MayRa/ShivJen DT #23 "Jo Dil Mai Hai Woh Zubaan Par Kyun Nahi Late?" - Page 100

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

Thanks😃 ek aur likha hai, i think page 111 shaayad

Okay.. dekhti hu 😃

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

Thanks😃 ek aur likha hai, i think page 111 shaayad

I mean page 110😆

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

These black satins crave for the red of your love.

#MayRa_verse

They do....

Lahu muh lag gaya jabse..

Tera hogaya ye dil tabse

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

Re writing the haldi scene, because, maje!

Maya opened the door of her house to witness Rudra standing outisde, with tears in his eyes.

"I don't know what I want anymore. It like everyone is telling me some stuff and my ears have stopped listening and my brain has stopped listening. Am I going mad? What is happening?" He hugged her and she let him cry before breaking the hug and walking upto the haldi she had prepared.

"Tumhari haldi thi naa aaj?" She said and applied some of the paste on his cheeks, ignoring his shock and anger.

"Maya main kuch keh raha hoon!"
"Bacche nahi ho tum Rudra, figure out what you want for yourself," She said as she smurged some paste on his forhead.

"Did you know that earlier the kings used to transport the finest mehnedi leaves and twigs grounded and made into paste to their brides, or vice versa, nowaadys a bridegroom's haldi is sent to his bride," SHe applied some paste on her cheeks and he loked at him in confusio.

"Tumhe kya chahiye RUdra?" She unbuttoned his shirt and applied some paste on the scratches she had inflicted a while ago.

"Haldi se zakhm jaldi bhar jaate hai," She blew some air over the wound, her lips almost touching his chest.

Rudra was losing his head. He was feeling dizzy with lust and wanted to pin Maya to the wall and smash his lips on her, showing that two could play the game, and when Maya repeated her question, he did pin her to the wall.

"You know what I want, to figure myself out, to figure what the ff is going on in my life and head. I think of you, with lust, which is totally wrong, and with an emotion I have never experienced before, undiluted, crazy passion. I want to talke you away from here, far away, where its just the two of us,"

She smirked at him as he left her, his eyes going wide with shock at what he had just spoken.

"Get what you want RUdra," She touched her cheek to his and left the living room.

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Nandini rat ke 8 baje bazaar gayi hti, kyun, mujhe at puchna. USer is shocked at what she has written, let her get over it

Awesome This is like an extra ice-cream treat! loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: tournesol

Awesome This is like an extra ice-cream treat! loved it ❤️

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: 2019_AnushkaM

Honestly when parents r this much irresponsible & fukked up with their own toxic lives & relationship they should not bring a child in it before sorting their own shits .

Mostly sab soch te hai relationship thik hojayaga but kuch nahi thik hota hai and bacche life ruined hoti hai 🥺. So many kids develop psychological issues for this in future.

Okay mein kuch Jada real world mein gush gayi 😆.

But you are absolutely right. In real world, it would be a bigger tragedy than what it is now on this show.

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

See there is this thing about Rudra. He is extremely insecure.

The girl he loved with all his heart ended up romancing his dad.

And now he will have it in reverse----the girl who romanced his dad will end up with him. Poor guy !!!!!

Originally posted by: stormborn

And now he will have it in reverse----the girl who romanced his dad will end up with him. Poor guy !!!!!

Rudra's dad needs to stay off his girls'

Originally posted by: _._shibani_._

They realized tgey arentvto be trusted eith proper characterization😒

I agree... They can't be trusted with proper characterization.

Rajeev's character had so much potential... And Aamir is shown to be totally useless... Aisa kyu CV's???

Guys, mera epi dekh k dil aur dimaag dono ghum gaya 🤪

First part, because of the chemistry Nazare hi nahi hat rahi thi dono ki.. It was like, Ananya: Rudra chalo, Rudra: Mummy aur 5 minute 🤣

Second part, kya manipulate kiya Maya ne Ananya ko, manipulate kiya to kiya, she was also saying the truth: factual and apne dil ka bhi..because she was crying, her tears tell the truth. I loved she showed her the mirror.

Then ek teer se do nishane, Ananya ghabra gayi, aur Rudra, the sakht launda, pighal gaya 🤣 Awesome episode man!