Broken Hearts#2 updated LAST PART on Pg 76 / 16-12-2019 - Page 41

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Posted: 5 years ago

finally geet responds to piya

rahul is behind attach which is for maan for revenge

maan is very angry knowing this information

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Posted: 5 years ago

PT 39

Superb update dearie. I feel very sad for Geet whenever Maan jumps at her...What more he clearly tells her that he will never love her...It truly truly broke Geet's heart...What she took comfort in is that she had confessed her love for him...That is enough for her...Her love for him is unconditional....just the way he loved his Tia... I really wish Maan would see Geet for who she is and love her for the pure angel that she is...I don't know if Maan will ever remove the blindfold over his heart and eyes...And see beyond Tia...

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Awespme update sweetie:):):) Maan is gradually falling in love with Geet but he is not able to recognise his feelings for her...Geet has made her own place as Piyu's mum in his heart...And he loves that mum...I am waiting for him to realise the reality of his feelings for Geet...

Piyu baby is soooooooooooooooo cute & adorable:):):) He cute antics are choooooooooooooooo chweeeet:):):) Such a darling princess Piyu baby:):):) How she make Maan miserable for his phone:):):) LOLOLOL:):):) How she doesn't get ready with Geet but gets ready with her nani:):):) Super super adorable Piyu baby:):):) So glad that the party went well and Piyu baby enjoyed herself...

Oh no! What happened? I hope Maan & Geet are oki na...I running off to read the next update sweetie:):):)

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OMG!!!! Who tried to kill Maan? And Geet took that bullet for him...Her love won....But in all this Maan's realisation of his feelings for Geet is important....That is why Tia herself comes to Maan...to help him realise what he feels for Geet...Tia has explained to Maan...But will Maan accept what he feels for Geet is love? I really really hope so...Oh god...pls save Geet...Piyu baby needs her a lot....

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OMG!!!! Its that pervert scumbag Rahul!!! I really hope Maan catches hold of him & gives him such a punishment that he regrets being born! How can he! He thought he can kill Maan, usurp all the wealth & Geet is it? No way! Maan faster faster find him & kill him off before he tries anything with you, Geet & Piyu baby na...

Thank god Geet regained consciousness...Its all thanks to Piyu baby...A mother will rise from any condition of life for her child. And that is what Geet did...Poor Piyu baby...how she suffered...And I am so happy that Maan wanted to tell Geet his feelings for her...But Geet understood everything looking at his eyes...Super super super happy sweetie. Now na I only want to kill that terrible scumbag so that he does not trouble Maaneet & Piyu baby anymore....I hope Maan tightens the security so much that nobody will be able to come near them...

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Posted: 5 years ago

PART - 43


Swallowing hard, trying hard to get the coffee down around the huge lump in his throat, he tried not to notice how adorable Geet looked while staring him with annoyance. Holding her baby tight, she was laying on her bed. Limp and tired but in anger because the negligence Piya bears in her absence.



"I am the MSK, owner of Khurana Industries, ruler of my world. Sensible in every field of life. How can a mere woman scared me?" He talks to himself. Found no way to escape of her anger. Since she awaked her anger don't take a pause for second. Her baby suffered.



"Please burst out because doctor said this way you only increasing your stress." Maan asked her to react and poured out all the anger she stored in her.



"What's the use? Apse ek dinn handle nahi hua mera baby." She recented.



"As you don't know her." Maan clarified.



"Leave it..." Geet turn louder and Piya's sleep broke.



She raised rubbing her eyes and glance her parents one by one. "Mumma..." Piya stood up on her feet and kissed on Geet's forehead.



Geet held her so she don't fell down. Piya sat down. "Mumma dudu.." She finally asked for milk. After Geet got shot it was first time Piya asked for something. Her demand only brought glares for Maan. "Ek to mera bachha waise hi weak hai upar se apne usko bhookha rakha..." Geet cursed him in breath.



