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This is what my next update going to be based on šŸ˜†And I am glad you were hoping for this only 😳thank you for comment looking forward to your review šŸ¤—

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when their differences gonna end

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when their love blooms

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Now only I started to search from where I have catch the updates...Sorry for very late dear...Will catch up all updates and comment..😊

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Chapter 20

I was here to end the game you were Playing with me"! Do you really think"? I gotten you here to let you be at peace"!

(He remove the curtain and step further closer to her then she didn't even get chance to back away , when he sneaked his arm around her waist then pull her to himself sucking the breath out of her. She try to put distance by bringing her hand between them but he held them down by putting them behind her waist with one twist. She wasn't ready for this thus a winch escape from her mouth. While he was least bother about that She looked at him then spoke).

"I didn't thought about him still I wish he was alive at least I might be saved from your sinful action"!

(Jalal eyes widen up immidately anger took over him. He didn't free her infact, his hold become more tight his nail almost started digging on her wrist. He spoke after few seconds been passed in silence which was building the tension and increasing his hold on her. While Jodha to regretted the moment she spoken that. No wonder her sister always advise her to use the tounge carefully as she use sword. Cause that's the weapon which can do wonder in making the life easy by getting you what you wish. Alas she always been careful but with him she seem to lost it every damn time).

"Trust me even if he would been alive I won't let him have you"! Cause I marked you as mine the second I laid my eyes on you I know you're mine and I was adamant to make it true"!

(Chill run down her spine the way he spoke this, she can see the truth in his dark eyes which are showing his craze for her. They were standing near the wall wall mirror she knew by the look of him he isn't done talking yet. And she already dreaded the thing he might say he held the aura which make the fact loud and clear his words shouldn't be taken as unimportant).

"You should thank the almighty cause he saved you", from going through the way I plan to had you"! Don't you wish to know what I planned to had you for me"!

No stop let go"!

"Well doesn't matter I am going to tell you anyway"!

(She started shaking her head in no started struggling more hard to get released , by his grip but it didn't effected him an ounce tears blurred her eyes. Her eyes held a plea to not proceed with his words anymore let her be for now. But he was to blind to pay heed to it the anger of her, wishing his brother might be alive so she won't had to be with him. Unleashed the beast inside him who had over power her with Insanity).

" I planned just Like predator trapped his prey by ending every way of him to escape'! By Targeting the support you have from your subject"! By weakening the strength of one who can protect you"! Didn't you thought how your image out of sudden started going down before other"! How your sister didn't left with any option other then agreeing to have you marry him"!

(She got his way already and didn't had strength or gut to hear more thus she closed her eyes unable to see his look which was rapidly getting darker with Insanity and craze each word come out huskily and clear. Making stomach churn in fear and disgust).

"Please let go"! You're hurting me"!

"I didn't even started yet" and you end up begging already"!

"I plan to ruin the image you take pride at"! I plan to end those who taken oath to protect you"! I plan to had you ruined to extent that you left with nothing"! no place to stay no one to depend on no hope to live"! To break you to extend you left with no sprit to fight back to me"!

"Stop it stop it for God sake"!

"Not only this I plan to have you in way Which is considered sinful in every expect of life"! To obtained pure pleasure in tormenting you"! "Didn't you call me coward devil a monster"? I plan to show you the devil me the cruel monstrous me"! Untill my appetite is satisfied"!...

(Her breathing become irregular her struggle reduced body went numb in sheer terror. With each word spelled out from his tongue, she wanted to prevent her ear from hearing anymore alas her one hand was trapped by his hand while other , was between them working as futile shield to prevent him from getting any closer. Jodha open her eyes wide stunned with realization, when all happening replayed in her mind then a thought come in brain and she let out a gasp thinking he plan to kill his own brother as well. As if he read this thought of her he shook his head and spoke further in firm low stern husky Tone).

"Well as much I fancy the idea of having you with me"! I love him more then anyone ", more then I desire to have you , so no his life wasn't worth sacrificing for you"!

"women in our clan would rather kill themselves", by stepping on burning pyre than surrender to the enemies"! And You thought after what you had me through I would surrender to you"! No I would rather die than surrender to you"!

"But you're already surrendered to me"! Or I put in simple word sold to me"! By your own people"! I got you where I wanted you to be "!

(Jalal saying this released her from his hold, making her stumbled on back she leaned back on mirror then closed her eyes and after minute , opening her eyes , her lips quivering in fury, eyes spitting fire at him, in stern tone jaw clench with gritted teeth she spoke).

"I don't know what I done to get face such low action by you", "nor I wish to know anymore but let me clear one thing you mess with wrong one"! Cause you can try but you cannot break me", I am Rajputani I live with Pride die with pride"! You think you got me yes you did but even you know in case to have me you lost me as well"! I hate you I despise the very sight of you "! your words your action your thoughts even your shadow disgust me"! Before I would give in for sake of vows I took"! But no not anymore"! You hear me not anymore "!

