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Posted: 5 years ago

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Really want Jalal and Jodha face off

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was jalal responsible ?

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Chapter 19

Do you think they will come "!

"I don't think Aziz I know they will come cause they have no interest in tormenting my subject here they wanted me here"!

(Aziz Zaheer both looked at Jalal it's not new foe them, to get on with his absurd action yet very reasonable decision before being emperor he himself carried many assignment as such to slice throat of his enemy. Alas after being emperor they expected him to stop risking his life as mere Warrior but he won't budge. Who will believe them emperor is here out on part where enemies are attacking in disguise of Robbers. And wish to face them on own to let them know the consequence of tormenting his subject to reach out for him).

What's wrong you seem lost"? is there something else we should know"!

Situation at War is easy to control ", but controlling women is not only difficult it's impossible'!

(They Chuckle at his words while Jalal become thoughtful himself , he told her not to be out , he could let her know his real reason of not allowing her out . But he didn't he get sadist pleasure in pushing her as if he get to satisfy his ego like yeah which none can do I did I can break the hot headed brave heart royal blood stubborn rightgeous Rajput Princess can break by my action. It's give him sense of sadist pleasure to see her verge of breaking or exploding but eventually act nothing against him nor answer him back neither try to push him. He knew well she had her reason for not doing it alas he wanted to fiesty reply by her action her words her emotion. Something cause he no at least not strong sacard emotion love then at least there is strong emotion of hatred between them and he enjoy this maybe half part of him doesn't enjoy but at least he get some reaction by her. Cause he want her to disobey him this it's gave him reason to lay visit at her palace. Alas she seem to figure out the reason of such strict action of him already definitely not entirely but partially she did. Abdul Aziz were about to say something but then saw Mirza coming to them. He was having Frown on his handsome face which was disguise as merchant, they looked at him even Jalal got confused and curious cause even at most serious situation the prankster in him won't subside this to end the curiousity Jalal break the silence and ask him).

"What's wrong with you "?

We are here to to serve justice to our subject"! To ensure their safety by getting the Robber's punished them gravely"! But what if we are doing injustice on others ourselves"! In the name of ruling"!

What happen Mirza"?

(Mirza was about to reply when they all heard a loud cry. Thier hand went on Thier sword and they walked towards the direction of voice there was still time for sunset thus the path were pretty much clear. Reaching near banayan tree they found a men crying while few men consoling him. They walked to them and Abdul ask in form tone).

What's wrong why you're crying"!

(Listening this the men give them way to see what really happened , before the crying men a dead body of cow was laying they shared a look and heard the men speaking while sniffing while careasssing the head of dead cow).

"a tiger killed my cow.’ I lost my livelihood"!

‘And the tiger?’

‘He must be somewhere in the jungle. But who can find him? Our whole life is wasted. The Emperor’s men come and take away our crops. Now, the tiger comes and takes away our cow. How do we live? This is the fifth animal within three week"!

‘Zaheer Aziz Let us drive the tiger out by creating noise. I have my rifle.’! Worry not we will kill the wild beast"!

(Knowing the forest well enough and being best in hunting wild beast as tigers Abdul Zaheer Aziz and Mirza readily agreed. And looked forward to kill the beast but Jalal was suspicious cause the men there had weapon with them to . He orders the people to not be at outskirts areas then how come these ten people group is here , that to with wepon . Yet he didn't let his doubt evident. But more then that the men line of emperor's men coming and taking away their crop , why on whose order his men will do such a thing did whatever he said it's true or he is trying to make bad impression on outlooker . As if Aziz Abdul sense this they spoke firmly).

It's easy for us to do we are huntsmen after all"! You all can stay here"!

"No no it's not right you can't go in forest not only there is danger lurking in form of forest animal but in form of Robbers as well"!

"Yes and if you died none will do anything either then crying ", but think what will become of your family"? don't take risk as such either we should go together or none"!

(His suspicions was increasing yet he stayed silent but agreed by side nod which his friend noticed unity have its power even if it's trap they can come out victoriously together. But on way to deep in forest they talked as well and get to know few men in group are huntsmen and knew the forest better. So bring huntsmen wepon are ought to be with them. While rest of them to protect their family their animals from wild beast of forest and Robbers knowing no aid of protection will come by emperor started to fight on own. It was really bad the one he was having doubt on come out to be victim in every sense. While talking they reach deep in forest the place where they expected the tiger to be).

