Originally posted by: Annu8193Nice update....
Let see what happens know bajaj is very emotional getting know wish prena will be his side know
Waiting for next....
Thank Annu..
Yes he definitely needs someone by his side... :)
Originally posted by: Niyati_TIt’s so beautifully written ❤️
Thank you Niyati!
Being a Mumbaikar I could actually visualise Rishabh’s house here and it’s a beautiful place with an amazing view
this from an actual Mumbaikar.. makes it worth the time I put into researching this :)
He is missing her but can’t gather the courage to text her or call her 🥺
He is trying to spent time with kukki and distract himself 🥺
He is in a state where he needs it.. all of this happened all of a sudden. no time to think.. too many events happening in his life at the same time.. poor guy 😒
But I have some questions, iss ghar ki mystery kya hai? Why didn’t he want to come here and did Prerna get married to Anurag 🤔
Mystery might take a bit of time before its reveal.. But Prerna ka shaadi to Anurag - next update.
I can’t wait to read the next part
Next Update- coming sooon 😊
So the intrigue behind the Mumbai house remains😆Please continue this soon. It's getting very very interesting!!
Originally posted by: Soanz.19So the intrigue behind the Mumbai house remains😆Please continue this soon. It's getting very very interesting!!
Hey Soanz.. Mumbai house revelation might take a bit time :) but I will be posting the next update in next 10 mins or so.. hope you find it interesting with Mumbai house secret out ..
Originally posted by: MR21Did i read Prerna clarifying about the forced marriage thing to Anurag. Surprising but good to see this happened and some what Anurag accepted to leave the past. She informed about her pregnancy to the Father thanks to Bajaj. This couple's communication is bad. So he left and as we know he wouldn't come for wedding.
Mumbai, what happened here that he is so disturbed. He is almost on tears looking at this house. Very eager to know about the past related to this place and house. He didn't have any food and couldn't sleep hugging his daughter for some peace. So she is not married, what happened to Anurag, he is in a place where he is in extreme pain. Let's see what's in store for them now.
Lovely update. Please do continue soon.
yes Prerna clarified what the deal marriage was all about. she owned her decision to marry Bajaj and wanted Anurag to respect it.
They clearly have communication issues, something I retained from the show :)
House thing will be revealed later but for Prerna's marriage- next update soon in 10 mins.
Hello Amazing People!
I am here again with next update to this story, which is my take on the show. It got pretty long this time and I hope it doesn't end up boring you all.
Thank you again for all your lovely comments..
Part 4
BASU BADI, KOLKATA
Prerna's Room, 9.45 am, Next Day
Rays of light peeping inside her room through the open window curtains, fell on her face daring to wake her up from her deep sleep, which she had no idea would be a rare phenomenon in the near future. She could hear a few unclear voices coming from a distance. Those voices, sound familiar but she couldn't comprehend or even define if it was her dream or reality. Room was fully illuminated, enough to alert her eyes lids to move and voices getting louder on her ears, still unclear; signalling her brain to wake up her tired body. Her lower body felt cold under her and head against a hard surface.
Rubbing vigorously she opened her eyes and found herself on the cold floor, with her upper body leaning against the bed, wondering what she was doing on the floor; why and how did she end up sleeping here. She felt something stuck on her right hand; looking closely she found a fake eyelash with something black on her fingers; as she raised her head a bit she could see herself in the mirror on the wall. Her eyes were messed up due to her kajal; a red dupatta wrapped around her body like one would wrap a sheet or blanket to keep from cold. She was still dresses in her Bride attire. That's when reality struck her real hard. She immediately got up from the floor and walked towards the dressing mirror placed behind her.
Looking into the mirror she knew she was in a terrible state and tried to remember last night events after Anurag left her in this very room, telling her he will be back in no time. Everything flashed right in front of her eyes...
FLASHBACK
Muharat was for 9.00 pm and didn't know when she drifted into sleep, while waiting for Nivedita or Anurag to come and call her to the mandap. She woke up with a jerk looking at the clock- it read 10.45 pm. She fixed her outfit and decided to go down to find what the matter was. While stepping down the stairs she saw Kakima lying on sofa in the living room at a slight distance from where the Mandap was setup. She was struggling to breathe, distressed Nivedita and Tapur trying to convince her to take her medicines. Anumpamji was pacing near the exit door talking to someone on the phone looking worried and frightened at the same time. Kakababu was talking to Panditji; after exchanging a few words with Kakababu she saw Panditji leaving Basu Badi.
