Broken Hearts#2 updated LAST PART on Pg 76 / 16-12-2019 - Page 26

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wow An Amazing and Surprising Chapter


Maan and Adi actually went to Canada to gather information

about Aseem and Sakshi and this is the reason Maan did not want

to say anything before because he didn't want Sakshi knowing he went to

Canada .

Mr Handa and Maan together made this plan to trap Aseem and Sakshi

so they were criminals in Canada and came to India to get away from jail time

Maan gets Aseem to sign documents and now both he and his wife are arrested

and loses everything too

Maan bought a gift for Geet though she was not expecting it

I'm just hoping with time Maan falls for Geet , I really want to see both in love and happy

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Di I do hope you feeling much better these days

No dear bilkul bhi nahi 😐

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Posted: 5 years ago

Such an awesome update sweetie:):):) Me doing my happy dance:):):) Super super super happy that Maan got rid of those evil monsters. What a masterstroke plan sweetie:):):) LOLOLOL:):):) I could see the whole scene playing in front of me:):):) Superbly written my sweetie:):):) Who were they playing with...the great MSK:):):) What did they expect? Geet was so happy that her father was Maan's partner & confidante in the whole plan. Just loved it so much. Finally peace and safety returns to KM:):):)

I loved the sweet family scene...Piyu baby with her parents:):):) And how cutely Piyu baby was telling her Uuuuuu about her day & all that she did:):):) So adorabble:):):) And Maan cutely cribbing that he could not understand Piyu baby's talk whereas Geet could:):):) LOLOLOL:):):) The How cutely Geet was asking what he has brought for Piyu baby and Daija:):):) OMG! Maan so cute...I loved his reaction when he found out that the clothes he bought was bigger than Piyu baby's size:):):) How adorable Piyu baby:):):) She was cutely investigating her Papa's bag of gifts for her & picked out a sweet doll:):):) Love her cute antics:):):) Super super happy that Maan also got Geet a gift. That hug:):):) Maan has changed and Geet has managed to make her own little space in Maan's heart. I am waiting for Maan to realise and confess his love for Geet...Soon it will happen:):):) Awesome awesome awesome:):):) Loved it so much sweetie:):):)

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Posted: 5 years ago

loved the update....

Great plan made by Maan, adi and Mr Handa..just like some detective...

geet and maan getting close....maan finally feeling somthing for Geet...doesnt understand what....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Fabulous update. Finally maan's plan with adi and Mr. Handa worked and aseem and his family is not only out of their home but lives also forever. Maan went to Canada instead of Paris to find about their past and came to know that they are criminals who are hiding from the police and are wanted in Canada. So their chapter closed forever and all are behind bars forever and without a penny, all thanks to maan and his plans. Loved maan's moments with piya and geet. Piya is simply adorable and a stress buster for not only maan and geet but for us also. Her antics are so cute and adorable. Good to see maan opening up with geet and getting comfortable around her. It was a pleasant surprise for geet that he remembered her and brought a gift for her also. She got so happy and excited that she hugged maan and thanked him and he didn't push her back which is a good thing and made both geet and piya very happy. Eagerly waiting for more. Hope now maan will think about his marriage also and give geet her due place in his life. Thanks for the pm dear.

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Posted: 5 years ago

excellent update dear , finally aseem and his family out of from their lives, he went to Canada and find out about them everything, all their bad deeds, with help of Canadian police he sends them where they are belong, prison

priya is so happy as her papa for her lots of toys he brings gifts for dai ja and geet as well

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Posted: 5 years ago

Waiting for next update

Please continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

PART - 38



Sun Dawn and with that it brought new hopes, and a fresh start of a life. Maan was in his gym leaving Piya with Geet. As usual Piya's morning tantrums was on the edge. Geet was trying to convience her baby darling. "baby no tantrums. You have to take bath." Geet showed her fake anger and Piya nods no.



"nai nai nai." Piya shooks her head in pace and when Geet glared her she giggled even louder. "hee hee heee..."



"hehehehe.... Aelo main ise dara rahi hu or ye madam apne do daant dikha rahi hai. Geet teri to beti b teri nahi sunti. Pati ne khak sunna hai." Geet cribbed to herself. "shona no bahana. Nai karni hai chalo." Geet took her and went inside the washroom. She scanned all around. "Main b bhulakkad ho gai hu. Where is her tub." She don't found her bath tub there. Geet come out and placed her in walker. "shona stay here. Mumma abhi aai baby ka bath tub leke, okay." Geet commands Piya so she didn't follow her. Geet locked the door and double checked before leaving. That incident leave a great impact on her. "Piyu mumm is coming quickly so stay inside." She cautioned her baby too as a precaution. Geet now start searching her bath tub every where.



Maan entered inside their room. Piya welcomed him with a smile. Maan took her in his arms and kissed on both cheeks. "Kya kar raha hai mera baby akele akele? Where is your Mumma?" Maan asked before he do any blunder like last time.



"Mumm Mumm....uuuuu" Piya raised her finger towards main door.



"Bahar gai Mumma?" Maan snuggle her and asked again to confirm and she again raised her tiny arm. "Good to Papa fresh ho ke abhi aaye." Maan placed her again in walker but Piya start crying.


She patting her arms in a pace. Maan bend on his keens before Piya. He caresses her head and kiss on her forehead. "Baby don't cry. Papa bas abhi aa rahe hai." He assured her.



Piya glanced him with her small eyes,like she tried to understand him. Maan kisses her and went inside. Piya raised her hand and call him. "Baby see Papa is here." He just closed it but not locked it from inside.