‘When you hear the gunshot, do not move forward but hide in the bushes. Move forward only when you hear the trumpets,’!

(The two of them nodded and then designated to create the noise moved into the jungle. he checked his sword, spear and his knife. moved forward to take his position followed by Aziz and Abdul then rest of them. He selected a big bush to hide behind and waited after readying his rifle. Everyone waited for the people to begin their shouting to push the tiger out of hiding.The jungle was bathed in pin-drop silence. As the sun rose higher in the sky, the shouting began all of a sudden. The noise of the shouts and the utensils being banged could be heard as they descended the mountain. Flocks of birds flew up and circled around. Herds of sheep ran down the slopes. Aziz pointed towards a bush hearing a shuffling sound. Jalal looked in that direction to see a few wild boars emerge out of the bush, their hair straight, baring their teeth. They rushed unaware of the men hiding behind the bush.The tiger, having enjoyed his kill, was now enjoying a siesta when he was disturbed by the noise of the utensils banging. There were stones falling all around and the noise was increasing in intensity. The tiger angrily moved out of his cave and growled, his tail raised high as he climbed down the slopes. He turned back every now and then towards the noise which seemed to be nearing closer.The noise suddenly stopped and then again it increased with more intensity. A few monkeys screeched in warning as they flitted from one tree top to another. Pointing at them, when knoeing it's time Jalal spoke to Zaheer)

"I think the tiger is coming our way.’!

(Even while saying this he sat in position without moving an inch.The noise was closer, and suddenly, out of the blue, the tiger emerged into the clearing. The huge animal was nervous and flicked his tail angrily. His stripes shone in the sunlight and the muscles rippled with each step. He was now right in front of the bush where Jalal and his men were hiding. Jalal balanced the rifle with one hand on his thigh and shoved the barrel through the bushes. A shot rang out the moment the tiger came within shooting distance. The loud roar of the tiger followed the shot and the jungle reverberated with the sounds. The bush was filled with the smoke emanating from the rifle barrel. The men chasing the tiger, hid in the bushes, waiting for the signal. Jalal saw the tiger groaning as he rolled on the ground. The beast was trying to get up but fell back each time. His backbone was hit and it was impossible for him to get up. The jungle shook with the painful roar of the tiger).

‘He has been hit,’

(shouted Aziz loudly in excitement he was happy how Jalal his emperor his friend easily get to hit the tiger. But his over excitement didn't settled well with Jalal).

‘Shhhh …’

(but Jalal Sush him. The tiger’s growling subsided slowly and his stomach heaved slowly with his laborious breathing. He came out of the hiding in careful steps , unseathed his sword , The tiger opened his eyes and saw his enemy walking towards him. He growled loudly and, at that moment, Jalal sword pierced his heart and his neck slumped back instantly. Aziz picked up his spear but Jalal indicated to him to stop. The tiger was dead. But then everyone heard Zaheer words).

"It is a tigress.’ .

(Mirza saw the two cubs stepping out from cave but watching they were backing away thus he picked both of them and put them in front of Jalal .He stretched his hand to pick up one of the cubs but the tiny cub hissed and bared his teeth. He managed to catch the cub and cuddled it forcibly and said),

‘The tigress was stuck in this place because of her cubs. I am going to keep them"!

(None expected this but none get to caught the guilt in his voice either expect his friends. Watching the two cubs trying to free themselves from his arms. He release them by bending down on ground and saw them rushing to dead body of Tigress. His heart shudder in pain the sight was unbearable the cubs were licking the tigress face one was jumping over her and trying to pull her tail alas the tigress didn't move cause she was dead and it's slayer were watching everything. One side the people there were happy to get relief by one beast this other side even they didn't had gut to watch the scene unfolding before then anymore and they head out from there. Aziz Zaheer picked the cubs and Abdul Mirza held the weapons. The huntsmen Burnes the tigress body and with rest of them head out from forest with heavy heart).

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Greeting's Your grace"! Her highness isn't keeping well"! Thus she can't Honor your words by paying you visit when you call for her"!

