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Posted: 5 years ago

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Happy republic day dear author

This line make me stunned at how long it's been since i had updated the story

almost a half year had been passed I honestly am sorry to make you guys wait for long

and dont worry for the updates we will patiently wait for your updates cause you have always regularly update your stories and I am really grateful to you for that but please think about you modern akdha ffs too😃

Sure I will take your advise and look into my Modern FF to it's just it's been so long so i kinda am off plot and line so it will take time not to sure but hope for best thank you for your Kind comment Vishu 😊

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After a long u updatedSuper update

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Still Jalal not changed

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Fantastic update dear.

Thank you Mamina as always for enjoying my work and commenting

What called two sides of coin , u described well in this chappy.

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The situation is out of control now for everyone. Let's see what happens next? Waiting for your update dear. Thanks for pm.

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Chapter 7

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Chapter 8

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Chapter 9

(Like normal says, in Special court of Amer, Avantika was listening her adviser, ministers suggestions on, water Crisis. Faced by Amer people, when a servant step in the court with bow head, she glance up at him. And gesture him to speak).


"Greeting's your grace"!"Your highness a messenger has arrived here"! By Mughal Emperor Abul Shah Nasir Ud Din Mohammad"! With his message for you"! With your permission shall we let him in"!


(Avantika nodded the Servant bow and walked out of the court, within next few minutes , he stepped in with Mughal messenger, who greet Avantika by Salam).


"Greetings your highness"! With your permission"! I will like to read out the message"! Sent with me with responsibility by"! Crown of the Mughal's"! Lord of his subjects! Hire of of Timur! Jewel of Babar! Son of Humayu! Merciful protector! Renowned in the Universe! The Emperor of Hindustan! Abul Shah Nasir Ud-Din Mohammed"! His majesty"!

"Heartily Greeting's from

Mughal Emperor

Abul Shah Nasir Ud-Din Mohammed

To Queen of Amer

Avantika Jagat Bai"!

"accept my heartfelt gratitude", to your kindness and wisdom"! For maintaining the peace with us even ", After whatever conspire between Amer and Mughal Empire"! I must admit not only Amer but We Mughal are facing spot on"! Our reputation as well"! Hence we can relate to each other circumstance very well"! Hence a proper meeting I wish to have with you"! To discuss about our decision which is sole intrest of our subject welfare"! I will be great-fully pleased it you grant my wish to meet me"! I wish to correct the wrong happen it's possible only when you agree to it"!
"Well wisher"
"friend of Amer"!

(The Queen Wonder about the message for while, then nodded her head in the response ,She will more likely to have him welcome. In Amer to discuss, about whatever happen as like him even she won't wish. To have her people on war-field. Hence the proposal of meeting accepted with all heart. The men without delay send a cavalier , with her message to Mughal Emperor).

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(Bairam khan , Adhgha Khan and Shahbaz Khan , were sitting on opposite couch, with Nasir in meeting room. Discussing about Afghan increasing involvememt in Rajputana, When the servant stepped in, looking at Nasir he bow and spoke).


"Parson me for disturbing your majesty"! A messenger from Amer "! has arrived with the reply of your message"!


"Let him in"!


(Spoke Nasir the servant nodded, then walked out to let the messenger in, within minutes the messenger stepped in. Nasir motion him to read out the message, after realising she accepted to welcome him in Amer, to talk about whatever happen between them. He smiled and dismissed the messenger. But his adviser had other thoughts about entire situation. Hence Bairam Khan spoke in firm tone).


"Your Majesty I suggest you"! rethink about your decision"! to be there at Amer"! when the situation is very critical"! They may even try to avenge the insult"! Their princess face cause of us"!


"I agree with Sir Bairam "! Your majesty"! "The involvement of Afghan's"! had Increased in Rajputana"! It's not safe to be there when"! Amer itself isn't sharing nice bond with us"! Our Enemies are lingering there"! Awaiting a chance to strike on us"!.


"I never change my decision"! in the fear of enemies "Move!


"We know your Majesty "! but it's high time you do pay heed to our advise"! as situation isn't favorable for us"!


"We should turn unfavorable situation"! Into favorable one for us "! by the meeting with them"!. We already let the Situation turn critical "! by not taking any decision and step fort to control"!. "It's high time i take responsibility of what had happened"! as Emperor and do something to clear the mess"!