She was confused but soon her confusion turned into fear when she realised Anurag was no where to be seen. She ran towards Kakababu, who stood alone near the mandir with his hands folded and eyes closed and asked, "Kakababu, kya baat hai, maine abhi Panditji ko jate hue dekha? Aur Kakima.. unki... unki tabiyat kaise achanak bigad gai...? Aur ANURAG.. anu kaha hai Kakababu, wo mandir gaya tha.. ab tak to aa gaya hoga wo.. kaha hai wo.. bataiye na Kakababu.. aap chup kyu hai.. kuch boliye Kakababu please". She was clutching his kurta sleeves really tight, while throwing her questions at him. He sensed she was extremely tensed.
"Prerna beta, ek minute.. tum yaha baaitho" holding her hands he made her sit on the mandir steps and sat beside her. "Lo ye pani pee lo aur shaant ho jaoo" said Moloy giving her a glass of water to calm her a bit before saying anything to her.
"Nahi, iski zaroorat nahi hai, main theek hu.. aap bas bataiye panditji kyu chale gaye aur Anurag kaha hai? Wo keh ke gaya tha thodi der mein aa jayega" she repeated her questions.
"Batata hu, pr Pehle ye pani pee lo.. aur thoda shaant ho jao.. fir sab batata hu.. apne Kakababu ki itni si baat nahi manogi ab?" pacifying Prerna he made her take a few sips of water.
When assured Prerna was a bit relaxed, holding her hands he said, "Prerna, dekho jo bhi main kahu you will not lose your composure.. okay" Prerna answered with just a nod, wondering what she was going to hear.
"Anurag pass wale mandir gaya tha aur ab tak wapas nahi aya hai. Shaayad wait krte krte tumhari aankh lag gai pr hum kafi der se Anurag ka pata lagane ki koshish kr rhe hai. lekin ab tak kuch maloom nahi ho paya hai.. isi wajah se Mohini ko attack aya aur panditji wait krke chale gaye abhi thodi der Pehle jab tumne dekha." while telling her all this Moloy could see panic rising quickly on her face.
"Tum pareshan mat ho beta, humne police mein inform kar dia hai and commissioner ko bhi involve kr lia hai. Sab use dhundne mein lage hai. Anupam bhi Anu ke friends aur office staff se pata lagane ki koshish kr rha hai. Tum bilkul bhi tension mat lo.. Anu jaldi wapas aa jayega" he hugged Prerna to pacify but he himself was gravely worried with Anurag's absence.
"Aapne mandir mein check kia?" she quickly pulled her head, that rested on Moloy's shoulder and looked at him questioning with teary eyes.
"Haan.. main aur Anupam gaye the mandir.. sirf usi mandir nahi pr aas pass ke kuch aur mandir aur pandal mein bhi gaye.. par wo nahi mila.. logo se poocha to kisi ne use waha dekha bhi nahi… Par hum koshish krte rhenge.." he wiped her tears and asked her not to panic and walked towards the couch Mohini was lying, on Tapur's call.
Prerna turned towards Durga's idol in the home temple and joined her hands and crying she said, "kyu Maa, har baar aisa kyu? kya bigada hai maine ya Anurag ne kisi ka jo har baar hum milte milte reh jate hai. Anurag to kehta hai humara milna aapki iccha hai.. agar aapki iccha hai to humare sath ye kyu ho rha hai.. Aaj humari shaadi hai aur Anurag hi nhi hai.. kaha hai maa wo... wo to aapki hi chuniri lene gaya tha na.. to kahan hai?? Agar ussey kuch hua to main... main kya karungiiii maaaa… main kya krungiii……???" . She cried uncontrollably and placed her forehead on the floor, touching idol's feet"
"NAHI.. MAIN BAITHKAR NAHI RO SAKTI.. Pehle Kukki aur Mr.. B... nahi aaj bhaut kuch mujhse door chala gaya hai.. Ab Anurag nahi.. main hargiz aisa nahi hone dungi.. kisi bhi haal mein nahi.. mujhe jana hoga. khud jaake dhundna hoga ussey.. Aur agar Anurag sahi kehta hai ki humara rishta aapne joda hai to wo mujhe zaroor milega.. ab ye bas meri hi nahi aapki bhi pariksha hai" determined Prerna wiped her tears and rushed out of the door. Moloy saw her going out and quickly asked Anupam to follow her as she was not in the right frame of mind.