(Listening Bilal Khan words she was enragged as hell. how dare she? it's not been two days of her being arrived here"! and yet the new queen seem to take no move to visit her. Isn't she aware what place and position she held in royal household of royal Mughal Harem. Seem like just cause Jalal took stand for her in court she seem to think highly herself enough to defy her. Well she will love to break her illusion but her defying him wasn't only thing to put her off but the way Bilal Khan was standing before her he greet her surely with Honor but the way he spoke was so unlike his previous self does being service of queen made him change her attitude towards her that to in two days).

No worries I am going to lay her visit there fore"! As being the empress and chief of Harem it's my responsibility to take care of Jalal every Possession"!

(Bilal Khan didn't like this at all possession she isn't possession she is Queen a princess most importantly a human. But he knew better not to say anything before the one who take human as mere pawn of life game. Which are used and throw away. He saw Rukaiya getting up from couch while her maid helped her to get her dress steady she always looked Graceful. But when they reach the corridor outside the room Bilal thought Jodha isn't well if by chance she didn't did well in meeting Rukaiya then she will made her life living hell there thus he very firmly and in low tone spoke).

"Your grace forgive me for my audacity but", I don't think it's wise of you to visit her highness", when she isn't fine to entertain your arrival"!

"How dare you to speak with her highness such way"! "Now the empress need to learn from mindless insolent pathetic slave like you"!

(Hoshiyaar Khan raised his hand to slap Bilal Khan but Rukaiya stop him by her hand. Realising it's true but then she wanted to use the situation at her advantage thus she didn't pay heed to both and continue walking towards dwelling place of Jodha. But on way she git massage of the Dowgar queen Hamida expecting her at her room thus she decided to meet Jodha some other day and left to Dowgar Queen palace).

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Jodha you ready"?

"I am born ready let's go"!

(Spoke Jodha while replying to Moti, who ask her about being ready for sword practice she denied to meet Rukaiya cause she knew she won't be having any pleasant time with her but she needed her head to cool down which only sword can help her with. Thus she decided to go for practice while walking out clad in White Color V cut golden color collar full sleeved till knee frock and pajama embrace in color of peace she held medium of enemy death in hand. Head had white color silk cloth turban on while face was veil by thick cotton cloth)

Today I will Surely defeat you in practice"!

"None can defeat me either then My Dance master"! I still remember the day I met him it's just like yesterday"!

(Listening Moti words she replied back with smile, recalling the day she net her dance master first time).

“You are late, boy.”

(A slight man with a bald head and a great beak of a nose stepped out of the shadows, holding a pair of slender wooden swords. Standing before at centre of Isolated Arena, which was build for Prince to practice alas the Royal Prince found the place under shed of tree more convenient. Then the place with no tree letting the Sun growl directly on ground making it burn with its heat and letting the people present there hard time to even stand. But She will go there whenever she will feel low and today when she went there she found the men she was looking at for now).

“Tomorrow you will be here at midday,”

“Who are you?”

“I am your dancing master.”

(Dancing master ? that to with weapon who the hell ask for dancing master ? definitely she didn't ! at least the dance is only think she don't wish to learn at all , He tossed her one of the wooden blades. She grabbed for it, missed, and heard it clatter to the floor. Then hear the men speaking again)

“Tomorrow you will catch it. Now pick it up.”

(It was not just a stick, but a true wooden sword complete with grip and guard and pommel. She picked it up and clutched it nervously with both hands, holding it out in front of her. It was heavier than it looked, much heavier than Needle.The bald man clicked his teeth together but head him again).

“That is not the way, boy. This is not a greatsword that is needing two hands to swing it. You will take the blade in one hand.”!

“It’s too heavy,”!

“It is heavy as it needs to be to make you strong, and for the balancing. A hollow inside is filled with lead, just so. One hand now is all that is needing.”!

(His words were making sense to her thus she took her right hand off the grip and wiped her sweaty palm on her dress. She held the sword in her left hand. He seemed to approve which did made her smile inwardly).

“The left is good. All is reversed, it will make your enemies more awkward. Now you are standing wrong. Turn your body sideface, yes, so. You are skinny as the shaft of a spear, do you know. That is good too, the target is smaller. Now the grip. Let me see.”!

