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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hey guys. I hope you are doing well. Im new to the forum. It's my first time posting something. I just came across the show sometime ago and I am completely hooked to it. After reading beautiful stories of many members here I thought to give it a shot as well. Here is my version of the terrace scene. Hope you guys enjoy it.


Shayam hugs Khushi forcefully. Arnav looks om feeling anger surging through his veins seeing the scene in front of his eyes.Yet he stands there wanting to see how Khushi reacts.

Shayam: Khushiji hum aap se bahut pyaar krte hain. Ap smjhti kyun nhi hain yeh baat? Humare liye Rani Sahiba koi maiyne nhi rkhti hain.

Khushi: Agar aap ke liye yeh rishta maiyne nhi rkhta toh chor dijiye Anjali ji ko. Talaq de dijiye.

Listening to this Arnav feels like the ground underneath him has slipped.

Arnav: No, she can’t do this to me. Itna bara dhoka kaise de skti hai Khushi mujhe aur di ko. Khushi aur Shayam. Main in dono ko chorun ga nhi. Is ka badla na liye toh mera naam bhi Arnav Singh Raizada nhi.(He is about to leave from there but then recalls every moment spent with Khushi)

Arnav: Nhi meri Khushi aisi nhi hai. Maine uski ankhon main apne liye pyaar dekha hai. There is more to this. Who mere sath aisa nhi kr skti na di ke sath itna bara dhoka kr skti hai. Mujhe apne pyaar pe pura bharosa hai. I shouldn’t leave her alone here. (He decides to stay there and see the scene unfolding)

Shayam: Hum apke liye kuch bhi kar skte hain Khushiji. Rani Sahiba ko chorna toh bht choti si bat hai, bs aap humari ho jayein.

Khushi: Sapnon ki dunya se bahir niklein. Na hum apke kbi thy na agay honge. Rahi baat Anjali ji ki toh who aap jaise insaan k sath rhein yeh mujhe manzoor nhi. Anjali ji sach main ek devi hain. Who ap se itna pyaar krti hain aur apki lambi umar k liye vrat pooja aur pta nhi kya kya krti hain lekin ap us laik nhi hain ke apke liye yeh sab kiya jaye. Ap ek ghatiya, girey hue insaan hain jo pyaar ka matlb hi nhi jaanta.

Shayam: Bas Khushi ji. Bht bol liya apne aur bht sunliya humne. Ap humara pagalpan, humara junoon hain aur hum apko haasil kr k hirahein ge, chahe humein uske liye kuch bhi krna parey. Filhal toh hum jaa rhe hain lekin ap srf meri hain yeh baat na bhulna kbi.

Shayam leaves from there and Khushi breaks down. In the meantime Arnav closes his eyes in pain knowing how two of the most important women in his life are suffering. He goes near Khushi and puts his hand on hershoulder.

Arnav; Khushi…

Khushi turns around and sees anger in his eyes. She realizes that he has heard everything but before she can say anything he forcefully grabs her hand and takes her to his room. He locks the door and pushes her against the wall, holding her hands above her head.

Arnav: Tum aise kaise kr skti ho Khushi?

Khushi: Arnav ji please humari baat suniye. Humara Shayam ji se koi taluq nhi hai. Who Anjali ji ko dokha de rhe hain. Humara yakeen ki jiye. She tells him everything on how she met Shayam, how he started staying as a paying guest, how she found out he is Anjali ji’s husband, how he has been manhandling her.

Khushi: Arnav ji please aise chup mat rahiye. Kuch toh boliye. Please bharosa ki jiye hum pe. Hum jhoot nhi bol rhe, humara yakeen ki jiye.

Arnav: Bharosa hai tumpe Khushi. Krta hun yakeen tumhari hr ek baat pe.

Khushi: toh phir yeh sab, aise humein yaha kyun leke aye?

