THANK GOD ...... COZ I LOVE YOU

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Aaj ka din yaad hai na apko .....

Aaj ka din mai kaise bhul sakta hu

Haan aur kya aaj ka din ap kaise bhul sakte hai apke muh se aur ears doowa jo nikal raha tha ( Taani said with a straight face wanting it to be serious and bitting her lip trying to stop her laughter)

Haan........ WHAT THE HELL

(rey shouted once he was out of the flow of their romantic talks and there taani lost her ability to control the laughter and busted out laughing 😂 😂😂)

Aur nahi toh kya REY please don’t tell me ki ap soch the hai ki aisa nahi tha😂

Ohh please mai sochta nahi hu par aisa kuch bhi nahi tha okk..... don’t make up thingsss ok rey said with a-pout

Awwwww (taani pinched reys cheek ) areee saty nahi chupta

Sat....y whattttt???

Areee mere angrezzzi babuu saty matlab truth

Ohhhh please jaan aisa kuch nahi tha

Kuch nahi tha ok chalo abhi chalo bhai se puch the hai unko bhi yahi lagta hai

Nahiiiii please us possessive bhai se mujeh dur rakho kam se kam aaj k din

Hawwww ap mere bhai k baare mein aisa bol rahe ho , wo apke bhi best friend hai

Ha toh mai wo mana nahi kar raha bas mujeh apne special say pe apni girlfriend k bhai se fake coughing nahi chahiye toh usse nahi bhulana

Toh pata kaise chalega .......

Ek idea hai

Kya ?

Rey in flimy manner

FLASHBACK

It’s the time where the BB match was held in d3 but just a change ALONG WITH VEER THERE WAS SHIVAM TOO🦹‍♀️

(This is for people who love jealous rey , I do)

The scenario is that shivam and taani are not together and everyone knows about it but as shivam said that he started liking taani , this still bothers rey alot .

Shi : Hey beautiful (entering the rh hall where team was meeting for BB players hospitality)

Rey to himeslf : God isse kyu friends rakhna tha taani ko

Swayam : hmm kya kuch bola

Rey : nahi toh, tu kuch kyu nahi bol tha hai ?

Swayam : Matlab??

Rey : Iss shivam ko , ek toh taani ne humse jhoot bola about relationship and phir reason bhi nahi bataya hi jhoot kyu bola aur upar se shivam k sath abhi tak friends hai i mean kyu why why on the earth she is still friends with him , i can never understand your sis she is too ajeeb, usse pata bhi nahi hai ki mai kitna worried tha jab pata chala ki they are in a relation.

Swayam : You were worried ?🙄🙄 why

(Rey realising what he said)

Rey : i mean hum yaar hum .

Swayam : Ha i know but ab they are just friends so tu kitna kyu hyper ho raha hai yaar

Rey : kuch nahi

Swayam : bhai tu thik rehna kyu abhi wo dusri college ki team aa rahi hogi

Rey looking at TAAVAM : Haa i hope mai thik hu

At this point TAAREY had a eyelock for which both were desperate .

Eyelocks for taarey was everything they could understand each other ,ask,answer everything and anything through just a simple eyelock

Which got distrubed by Shivam stating that the WELHAMS have arrived.

The team reached to the atrium and saw all tall guyss standing there with challenging face ,reyam looked at each other and both were worried for dance and the team

But apart from that what caught rey’s attention was the WELHAMS TEAM LEADER supposedly some VEER RAJPUT particularly at one spot , and suddenly there was a rise in temperture because of the jealousy held in reys eyes and heart. Rey looked at veer and then again in the direction of Veers stare , there stood none another than Taani with a stressed and a pout face . Veer smirkingly said

Veer : wow i m impressed with St.louis a decent campus with a great view (looking at taani) reys blood boiled on this and coming in front of taani rey blocked her , preventing her fron his dirtfull stare.

Rey : Welcome to St.louis , ek baat ka dhayan karna hume view dikhane bhi aate hai aur din mein Stars bhi

With this Veer and shivam both got a lil hint the somewhere TAANI WAS ONLY REY’s.

At this moment Taani and gang was utterly shocked as rey was initiating the cold war and which taani didnt want for reys sake only and hence he was pulled back by taani gesturing that he is weong which angered rey and he stromed off before he loses his temper.

