The Curious Case of Mr. Bajaj - PreRish Ficlet - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

this is so beautiful ,loved it ❤️
yet times, the one you think is cold n stone hearted , subtly warms your heart
and the one who you think to be more dear to you, than you yourself, will stone your heart ..

That's so kind of you. I am glad you enjoyed reading. Thank you. :)

@bold - That's so beautifully put. :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: MR21

This is awesome. I LOVED how he showed her the mirror.

"Prerna. Life me kisi ko itna haq nahi dena chahiye ke wo aapko physically hurt kar sake under the name of an impulsive action taken and justified stating it was out of love."👏

Thanks a bunch. ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: saps.156

The unsaid scenes which we always wanted and mused about in our AT discussions.

Nicely sketched, easy to imagine and worded perfectly.

Please do write more such figments of our imaginations and desires.

Thank you. A pleasure to hear the read was worth your time and interest. These are really the characters that get some stuff out of me. This one is actually a part of my short story, 'Fall at My Feet' and will be put in detail there.

Until then, I hope I will be able to write some more stuff. :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Life me kisi ko itna haq nahi dena chahiye ke wo aapko physically hurt kar sake under the name of an impulsive action taken and justified stating it was out of love."


Wonderful ficlet SPEECHLESS. Much-needed one.

So sweet. Thank you so much.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: komlika

"Prerna. Life me kisi ko itna haq nahi dena chahiye ke wo aapko physically hurt kar sake under the name of an impulsive action taken and justified stating it was out of love."

So true 👍🏼

Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

this is so beautiful ,loved it ❤️
yet times, the one you think is cold n stone hearted , subtly warms your heart
and the one who you think to be more dear to you, than you yourself, will stone your heart ..

👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Prerna Ko sochna chahiye tha lekin is faltu writer Le pass dimagh hobo,tab Ja kar sovhegi na! Thanks for this piece,do write more.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShumiM

Prerna Ko sochna chahiye tha lekin is faltu writer Le pass dimagh hobo,tab Ja kar sovhegi na! Thanks for this piece,do write more.

I am glad to know that, you enjoyed the read.

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