Anupam followed her in his car and saw her running in the direction of temple Anurag was supposed to visit. He knew there was no point stopping her at this moment as she was hurting and needed to vent out; so he just followed her at a distance making sure he was there if needed. 12.05 am in the midnight, Prerna was aimlessly running around on empty roads with a hope inside to find Anurag somehow, calling Anurag's name. Anupam's eyes swelled up with tears looking at Prerna's condition. He wanted to help, but decided to stay back because that's the best he could do for her right now.
Looking up towards the sky Prerna was screaming at the top of her voice "Anuraaagggg… Anuraagg.. kaha ho tum Anuuuu.. Tumhari Prerna tumhe lene ayi hai Anuraag.. please jawab doo kaha ho tum.. tum aisa kaise kr sakte ho.. kaise har baar ussey mujhe door kr dete ho bhagwaan.. kyu???
ANURAAAGGGGGGG... Aaaj humaari shaadi hai…. wapas aa jaao please..."
Drained and tired she fell on the road. Crying frantically she kept on repeating until her voice faded into whispers "Wapas aa jaoo please..Aaj humaari shaadi hai… Please waap..as aaj… Jaao… aaj… hum..ari. sha...di... hai… pl..ea...se... W..ap.a…"
Anupam waiting at a distance knew this was the time to step in and he quickly reached her. He picked her up from the road.. supporting her he walked her to the car parked next to them. Prerna was completely zoned out.. he made her sit in the passenger seat and buckled her up with the seat belt. Closing the door he came around and got back into the driver's seat. He looked at Prerna once who wasn't even blinking and taking a deep breath he ignited the car engine.
Anupam drove in utter silence on their way back. As they reached home, he unbuckled the seat belt and got her out of the car. Moloy saw both of them entering the house , she looked broken and devastated. Moloy aksed Tapur to help Anupam and take Prerna in her room upstairs, while he and Nivi stayed back with Mohini who was in no better state herself. Tapur and Anupam carefully made her lie on the bed and decided to leave the room as she could really use some rest. Lying on her bed Prerna kept staring at her phone waiting for Anurag to call or hear some news about him. Time read 1.20 AM, that's the last thing she remembered after which she must have drifted into sleep.
Flashback ends
ALTAMOUNT TOWERS, Mumbai
Rishabh's Room, 9.45am, Next Day
Rishabh had slept in his formal shirt and trousers, he changed into before leaving the Basu Badi. a day before. In his bed Rishabh tossed quite a few times in an attempt to find the right position that could ease this burning sensation, he felt in his abdomen somewhere between his rib cage and belly button. It only got worse over night and made him extremely uncomfortable now. Not able sleep any more he slowly sat up straight in his bed with his feet on the floor. He supported his elbows on his knees; closed his eyes while gently rubbing his face with hands trying to distract his mind a bit. His discomfort rose to a state where he felt this sudden urge to throw up. He removed his belt thinking it would ease this feeling, but it went in vein. Not able to control anymore, he rushed to the attached wash room and puked in one go. There were no traces of food, just a yellowish-green fluid. He felt way better now, he quickly cleaned himself and suddenly lost his balance while leaving the washroom. He held the door for support and took a few moments.
Getting hold of himself, he slowly walked towards his bed and sat. He felt better in his abdomen now and he knew he hadn't eaten a thing in last 48 hours or so and that's why all this was happening. He thought of taking a shower and then go out for breakfast. He was about to go to bathroom with a fresh pair of change, when he heard a knock on his door. He kept his clothes on the bed and went towards the door.
He saw Masi and Kukki outside his room and with wide smile Kukki said "Good Morning, Papa" and raised her hands asking him to pick her up in his arms. Rishabh simply followed her princess's order and sat on nearby chair not having enough strength to stand for long. Masi noticed Rishabh slept in his formals and looked tired and dull.
"Kukki ko acche se neeni ayi?," he asked with a tired smile. Kukki responded in her cheerful voice, "Yes Papa, bhuat achi neeni aayi.."
"Maine thodi der Pehle apka room knock bhi kia, but aapne door open nhi kia" Kukki said making a sad face.
"Arey ye to Papa ne bhaut galat kia. Is baat ke lie Papa ko aapse sorry bolna chahie.. SORRYYYY," he said holding both his ears which made Kukki smile.
