moved involuntarily, to find a support and they settled on his shoulders)

Oh my god that is superb. Now all women in harem. Will be burn in jealousy. 😍😍

Indeed they will 😈however I didn't write about others reaction in this one😳 as it's reserved for next one 😉

("You're diffrent you're mine and i love you Jodha"! I just don't know how to prove it to you"? Perhaps I can't do it ever cause i know nothing about it"!. See what you do to me"? Mild fever yet it's have me restless here, will you believe it if i say even the first time, when i talked with my new wife. I was having your thoughts in heart and mind, you know she's is different, but unlikable to me. He murmured).

He confessed his love for her 😍😍💃💃💃 don't know when he will tell her this openly..

Yes he did 😉that to when he knew she can't hear him 😆 nevertheless for them openly confessing to each other will take time 😎 there's still lot to do 😉

Nothing almost no one could intrigued him anymore. Only Jodha can why"?

Of course only our Jodha has that right.... Jalal is realising his love for Jodha..😃

Well said 👍🏼 Yes he's that flashback part 😊 these thoughts were reason he end up admitting later with sleeping Jodha😎 that he's in love

(that see you thought you're special "? but you're not, the new Queen may assume the same, but truth is this won't last"! But the way she look at her made her wonder "what wouldn't last"? Her looks her position "? She don't held any position yet, she's isn't much a Beauty either, then she needn't to get self-conscious either)

Yes ... That's true. I hope is did not turn in evil. Ruqaiya is enough for being headache 😏😏 to Jo.

No 😊 no more vamp few are enough for our lead and story 😆 so my readers needn't to worry about Bikaner princess at all 😳

This chess part was amazing. By playing their conversing with each other and sharing their thoughts. Not directly but it is good that they understanding each others unsaid words. ☺️ I really like this where in serial they did not have this much understanding.

I am so glad you liked the chess part enjoy the meaningful conversation which happen between them 😃 yeah in JA series we only get to see Vamp and villains cheap actions never ending glorification of FL and Foolishness of ML in the name of entertainment and history they made a mockery 😒 nevertheless I am glad you find this update appreciable and enjoyed from heart 😳 thank you🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗

"Shh"! nothing which belongs to you could be with other"! I cannot bear it"! So here this one for you"! I understand your concern"! and I am going to make decision about this"!

It's good that Ja take this positively and also thinking to do something regarding this..

Yes😃 cause now he's becoming sensible Emperor and i think so far i shown him pretty fair in term of being ruler 😎

(She poked on his chest at left side on heart, then put her palm there sensing , the rise of irregular speed of his heart beating. she put her head on his chest wounding her arms around his waist hugging him she spoke).

Oh my god oh my god she hugged him by herself.😍😍😍😍. I can't express my feelings now that how much happy I am

Yes she did she hugged him😉 with full authority and heartily wish cause it's time she take a lead 😎

"Cause I want this"! It's matter of my sole interest"! This is what concerned me"! This is What I want"! And your majesty "! I am the only one who is worthy to get place here"!

She confessed it indirectly to him about his feelings. 😍😍😍😍😍

"Yes she did my Bold jo 😎 not only indirectly she confessed her feelings but she made a claim on his heart as well 😉 it's just matter of time when i will show her more shades 😎

which can be 😉😈😳 this way just wait and watch"! 😊

Thank you so much dear for this wonderful episode. You don't know how much happy you mad me today. ☺️☺️😍😍😍

Your welcome🤗 I am glad I could make your day by the update 😃 but thank you so much🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 for the wonderful review dear thank you 🤗

Thank you 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗so much dear for beautiful review 🤗

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Beautiful chapter n jodha feel for jalal n jalal already like her n rukaiya is jealous of jodha bcoz both jodha n jalal both bond become strong n thnxx for pm me

Thank you🤗🤗🤗 i am glad you enjoy the update😳 but Natasha 😊 there was no Ruk scene in the update 😆but yes Jo and Ja bond is shaping stronger now 😉 that's not far when it will become unbreakable unshakable 😊 thank you for sweet comment 🤗