Arnav: Tum ab tk nhi smjhi? Mujhe afsos hai Khushi k tum itna sab kuch bardasht krti rhi aur ek baar bhi mere paas nhi ayi. Mujhse ek baar keh k toh dekhti. Lekin apni takleef mujhe btaney ke bjaye tumne mujhse yeh sab chupaya. Kyun? Kya bharosa nhi tha mujhpe, ya main tumhari zindegi main koi hun hi nhi isliye btana zaruri nhi smjha?

Khushi: aap aisa mat kahiye Arnav ji please. Yeh sach nhi hai.

Arnav: Toh sach kya hai, kyun chupaya yeh sab. Kyun nhi ayi mere paas? Tumhe yeh lg rha hoga na ke yakeen nhi krun ga tumhari baat ka, ya keh dun ga yeh sab paisey k liye kr rhi ho, chaal hai tumhari koi. Isliye drd khud sehti rhi. (he leaves her hand and goes sit on the recliner with tears in his eyes)

Khushi follows him and sits on her knees infront of him holding his hand.

Khushi: Arnav ji, ap galat smjh rhein hain. Hum srf isliye ap ke pas nhi aye kyun ke hum apko tut’te hue nhi dekh skte thy. Anjaliji apke liye sab kuch hain aur humein lga ap bikhar jayein ge yeh jaan ke.Humein kahi na kahi lgta tha Shayam ji badal jayein ge aur shaid sab theek hojaye. Hum se apki takleef nhi dekhi jati isliye chup rhe.

Arnav: Aur jo khud ko takleef deti rhi uska kya?

Khushi: Hum apke liye koi bhi takleef bardasht krskte hain, yeh toh bht choti cheez hai.

Arnav: Aur tumhe kya lgta hai tumhe takleef main dekh k main bht khush honga?

Khushi: Meri takleef se apko kya farak prta?

Arnav: Tum abhi bhi yeh pocho gi? Jaanti nhi ho kyun farak parta.

Khushi stands up and goes towards the door.

Khushi: Nhi, hum kuch nhi jaan’te. Waise toh har time chilate rehte hain aap, sab pe rob jamate, apni marzi krte hain, LaadGovernor ki trhan ghoomte rehte hain. Bolte rehte hain main Arnav Singh Raiada hun. Kaha ke Arnav Singh Raizada hain aap. Darpok hain aap. ASR hote ya mere Arnav ji hote toh kb ka mujhse kehdiya hota who kya mehsoos krte hain.

She sees Arnav sitting and looking at her with an amused face, smiling slightly at her.

Khushi: AB aise kya dekh rhe hain?

Arnav: bs bol liya? Ya aur kuch kehna hai. Pagal ho tum puri.

Khushi makes an O expression: Haaww apne mujhe Pagal kaha.

He walks up to her slowly while she moves back. This continues till her back hits the wall and he entraps her between his arms.

Arnav: pagal toh tum ho lekin cute bhi ho. Mujhe toh bht batein kr rhi ho, khud toh btao zra meri takleef si tumhe kyun takleef hoti hai? Lgta kya hun tumhara?

Khushi gets angry and is tired of the Tom and Jerry game.

Khushi: Kuch nhi lgte ap humare. Hatiye humare agay se. Humein aap se koi baat nhi krni. Apko bht maza ata na humein tang kr kr,dekhna itni dur chalein jayein ge apse ke phr dhundna b chahein toh bhi nhi milein ge.

Khushi pushes him away and turns to leave. Arnav gets angry listening to her. He grabs her arm tightly and pulls her towards her. He puts one hand in her hair and one on her back and makes her come closer to him

Arnav: Meri ankhon main dekho, pyaar nazar nhi ata kya tumhe? Mere moun se teen lafz nhi suney toh mujhe chor k janey ki baat kr rhi ho lekin jo main tumhare liye mehsoos krta who dekh nhi skti kya. Dubara aisi baat ki toh mujhse bura koi nhi hoga. Tum mujhe chor ke gyi toh jee nhi paon ga. I LOVE YOU DAMMIT. Yehi sun na tha na. I love you Khushi Kumari Gupta.Lo kehdia. Ab jana hai na. Jao.