"Kukki. kaha ho Kukki baby.. Kaun good girl ki Tarah breakfast fini….." Tanvi stopped right at the door looking at Rishabh with a bowl of cereal in her hands. Smile escaped from her face and she just said "Wo Kukki beech mein hi Breakfast chhod kr bhaag ayi Mom ke peeche, islie…."
Kukki not in a mood to finish her food, tried to divert the topic by telling her father "Papa Mumbai home to bhuat hi nice hai.. mujhe poora ghar dekhna hai…"
Noticing change in Rishabh's expressions Masi came in for his rescue "Kukki, aapko ghar acha laga na.. agar aap Tanvi ke sath breakfast finish kroge to wo aapko poora ghar dikhayengi.. Abhi Papa ko bhi fresh hone do fir wo bhi breakfast krenge.. haina… Kukki to bhaut hi good girl hai .. manogi na humari baat?"
Excited to see the house, Kukki happily agreed to go with Tanvi out to the dining area. Kukki held Tanvi's hand and said "jaldi chalo.. mujhe breakfast finish krke poora house ghoomna hai"
"Thank you, Masi" Rishabh said looking at Masi with his tired eyes.
Sharda smiled at him and said "Hum sab samjhte hai beta, pr kabhi na kabhi to tumhe is sab se bahar ana hoga.. Jante hai humare lie jitna asan hai ye kehna, us se kahi zyada mushkil hai tumhare lie aisa krna.. pr kahi se to shuruat karni hogi.. "
Sharda waited for him to react or say something, but he didn't. "Anyway, hum tumhe breakfast ke lie bulane aye the. Fresh hokar jaldi bahar aa jao.. hum wait kr rhe hai" saying this Sharda left Rishabh in his room with his thoughts.
Rishabh just sat on the chair with his head down thinking about what Sharda said to him. He again felt slight burning sensation below his chest and thought of eating something before it gets worse. He got up from his chair; taking his clothes from his bed and went inside the washroom for a quick shower.
Dining Area
Tanvi was trying her best to feed Kukki who was running around this huge house that she fell in love with. Sharda seated on one of the chairs on dining table waiting for Rishabh, while Chandu along with another staff was arranging breakfast on the table. Mr. Mehra came upstairs as Chandu had informed him about Sharda's request to have breakfast with the family.
"Good Morning Mam! Hope you had a good night's sleep" asked Mr. Mehra approaching Sharda.
"Oh yes, Mr. Mehra. Everything is fine.. Thank you so much for making all arrangements in such a short time. More importantly suggesting this to Rishabh. Aap dekh sakte hai Kukki kitni comfortable hai yaha.. Hotel mein aisa feel nahi karti.. akhir ghar ghar hota hai.. " she said to Mr. Mehra towards looking at Kukki who was still out of Tanvi's reach.
"By the way aaapko to koi taqleef nhi hui na yaha stay krne mein?" she asked.
"It was perfect Mam, thank you! Jaisa aapne kaha ghar to ghar hi hota hai.. Umm waise.. Sir.. jaag gaye hai yaa..?" asked Mr. Mehra not finding his boss around.
"Nahi, Rishabh uth gaya hai, fresh hokar ata hi hoga. Hum usi ka wait kr rhe hai.. wo aa jaye to hum Breakfast shuru krte hai.. Tab tak aap juice lijie.. Chanduu.. Mr. Mehra ko Juice and fruits serve kro."
Rishabh had changed into a black T-shirt and PJs after shower. He was brushing his hair quickly in a hurry to go and eat something because of this feeling of nausea, growing quickly inside him. He felt tingling sensation under his tongue that indicated he might just throw up again..
He was out in the dining area and greeted both Sharda and Mr. Mehra. Controlling his extreme discomfort he sat for Breakfast. Food's fragrance made him feel worse, he decided to have some juice. A few sips of orange juice and he stormed out again towards the washroom covering his mouth with a napkin he quickly grabbed from the table. Sharda and Mr. Mehra were taken by surprise and ran after Rishabh.. Masi knew something is wrong asked Tanvi to take Kukki in her room and keep her occupied.
He threw up same fluid but more in quantity this time. He felt an immediate relief from the heartburn, but all of a sudden extreme weakness and exhaustion engulfed him. He could barely stand. Somehow he managed to go towards the door. As soon as he came out, he found support in Sharda and Mr. Mehra's hands, both of them waiting outside the door. Masi called Chandu for help. His body was burning with high fever. Masi requested Mr. Mehra and Chandu to take Rishabh to his room, while she called for a doctor. She immediately scrolled through her contacts and called Dr. Rastogi.