Taani : Well he was just joking , he is the AGS Reyansh singhania . Please don’t mind

Veer : Babes its ok if you are requesting i wont be minding anything . Saying this he forwarded a hands , to which gang and taani felt weird but left it there

After this incident between rey and ceer both gang and welhams didn’t left achance to pull each other down .

Rey and taani sitting in projector room dicussing the event that was tomorrow when

Taani : Rey ek baar dekh lijiye ki kuch reh toh nahi gaya na kyuki mujeh lag raha hai ki mere dhyan se kuch chut gaya hai

Rey : Dhyan jab dusron pe hoga toh yahi ho na

Taani ignored it as this dicussion was done and taani really stated that it had nothing to do with her. But rey is as blind in rage especially when last he saw taani with those jerk shivam and veer in canteen smiling and having coffee with them although taani justified it to him that shivam and she was working when out of no where veer just sat with them .

Rey : baatein mein reply bhi karna bhul hmgayi ho kya ?

Veer : chee chee chee

Both rey and taani turn around to see veer standing there with his evil smirk

Veer : Yaar rey this is not fair , aisa kaise baat kar raha h tu , yaar agar meri kitni hot and beautiful boss hoti na toh kasam se mai toh kabhi bhi aise baat na tha , haan kuch ayr zarur karta (keeping one elbow on reys shoulder and winking at taani )

Taani made a disgusted face but rey could not take it he just blew veer hands away and was about to punch him but veer stopped him and said : oh please stop this heropanti ok kitno ko maaroge mujeh , shivam ko , bewakuf hai wo relation mein hoke bhi kich nahi kia

Now that was the last straw for both rey and taani

Rey literally got veer chocked by twisting his neck

Rey : how dare you , i m going to kill you , how can you talk about MY TAANI

Like that she wasnt in a true relationship with shivam , and about you i not gonna leave you

Seeing that rey wasnt backing out and veer was near to faint taani took charge and pulled rey away from veer , saying that if he had where cared for ger then to leave hin and so rey left him.

Veer coughed and taani warned him to stay away from her and also if anybody got to know what happened she will tell everybody the truth and his hidden intention about her

Veer gritted his teeth as he was stuck and once he left taani was in den “IN A LOINS DEN”.

As soon as taani turn she was pinned by rey to the near wall , taani saw questions, regret

care and love in rey eyes

Kyu taani kyu , kyu roka tumhe mujeh how can u do this ,

Rey maar jata wo mujeh apki care hai aur

Aur mujeh tumhari taani , jaan le lunga mai unka jisne meri jaan k baare mein kuch bhi galat bola yaa socha i swear

(Taani was shocked of what she was listening but she wasnt sure that what she heard was truth.)

When rey saw no reaction , and when they were having their eyelock rey said

Its true JAAN HO TUM MERI , MAAN LIYA KI MAI TUMSE PYAAR KARTA HU , I LOVE YOU TAANI

TAANI could understand she just hugged rey with all her might and asked him how when and why

But rey could bot answer anything expect that he found his love for her in his jealousy 😂

Present

Taani brust the imaginary cloud and rey looked caught

Taani : so Mr. Husband thats how you were jealous and after u confessed to me you gave the same explanation to bhai and gang remeber

Rey : Fine i was jealous (making a pout )

Taani : (husky said in his ear ) : THANK GOD YOU WERE COZ I LOVE YOU

TAAREY SMILED AT EACH OTHER AND SAID : HAPPY CONFESSION ANNIVERSARY JAAN /PRINCE CHARMING ❤️

And sealed the day with a kiss and alot more .....😉



So here it is finally tried my hands in writing and i said i tried i hope its ok atleast to read it once

Please like and leave your valuable comments for my improvement

Thanks Trisha and shewta for helping ❤️

Bdw HAPPY TAAREY CONFESSION ANNIVERSARY GUYSS

LETS KEEP TAAREY ALIVE😍😍😍

And some how i couldnt post the edit i had made for this particukatlr os , in case i get to know how to post it i will surely do that 🤞🏻
please give your honest review

Waiting to read them ☺️


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Posted: 6 years ago
#2

Awesome and cute one

Pls keep writing

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Posted: 6 years ago
#3

Sometimes jealousy does work. It makes one realize what they are missing.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello! I'm so glad you wrote!!!