He releases her and turns his face the other way.Khushi gets elated hearing his confession but is also aware that she has hurt him with her words

Khushi: Arnav ji.,, (she puts her hand on his shoulder but he shrugs it away and moves it away and goes sit on the recliner)

Khushi: Suniye na Laad Governor…

But Arnav pays no heed to her.

Khushi: Hey Devi Maiyya, kya krein hum. Humne in ko itna naraz krdiya. Ab manana toh parey ga.

Arnav in his mind: Yeh lrki na. Ek toh chor ke janey ki bat ki aur ab upr se mujhe I love you kehne ke bjaye apni DM se batein kr rhi. Unbelievable. Is se hi pyaar hona tha mujhe. But chlo jaisi bhi hai meri hai.

Khushi smiles lightly seeing Arnav’s grumpy face. She goes sit on his lap sideways and wraps her arms around his neck. Arnav is shocked with her action but doesn’t show it on his face.

Khushi: Arnav ji, please humein maaf krdein, humein aisa nhi kehna chahye tha, aur apko kya lgta hai hum apko chor k ja sakte hain kya, apke beghair humari saansein ruk jayein. Kyun hum bhi ap se I love you dammit.

She leans her forehead against his and when he remains silent staring at her she starts weeping.

Khushi: Ar.. Arnav ji, please chup na rhein. Please.

Seeing her tears he immediately hugs her.

Arnav: Shhhh, khushi mat ro. I can’t see tears in your eyes. Mujhe drd hota. Kya tum mujhe drd main dekhna chahti ho?

Khushi shakes her head in no against his chest and moves up to wipe her tears. They keep staring in each other’s eyes and Arnav leans in looking at her lips. She closes her eyes and her lips quiver. And subconsciously Khushi too leans forward. As soon as their lips meet, both go in a different world. Arnav holds her closer from her waist while Khushi tightens her hold onhis neck. It felt like the world stopped. They both forgot everything. It was just Arnav and Khushi. Arnav lightly nibbles on her lower lip and gently bites her lip. She moans and opens her mouth. He uses this to explore her mouth with his tongue and releases her when he feels her going out of breath.

Khushi looks everywhere but Arnav’sface and blushes wildly. Arnav doesn’t want to embarrass or tease her further so just kisses her forehead.

Arnav: Khushi I love you.

Khushi (shyly): I love you too.

Khushi hugs him being too shy to face him. They stay in each other’s embrace when Khushi remembers the Shyam fiasco and stiffens. Arnav feels her going tense and pulls back and cups her face

Arnav: Kya hua Khushi?

Khushi: Who Shyam ji?

Arnav: Bharosa hai mujhpe?

Khushi: Khud se bhi ziyada.

Arnav: Toh phr fikr na kro, main smbhaal lunga bas humesha mere sath rho.

Khushi: Hum ap ke sath hi hain.

Arnav smiles and hugs her.

Arnav: Although mujhe aise bht maza araha lekin ab humein neeche chalna chahye. Shaadi ki kuch akhri tyaariyan bhi dekhni.

Khushi is so lost in his warmth and mutters kounsi shaadi?

Arnav: Maana ke main bht handsome hun Khushi but itna bhi kya mujh main khogyi ke apni bhen ki shaadi bhul gyi.

Khushi abruptly stands up with an O on her face and smacks Arnav’s chest.

Khushi: yeh sab apki waja se hua. Hey DM itna kaam para, jiji ko tyaar krna, khud bhi tyaar hona aur yeh Laad Governor jo hain humesha garbar krwate. She runs out the room without looking back.

Arnav (chuckles): Unbelievable, pagal hai. But I should get used to it, puri zindegi yehi sehna ab.

THE END.

Hope you liked it. Leave your thoughts and criticismis welcome as well.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very nice. Like that he stayed to hear he whole conversation and did not jump to conclusions hearing just half of it.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It was a nice take! Wish something like this happened in the show and they would have married with mutual consent!

Thanks for reminding us of the golden phase of the show! :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice os with a happy ending

Well written 👏👍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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A good OS on the iconic scene.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice one

Plz add

English translation too

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