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Hi guys I am in double mind about the story line of the OS. should I turn it into a TS or should I turn it into a FF
if I turn it into FF I will make Nivedita and Anupam positive and even punish Tanvi and Maasi for their deeds
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Hi guys I am in double mind about the story line of the OS. should I turn it into a TS or should I turn it into a FF
if I turn it into FF I will make Nivedita and Anupam positive and even punish Tanvi and Maasi for their deeds
Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson
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Hi guys I am in double mind about the story line of the OS. should I turn it into a TS or should I turn it into a FF
if I turn it into FF I will make Nivedita and Anupam positive and even punish Tanvi and Maasi for their deeds
If you have sufficient material to turn the story in to an FF...please go ahead....there is nothing more a PreRish fan wants than a goof FF to read and appreciate...and your suggestions are already looking interesting...
I vote for FFš
An amazing start to something that could be a wonderful FF
My vote š³ goes to FF ā¤ļøš
Chapter 2:Target the Queen and be targeted
After those few calls, he called his PA Mehra who picked up his call at one ringā āMehraā he started. āYes, Sir any problem?ā Mehra immediately asked. ālistenā¦ā¦.āand the conversation is muted. āAre you sure sir? If this gets released in media Basu Publications will be completely destroyed. The Basus will never ever be given any respect in the societyā Mehra asked apprehensively.ā I wasnāt this sure for any deal as I am for this. They have hurt one of my closed ones (maybe the closest after Kukki he thought) and they have to pay for itā he said or rather stated. āOk sir it will be done ASAPā. Mehra replied curious to know who was that close one. āGoodāsaying this he cut the call. He went towards her sleeping figure. Calm and full of content. He always wanted her to be happy not only for their child but alsofor his happiness. If she was sad his heart would break. If she cried his heart bled. He remembered the initial stage of their relationship where she started opening up to him. How much she sacrificed for these vile people. But these people never appreciated her sacrifices. Her ex who claims to love her doesnāt even trust her. Their relation started with respect and trust and moved on to friendship.He had started liking her but maybe was in denial because of his past relationship with Kukkiās biological mother and also because she was still in love with her ex-lover. He sat next to her on the bed taking her hand in his large one gently caressing it. He sighed, he who never cared for anyone except Kukki was affected by her upset face. She was something, something different,something unique. Even when they werenāt close, he was always drawn to her innocence,her naivety most importantly her loyalty. With these thoughts the king sleeps besides his queen her hand clasped in his as sign that that even in unconsciousness he was there with her.
Next morning
The rays of the sun disturb the king who wakes up from his slumber greeted with the second most beautiful scene in HIS world his queen sleeping peacefully holding his hand tightly as baby. (First is obviously no doubt of his queen and his princess sleeping peacefully with each other) he was mesmerised with her cuteness. But it got disturbed as she woke due to the sun rays falling on her. Seeing him so close to her she got up and sat on the bed. He was caught off guard due this sudden reaction so couldnāt comprehend anything. She was confused and he was embarrassed at getting caught staring at her. āMr Bajaj you are sitting here. What happened? and why arenāt you in your nightsuit.ā She asked curious about this action. āUmā¦. Iā¦. I was keeping the pillows and the comforter here. yes, I was here for that reason. āhe muttered nervously.āif you are here to keep the comforter then why have you held my hand? āshe questioned him pointing at their clasped hands. He immediately removes hi hand āI need to freshen up. Byeā he says ignoring her question literally running towards the bathroom. All the while Prerna was amused at the cute antics of her husband. He was always a reserved person who never expressed himself. She started liking him but wasnāt accepting it because she loves Anurag or rather loved Anurag. But not anymore, she wonāt cry and be guilty of ruining Anuragās life because he didnāt deserve her tears after what he did to her. She would start her life afresh with Kukki and Mr Bajaj. Speaking of which she had to wake Kukki up for her school. Prerna realising this quickly got up from the bed straightaway went towards Kukkiās room to be witness to the cutest scene she had ever seen. Kukki was cuddling her teddy with a pout on her lips and sleeping peacefully. Prerna didnāt have the heart to wake Kukki up but she had to go to school so unwillingly she went