PreRish FF: Chahat Ke Safar Mein|Ch 5 Pg 7|4/1|

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Posted: 5 years ago
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PreRish FF: Chahat Ke Safar Mein

I am a big fan of the on-screen couple Rishabh Bajaj and Prerna Sharma from “Kasautii Zindagi Kay 2”. I have planned to write an FF on them. My story is going 100% different from the plot of this famous show which is on air.

I am ready to receive rotten tomatoes, rotten eggs and shoes.

This story is based on two childhoodsweethearts, Piu(Prerna) and Rishi(Rishabh). Piu and Rishi are their nick names in this story. This story takes various twists and turns in their journey ofFriendship, which eventually turns into Love… Can years of separation and many evil eyes separate them and their love for each other?

DO TELL HOW IS MY STORY’S INTRODUCTION YOUR ENCORAGE MENT WILL HELP ME TO WRITE MORE. AND IF I SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT. 😊

Do drop a comment.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Please continue... Eagerly waiting to see their journey...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Do write it dear

Your plotline looks enticing❤️

Aur hum jaise pyaasi atmao ko prerish ffs se fursat nahi milti

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Pls continue soon..😊

This looks interesting...👍🏼

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Chapter 1

Chahat Ke Safar Mein, Hoo…

Dilo Ke Hausale Dekho…

Ye Aksar Toot Jaate Hain,

Kabhi Aasu Bahaate Hain,

Kabhi Chalte Hai Sehra Mein,

PhirBhi Muskuraate Hain…

Ye Aksar Toot Jaate Hain,

Kabhi Aasu Bahaate Hain,

Kabhi Chalte Hai Sehra Mein,

PhirBhi Muskuraate Hain…

Imtihaan Har Ghadi Ki,

Kasauti Zindagi Ki…

Kasauti Zindagi Ki…

Chahat Ke Safar Mein, Hoo…

Dilo Ke Hausale Dekho…

YeAksar Toot Jaate Hain,

Kabhi Aasu Bahaate Hain,

Kabhi Chalte Hai Sehra Mein,

Phir Bhi Muskuraate Hai…

YeAksar Toot Jaate Hain

Kabhi Aasu Bahaate Hain,

Kabhi Chalte Hai Sehra Mein,

Phir Bhi Muskuraate Hai…

Imtihaan Har Ghadi Ki,

Kasauti Zindagi Ki…

Kasauti Zindagi Ki…


The scene begins in thestreets of ‘The City of Joy.’ Two kids, a 7 year old girl and a 10 year old boyare seen playing.

Rishi! Now it’s my turn! Iwant to bat. Said the girl.

Piu, baas ek over aur over bowling kar do na!Accha, main tumhe fuchka aur bhel puri khilaunga!

Promise? asked Piu.

As soon as the young Bajaj nodded a yes, he was in a bone-crushing hug.

Aww..chudail kahiki... mujhe maar dalogi kya?

She burst out laughing, which was so infectious, that it made him laugh too.


Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi

Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi

Mera Tujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi

Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi

Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na

Maane Tu Ya Maane Na

Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi

Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi

Dhuaan Dhuaan Tha Vo Samaan

Yahan Vahan Jaane Kahan

Tu Aur Main Kahin Milay Thay Pehle

Dekha Tujhe To Dil Ne Kaha

Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na

Maane Tu Ya Maane Na

Tu Bhi Rahi Mere Liye

Main Bhi Raha Tere Liye

Pehle Bhi Main Tujhe Baahon Mein Leke

Jhooma Kiya Aur Jhooma Kiya

Jaane tu ya jane na

Maane tu ya mane na

Dekho Abhi Khona Nahin

Kabhi Juda Hona Nahin

Ab Ke Yoohin Mile Rahenge Dono

Vaada Raha Ye Is Shaam Ka

Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na

Maane Tu Ya Maane Na

Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi

Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi

Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na

Maane Tu Ya Maane Na.

Day by day, the bond between the bond strenghtened. Their elderly neighbours would say, THEY ARE RADHA AND KRISHNA.

The two would spend all their waking hours together. But something WORST happened, and as a result, the two seperated, or had to seperate, unwillingly. Both of their families didn't realise that they played with the emotions.

BY THE WAY, I AM MISHTI. YOU CAN CALL ME THAT OR KIARA.

DO DROP A COMMENT. PLEASE TELL ME YOUR OPINION.😊


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very nice Kiara.. ...interesting .....would love to read more about what happened to them and how they will reunite....😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Childhood sweethearts story on PreRish.

I am so eager to read now.

What happened that they are separated now.

Please do continue soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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please make the chapters a little longer as the story seems very interesting. also can you separate the paragraphs properly it just makes it easier to read then. but very nice start can't wait to read more.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome story

Please update soon

Please try to make chapters long

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Posted: 5 years ago
#10

Nice start 😊

Waiting for next

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