Dr. Rastogi picked her call on second ring itself "Hello, Shardaji. Aaj kaise yaad kia aapne? Itne salo baad.."
Masi cut him before he could complete. "Dr. Rastogi, agar aap Mumbai mein hain to Altamount Towers aa sakte hain Immediately. Its an emergency, please"
"Haan main Mumbai mein hi hu.. pr aap Mumbai mein? kab aaye aap Mumbai? Aap akele aayi hai ya Risha…?" he asked all worried.
"Hum raat l hi yaha phonche hai aur haan Rishabh ke sath hi yaha aye hai.. Uski tabiyat achanak kharab ho gai hai.. aap please jaldi se aa jaiye, baki baatein jab aap yaha ayenge tab karenge, abhi hum jakar ussey dekhte hain Thank you!" saying this she rushed to Rishabh's room.
Mr. Mehra and Chandu had already placed Rishabh in his bed comfortably, but his body was burning with fever and some abdomen pain as they saw him clutching his stomach tightly. Masi came and ordered Chandu to get a bowl of cold water and fabric strips and sat next to him on the bed. Chandu was quick with the bowl and kept it on the side table.
"Kal se keh rhe hai kuch kha lo Rishabh, pr koi humare sunta kaha hai.. Ab dekho kya haal banake rakha hai.. 2 din se kuch khaya nahi hai to ye nahi hoga to kya hoga.. Hum to bas Masi hai to ye hume kyu seriously lega" Mr. Mehra watched Sharda mumbling to herself looking at semi-conscious Rishabh in worry, while she quickly changed cold water strips on his forehead.
Within 15 mins or so, Dr. Rastogi arrived. He was about to take stairs to the top floor, when Chandu came and said "Sir Upar wale floor pr nahi hai Doctor. Wo yaha neeche wale room mein hai. Ayiye I'll show you the way. " Dr. Rastogi looked surprised but followed Chandu anyway.
Risbhabh was slightly awake now because of cold water strips that Masi applied and his abdomen pain has also subsided a bit after he threw up for the second time. He looked at Masi who clearly looked disturbed, said to her in a tired voice "Masi, I am okayyyy.. itna worry mat kijie nahi to you'll fall sick. I am better now"
Masi was about to give it back to Rishabh, but Dr. Rastogi entered the room. "Ohh thank God Doctor, aap aa gaye. Just look at him please." relieved Masi got up from her place and asked him to check Rishabh.
"I thought last time was 'THE LAST' time we were supposed to meet, but ye kya Mumbai aate hi meri yaad aa gai?" Dr. Rastogi said on a lighter note, that brought a smile on Rishabh's face not reaching his eyes though.
"Rastogi Uncle, please stop making be laugh.. it hurts" said Rishabh clutching his abdomen again.
"Okay, on a serious note, what happened?" he asked Rishabh and Sharda.
"Have been feeling this burning sensation since yesterday, raat ko thoda bad gaya and subah I threw up some greenish fluid and... "
"How many times?" asked Rastogi stopping him midway...
Looking at Masi Rishabh said "Umm Twice. Once right when I got up and again abhi kuch der Pehle". He knew she will only get angry hearing this.
"Twice, aur hume bataya bhi nhi jab hum tumhare room mein aye the.. " Masi folded her hands and took a deep breath trying hard not to show her anger now.
"When was the last time you ate?" asked Doctor.
"Doctor, isne 2 din se kuch nhi khaya hai.. humne kitna kaha pr nhi suni humari ek bhi baat.. upar se kal travel bhi kia humne" said Sharda not looking at Rishabh this time.
"Does it happen often ya.." asked Dr making a few notes to prescribe the right medicines.
"No.. not often.. ek do baar bhaut Pehle bas" said Rishabh.
"In that case it looks like its because of you have been running on empty batteries i.e. no food, so body is throwing Bile that must have been irritating your stomach. Don't do this, not good for health and tumhare jaisa health freek.. doesn't suit you.. Anyway, jokes apart, I am prescribing you a Pepto-Bismol and Kaopectat. You can take either of these if you feel nauseous again, it will help you with that. For now I am giving you an injection, it will help ease your pain"
"Drink lots of water to make it for lost fluids, iske wajah se BP has dropped and itna weakness aya hai.. And with food go easy, start with liquid diet first and then slowly move on to solids... above all this and most importantly.. complete bed rest for minimum 2 days. I know you are a workaholic, but your body needs proper recovery."