(Jalal didn't said anything but glare at her and walked out from there as soon he left Jodha fell on her knees. Tears brimmed in her eyes. She was overhelmed with various emotion unable to think clearly how can anyone hate her with such a extend. Rajput fought and martyr for sake of their Honor defense of mother-land but they won't go for war if the person who is reason brought shame for them. He knew this this he played his card very well all the while she thought him to be imprisoned by his brother lost his position and power. No longer a threat to her safety and Honor she thought some other enemy or some jealous failed people might be reason of roumours spreading about her. Being shame on the name of Rajput. But no it was him she thought it might be his plan to marry her but no now she knew better it was all a plan. Plan to fool them plan to trap her plan to end all her hopes to live and ways to escape. It was war of evil Vs good yet one of the reason mention was Goddess Sita, it was war between Right and Wrong injustice Vs justice yet one of the too most reason mentioned was Draupadi, it was war between lust of power and Honor yet one of the top most reason mentioned was Queen Padmini. One or other way women are to be blamed. How cruel the world will see what we show they will never go to length to understand the depth of truth behind the thing shown).

Fine let the world see the example of religious Tolerance"! In the form of this politically beneficial alliance"! For putting good show he need me to act as well"! I didn't had idea what's coming for me"! But even having idea what you gotten in the form of me you won't able to protect yourself"!

(Wiping her tears in determination she got up. Looked at herself in mirror and saw the red bruise formed on her wrist by his tight grip. Clench her jaw In anger and punch on the mirror letting the crack mark formed on it. But in this her hand started bleeding. The voice of punch was loud this the maid come rushing in her room and saw her bleeding hand they immediately rush to her to tend her).

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(It was evening and Jodha was walking out towards her palace after she met Queen Salima. Her maids were bit at distance from her, while she was walking fast glancing around always the sculpture and Architecture mesmerized her to no extend but it was her habit even at temple she or decoration of any celebration Held she will take her own sweet time to admire them. Thus she tripped on the carpet laid at entrance she was about to fall but caught by pair of arms).

Careful"! Watch where your moves"!

(After standing firmly on own she glance up and found Mirza before her, she nodded at him and step back and stood before with one arm length distance. And saw him clad in Creamy color jama (royal robe) and white color pajama the Jama sleeves and collar were light yellow color with golden silvery thread worked on. And pale yellow color Cloth was toed around his waist as waistband where his dagger was hung at right side. He was coming from weponary practice only).

Are you ok"!

(Immidately clutching the side of her Odhni and checking her veil she was about to reply him when he spoke again. Even though she doesn't like him at all and she expect feeling might be mutual. And she wasn't wrong either).

"I can't believe it brother let you out alone"! Didn't he confined you to your palace only"!

"His majesty doesn't control me"!

"Is that so "? Cause I don't believe it"!

"Your wish your choice "! who am I to object anyway"!

(Spoke Jodha in annoyance and started to walk but stop by his words again with raised eyebrow and michivious glint in eye , he had smirk on face and looking at the way of garden entrance which was just ten step away from them).

"I think you can make believe your words "! by coming with me here for walk"!

"I don't do things just to prove I am right or wrong ", but I was myself wishing to visit garden for evening stroll"! Thus I can accept to have your company"!

"Fair enough"!

(Listening Jodha reply Mirza smile grew wide he missed her fiesty form. He was just wishing to know is she still as befkre or changed alresdy but noe knowing she is sane he was at peace . He couldn't see her face it was not needed either cause he already knew how she look by face. She was clad in light pink and white color combination , heavily golden silvery thread worked Ghaghra Choli with few small precious red and black stone studded on. She had pink color silk cloth veil on face and her Odhni was gracefully on head. All adorened by light worked golden Jewellery with Precious gem and stones studded in. But on neck unlike her Kundan work golden Jewellery she had pearl necklace. Even her (arm-let ) , wasn't to broad belt type it was thin. Her could only see her necklace, arm-let ,waist-band finger-ring, bracelet. But he could hear the sound of anklet. Whenever she walk only anklet made sound her foot steps were firm but sound less. Even though he knew she is his brothers wife who is emperor which eventually made her empress still he get little bit spellbound by her and who won't be it's not secret that whoever saw her are very much intrigued by her cause everything about her Is so natural and mesmerizing).

Well I wanted to say something", um more like I seek forgiveness from you"!

(Jodha glance at him while walking further the weather was pretty much cool cause of evening. Listening his word she got idea for what he seek forgiveness from her. But she want him to be clear of his reason thus she didn't said anything, and realising what she wish he spoke in firm tone).