Geet came with her buthtub. Piya again start nodding no. "Baby see apka tub dhoondh liya Mumma ne." Geet bend on knees and show her Tweety. "Ye mere baby ka tweety. Tweety will take bath with baby." Geet waved here and there her Tweety toy before her eyes. She raised Tweety towards her and peck on her cheek. "See Tweety kiss my baby." Geet do everything to mend her. She gave her toy and Piya turned engrossed in her Tweety,that she don't bother what Geet was saying to her.



She went inside the washroom to fill her tub. Incident repeats but this time it was Maan who become victim. Both's eyes widened and he quickly drapped towel around his waist. Maan came out of shower chamber and come closer to her. Her mouth is still wide opened. His hairs are glistening with water and droplets rolling on his edged face. His well toned body and perfect muscles add more to his charm which definitely affected her. Geet admired him shamelessly. Not ready to move her eyes.



"Geet... Geet...." He called but she was spell bound so he called her in a louder voice and she shudder violently. "What are you doing here? At least knock to karna chahiye na? Or Piya usne roka nahi? Don't tell me tume uski baat samjh nahi aai." Maan was furious as she invaded in his privacy. He felt embarrassed to face her so he shower questions on her.



Geet was staring him spell bound so he asked again and she replied in casual tone. "Calm down. Why are you getting hyper like this. That day you too saw me. Aaj maine dekh liya. Hissab barabar." Geet stood strong and teased him.



"Oh so you wanna equal that matter in this way?" He scanned her.



"Yes. Now what will you do?" She saw his faded face and got a chance to teased him more.



"Look Geet...." He pointed his finger towards her in order to warn her but she gripped his finger and put it down.



"I am ready but first remove your towel,tabi to dekhungi na." Geet winked. Her eyes quickly flirting to him who stood emotionless a few feet away from her. Moving closer she had raised herself to whisper into his ear. "So kya khyal hai?"



Maan was stunned hearing her. His throat dried and he stared her only. "Geet get out." He just commands her to left the place.



"Aise kaise get out. Aap jaiye. Mere baby ka bathing time hai." She stood strong in front of him.



"Are to use another washroom na." He widened his eyes to scare her but no use.



"Why another washroom? My baby only take bath here. Aap jaiye." Geet behave stubborn.



Maan put his hands on his well toned waist. "Geet don't argue." He command her.



"Aap kyu behas kar rahe ho?" Geet leave no chance to irritate him. Finally he gave into her demand.



"Okay I am leaving. Happy now." He went outside and found Piya playing with her Tweety. "Piya baby mumma ko roka kyu nahi apne?" He asked from her to which Piya raised her face and grinned wide.



"Uuuu teeety." Piya raised her Tweety towards him and grin wide.



"Come Piya bathing time." Geet come out and took her inside. "Waise aap b aa sakte ho. I have no problem." Geet teased him again and left him stunned with her bold behavior. Geet enjoy his antics.



Breakfast time and both joins. Daija serve them and took Piya from them. "Maan bete bahut kuchh hua pichhle waqt me. Lekin ab hum chahte hai ki sab sahi ho or normal ho. Or iski shuruat aaj se hi karna chahte hai." Daija' s face was stern having a marks of past painful days.



Maan put his hand on her wrinkled one. "Daija whatever you want,just command me."



"Promise?" She asked to confirm first.



"Promise Daija." Maan promised her.



"Hmm to aaj tum Geet ko leke Mr. Arora ki party me jaoge." Daija commands her wish.



"Party? But Daija you know..." Maan was about to deny but she refuted.



"Koi par war nahi. Maan you promised me." Daija wasn't ready to take any excuse.



Maan glanced at Geet and she understood his turmoil. "Daija party to late hogi. Hum dono kaise ja sakte hai Piya ko chhod kar." She only for Maan's sake tried but Daija was all set.



"Or koi bhana hai? Geet Maan stop it. Piya ko main sabhal lungi. 5 dinn ki thi tab se sambhal rahi hu use. Samjhe. Now no more arguments. Mr. Arora Khurana Family k achhe friends me se hai or unka personally call aaya tha or maine ha keh di hai. So both of you be ready on time." Daija gave a sharp glare to both.



Maan left. "Daija Maan ka mann nahi hai." Geet told Daija.



"Beta mann ka kya hai. Jaise bana lo. Humesha dukhi rehne lagenge to kabhi khushi achhi nahi lagegi. Tum dono jao. Piya ki fikar mat karo. Geet bete kahi se to shuruat karni padegi na." Daija tackle both maturely. Geet smile and glanced at Piya who was busy in playing with all the food on table.



"Piyu Mumma jaye sham ko Papa k sath ghumi ghumi?" She asked for permission from her daughter.



"Mumm uuu" she screamed louder and smile wide.



"Lo Ji humari Princess ne b ha keh di. Ab to happy?" Daija and Geet both exchange smile and enjoy her naughtiness.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awsm update

Loved geet,she is in full form...poor maan he is being teased by her...

Daija is trying to make some improvement in their relation..

Looking forward to further..

😍💙😍

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wonderful update

Everything starts to to come back to normal.

Piya is not ready to take bath and Geet trying everything to make her ready . Oops the incident repeats but this time it was Maan 🤣 who was so embarassed that he doesn't know what to tell her .But Geet drooling him not only drooling but also flirting with him and enjoying his condition

Daija wants them to start leading a Normal life and so she wants them to attend a family friend's party together as a couple . Let's see if Maan will agree to this or not

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