Broken Hearts#2 updated LAST PART on Pg 76 / 16-12-2019 - Page 48

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Posted: 5 years ago

PART - 45



Maan took Piya washroom to washed her where she applied jam. Piya was in total mischief mode who stroked her father's cheek with her jam smearing hand. "Piya no sweety." Maan told her to behave but Piya only giggle. He had tough time with her.



"Now why you are jumping here and there?" Maan scolded Geet, seeing her moving in room.



"AC off kar rahi thi. Iske kapde badalne hai. Ac to off karna padega na." She told him the reason and Maan realized.



"O yes." He placed Piya on bed and removed her wet clothes. The moment he turned his back towards Piya to get fresh clothes for her,she jumped from the bed and hide.



"Now where she gone?" Maan was amused how can she vanished in a couple of seconds.



"Heheheh...." Geet giggle seeing Maan's condition as she know what he gonna face. "Mr. Maan Singh Khurana Ji aap badi se badi business deal to minto me crack kar sakte hai. Zara apni beti ke kapde badal ke dikhaiye to Jane." Geet challenges him and Maan stared her.



He called his baby doll who was playing hide and seek with him. "Piya come out darling. Papa apke liye bahut sari chocolates laye hai." He tried to attract her.



Piya who was hiding behind the bed shook her head in no no. Maan tried everything thing but no use. At last Geet told him where she hides. Maan bow down as Piya now hides under the bed. Maan dragged her out forcibly. One task completed but another one is waiting. Maan dried her but she wriggle so much and not wear her dress.



Mean time his phone buzzed. "Geet took her clothes from him and help him. Maan answer the call and meantime Geet dressed up Piya.



" No Aakash cancel the meeting for few days." He commands and cut the call.



"Now why you cancel the meeting?" Geet asked.



"Geet you are not well fully." He told the reason.



"Maan it's ok. Here, all are with me. Please don't neglect your work."



"But Geet .."



"Maan I am fine." She assured him.



Maan agree and ready to walk out,so Geet rushed before he left. "Maan wait."



"What?" He cautioned suddenly.



"Change your shirt. See Piyu ki dress ka jam laga hua hai." Geet alerts him and he noticed when he took her in arms his shirt to painted with Jam.



"O yes. Damn she is getting very naughty day by day." Maan cribbed on his baby's mischiefs. "Geet I am telling you. You spoiled her so much."



He keep cribbing till she gave him a shock.


Geet lick the jam Piya smearing on his cheek. His eyes popped out and mouth turned shut. Her soft tongue caressing his stubbled cheek very slowly. Geet pulled herself back and both glance into each other eyes silently. "Wo jam laga hua tha. Par ab saaf ho gaya." Geet fumble to end the awkwardness. Her eyes staring to observe what was his reaction. Though he accept her but still they need time to get into each other.



"Thanks..." Maan rubbed his cheek and left the room.



In evening when he returned, one pleasant surprise was waiting for him. His best friends...



"Mayank, Deepak. What a pleasant surprise." Maan rushed and hug both.



Riddhima and Niharika to came and hug him. They all studied together. But time apart all. "At least we came. Tum or Adi to bhul hi gaye ho hume." Riddhima complaints.



"No Ridzi it's not like that."



"Achha? Its not like that. Tabi itna kuchh ho gaya but you don't even bother to share with us." Mayank to said in disappointed voice.



"Come kids,first have your meal then start your complaining session." Daija invite all for dinner.



After dinner all friends sat together and remember old days. Mayank and Deepak told Geet how mischievous Maan was in college days and literally shocked her as it was alien to her.



"Geet trust me iske is angry young man look pe mat jao. He was a devil in college." Riddhima told her.



"How can I know. Mujhe to humesha gusse wali aankhe hi dikhate hai." Geet add fuel to their leg pulling session and all laughed.



Maan glared Geet. "See see..." She pointed at him and all got one more reason to make fun of him. "By the way Maan from now onwards aap mere baby ko blame nahi karoge. She is just like you." Geet knotted her brows and he cursed his friends under breaths.



Daija was happy seeing Maan old self. Though its for a short period. "Let's play truth and dare." Deepak suggested and all got agree. Initially Maan denied but later he too joined.



Bottle spins and one by one all caught. When it stops on Geet she choose truth. "Ok Geet so tell what Maan is for you?"



Geet stare at him. Shied a bit but not more than Maan.

"Maan is life of me. He is another name of love for me. Life saviour for all of us. He is like God to me. I know one thing only that Maan can go to any extend for us,which I never able to repay." Geet stare into his eyes and speak without a blink though her voice whimper with the flow of emotions.



She confessed and all clapped for her honest answer. Any one could tell that what she said was came straight from her heart. But after Geet bottle stopped on Maan and he choose dare. All his friends also wanted only this.



Deepak and Mayank winked. "So your dare is to kiss Geet right here." They gave him dare of kissing his wife in front of all.



"Isme dare kya hai? Khelna hai to theek se khelo." Maan objects as he feels weird.



"Maan tume kab se darr lagne laga?" Niharika teased him and all joined hands to pushed him.


"Maan nahi karega." Adi winked and poked his ego.


"Yes Adi I think you are right. He is not like before." Deepak too teased him.

"Hey I can do it ok." He stood and asked for Geet's hand. She gave and he pulled her up on her feet. Maan hold her and kissed on her forehead.


"Cheating cheating..." All shout a loud.



Maan glance all. "Dare kiss karne ka tha and I did. Your fault." He smirked like a devil on his won over all and all only stare each other in disappointment.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Super update baby . maaneet moments with piya was very sweet 💞❤😍 maan's friends came to him and he was happy . they told about his college life to geet . it seems they too wanted to bring maaneet close ❤ they played truth and dare , geet told them about her feelings towards maan and maan kissed her on forehead (his dare act) 😉

eagerly waiting for next part .

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awsm update...

Naughty piyuu....

Their cute little moments ❤

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update.

Geet tease maan for handling piya.maan friend came to meet him and tell about maan devil nature geet cant belive it.they gave dare maan gave a kiss to geet and he gave her head kiss.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Maan friends came and they all teased Maan. Daijaa was happy to see maan smiling

They all played truth and dare. Geet said about her love and everyone was spell bounded by her love towards maan

Awesome part

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Posted: 5 years ago

Bold geet licked maans chick n gave shocks to maan... Hope that through their friends.. Maan ki pyar ki nao chalna shuru karey

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Posted: 5 years ago

Aww lovely part maaneet with piya ..cuties mischiefness is increasing bold step by geet towards maan to clean the jam..maan was hell shocked.. hurray their friends are back truth or dare lovely maan is changing... Happy to see him...geet confessed her feelings before everyone..now dare is for maan how clever... waiting to read more ❤️ 😘

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Posted: 5 years ago

Lovely update.

Maaneet are taking slow steps towards a positive and healthy relationship. Maan’s friends are here. I hope they bring Maaneet even more closer. Thankfully Maan could finally enjoy and forgot Rahul for a short while.

Missed Piyu and Geet’s moments in this update. Waiting for next. Update soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update. Piya too naughty Maan having hard time to catch her. Geet love her so much. Maan friends opening secret of Maan. Good geet making move in relationship.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Cutie n naughty piyu

Lovely moments in uth family n friends loved it

Love the way how geet takes bold step n maan didn’t withdrew that makes it superb

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