(Getting no reply by him, both Sigh and look at each other, they aren't being so close to his Mind views. Yet they know once he take decision, none can change it , hence they give in, it's been hour they talk to him about it. Yet he didn't pay heed to them , So they ended up giving in and make arrangements for him to visit Amer).

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Punjab - One day later


(However Royal people's every action, always stay under surveillance , of their enemy ad friends. Hence the news of Nasir going to visit Amer reach his one of the powerful enemy, Shah Abbas Ali the Afghan Emperor. Sitting on couch savouring the taste of win with one of his most trustworthy men Khalid. He spoke with half amused grin).


"So the Emperor decided to meet Queen of Amer"! That's got intresting then I thought it can be"!


" I don't understand your majesty"! what he think he may achieve"! by having word with them"!


"Communication is key of success in every field Khalid"!. Right now both Empires Situation "! are critical in the terms of Reputation"!, it won't be

d if they ended up on War-field"!. But by the acceptance of meeting make it clear"!. both wish to avoid the war as much they can"!


"So is that troublesome for us "? your majesty"!


"Yup it is "!, so keep me updated about it"! we might lose the war with them "! before not anymore"!


"Sure your Majesty"! here a Message from our Foe cum Friend"!


(Taking the scroll from His men, The Afghan King read it , an evil smirk formed on his face, by the content in it. he knew well the so called well wisher , of him desire same thing as him. both of their intention are same and they will do anything, to fulfill the desire it's just matter of time. who may achieve it he or his well wisher. he call for his men and dictate them , some task to do and smiled evilly after delivering the order).


"You will be here on your wish"! but you will leave on our Wish"! for the place where"! everyone are destined to be at the end"!


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Agra - 2 days later


(The Emperor bid farewell to his land, with his most trusted security officer , soldier servant and maid. He was on his favourite horse Aslan, surrounded by his soldier in mid behind them, he named his horse Aslan cause of his dusky skin colour and his golden hair, possessing strength as lion. Patting the horse head for once he look up at sky. "I pray everything goes fine"! Inwardly praying for best , he gesture the soldiers to move. After three days of long Journey, five stoppage on way because of weather, Robbers attack they reach Amer. The welcome he recieved at Amer palace was nothing but grand, women bearing trays with earthen lamps on them, stood on both his side's, from the grand entrance of palace. The women had there face covered, the path to the palace seemed endless, the morning sun was it's full glow , it's rays adding to the beauty of the land. His skin felt dry due to the climate that the place had to offer. Nasir was throughly enjoying his visit as emperor , he was familiar to luxury and royalty which comes for having power. But here everything was changed he was in peace, when he reach at the inner entrance of palace, he unknowingly end up gazing at side up towards the open corridor. He felt someone is watching him from there , even though he didn't knew who but he gave a small smile . even if a servant watch him then to they deserve his respect).


"I am aware of the fact"! the time is very precious for you"! Like it's for any of us"! Therefore if you wish we can Discussion right at meeting hall"! Or the Emperor will wish to rest"!


"By the grace of almighty my journey was very pleasant"! I am very much fine"! So as you mentioned time is precious i will like to utilise it"! Let's have a word over the reason behind my arrival here"!


(Avantika nodded and move towards grand hall room with him, her soldier were behind her , minister and her mother was walking besides her, same way his soldier were behind him, And few trusted men walked besides him. When they stepped in the Hall room the Soldiers walking behind stepped forward in row and stood besides the couch in line, the royal move forward and settled on couch to talk, few Servant step forward and serve them drink).

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(A servant stepped in Jodha room , watching her sitting beside window. The servant ask in unsure voice glancing down).


"Your Highness "! are you ready to meet him"?


"I don't It's Her highness who agree to meet the Emperor"!, what the Princess who is disgrace to his people"! Would do at the Meeting"? which held between to dignified high powerful' people"!.


"But your Highness "! her Highness and grand Seeks"! your presence at Meeting as well"!.


"Made excuse for my Absence"! then I don't want to be there"!


"It's an order by Empress"! your Highness you really need to be there"!