This was cute❤️

Damn honestly i really loved the ore basketball match time and I guess everyone did haha, what an os!

Shivam pe jitna gussa aata haina utna uske wajah se hue realisation pe pyaar bhi aata hai!😂😂 This version, the fact that Rey aise aag babula hogaya jealousy me is so believable 😂😂😂

I loved that Taani stood up for herself, jaise Shivam Ko nikala tha was a great moment and loved how she calmly dealt with Veer, where obviously our Majnu couldn't stay calm😂😂😂

Damn cute mann, aww and they're married❤️❤️

Lol, him not confessing to being angry and jealous was funny😂😂😂


Happy Anniversary Girll! Keep writing ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Shweta!! Kyun mere naam ki baja rahe hai sab?😐


Starting mein I was confused ki exact kya chal raha hai, phir samjhi😛

Jealous Rey is just a treat. Par uska jealousy se angry young man mein transformation is something else!

Confession ka yeh angle bhi mast hai! That MY TAANI! Bro kya feels aaye uss possessive angry lover ke!

A decent start to your writing! Keep churning out more!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2111_shweta

Shweta!! Kyun mere naam ki baja rahe hai sab?😐


Starting mein I was confused ki exact kya chal raha hai, phir samjhi😛

Jealous Rey is just a treat. Par uska jealousy se angry young man mein transformation is something else!

Confession ka yeh angle bhi mast hai! That MY TAANI! Bro kya feels aaye uss possessive angry lover ke!

A decent start to your writing! Keep churning out more!

Aree aree koi band nahi bheja raha hai 😂😂😂😂

Galti se hogaya typing eror sorry

I sure agree that jealous rey is a treat 😍😍😍

Thanks god samjh mein aa raha hai 😅😅

I was so scared posting it

Thank you for liking and supporting

Yaa hope so i will write more

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jasmine_ash

Awesome and cute one

Pls keep writing

Thank you ☺️will definitely try to write more

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Trisha49

Hello! I'm so glad you wrote!!!

This was cute❤️

Damn honestly i really loved the ore basketball match time and I guess everyone did haha, what an os!

Shivam pe jitna gussa aata haina utna uske wajah se hue realisation pe pyaar bhi aata hai!😂😂 This version, the fact that Rey aise aag babula hogaya jealousy me is so believable 😂😂😂

I loved that Taani stood up for herself, jaise Shivam Ko nikala tha was a great moment and loved how she calmly dealt with Veer, where obviously our Majnu couldn't stay calm😂😂😂

Damn cute mann, aww and they're married❤️❤️

Lol, him not confessing to being angry and jealous was funny😂😂😂


Happy Anniversary Girll! Keep writing ❤️

I swear all of us loved the bb match sequence but they didnt showed much of veers attraction towards taani so i thiught why not include both veer and shivam in here and make the jealousy to next kevel , i hope that did happen 🤞🏻i wanted to write more on veer trying get close to taani but it seemed that the OS will exceed so tried my best to show in short form.

And yes TAANI had to take a stand I don’t like that she cant take a stand thing to an extent so yes

And manju calm kaise hoga , uski laila ki jo baat thi 😂😂😂

Glad you liked it .
hope i write more

Thank you for the support

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Are waah

One more OS on anniversary❤️

Hayyeee....Jealous Rey is always a treat

Yaar made me nostalgic...Vo BB match aur Jealous Rey wale epis dekhne ka mann kar raha hai ab❤️

A cute OS and a different confession angle

N My Taani and then meri jaan ufff

A fair first attempt

Keep writing though

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mrunmayee02

Are waah

One more OS on anniversary❤️

Hayyeee....Jealous Rey is always a treat

Yaar made me nostalgic...Vo BB match aur Jealous Rey wale epis dekhne ka mann kar raha hai ab❤️

A cute OS and a different confession angle

N My Taani and then meri jaan ufff

A fair first attempt

Keep writing though

Thank you so mich ☺️☺️☺️

Definitely a jealous rey is treat and i just loved when rey used to taani sweetheart or jaan i loved it so they will be there in writings for sure

Yes something . Is coming up in couple of days 🤞🏻🤞🏻

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