AKSHAN FF TRAPPED PART 2 UPDATED

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Hi everyone, I’m a silent reader but I’m a big fan of our Akshan. I read some very nice stories about Ashan so I decided to write one, I hope you will enjoy it.


TRAPPED PART 1


Akshat was looking through the window of his hotel room, he was boiling inside, how was that possible? There will be no presentation. The day before, Mr. Pratap's assistant had contacted his assistant to inform him that the meeting was canceled, they had supposedly received the best proposal possible and it was not necessary to waste his time. He had personally worked on this project and it was out of the question for him to leave without making his presentation. He had to do something, he grabbed his phone, he had to meet Mr. Pratap Singh to present his work in person. He went to the hotel where Mr. Pratap Singh was staying, he made a few phone calls and knew that he was currently at the restaurant of the hotel with the new architect. He made his way to the restaurant and saw him in the company of a man and a woman, but he was surprised when he recognized the architect as Sunny Agharwal. He could not believe his eyes, it was impossible, this man is a lazy man. Seeing Sunny had made him more confident, he could never be beaten by this guy. He was now standing in front of them, he was greeting them when his attention was drawn by the girl who was with them, it was the same with which he was colliding when he arrived at the hotel two days earlier. What was she doing there? Sunny and Akshat did not appreciate each other and when they met they showed it openly. Sunny was the first to engage in hostilities

SA: The great Akshat Jindal honors us with his presence, I'm happy to see you here, but I do not think you've been invited. So tell me, how is the taste of defeat?

AJ: '' Defeat'' is not a word in Akshat Jindal's vocabulary, but I suppose you must be used to it, I think it's the word that suits you best.

And ignoring him, he turned his attention to Mr. Pratap Singh.

AJ: Excuse me for introducing me unexpectedly Mr. Pratap but I had to talk to you. Although I would have liked to do it during the presentation meeting.

PS: I'm happy to see you again Mr. Jindal, I understand that you are disappointed but I do not think we can get better proposal than that made by Mr. Agharwal but maybe you will work on the next project.

He could not believe his ears, Mr. Pratap Singh is hard to impress , that's why he wants to work with him, it's a challenge for him but that idiot had impressed him. He did not know why, but he could not believe it, there was something fishy but he did not lose his confidence, he answered.

AJ: I am happy for Mr. Agharwal, he has managed to impress you but I am sure that we will make a better proposal, you will not find better than us.

PS: I'm sorry Mr. Jindal but time is what I miss most, I have a flight to catch in less than three hours so, I have to go.

AJ: You know Mr. Pratap, the distance is not a problem, we can make the presentation by video conference so I will make an appointment with your assistant and according to your schedule, we will make the presentation.



PS: You're kind of personne Who dosn't give up easily, you're tenacious, I like it and for that, I will take the time to see your presentation, but you must keep in mind that Mr. Agherawal won the offer unless you managed to impress me more .

AJ: I will not disappoint you, I guarantee you.

He looked at Sunny who was smiling. He did not look worried. Akshat had the impression that there was something fishy but for the moment he did not have time to worry about it, he had to impress Mr. Pratap at any cost, he left.

Guddan was watching the man who was standing a few seconds earlier in front of them and now heading for the exit, she had met him two days before when they collided, she had apologized but he had just looked at her a few moments and was gone as if nothing had happened. That day, she had not recognized the great Akshat Jindal who is one of the main rivals of her boss. Today, she was impressed by this man, he had presence, confidence, a little bit of arrogance and he had not failed to show that he had little esteem for Mr. Agharwal. He looked a little bit pretentious, but he had something more, something she could not explain.


End of the first part, how was it? Should I continue ?


PS: It’s my first time writing, I’m starting to learn Hindi and my level of English is also not very high so bear with me if I make basic mistakes and don’t hesitate to point them out to me, to comment on this will only help me improve.

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Amazing

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Amazing👍🏼keep going.🤗

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I’m happy that you enjoyed, I’ll update asap

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Originally posted by: Benedict989

I’m happy that you enjoyed, I’ll update asap

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TRAPPED PART 2


Akshat had just finished his conversation with the assistant of Mr. Pratap Singh, the meeting will take place in three days, he was to return to Indore, he will make the presentation from his office. He was putting a pile of documents in his briefcase when something caught his attention, there was something written on a document, AGHARWAL CONSTRUCTIONS. How did this document end up in my stuffs? He called his assistant

AJ: Yuvraj, what is this document doing here? Who brought it here?

Yuv: Sir, nobody sent anything.

AJ: If nobody sent anything then how did this document end up here?

Yuv: I do not know, sir, I do not remember receiving it.

Maybe Sunny had sent him to taunt him but he was not convinced, his intuition told him that there was more than that, something more important and he had to find out.