(Glaring at none place, Jodha sigh in dismay and started getting ready with the help of her Maids cum friends . wondering about the discussion they might have at Court, she hoped everything went well. with this she headed towards the court, it's been one day, she did went to look for him , by the corridor but she didn't went further to welcome him, she made no move to welcome him with her sister . or try to meet him but she knew he is having his people, to get every information about Amer Situation , but now she can't delay or ignore him she have to meet him).

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Agra - 21 days later"!


"We can't make him the Emperor"! he isn't capable and he isn't even Royal blood"! Just a son of wet-nurse"! We won't serve him"!


"We Shall rather make Sharif-ud-din"! The emperor he is relatively to Royal family"! And he is capable as well"!


"It's better to Free prince Jalal "! make him the Emperor"! He is royal Mughal blood"! Capable enough to handle empire"!


"But he isn't worthy enough "! we can't make him emperor"! just cause of him being royal blood"!


(The Mughal were in absolute chaos, The Army Commander Bairam Khan, Chief Advisor Adhga Khan. did best to keep the News in secret , to control the situation yet they failed . After three weeks the news got out the , Sudden Demise of Emperor Abul Shah Nasir Ud Din Mohammad. They were arguing whom to make the Emperor , Adham Khan the milk brother of Nasir and Jalal, Sharif-ud-din husband of Mughal Princess, or the Deceased Emperor Shared same blood as him his brother, Abul fath Jalal Ud-din Mohammad. Definitely being loyal to Mughal Royals from long a part of council members, they weren't ready to serve the people who aren't royal by birth. But the Issue of Jalal being in Prisoner, by Late emperor doesn't make them get him out . And make him Emperor, the Court was divided in three part one Suggest for Adham khan, cause of Maham Manipulative skills. so one for Sharif ud-din for his good control on Scholars , one for Jalal cause of Bairam and Adhga not to forget cause of Dowgar Queen Hamida Begam. At the end they seek for time to take final decision , in the mean time they try to investigate about the death of Emperor).

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(The news of Nasir death reach to Jalal men, they were concern and very much worried for him. The absolute chaos in empire, conspiracy against royal happening in empire to gain the power and throne. Come under their knowledge, hence they disguising themselves as soldier, sneaked into Dungeon to help Jalal out. before Sharif Adham become Emperor and kill him).


"We don't have time Jalal"! we have to escape from here"! Before Sharif or Adham", take reign of Throne and kill us"!..


"Cowards run from trouble"! while brave face it"!


"Wise people wait to strike "! while foolish people mess everything "! get themselves killed"! Come on it's not the right time to face anything"! His majesty had been killed "! how no-one know"! Whereas just four day back even Bairam Khan had been killed"! don't you smell the Conspiracy in air"? by all this it will be end of Mughal Empire"! if in one those two evil heads become Emperor "! why don't you see it Jalal"? We need you the empire needs you"!


"And where you suggest"! we shall run off"?.


"you have us with you "! instead of running like coward"! we shall regain hold on throne by power"!.


"And they have Control on Army"! how do you think "? we can fought with them"?.


"The Army is in their hold"! cause they have no real leader to work for"! as soon you present yourself "! they will be on your side"!


"Fine let's get done with it"! by the way Idea how it's happen"?


"Not sure all we got to know is "! His Majesty had been killed"! more likely choked to death"! But it's strange to"!


"Strange cause of ?


He wasn't choked by anyone "! by using hands or ropes"!. As their was no sign of injury", found on his body"! he wasn't eating that he may choked to death"! "but he choked on his own spit"! why anyone won't struggle while choking"!


"He might been poison "! but as you mention there was no sign of Injury"! then it's cause of the meal he had"! but it's impossible"! As every food get tested by the one who prepare"! then poisoning him through food is out of question"!


"Well that's the matter to deal with later"! for now the Empire need your attention"! so get into action Jalal"! the council member might be in Special Court "!


(Listening his men words, Jalal Sigh he couldn't even mourn, over the loss of brother , he have to fight for his right, his Empire his people. Escaping from Prisoner wasn't easy task either, but with the help of his Men he did got success in it).

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Posted: 5 years ago

Amazing chappy Di

His brother died it's shocking

Update soon Di

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome chapter dear n jalal bother died n Adam n shrif trying to get the throne but royal office want jalal to nxt emperor n but jalal is in prison hope everything goes well n jalal gets his right n welcome back dear n thnxx for pm me

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