(He moved closer and peered at her hand, prying her fingers apart, rearranging them. And spoke firmly).

“Just so, yes. Do not squeeze it so tight, no, the grip must be deft, delicate.”

“What if I drop it?”

“The steel must be part of your arm,” “Can you drop part of your arm?

(What's up with this baldhead men calling her boy when he knew she is girl damn the men have no respect for her what if she isn't big girl she is still a girl that to royal one a princess he need to know better be respectful to her thus she objected third time he called her “boy.”).

I will like to correct you", “I’m a girl,”!

“Boy, girl,”! “You are a sword, that is all". That is the grip. You are not holding a battle-axe, you are holding a..."!

“needle,”

"Needle yeah a needle which need to handle delicately“! To sew your enemy to death"! Prevent you from getting pierced by point"!

(She can't go out fine , she can't sent letter to anyone without being checked thoroughly by others. She can't even meet anyone gosh top of it she can't go for weaponry practice either all she can do is read book check Jewelry look outside up at sky to flying birds which made her cry for freedom. She miss Shubharak her horse it's been more then week she hadn't seen him. It's been more then five days she didn't get to carry on her sword practice. And it's been two days since she arrived in palace and already feel to run away to escape from the prisoner. Sharp ears of spy always stick to walls to know what she is saying Is she planning something. Kneel pair of eyes which judge her every move and report to God knows whom maybe emperor maybe queen Rukaiya. She don't have freedom to breath in peace she tried to go out and ended up sharing the place with one who don't know how to stay silent. Within two days he killed my sprit was I this weak to end up broken. It was evening when she decided to head out for arena for practice alas the guard stopped her).

"forgive me your highness you can't be here no royal Harem lady is allow to be here"!

"In people view here ", Women are allow to have eyes for weapon see it's being used", but no hands to touch them to use on own"! Your highness"!

(while the charge of arena at her palace told her they're not only killer of humanity they're her mood killer as well gosh why they're so damn helpless and controlling at same time of her one moment she was all ready to have combat with her friend and second moment she found herself back to her room how humilating it is for free spirited royal blood hot headed princess like her yet she enduring it cause she have no choice . Missing her dance master who teach her how to fight. But it wasn't only weponary lesson he given he teach her how to defeat enemy by mind as well. Alas she is unable to figure out anyway to fulfil even single little wish of her at enemy land forget about defeating the one who are putting her down every chance they get. Recalling Bakshi words don't be sweet to them people won't be easy on you rang in her brain she decided if not easy way then she will get things she wish in twisted way but she will fulfil her wish by hook or by crook no matter what may come. But the only thing isn't letting her actions on this decision Jalal being away. Yes she knew if she go on twisted way to get what she want she was sure Jalal won't like it and he will do something more worse to her which she can't tolerate. She hate him more then she love sword thus she didn't try to object much , with servants why she will when she knew they're just carrying orders of him. Thus she is doing nothing to get his attention even in bad way but it's so damn hard for her to be in her palace only. She was thinking about the happening when Bilal Khan come there she didn't even let him breath and greet her but fired question at him).

Does women here have any right of freedom"? Are they free to do anything"?

Not entirely"! But they do have freedom to do as they pleased with but in certain areas only"!

(Jodha raised her brow in questioning manner which made the maids present there smile they held her hand and led her out from Gallery towards Garden. Entire garden was illuminating in moonlight by now and the deep fresh alluring fragrance in air there started luring her to peace, there was at mid three stairs up a stage was build which had two couch at each side before forged Little wall and couch place at mid of garden. By sitting on couch you can view the pool as well which was just a little distance away at night with lotus in pool it's get more beautiful sight to behold. It's gave sense of peace which Jodha was realishing with all might when Jodha went there she didn't see any other cause her maid were immidately standing before her. Whoever saw her on way always left awe by her appearance come beauty everything about her left any on lookers stunned. She was sight to behold always. Being calm and gentle behaviour she evoke desire to work with her in every servant in Harem).