"Also I'd suggest get some tests done to make sure we don't miss anything, isi bahane you can visit my new work place. I work at Breach Candy Hospital now, very near to your place.. tumhe to pata hi hoga yaha ka chappa chappa.. hhaha .. Ab mujhe chalna chahie, you take rest and baki ki baatein Shardaji se keh deta hu" Said Dr. Rastogi while putting his stuff back into his bag.
"I will come to see you soon; thanks for coming Uncle" said Rishabh and closed his eyes once he saw everyone leaving his room.
Living Area
"Chandu sabko chai serve krdo please.. aayiye aap yaha baithiye" Masi asked Dr. Rastogi and Mr. Mehra to take their seat on the counch in the living area.
"Acha laga aap logo ko wapas Mumbai mein dekh kar after so long. Specially Rishabh ko yaha dekh kar. If you don't mind can I ask you something, Shardaji?" asked Rastogi taking his cup of tea that Chandu offered to all three of them.
"Sure, please ask" said Masi sipping on her tea.
"Is Rishabh alright? Ussey dekhke laga nahi ki ussey bas koi physical pain pareshan kr rha hai.. itne time se janta hu ussey, kio aur baat hai? Yaha aane ki wajah se to nhi.. ab tak bhoola nahi hai kya wo itni purani baaton ko?" Dr. Rastogi asked in a very serious tone this time. Mehra was quietly listening to their conversation fully aware of everything.
"bhuat kuch hua hai uske sath recectly.. hume laga tha ki ek baar fir se Khushi aa gai uski life mein.. aapko to pata hi hai, he is the favourite son of misery.. Khushi baad mein aati hai aur dukh apne aane ka rasta Pehle se banake ready rakhta hai.. so yeah .. he is going through a lot! Is sab ke upar ussey yaha wapas ana pada to uska asar bhi pada hai. Mr. Mehra aur main notice kr hi rhe hain kal se.." Masi was all sad sharing all this with Rastogi.
"Kuch to wajah hai wo to main samjh gaya tha.. detail mein fir kabhi baat krenge is baare mein, abhi I have to leave for an appointment. Aur ho sake to get his tests done.. Baki sab main aapko samjha hi chuka hu.. Make sure, no work for 2 days min... Abhi he will sleep for some time due to meds.. kuch aur baat ho to please call me.." Dr. Rastogi was about to leave when Kukki stormed out of her room with a huge teddy and Tanvi came running after her.
"Papa.. Papaaa… dekho mujjhe Tanvi aunt kitna pareshan kr rhi hain… " said Kukki looking for her father.
"Kukki beta, Papa is not feeling well.. Dekho Dr. Uncle bhi aye hai unhe dekkhne.. say hello" said Sharda, catching her on her way to Rishabh's room.
"Hello Dr. Uncle. I am Kukki, nice to meet you. Papa ko kya hua?" asked Kukki with a clearly visible sad face.
"Hello Kukki, nice to meet you too. Your Papa will be fine. Don't worry about your him, okay. He is sleeping right now and will be fine soon. Don't feel sad .. papa uthenge to sad face thodi dikhaoge aap… right?" Dr. Rastogi spoke with Kukki sitting down on his knees to reach her level.
"Right, Uncle. Papa uthenge to happy face hona chahie" saying this she started running again asking Tanvi to catch her.
"Yeh, Kukki hai? kitni badi ho gai hai.. last time jab dekha tha to 1 month ki bhi nahi thi.. and she can talk.. her voice is enough to melt any heart.. Oh my God what a pleasant surprise" said Dr. Rastogi surprised and emotional at the same time.
"Haan yahi Kukki hai.. and she can speak.. long story..fir kabhi fursat mein ayenge to zaroor batayenge" said Masi.
"Sure! Alright I'll take your leave now. Bye" Dr. Rastogi left with Mr. Mehra.
She went to Rishabh's room, checked on him to make sure he doesn't need anything. "Chandu Rishabh ke lie light khichdi banawa dena thodi der mein, hum room mein ja rhe hain jab tak Rishabh uth nahi jata" she said leaving his room's door half open.
BASU BADI, KOLKATA
Prerna' Room
Prerna heard Kakima's voice getting louder and louder and all of a sudden she heard her door open with a strong push. She turned around to see Mohini standing holding the door and Moloy still holding her. Anupam, Nivedita and Tapur followed her and stoped behind Mohini and Moloy.