AJ: Yuvraj, use any means you can, call whoever you want but find out about Sunny Agharwal’s presentation.

Yuv: Ji Sir, but if you don't mind, can I know why you want information about this presentation?

AJ: The smile of this Sunny Agharwal bothers me, he’s up to something, something bad, I’m sure.

Yuv: All right Sir,

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At the Gupta house

Guddan was sitting on her bed not knowing how to react after the news she had just received, her engagement ceremony will take place in a few days, in exactly 10 days.
She knew she would be married to Sunny Agharwal long ago, their grandparents were childhood friends and had decided to unite their two families through this marriage. Sunny and she share nothing in common, although they’ve known each other since childhood, he’s never paid attention to her, they stayed away from each other, she was too clumsy and lacked self-confidence and he was not insecure, he attracted attention naturally and he liked it. She had been pampered, she was so innocent but she was not a spoiled child.
She had some friends but Revati and her mother were her best friends. Sunny would probably never pay attention to her, she was not the kind of woman that attracted him, she was discreet and reserved, the opposite of everything he seemed to appreciate. They had grown up but things had not improved between them, all the conversations they had were professional because she was his assistant otherwise he would probably have continued to ignore her completely.
She was still lost in thought when Kaushalia entered her room.

K: Guddan beta what are you thinking? You seem really disturbed.

G: Nothing Maa, I'm very tired, that's why.

K: I know you’re worried about your engagement but you don’t have to be, Sunny’s a good boy and you know him since you were little, you know his family too, I’m sure you’ll be treated very well and we won’t be far, you can see us whenever you want.

G: Maa, I’m not worried about his family, it’s him I’m worried about, we’re so different, I don’t know if things could get better, the only time we talk is about work. You should talk to dadaji, I still have time, I’m in no hurry to get married.

K: Beta, you know I can’t do anything, he might have changed his mind if it was something else but this marriage is a promise he made a long time ago, it’s an old dream that’s about to come true, and he’s very keen on it, and he’ll never change his mind. You know he’s not going back on his decisions. Stop worrying, everything will be fine and I’m sure it will be one of the happiest days of your life.

G: But Maa, I don’t know why but I feel like a pressure in my chest, I’m anxious, I have a strange feeling as if something serious was going to happen.

K: You worry about nothing, everything will be fine, believe God, everything will be fine. Rest now, you look really tired.

G: Ji Maa.

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Yuv: Sir, I have the information you requested... Akshat got the information about Sunny’s presentation, what was bothering him was that the information he received made him think about his project with some changes but minimal. It was not possible that they had the same ideas and he trusts his team and, moreover, he had personally worked on this project and involved no one else. How could he explain that fact unless................

Suddenly, he had an illumination, everything became clearer, everything was now set up like pieces of a puzzle. He collected all the cases of the plans he had in his possession, and removed the plans. He had three and now he had two and the third was Sunny’s and the only possible explanation is that this girl who was with him, she stole one of his plans when they collided, it was obvious that it was premeditated, and yet he had seen nothing, he had not been suspicious when he saw her with Sunny, he had never thought that he could fall so low, he understood better why Sunny was so confident.

He was close to the disaster, if the presentation had taken place, his reputation would surely have taken a hit, he would certainly be accused of having appropriated the work of someone else, he was so angry, but he now had to find something else to present to Mr. Pratap and he was only 3 DAYS,

He could not return to Indore, it would waste time while every second was precious, he would rather prolong his stay, he will have to work day and night and then he will settle the score of this thief and this cheater.

Akshat had cancelled all of his appointments for the coming days, he needed maximum concentration, Sunny had gone too far, this time he had crossed the limits and he was going to pay for it. He had unfinished drawings in reserve, he would just have to choose one of them and finish it. He did not lack imagination but what he sorely lacked, was time.

He had chosen the drawing and was starting to work on it, his phone rang, he was so absorbed that he dropped without looking at the identity of the caller, it was Savitri Jindal, his Mother.

SJ: Allo

AJ: Allo Maa,

SJ: Lalla, where are you?

AJ: Sorry Maa, I should have called you, I'm still in Mumbai,

SJ: You were supposed to come back today, right?

AJ: Yes Maa but I had an unexpected so I had to postpone for a few days

SJ: It's nothing serious I hope

AJ: No Maa, nothing serious

SJ: how many days will you stay there?

AJ: About 4 or 5 days the time to settle everything.

SJ: Take care of yourself and you should eat something, I know you haven’t eaten yet.

AJ: OK Maa,

It was already 8:35 p.m. and he had been working for hours and he had not had breakfast even less thought of dinner, he had only drunk coffee. His mother knew him so well that she guessed he hadn’t eaten yet. He ordered from the hotel restaurant and was delivered thirty minutes later to his room, he ate quickly before returning to work. It was gonna be a long night.

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