नील गगन की छाँव में दिन रैन गले से मिलते हैं दिल पंछी बन उड़ जाता हैं, हम खोये खोये रहते हैं"! नील गगन की छाँव में दिन रैन गले से मिलते हैं दिल पंछी बन उड़ जाता हैं, हम खोये खोये रहते हैं"!

In the shades of blue sky , day and night embrace each other my heart soares like a bird while I am pre-occupied"!.

जब फूल कोई मुस्काता हैं, प्रीतम की सुगंध आ जाती हैं नस नस में भँवर सा चलता हैं, मदमाती जल न तल पाती हैं "! यादों की नदी घिर आती हैं, हर मौज में हम तो बहते हैं "!

The blosooming of a bud brings the whiff of my beloved, a shiver run down my spine the rivers of memories rise in spate, I flow with it's tides flights taking my attention"!.

नील गगन की छाँव में दिन रैन गले से मिलते हैं दिल पंछी बन उड़ जाता हैं, हम खोये खोये रहते हैं"!

In the shades of blue sky , day and night embrace each other my heart soares like a bird while I am pre-occupied"!.

कहता हैं समय का उजीयारा एक चन्द्र भी आनेवाला हैं इन ज्योत की प्यासी अखियन को अंखियों से पिलानेवाला हैं जब पात हवा से बजते हैं, हम चौंक के राहें तकते हैं"!

The brilliance of dawn says something special is coming", his sight will succour to my thirsting eyes", when leaves rustle in winds with a start my eyes succour the path"!.

नील गगन की छाँव में दिन रैन गले से मिलते हैं दिल पंछी बन उड़ जाता हैं, हम खोये खोये रहते हैं"!

In the shades of blue sky , day and night embrace each other my heart soares like a bird while I am pre-occupied"!.

(She just closed her eyes when a singer started singing Jodha open her eyes and look before, there the place where her maid were standing in group were now standing aside and on ground on Floor mat bed group of Musicians were sitting with their musical instruments, playing tune a singer sitting at side while two girls started dancing. This was looking very beautiful they heavily dressed in neckpieces, maang teekas, jhoomars, chandelier earrings, haath phools and bangles. Yet it didn't slow down their move on dance steps the girls were fire the moves weren't sensual but they were very much alluring for Jodha she was mesmerized by their move and the song seem to complete the performance the further they sang and dance the more interested she become but with each line and step of dance some unknown emotion started evoking in her. Her maids offer her fruit slice even drink she took none of it she was just watching the performance with smile on face).

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(At outskirts of Merta forest in bunker shaped tent a boy around 19 was standing while gripping his sword tightly he was clad in Red color Robe (Jama). With golden color sleeve silvery thread worked on. Looking at lit lamp before him his eyes honey brown orbs eyes were bloodshot red it wasn't even week passed and he is made emperor by His Minister cause his uncle who was emperor was murdered in day light body dragged to Agra fort. Oh how he hate Mughal for snatching the only father figure he had in life. They made him orphan and left him with a heart which is burning with hatred he seek for revenge alas facing his enemy on battlefield isn't something he wish to act on).

"They kill my uncle and think they can rule with ease no I won't I will avenge for my uncle", then rule in entire Hindustan"!

"But you don't seek war with them"!

Yes I don't , Cause I know the consequence of facing them on battlefield is suicidal for us"!

That's coward words"!

"If hestitation of putting thoushands of lives on stake for your personal gain then I admit I am coward"! At leat it's make me better then my enemies"!

"I don't know my lord but I can say with honesty I pray your plan succeed nothing will please me then getting information of his death"!

"I know Khalid I know he kill my uncle by conspiracy I will have his head in same way"! Cause he doesn't deserve death of warrior in Battlefield"!

But I must tell you Abul Mali isn't trustworthy for us"!

But he handy is for us he is coward but he is whicked"! Enough to led our enemy fall on our feet"! But tell me what's the situation of so called well wisher"?

He lost his leg and he went to Mewat"! Even though he is stripped of from his position and power"!

(The boy just nodded not to satisfied by his situation but he let it slid cause he had bigger things to work on them pay attention to flighty coward as Sharif. It's easy to judge others on account of their deed but it's always hard to put yourself in their shoe who lost one they held dear entire life. His uncle got Mughal Emperor killed. The present emperor did the same by getting Afghan Emperor killed as well fair enough. Both had kill other by Conspiracy not directly then indirectly they had hand behind death of both. Deciding to have him get bit time of peace Khalid spoke).