"Yeh manhoos ladki.. iski wajah se mere Anu ke sath ye hua hai. Pata nhi kaha hai wo kis haal mein hai.. Har baar maine Anu ki wajah se isse na chahte hue bhi apnane ki kosish ki hai Moloy, pr har baar mera beta iski wajah se musibat mein fas jata hai.. Is baar to pata nhi wo kaha hai… " Mohini screamed at Prerna almost attacking her with her words, still managing to stand with Moloy's support.
"Aisa nhi hai Mohini. Isme is bechari ka kya kasoor jo tum isse is Tarah se baat kr rahi ho" Moloy tried to put a defence for Prerna.
"Iski wajah se nahi to kiski wajah se. Humne dono ko mana kia tha shaadi se Pehle milne ke lie, pr nahi suna.. tumhe use mana karna chahie tha Prerna.. isi ne to bheja tha Anu ko bahar.. kya zaroorat thi chuniri ki.. shaadi ho rhi thi na tumhari.. to fir kyuuu.. kyuuu bheja tumne use bahar.. YOU KNOW WHAT, PRERNA SHARMA.. main ek aur second tumhara manhoos chehra is ghar mein bardasht nahi kar sakti… Nikal jaao is ghar se.. chaliiiii jaaaooo… RIGHT NOW" Mohini now couldn't control her anger any more.
"Nahi kakima.. maine Anu ko nahi bheja tha wo khud gaya tha coz maine use humare hone wale ba…." Prerna tried telling them about their baby.
"EK shabd aur nhi Prerna Sharma.. ek aur shabd nhi sunungi main tumhare mu se.. Tum bas Bajaj jaise rude aur ek shrewd isaan ko hi deserve krti ho.. mere Anu ko nahi.. " Mohini said feeling almost out of breath now and her condition deteriorating.
"Kakima, Mr. Bajaj ko is sab mein lane ka kya Fayda, waise bhi wo ja chuke hain humari life se" Prerna said staying calm yet firm with her words, not liking his mention for no reason.
"Waah Bajaj ki itni fikra… to uski baat maan kyu nhi leti.. usne kaha tha na apni respect karna seekho.. to usi ki baat manke kyu nahi chali jati yaha se, because nobody wants you here.. Moloy just ask her to leave.. myyy .. house.." Mohini fainted in his hands. Moloy placed her on the bed and Nivedita and Tapur tried to wake her up.
Moloy came out of room with Prerna and Anupam joined them too.
"Iss waqt Mohini ki condition bhaut kharab hai Prerna. Main janta hu mera ye kehna tumhe bhaut hurt krega but Mohini ke aur apne lie abhi ke lie tumhara yaha se jana better hoga. Mohini abhi kuch sochne samjhne ke halat mein nhi hai aur main nahi chahta ki wo tumhe aur ill treat kre. I hope you understand main kya kehne ki koshish kr rha hu aur kyu." Moloy looked at Prerna blank face expecting some answer.
Deeply hurt with Mohini's words Prerna turned around, picked up her suitcase ready to leave. As she walked away from room she gave it one last look as if she will never be back here again. Moloy asked Anupam to drop her home. Anupam took her bag from her hands and she didn't even resist.
She didn't have a count of the time, but soon found herself standing outside an old looking house, her Ma-baba's house-
"SHARMA NIWAS"
Was it an indication that a new chapter was about to open in her life from this moment? Very moment where she was all by herself yet again.
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CVs why can't you just take this as is and make the show. I find more emotions in a written piece than I see on faces in the show.
Amazing update sunshine.. please continue.. waiting for next one. I am one greedy reader😆
I felt very bad for Prerna, she had suffered a lot. And Mohini, as expected, showed her true colors and Prerna is out of BB and again back to square one, Sharma Niwas. I liked how Prerna defended Bajaj when Mohini talks against him.
I am happy that Kukki is happy in this house. Bajaj is sick, I hope it's nothing serious. He is going through so much already and now this😭.
Lovely update. Please do continue soon.
Originally posted by: cassiopCVs why can't you just take this as is and make the show. I find more emotions in a written piece than I see on faces in the show.
Amazing update sunshine.. please continue.. waiting for next one. I am one greedy reader😆
Hey Cassi! Thanks a lot for finding it better than the show..
Will start working on new update in some time..
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