PreRish OS : Narazagi - Page 2

Nice os aavni...👏beautifully written...

I liked jealous prena Dil ki sukoon miltah hai aise ushe Dekh ke....but she trust RB...

Loved their bonding...

Originally posted by: Aavnii

This Track could be used to move their story further in better way.., but never mind😔...

BOLD@: because i found you more interested in FF/Os here , along with Shruti and some others...

Thank you 🤗

I loved the OS. As Ankie said, it's always a pleasure to read something on older tracks. And writers like you are so much better than the CVs. You did complete justice to their dynamics.

Originally posted by: Annu8193

Nice os aavni...👏beautifully written...

I liked jealous prena Dil ki sukoon miltah hai aise ushe Dekh ke....but she trust RB...

Loved their bonding...

Thank you🤗

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Mera naam liya mujhe yaad kiya

I loved the OS. As Ankie said, it's always a pleasure to read something on older tracks. And writers like you are so much better than the CVs. You did complete justice to their dynamics.

Thank you Shruti..🤗

Originally posted by: MR21

Ankie's & your collaboration is always a blockbuster Avni👍🏼. Whether it is a Title suggestion or a Concept/Plot.

Prerna restless as Bajaj is ignoring her😆. She gave a perfect reply to Anurag👍🏼. He called Maasi to inform about party arrangements instead of her, he is avoiding her and it is affecting her. The favour he asked her is like a bitter pill to her. Hayee the sadist in me is happy.

Prerna is hurt seeing him with other women👍🏼. Very good advice from Shreya. He showed Kavya who is his Queen, hayee Bajju knows what/when to say❤️. Prerna holding his hand.

She told him her reasons and he understood. They are sharing the bed. A new start to their journey❤️.

Poora OS ki saare important points pe aap akeli comments kar dogi tho baaki log kya karenge?

Jokes apart

This is really written beautifully. Frankly speaking in the show I was never upset because of what she did. It's her reaction in that moment and was not at all intentional from both sides.

Yes he put his hand just for the picture and she was least expecting it and hence reacted in that way.

I know many RB fans will run behind me with a stick now for saying this.

Any how, I loved it how she was not able to take his treatment towards her even in the show, but I just hoped he had continued it for longer period of time.

Coming to your os

She was somehow unhappy that RB didn't informed her directly and informed maasi rather than her.

I liked the part how she was totally jealous seeing RB with the woman and the convo she had with Shreya was beautiful too.

This party in the show was a beautiful chance for them to develop but as usuall they messed it big time.

Overall very well written

Very good O.S Aavnii 👏

Hey beautifully written !! Loved it !!

Nice OS Loved it

Just love this os darling .. hope to read from you more...

Awesome story. 👍🏼🤗

Wasted opportunities