Ariya OS Bas Ek Pal - Page 8

Sweet cute lovely update

Nice ending

Really love it dear

Eagerly waiting for new one

Omg☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️still blushing

Such an amazing update...

Bechari RI Arjun is teasing her very much....

Poor RIYA Rathor k age pata nahi kya sab back rahithi ye soch k kahi Rathore se daant na pad jaye...🤣 n Rathore monologue 🤣sach mein bahot garmi hai aaj kal🤣🤣 he just said it like that or he correlated it to the previous incident🤣.

Finally Arjun proposed Riya n She said Yes n teddy scene was nice... N the kiss scene was beautiful..☺️....

Thanks for the pm...

Please give a long Epilouge..

Originally posted by: bloomie

Class ke time phone nahi use karna chahiye 😂😜

Ab kare bhi toh kya, ariya ke deewane joh hai😉

Wow....just wow....loved it completely....thank u for continuing the os....do write more...

The sweetest update ever

I wish things could be that easy with them 😔

But damn I loved this version

I usually like the one with thriller n mystery n mayhem n those stolen moments turning to passionate encounters

But this was absolutely adorable ❤️ N not to forget Beautiful

I'll be waiting for your next story

Update soon

Pm me plz

Wowww superb ending dear..

Love it.. 3 part..

Sweet n simple..

Ariya moments..

"What a OS awesome author you are👏

you know I don't click on your FF SS or OS until it's complete 😆and o ain't the one to blame cause you're such a suspense maker 🤓

Anyway coming to this one shot it was amazing poor Riya how much Arjun teased her 😆but boy the girl should know how Arjun is😉 his sharp sense his observing nature and getting intrigued by mystery persona😎 should be in her mind at first when she got on to do something as such 😉alas every person left a clue behind whenever they do something so not her fault 😆

For the sweetness that love brought into your life,

For the sweetness that remains in your heart,

For the sweetness that will stay in your soul,

I love these lines it's actually made me miss someone as soon o read it anyway I just enjoyed the os throughout but I appreciate your effort of giving 100% in writing such a Shot 👏

Lovely OS you wrote everything with short detail gave more insight to their action and emotion specially writing on Arjun part👏

It was fabulously amazing it's my first post on any of your work and I am impressed more by it keep it up write more and more shot as such 👏

This is such a cute story & sweet like chocolates. Really liked the story so much.

Liked Arjun's teasing session😆

Riya is more sweeter than the chocolates☺️ Here is coming winter but had to decrease the AC temperature😆

Thanks for extending the story for readers & for PM too.