Well if I and my men hadn't abducted you and your friend then you won't been go through all this"! I know it's meaningless now cause I can't undoe what's done already still"!

(His words made her halt on step the fast wind was little bothersome for her. How many times she regretted to be out of palace that day regretted her decision to go on outskirts area of state. Even hated Jalal curse him many time ironically not for once thought of Mirza come in her mind even though he was the one to abduct her. She didn't saw when he plucked the beautiful red rose from one plant there and forward it before her).

"If you accept this I will know my apology is accepted by you"!

Unfair you were the one to do wrong on first", but the flower had to sacrifice its roots and become sign of your apology"!

"Well if you accept my apology and the flower as acknowledgement", to accept my apology then the sacrifice of flower is worth for"!

(Smiling at his words which he can't see she gave a short nod then took the rose from him red rose were her favourite from start after all. She continue walking glancing around when Mirza spoke again).

As you accepted my apology I have one more surprise for you"!

Really and what's that"!

Well you must heard about the tigress hunt"?

Yes I heard few common people done this"! But what's the connection between tigress hunt and your surprise for me"?

"The tigress hunt by Brother Jalal", and we got two cub at very place where tigress hunt happened"!

Oh so what you people done to them"?

We got them here on palace"! And if you wish I can gave them to you I heard you're fond of them"!

While they both were walking side by side not far Jalal was walking towards his room with Adhgha Khan listening report on finance. But while walking he looked at right and his gaze fell on Mirza and Jodha. What they're doing together "? how come she is out of palace again"? gut of her defying me"! and didn't this Mirza had work with Khwaza Moin"? He didn't realise when his grip on sword he was holding got tighten seeing her trip and getting steady by Mirza. They talk something for minute and she was about to walk away when she stop by what Mirza said then both together started walking towards garden side by side).

'She never been this casual with me"!

(And to his displeasure and sheer anger he saw Mirza plucking the Rose from garden and offer it to her saying something to which he saw her shaking her head then saying something and again getting said something by Mirza she take the rose flower from him with small nod making Mirza smile wide. If only they knew They're getting the monster out of him he wanted to look elsewhere but he couldn't. He continued looking at them with anger in eye which was getting darker and darker , clench jaw gritted teeth his face was mirroring the angry beast. As if nature to wanted the worse out of him by one fast wind her Ghoonghat flew and had ger bare-head with veil on face. And he was astonished to see her hair were un-braided they were open she tried to set her Ghoonghat back but again Mirza said something to which she nodded and held the Odhni on hand by twirling it once on her hand. She looked graceful and beautiful no doubt and now by holding the Odhni on left hand walking while holding the very hand front of her belly. She look confident her open hair were dancing at fast winds but she was least bother about them).

"I will love to have them"! where are they"? I want to see them"!

"What's going on here"?

(Mirza look before and saw Jalal he smiled at him then look at Jodha who was glaring at Jalal in rage. He knew the situation between both isn't fine thus he didn't wished to create more scene opened his mouth to reply but Jodha beat him at it).

"I wanted to have my evening stroll in garden saw him coming from practice ", so ask him to accompany me for it nothing else"! In-fact he said he have surprise for me which he want to show me"!

(Jalal eyes didn't left from her even for second but listening her words he got confused why she is lying true he didn't heard her words but he knew by the scene it wasn't she who stop Mirza then why. And more then her lie it was excitement in her voice the firmness which had him caught of guard what's wrong with her"? How come she can be this calm and at peace when it's not long where he had her so upset. While Mirza was more surprised at this what's gotten on her head why she lied and what's up with her sudden change of mood).

"Are you going to stand still come on show me my surprise come"! I can't wait any longer"!

I will like to see the surprise as well"!

(Spoke Jalal listening this Jodha didn't said anything while Mirza gulp nervously as soon his gaze met with Jalal he saw the danger lurking behind glaring eyes of his brother. If she didn't accepted the apology "! it was still fine"! But why she is in mood to have my head "? Brother will kill me"! Oh lord bless me I am to young to die).

Well brother Jalal can show you the surprise after all both cub are under his care"! I forget I need to meet Sir Adhga"! So I better take your leave"!

(Saying this he didn't even waited for their reply and walked away from garden after greeting them formally. As soon he left Jalal snatch the rose from her then throw it on ground and crushed it under his foot glaring at her in rage).

"What were you doing with my brother huh"!

"Nothing much trying to know the people associated with you"! Not my fault if you don't trust them with me"!

"Don't play with me I"!..

"You're going to show my cub or not"?if not then I am leaving as I have better things to do", than waste them unnecessary"! As my time is precious unlike others I value it"!

