Arhi SS: WITHERED!! (T#6) New Thread Link pg 1 - Page 72

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios

Hi JP !!

So from my busy schedule, I managed to send the chapter today morning.

If you are lucky, the chap will be up anytime today. If not, then it will be tom evening, or maybe Sunday evening.

Yay, and totally relatable AD is first.

Ps: since, I have read it a couple of times, Your work is managed by a designated editorial board? That's really nice. So do you write Fictional stuff as well apart from Fanfictions?

Originally posted by: Ecrivain

Uff, you have brought forth so many memories from the show. Arnav's brain was definitely on a holiday, when Shyam manipulated him. But I cant blame Arnav, because when I am vulnerable and angry, I am worse than him. 😆 That said, he really didnt think from Khushi's POV and wondered why she was involved with Shyam? Cos if its money, then Arnav was a better deal.

And yes, Arnav's of N's stories are far more mature and level headed, though I am not sure how this one would be when he learns about Khushi's love for Akash.

Lets see what N has planned for us all

I agree. His brain wasn't working because Arnav was all emotional. He acted like Arnav not ASR. If he was ASR he'd not alert snake or tell him what he assumed. He'd be planning his downfall. I don't justify his actions but his fear of losing his love and his sister made him act the way he did. He didn't even consider that he is bringing Khushi under the same roof as the snake. Deep down he knew she might be innocent. His eyes when she says hum tayyar hai please humari jiji ki shadi mat todiye. The girl proved she would put her own life at stake for her loved ones just like he did. They both are so different yet similar. Selfless souls who love deeply and unconditionally.

I am so into them even though I haven't watched them in a while. I need to stop. I feel so much could be done but the writing got sloppy later on but I still love them a lot because they gave me lot to smile in my tough times.

Chap gaye hai woh pal dimaag me ab mit nahi sakte.

Originally posted by: Savera84

In the show, his Dil was at stake. It evoked feelings for someone for the first time in 28 years. Khushi always asks how does it matter to you? He does not even want to hear "how does it matter to you if I had a relationship with Shyam?" He was guarding his heart and hence the silence on Khushi's POV.

My view.

Cheers....

Well, his dil and dimaag were never in sync. But true to himself, he didn’t give Khushi an ounce if hint why he married her though it wasn’t for his Di alone 😉

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios

Sometimes closure is not enough. And sometimes, closure is not needed.

Hain yeh kya hai 😔

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios

I know, Madame.

Btw check your PM. Gayathri is trying to reach out to you.

Done N

Reverted to her

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios

You have brought forth a very important aspect of Arnav's life, he is an emotional guy. An extremely emotional one, and when he is angry, he is hardly any better than a five yr old.

The rationality of circumstances had always evaded the great ASR's mind. He thought he was in control, but the fact is, Khushi and her love, swept everything away from him. And when he let rationality slip, that is when Shyam deceived him.

Well done Radz 👍🏼

So very well said 👏

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios

Hi JP !!

So from my busy schedule, I managed to send the chapter today morning.

If you are lucky, the chap will be up anytime today. If not, then it will be tom evening, or maybe Sunday evening.

Omg I cant wait for the update.

Hope we get lucky

Originally posted by: renee.bee

I agree. His brain wasn't working because Arnav was all emotional. He acted like Arnav not ASR. If he was ASR he'd not alert snake or tell him what he assumed. He'd be planning his downfall. I don't justify his actions but his fear of losing his love and his sister made him act the way he did. He didn't even consider that he is bringing Khushi under the same roof as the snake. Deep down he knew she might be innocent. His eyes when she says hum tayyar hai please humari jiji ki shadi mat todiye. The girl proved she would put her own life at stake for her loved ones just like he did. They both are so different yet similar. Selfless souls who love deeply and unconditionally.

I am so into them even though I haven't watched them in a while. I need to stop. I feel so much could be done but the writing got sloppy later on but I still love them a lot because they gave me lot to smile in my tough times.

Chap gaye hai woh pal dimaag me ab mit nahi sakte.

BM

Will come back to revert on this

Edit

Couldnt have agreed more. I always felt that Arhi were cut out from the same canvas, but were brought up differently and in different situations. Which is why their mentality and way of dealing with life is different.

The writing, direction and everything else got sloppy. It looked like after Arhi- remarriage the makers were just waiting to pull the plug on the show.

And I am so glad to the authors here who have given wings to our imagination, wrt, the show and the characters.

Btw, if I didnt say it before, its lovely meeting you 🤗

Originally posted by: renee.bee

Thanks N.

Agree a little boy because anger or not he was 14 yr old Arnav who had to grow up and take responsibility for his sister and hide his fear of losing his loved ones under the ASR mask. He let it slip in front of Khushi and felt betrayed because he let her peek into his real self.

I can go on and on Arnav and Khushi lol. I need to stop.

We cannot seem to detach ourselves from certain things, fiction and real. And IPK happens to be one of such vices, that has become the bane of existence for many.

Go on, Radz. We are here to support 😊

Originally posted by: TwilightStar_JP

Yay, and totally relatable AD is first.

Ps: since, I have read it a couple of times, Your work is managed by a designated editorial board? That's really nice. So do you write Fictional stuff as well apart from Fanfictions?

Yes, JP.

Typically, when an author partners with a Media/ Publishing house, its part of the contract to have the Editorial assessment done by their team of Editors. And I have no shame in accepting that they have done a fine job of editing the chapters. Yes, its not hunky dory always, sometimes I have to make multiple edits and its no fun. 😆

But overall its worth it.

Oh, you havent read the Intro page on the blog? Apart from fiction here, the stories are simultaneously published in French and Latin, in offline mediums. Besides that, I have my own content clients, for whom I have been writing for years now. It includes the popular Guardian Weekly, and some lifestyle, retail and realty magazines as well.

Non fiction has a long list of newspaper and journalism content. Abstract is on going work, and in fiction, there have been a lot of work in French, before I switched to doing fiction for myself. '

I hope that helps 😊