Without saying a word Maan rushed out and brought her feeding bottle. Daija tried to feed her but she denied earlier.



Adi and Pinky to came inside to see Geet. "Hi Geet? How you feeling now?" Both asked about her well being.



"Much better." She replied while adoring her baby who was clung to her.



"So finally Piya baby is happy." Pinky addressed her but she ignored every one. "She love you so much Geet. Only we know how much she suffered without you. One side you are struggling for life on the other side she. Every one tried to calm her but no use. As we all not exists for her. Even Maan bhai fails to feed her." Pinky clear the air and explains how much she missed her.



"Seriously Geet past 36 hours were most horrible for all of us." Adi too expressed what they all going through.



Geet overwhelmed with all the love she is getting from her loved ones. Only tough time tell us who cares and how much and this incident changed many things. Geet learnt many new things which she might not earlier. Geet just want to cocoon her baby and shower all the love her heart overflows with,on Piya but the shooting pain in her left shoulder bound her and forced her to shed tears.



Adi took Maan outside. Pinky noticed her tears. "Hey what happened? Did I said some thing wrong?" Pinky wants to know what she exactly feeling.



"No,its just because of the love you all gave me and most important my Piyu. I hurt my baby most." Geet just imaging her condition, which was enough to horrified her.



Pinky wiped off her tears before Piya saw them as her eyes only linger on Geet. "It's not your fault Geet. Just a bad time. But good part is that it was passed. Now we don't need to remember it. Just focus on the future." Pinky consoles her and Geet smiles in tears. She nodded her head,in yes.



"Ok I have one good news for you. Just because you are not well,so I give you this piece of information first." Suddenly she was flushing like a new bride. She whispered into her ears and Geet's smile widened to ears.



"What? Really? Have you tell this to Adi?" She shoot so many questions out of excitement.



"I was about to, but then all this happened. Any ways you are going to be a Mami so I tell you first." Both smiled wide with the news of new arrival.



"Congrats to both of you. God bless you. I am so happy today." Geet wants to hug her but again her condition become obstacles in her joy.



Outside both Maan and Adi discussing over this shoot out. "Adi who was the master mind behind this attack?"



"That's what I am thinking since that day. And I analysis over our rivals. But they were clean. Then my mind told that some thing is missing on which we are not focusing. And guess what I found." Adi threw a mysterious look on Maan. "Rahul." Adi shared a piece of information he got.



Maan clenched his fists to hold the anger fueled in his veins after hearing his name. "That bast**d."



"Yes he was the one. Because except him no one having a valid reason. Though I am not sure right now but I have strong doubt on him." Adi run his lawyer mind and hold the picture of culprit.



"But he was behind the bars." Maan was shocked.



"Yes he was but not any more. Actually he was released two months ago. So according to my calculations he had enough time to plan this attack." Adi put the reason of his doubt.



"Inspector told me that the gun was highly advance. So you think he would be able to do this?"



"Who knows. Don't forget his parents are criminals. May be he know how to operate that gun also. Or may be he hired any paid shooter." Adi concluded because of his parents.



"May be. We have to find out about him to clear our doubts. And trust me Adi if he was behind this attack then no person on this earth will save him from me." Maan was fuming badly. He dialled a number and instruct some one.



"Adi we have to find him first so I will punish him with my own hands. Rahul ko bhi woi saza milegi jo Vikram ko mili thi." He talk murderous. "No one will escape after harming my loved ones." His eyes turn dark and tone was dangerous. It's not new for Adi but he witnessed it after ages. Past four months was so beautiful. Maan turned very calm but this shoot out unleashed the devil inside him who only love to play with blood. Maan is a person of few words. He wasn't very expressive but one emotion he displayed with all perfection and that is Animosity.