(What the from where this bravery coming from"? How come she become this confident it's like He very well knew her slithering art of warfare, which he had witnessed long ago. But her evil brain is yet to known by him. Every time he meet her talk to her or know something about her felt new and so unknown. It's like left on battle unarmed to fight. Without even having prior knowledge of enemy enemy their way of strike. Little did she knew whatever he told her was half truth not even close to truth. Does she know he love her in his own twisted way well not love obsessed that's right word obsessed about her. That he would definitely killed his brother as well if he gotten on his oath to have her. It's just fate favour him the game of destiny was very much fair to him. With little hardship he got what he wanted and what he never wish either. None knows it was his plan to go for Martial alliance it was his plan that name of Emperor wasn't mention in peace treaty deal paper. Recalling the day he met Nasir last time and plan this it wasn't easy to do but he did).

How are you doing Jalal...

(Ask Nasir stepping closer to the cell where Jalal was held as captive and it's no doubt Nasir felt pang of guilt crawling in heart for being the reason of his brother lost freedom).

How it's look to you your majesty...

At least you aren't being subject of people humiliation in a way I do so you do seem to be fine by me...

Brother I never intended to make you go through this...and the worse even you know but aren't in mood to give me a chance to explain myself for once"!

Does it matter anymore Jalal...

"why you're here "? obliviously not to make me drown in the sea of guilt which my action build it'self then why"?

For now what's your priority knowing the purpose of me being here or your freedom...

Purpose of you being here...as I know my freedom may lie on your arrival here...

I am please to know the darkness of dungeon didn't killed the light of your brain...

"If we are done with civility can we come on the real purpose of you being here"!.

"The rebellion is increasing in Rajputana against Mughal empire cause they want your head"! And obviously I can't do that"!

What's the situation there for them same as mine"!

Yes"!

If you permit then I have idea which get us have control on situation "!

Go ahead "!

You should visit there with alliance of marriage then"! It will be hard but you're brilliant in the game of manipulation"!

"What makes you think I will do that knowing well", I lost interest in women long back ", marrying any of them is against my oath I took after I lost"!

When did I say you had to marry I just said to make deal with them about it"! But you don't need to be one"!

(Getting his entire plan by his words Nasir was stunned at first he knew it's wrong. Being men of word it was wrong on his part to abide by Jalal idea still the love he had for him over power it. And he ended up agreeing to it with unsure heart as he knew what he is going to do will be wrong on many level. Already they're known to be as backstabber and coward now this action will eventually make them become betrayer as well. That's another case Nasir change his decision at last moment and he become adamant to marry her as well don't know why how what make him change his decision but he had him dark he didn't even made move to have free either. Thus eventually he planned to revolt was going to escape from prisoner and with help of his men plan to take over the throne and waged a war. But before he could excute his plan he got to know Nasir died leaving him with ease access to have everything. Now coming to what he feel for her his emotion for her are very complicated he want to see her happy make her happy but do opposite of it cause of his enemies how it's matter to his enemy how he dealt with her it does cause he doesn't want everyone to take her as his weakness. He knew he can protect her from outer Enemies but enemies lurking inside in the form of well wisher he can't this he hate her she hate him this bloody drama need to be shove on there face. If only knew his action more then hatred show his possessiveness and obsession regarding her then he won't be opted for it at all. But now her action is making him confused"! why she is acting as if nothing happen at all"? did she figure out everything already"? or it's her way to trap me in something"? Walking with her to his palace reaching the room adjacent to his he step in with her and saw both cub sleeping on cot peacefully bundled in blanket).

They're so adorable"! Can I have both of them"!

"Yes but don't forget it's me who is giving you"!

"How come you "? When it was Mi..

"Shh don't you dare to take other men name from your mouth not even those who are dear to me"!

You can't control me or my action"!

"Trust me I can cause I am sure you don't want anything happen to others ", cause of your stubbornness and little play do you"!

Of course not but I am sure you won't hurt your dear ones"!

But I can hurt your dear ones specially your maid come friend's"!

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Awesome chappy Di

So confusing character

Update soon Di

Thanks for Pm Di

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Wow! Wow! Wow!

Just came across this story and I am IN LOVE!

What a fantastic, brilliant writer and story teller you are!šŸ‘šŸ‘

You've literally weaved magic with your words that had me up all night finishing all 20 chapters in one go despite the threat of exams on my headšŸ˜†.

I NEED an overdose of another 20 chapters ASAP!šŸ˜›

I loved their encounters and how their feelings are slowly developing. I'm also super glad it's not completely following the show.

It's simply ahhmayzingggg

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Nice chapter n I like both jalal n jodha on this story n this story is different from the show n I really love this story n thnxx for pm me

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Awesome chappy Di

Glad you like it and enjoy 😳

So confusing character

Indeed hope the story doesn't get confusing for you 😊

Update soon Di

Caught little bit fever of season so not sure but try to do so soon 😳

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