"Seem like our messenger is stuck it will take time for him to arrive here", why you don't come to enjoy the little celebration Held for you"!

(He nodded and walked out of bunker tent and come across another royal lavish luxurious tent as per the taste of emperor sitting on couch at mid he looked at Khalid the celebration which was held he decline to be part of this it was held by his soldier only alas for him there was a dancer girl covered by wrapped Shawl holding lamp was. Standing waiting for emperor Khalid walk out letting them emperor have his own sweet time with dancer. With one clap the drummer at entrance of ten started drumming on beat of song it was dance of fire mirroring the Burning heart of him).

नफ़रत की आग में इन्सान कमयाब ना होते, जंग में शहीद तो जाबज़ होते"!

"In the fire of hate human doesn't succeed"! In war only brave are Martyr"!.

दिल के ज़ख्म हरे न होते तो हम यू रश्क 'ए आग में बरबाद ना होते "!

"If wounds of heart weren't sore", we won't been destroyed in fire of Jealousy"!.

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"I don't understand why we are back when we plan to not be back without capturing the Robber's"!

(Mirza ask in curiousity and annoyance, when at last moment after hunting the tigress Jalal called of the plan to be back. He knew he must have reason for doing this still Mirza was never to just blindly listen and act unless he is aware of reason as well. So that if he go wrong he know where to step to defend himself. But right now all were silently back to palace after roaming west part of Agra in disguise meeting many people on way infact they come to term with the corruption poverty and injustice on basis of religion happening there. The time they come back it was afternoon already).

Jalal will you do the Honor to answer me now"! Why we suddenly had to discontinued our plan"!

It wasn't right time"!

Really I don't get how it wasn't right time"!

'You didn't heard what those men said", did you"? the emperor's men come and took away our crop " then robber come and robbed us from things they're left with including dignity"! If not then now the wild beast of forest"! What you think our soldier our officer our ministers are doing"!

"That still doesn't make sense why we left the mission of caughting Robbers"! Fine if you wish to teach lesson to officers and investigate but why we left"!

(Spoke Mirza getting highly confused but before Jalal could answer him he himself figure out a little and spoke further to get his doubt clear making Abdul Aziz Zaheer to become thoughtful as well).

Oh don't tell me you think robbers have connection with our"! Oh my it's treason "!

(Who might be definitely they have few who are corrupt but daring to spoil image of Emperor is definitely need gut to do cause once you caught you're going to be penalized to death. Adham was assigned for West Agra it's clear he might have hand on this but he is out for while then who is taking lead of such thing still his supporters or it's seem very well planned conspiracy against empire and it's emperor which isn't limited to Robbers).

"Well we better retire for day "! Cause not sure about you but I am damn tired "!

(Listening Mirza words everyone smiled and by getting nod by Jalal walked out to get back to Thier own room. Jalal within sometime get rid of his disguise form when a waistband fell on ground he was having on the temporary pouch hung ,near his dagger on around right side of waist. He look down and bending on ground keeping one hand on back while by other hand he picked it up, and get lost in thought of girl he met at evening the Brusie on her arm the shaky voice near to cry while meekness and delicate move of her. As far I know Jodha is kind hearted Royal Princess come Empress she doesn't seem to go hard on one who are dear to her or care about her work for her. Infact her maid come friends are unmarried then who was this new girl. Married yet never been at palace ever it's odd very odd. He was thinking about it when his gaze fell on Ayaz Beg incharge of Jodha palace security).

"Greeting your Majesty"!

"Is everything alright"!

With your grace And Allah's blessings everything is alright", it's just her highness seem to have sore mood from past two days"!

(Jalal nodded knowing well reason of her having sore mood. She is denied to do many things it was ought to have her upset, it's same as having power but no right to use it for own. She is Princess come empress yet she is forbidden to do many things she likes to do. Him not allowing her out of palace was for security reason. Not allowing her for weaponry practice horse ridding, is to keep on carrying the rules and regulations of Royal Harem ladies had to abide by. He further reported by her every action Jalal nodded and after rewarding him for doing his job sincerely of protecting her and reporting him of everything , he dismissed him. And started getting ready with help of servant to attend Public court, (diwan'e Aam).

