SS:Magar ji nahi sakte tumhare bina CH-13 PG-62 11/07/19 (NIGHT LAST U - Page 46

Originally posted by: rammehra103

It is amazing di 👏

Loved how u explain the problem of kalyani during pregnancy

But at that part when he left alone for hospital..I was laughing hard l😆

Loved malhar and kalyani conversation and how anupriya is living a beautiful life with her little kid and a beautiful girl of kalma..their sign of love and pillu and kalyani part 👏

Hmari sabr ka phal meetha nikla di 🥳

Waiting for your new story

Leaving for the hospital part, was Darshi Di's suggestion... She wanted a bit of a funny sequence...😆

I think pillu and klallu part was a cherry on the cake kinda feeling... It is inadvertent that Pillu is and will always be her first baby... and that's undeniable.

I might not post any new story here, primarily because I am not religiously following the show anymore.

Originally posted by: asmitasb

This story has too much potential to execute, seriously. Every minute detail you captured was perfect and according to situation. You have portrayed relations beautifully. Be it Kalyani Malhar or AnuYani or AnuSar. The pain Malhar going thru with Kalyani shows how gentle and delicate he as a person. Lil princess Kiyara would be definitely Daddy's Darling.

-- Thanks a bunch for all the appreciations... I tried my best in portraying the relations as much as possible, I am glad that it was read in the same zest. Thank you!

Kiyara has to be a daddy's princess, because Moksh has already taken the crown of mumma's boy, and Malhar doesn't want his baby to feel left out.

The best moment thru out the story for me was Kalyani snuggling to Pillu and sleeping peacefully. The real meaning of mother she got to know is from Pillu's love his affection, he would be always her dear son and their raabta will be forever.

-- exactly! For kalyani, pillu will always be the first definition of motherhood, and nobody can take that space...

Hey, do not stop here. I'm eagerly looking forward to one more new story. Such capable writer like you can produce more n more gems. Cheers.

-- I wish I had that much time to write. For this year, at least, I ma super occupied. But if that's God's will, I shall definitely write more.🤗

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

Loved it ...a complete package ...❤️

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

It is such a sweet ending ..wid all d happy people n family

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Omg di kitna cute tha😍😍😍😍

Kalma ko baby girl hi hui & mallu ki wish puri ho hi gai!!!!!

Anusar ka baby boy wow!!!!!

Thankyou di for this beautiful story please do write more and more😄😄😄😄

If I can, then surely will write more.

Originally posted by: munnug

Superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb

Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav

its beautifully written

loved the update

Anusar get their happiness n KalMa get their...the perfect ending for this story ....

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Thanks a lot di...

U r welcome 🤗

Hope to see more new Stories of KalMa from u