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Posted: 5 years ago

Same here. From the WU it seemed like he is hell bent on proving Gs guilty.

Well, yes from the WU it seemed that he is hell bent on proving the Gs guilty... And Mo too seems to be wanting to take advantage of this situation.

So, just imagine a Tom and Jerry drama with Mo trying to show that dead body to the officer and Gs trying to hide that...


Anyway, I don't want manhandling or torture in any form.

Same here... Even I don't want manhandling in any form...


BTW, he had some resemblance to Atif, don't you think?

Yup he had... Eyes and specs looked similar.

Waise bhi, they often do special appearances in Nazar...


Also, I wanted some suggestions regarding my story's ending... Any suggestions??

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: nushy1995

I want to ask you something. Since both of us are Adat Se Mazboor and catch glimpses of Nazar by somehow, should we continue posting new threads? Not mandatorily but just for fun?

Well, why not?? I would love to...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Also, I wanted some suggestions regarding my story's ending... Any suggestions??


You can experiment with the fourth element like it being a magical entity who actually appears to kill both the halves of Sarpika and attain power. Here good and evil Piya defeating her and then deciding to mix themselves which will ultimately leave Piya with both her Sarpika and Daivik powers.


Again, Piya was thinking about some plan, right? She might make it look like Mo is the 4th symbol/entity so evil Piya will attack her and get fatally injured. So ultimately Piya will win over both of them.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Also, I wanted some suggestions regarding my story's ending... Any suggestions??


You can experiment with the fourth element like it being a magical entity who actually appears to kill both the halves of Sarpika and attain power. Here good and evil Piya defeating her and then deciding to mix themselves which will ultimately leave Piya with both her Sarpika and Daivik powers.


Again, Piya was thinking about some plan, right? She might make it look like Mo is the 4th symbol/entity so evil Piya will attack her and get fatally injured. So ultimately Piya will win over both of them.

Well, all this I have planned out... What I actually wanted to ask was how should I end it... Should I end it with Pia defeating her evil side or with Ansh coming back to normal?? If former, then fine and if latter then any suggestions??

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Posted: 5 years ago

I think the former option is better. Ansh wasn't present most of the time and kind of looked dumb as EDV. But yes, you can bring him back, show Ved freaking out at the possibility of Ansh's relation with Piya post all these incidents and Ansh blasting her.


You know my love for Ved. Story kahi se bhi aage barao, mereko to bahna chahiye use blast karne ka. 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: nushy1995

I think the former option is better. Ansh wasn't present most of the time and kind of looked dumb as EDV. But yes, you can bring him back, show Ved freaking out at the possibility of Ansh's relation with Piya post all these incidents and Ansh blasting her.


You know my love for Ved. Story kahi se bhi aage barao, mereko to bahna chahiye use blast karne ka. 😳

Yeah actually... Ansh wasn't present in the story plus I made him look like a dumbo just to remove him from the scene. So, I guess I will take the first option only...


Ved ko blast kabhi aur kar lenge... Waise bhi, I actually wanted both Nishant and Ansh to blast her, not any one.

After all, you also know about my love for Ved!!!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

😈 😈 😈


Sure. 👍🏼 Complete this one any may be later an OS on Ved blasting. 😉


Speaking of which, you have read all 4 parts of my story. The next couple of chapters I intend to focus on Ansh. But I am thinking of a scenario where he'll blast both Bekar and Ved. I have a sketch in my mind. But any suggestion?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Sure. 👍🏼 Complete this one any may be later an OS on Ved blasting. 😉

Well, I am thinking of something in this direction. Let's see if I am able to write something good or not.

Speaking of which, you have read all 4 parts of my story. The next couple of chapters I intend to focus on Ansh. But I am thinking of a scenario where he'll blast both Bekar and Ved. I have a sketch in my mind. But any suggestion?

Well, to be honest, I don't even want to dare to give any suggestions after reading your story...

Whatever you write is already amazing. I don't think I can think of something even close to this...

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Posted: 5 years ago

I am flattered dear but seriously, sometimes suggestion helps indirectly. Like Madhura pointed out many things which I already had in mind but Ansh with his kids was her idea and it enriched the story.

Like that, is there anything that you would want? I want to blend all the ideas. 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: nushy1995

I am flattered dear but seriously, sometimes suggestion helps indirectly. Like Madhura pointed out many things which I already had in mind but Ansh with his kids was her idea and it enriched the story.

Like that, is there anything that you would want? I want to blend all the ideas. 😊

Well, you have already included all that I wanted the makers to show...

So, if I think of anything else, I can't think of anything else that I want to be included.

Baaki since in the 4th part, Ved and Bekar were mainly talking about the kids staying in a joint family plus all four of them sacrificing their powers for the sake of the family it can be included?? Then Ved was concerned about Ansh leaving her... So, maybe???

Ab isse zyada sochne ki capacity humare paas nahi hai...

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