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(A week had been passed Jalal didn't pay visit to Jodha even if he tried there will be lot of excuse

"Her highness is with Empress Chand"! "Busy in prayer"! "Busy with Queen Salima"! Every damn time if no one then she will be with his aunt , gosh the women won't let him even single time to meet her. Infact she herself made no attempt to see him. Even though She had nothing to do while he had everything to do yet she will be the busiest person of world when he wish to meet her , but then he will busy most of time as for his subjects for wellfare of his empire thus he was busy mostly out of Palace as well. This one week give Jodha lot of time to thought about her life, she once try to meet Dowgar quern but realised like any other even she isn't please by Hindu Queen. Yet by meeting diplomat women like Salima experienced lady like Queen Gulbadan Queen Chand she come to know about many things , She come with terms of biased rules in Harem implied by royal over the caretaker and servant. She wanted to change this but didn't wished to meet Queen Rukaiya or Jalal himself knowing well her opinion might be hardly welcome. She knew when they doesn't let her have any freedoms then why they will even pay heed to her opinion regarding any rules set on people in palace it's not like unknown to them they're pretty much aware of it and they're the one to imply them. It was noon the weather was hotter then ever in , Agra not even sound of birds could bee hear, even the air coming from garden side was hot , but for Jodha it was mirroring her heart which was on fire already , she was standing at the terrace looking out the sun was spitting fire, but it's hardly effected her even if it did she wasn't ready to acknowledge it she had dismissed her maid wishing to be alone, Weather is so like Human nature"! It's pleasing and controlled if it's in limit it's get over board then become unpleasing"! And destroyed everything , Thus the balance is needed but where is balance in her life"! She is losing control over her life but by bit day by day"!).

Jodha what are you doing here"? Oh my goodness why you're so careless towards your health"!

"I am fine"! just don't know "? what to do anymore with my life"! I can sense the ladies in Harem seem to planning something against me"!

First you need to freshen up and take care of your health"! Come I prepared bath for you"! And about them well whatever it will be we will deal with it"!

Yes cause we have no option anyway "!I ain't in mood to do so ", I already had it once in morning"! Then why again"?

"Cause I am telling you now come"!

(What had become of her now she need to do as her friend, say gosh where the hell that fiery hotheaded Princess died. She is missing everything she feel trapped in darkness with no light to escape. She was homesick with none to bother about. It was so so damn bad and she can't help it stepping on bath tub slowly she lowered herself on water. Which felt damn cold cause she was out standing under sunlight for long but with cold it was soothing as well. Thus she find herself calming down and enjoying it the entire bathtub was filled with cold water mixed with rose water and flower petals, half leaning on edge of Hamam her entire body soaked in water she swam her hand at side to side splashing water in fun way).

She wasn't wrong it's indeed soothing"!

(Few maid was out checking Jodha wardrobe to choose dress for her, while few was looking at jewellery The rest of maids were arranging her things in room and Bilal Khan was Supervising them. Cause of boredom Jodha did many things in week trying hand on paintings reading books on various Historical myth takes of love ,romance and war. Thus there were Colors and books were misplaced on various place everyday in rooms which the maids set within sometime when they heard loud footsteps startled they turn back and Saw Emperor stepping in from Entrance. Clad in light color royal Blue Jama creamy color waist coat and Pajama holding sword in hand. Pearl necklace around his neck, turbans made by light Blue and creamy color silk cloth with previous jewel studded on it with one feather at mid at front of turban).

Greeting's your Majesty"!

(Everyone stood in row with bow head before him and greet him formally. He glance around and find Jodha nowhere, he look at them and motion them to be out the Mughal maids and even Bilal didn't hestitate to go out. Jalal walked towards more inside the room he was just standing Parallel Hamam entrance which was well guarded by heavy red color curtain. He was glancing around to look for Jodha , when he saw Lalita Vishakha Rewa Moti stepping out of Hamam , Seeing him gasped they didn't expected him to be there at this time as it was time of him to be public court hall (diwan'e Aam)? Thinking this they shared a look).