Inside the giggling of Piya chanting. She have her mumma. Then she have the whole world. "Isko hum le jate hai. We will take care of her in your absence. Isi bhane thodi practice b ho jayegi." Pinky offered. "Piyu bua k sath chaloge?" She asked and in no time Piya shook her head in denial. "Hwww why?"



Piya turned and clenched Geet's clothes. "Mumma pas." She replied simply that she only wants to be with her mom.



Geet grinned seeing her antics and possessiveness for her. "Piyu you know what? Bua soon bring small baby. You wanna play with small baby?" Geet tried to attract her and she nodded too. "Then go with her." Geet only wants her baby's comfort. But Piya's all comfort lies in her.



"Baby ya..." She patting her hands on bed. Demand to bring the baby here as she is not going to leave Geet.



"Dekha junior MSK. Har cheez apne according chahiye." Geet compared but not sarcastically. There was so much proud in her statement.



In evening they left as per hospital's rule. Only one person is allowed and Maan stayed with her. He came with some eating stuff for Piya and found Geet lost some where as much that she don't even realized when he came inside. Piya was sleeping peacefully near Geet. Her one arm protecting her. Maan placed all the stuff aside and took Piya carefully.



"Maan she awakes...." Then only she alerts when Maan dragged her out of her arm.



"Shh..." He signals and laid Piya on couch comfortably. He even covered the boundary for her protection and then step back to Geet. He sat near her.



"You was so lost some where when I came? What happened? Kya soch rahi ho?" He asked so softly.



Geet nodded but he knew she was hiding. "Geet don't even try to lie because you are very bad in that. Plus I already caught you. If I don't drag Piya out of your arms you didn't even noticed me." Maan paused. "What's bothering you so much?"



Geet released a shaky breath. "Maan I was... I mean I am so..." She was disturbed and Maan noticed it in her gestures.



Maan slipped more closer to her and held her hand. "Relax no need to scare of any thing."



Tears rolled out in anticipation. "Maan he attacked you once. What if he will try again. I am scared. We don't even know who is our enemy this time. He attacked you secretly." She whimpering in between sobbing.



Maan cupped her face and wiped off her tears. "Shhh relax. Just relax. Don't you remember what doctor instruct? No stress okay?" He said with an authority.



"But Maan if he tries again before Police reach him." Geet's fears over powers her.



"Geet look into my eyes." He commands. His eyes held Geet with so much intensity that she spell bound to that. "You trust me?" He asked and spell bound she nodded yes. "Then I assure you before our enemy do something I will catch him. So no need to worry about any thing. Ok." Maan assured her.



"Promise." She asked in a meek voice. Maan blinked. "Maan you and Piyu are my whole world, without both of you i can't survive." Geet had a deep fear of loosing him. Their unknown enemy had one benefit that he was hidden from them so must be dangerous.



Maan leaned over her and kissed on her forehead. "Take a deep breath and try to sleep. We both are with you." Maan whispered in a most caressing tone.

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Posted: 5 years ago

As always loved it....

♥❤♥

She is telling him her worries,she is scared as the enemy is unknown,she can't lose him or baby now since they r her world,he is comforting her and tell her to don't take any stress as he is there to protect them..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update.

Geet is hale and healthy now. Pinky shared her good news with Geet. Piya is so possessive of Geet. So is Geet. I thought Piyu will demand of Maaneet’s baby too, embarrassing them yet again. Adi thinks it is Rahul who tried to harm Maan. How I wish I could scream and tell him you are on the right track brother 😆😆😆

Geet is scared and Maan tried to pacify her. Waiting for a closer bonding of Maaneet during the tough times. Update soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update

Maan scared of geet anger.pinky adi going to be parents geet happy for pinky.adi tell maan he has dought on rahul because he has motive to kill him.maan get angry and want ro kill rahul.geet scared for maan but he asure her no one harm them.

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Posted: 5 years ago

MSK afraid of his angry wife pinky is pregnant Geet is so happy fr hr

Adi point out real culprit Maan now don't want to leave him

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