Take my guards and visit to Saahi bawarchi khana (royal Kitchen ) and tell the cooks there to prepare meal in rajput style and I wish you people to supervise them"! It's should be served here within an hour"!

(They both again shared a look knowing they can't do anything they nodded and giving a reluctant look behind at Hamam walked out of Their. They knew once they come back they will face wrath of Jodha but they knew at least she won't kill them but he will kill them if they didn't obey him. Realising Jodha is in Hamam Jalal regret to be there at moment he step out in gallery , and started gazing outside Five minutes got passed till they left, Jalal was still standing out at gallery lost in thought when he heard Jodha voice coming from Hamam. ).

"How much I have to wait"? you went to get the dress for me", or started making it "? come on"! I don't wish to be in water anymore"!

(With this heard loud Splash of water, then low soft humming sound as well. Listening her words he realised they step out to get her dress what a foolish action is it even two of them could come and get dress for her while other two can helped her. They expect a queen to do everything on own but themselves can't do one simple task. Few more minutes passed when he heard her voice again).

Moti Rewa"!... Where are you "? Lalita Vishakha "? ..I am tired of waiting get me my dress"!

(His gaze fell on Pink color Ghaghra Choli lying on table near the portion of changing room, even the Jewellery matching to it was lying their. He glance at Hamam entrance then at dress lying there he was about to call for maids who were standing out of room but before he could say he saw Jodha stepping out of Hamam in changing room , cause she was annoyed by waiting for her maid lad in Royal purple color thick cotton knee length Bathrobe with open wet hair. She was looking down at her waist tying the bathrobe lace on front , Done tying the lace she look upword at front and seeing Jalal she shrieked lowly and step behind the curtain which part the changing room and Gallery , her eyes widen up in surprise she didn't expected him to be there. Becoming self conscious she look at herself sighing at least she have bathrobe on or else she would have died in embarassment within next few seconds immidately a question rolled out on her tounge).

You"!.. here at this time"?

(Jalal after seeing her stepping out immidately lowered his eyes and about turn his back to her. But she was quick to hid behind curtain he couldn't help but chuckle, at her reaction and speed of action the way her petite little doe eyes widen and she shrieked, and hide behind curtain was worth. His mind found this situation comic but his heart didn't appreciate it in anyway. Infact her questions put him off as well. What it's mean "me"! here at this time"? I am emperor and her husband, I can come to meet her any time who can object. He have right on her and her time why she is so surprised why she need to hide from him. Eventually it's angered him he step towards the curtain she was standing behind. Her breath got stuck watching him moving towards the place she is standing. Why he is coming to her didn't he saw what situation she is in"? Gosh it's embarassing"! why her maid's left her"? they're here with her for her or him"? how can they move out "? as soon he step in. She was about to say something but till then he reach near the curtain already).

'A husband isn't depend on time to meet his wife"! He can meet her anytime anywhere in any situation"! He needn't to think about time and reason to meet his wife at all and here I am emperor"!

"I find it odd you remember rights of husband on case if your wish respect", but when it's come to me my wish my rights my respect you forget everything"!

Well mention about your wish rights and respect when you care about mine Jodha"!

"Enough of little talk "! tell me why you're "? here at this time "?

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Awesome chappy Di

when their differences gonna end

when their love blooms

Update soon Di

Thanks for pm Di

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Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

No he wasn't😊 he even get to know about his death by his men later on 😊

Thanks for comment

okk , but he decided beforehand that only he will marry her , right ?

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Originally posted by: kriya_12

okk , but he decided beforehand that only he will marry her , right ?

Yup right

But not really decided to marry her but he did had this in mind to have her it's just His brother death and the alliance his brother made helped him to get her easily by marrying her 😊

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Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

Yup right

But not really decided to marry her but he did had this in mind to have her it's just His brother death and the alliance his brother made helped him to get her easily by marrying her 😊

okk , would love to see what jalal's mind was planning before the murder of his brother like contemplating on that , to what extent he would hv gone to get her.

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okk , would love to see what jalal's mind was planning before the murder of his brother like contemplating on that , to what extent he would hv gone to get her.

This is what my next update going to be based on 😆And I am glad you were hoping for this only 😳thank you for comment looking forward to your review 🤗

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