up to her bed sat there tried to wake Kukki up. Keyword tried. Kukki was stubborn not to get up and kept her head on her motherās lap. After half anhour or so when Prerna couldnāt wake Kukki up she saw Mr Bajaj standing their smiling at both of them. āI quit you only wake your daughter upā. Prerna exclaimed frustratedly. Rishabh chuckled and went up to his daughter he whispered something due to which Kukki woke up at the speed of lightening kissed her papa and mama giving a playful smile to Prerna who shocked at this scene and ran to the bathroom. ācarefulāboth the king and his queen said to their princess who blissfully ignored their advice and ran inside the bathroom. āwhat did you say to her that she got at that very moment while I was trying to make her get up from past half an hour?āshe asked curiously. āsheās my daughter so sheāll listen to me only.ā He said proudly flaunting on Prernaās face. āyes, now I get it from where she has got this stubbornness from.ā Prerna gave back. āexcuse me I am not stubborn okā. He said. āeven I never said that you are āshe reverted. āanyways I wanted to talk about yesterday nightā. He said gently. Listening to the word yesterday her face fell and her eyes got wet. ālisten dear calm down I told you na donāt shed these pearls for those who donāt deserve it. love calm down āhe consoled ever so gently cupping her face in his hands. ātheyā¦theyā¦ā¦queā¦questionedā¦. ouā¦ourā¦ā¦.relationship āshe in between her hiccups. āI know sweetheart and the have to pay for it āhe stated calmly but only he knew how heās keeping his anger in check.āwhat will you do āshe confused. He sighed āyou have to trust me my dear that whatever I will do in these few days directly or indirectly I will do it for your happiness. You have to understand that they arenāt worthy ofā¦ā¦..āhe was cut off by her āI trust you Mr Bajaj I trust you to do anything for only Kukki and my benefit and for that I wonāt question your actions because I know my husband can never be wrong for his loved ones . he knew she trusted him but hearing it openly from here mouth was way to different thing. He was overwhelmed at her trust on him and hugged her which even she reciprocated fully. ānow whatever I will do in these few days to the Basus you wont question me and let me do whatever I have to do to them. āhe said softly still hugging her while she snuggled more into him giving her consent. After maybe a forever he broke the hug and kissed her forehead ācome down after you are freshened up and after Kukki is ready. āhe said ābutā¦.ā she got cut off by him āI told you donāt question me. Just comedown with Kukki and you will see. āhe stated firmly but with gentleness while she nodded. ācome fast okā āyesā. When he went out of the room and from above,he saw the Basu family eating the food his blood boiled. Making his queen upset they are eating their food blissfully wasnāt something he could digest but just a few minutes more then he will achieve his first step in destructing the Basus for their vileness. Thank God Tanvi and Maasi had went to a wedding of Tanviās friend, if they would have been here, they would have created obstacles in his revenge plan against the Basus. He wonāt destroy the Basus at one go because he wanted them to suffer, he wanted them to be insulted for their deeds which only he was aware of. And they have to suffer. Because they have woken up the kingās beast while making the queen upset. And when the beast is unleashed no one is spared. He doesnāt listen to anyone except obviously his queen and his princess. They will die a thousand of death but he wonāt give any mercy. They will regret even looking at the queen. Hope that Mehra has brought all the information required for Basus destruction. But first he will reveal the pregnancy secret of Prerna to the Basus because even he didnāt care what other people thought about him but he did care when it was about his queen. Even if they donāt believe it doesnāt matter because that child will always have only one father, Rishabh Bajaj. just a few minutes then time for some action. He thought smirking looking over the Basu family blissfully unaware of the storm which will destroy the whole (maybe not the whole) family.
Very well written..Intriguing update..
I like this savage Bajajš....he's uber coolš....just keep him this way for his enemies please....but then its a tough contest with that romantic Bajaj that he becomes for his Queen...the two sides of this Bajaj are equally endearing.....very very interesting update...now really curious to see the storm bursting on Basus....continue soon....
Aah!!! This is so perfect.
The perfect balance of Savage Bajju and Romantic Bajju... Please keep it like this...
Waiting for ur next update.
Lovely update.
Now that beast is ready to get back at the people who insulted his Queen, I am so eager to read. They both started to like each other but didn't conveyed it to each other. They are having these assumptions. Hopefully, they would realise this soon. He slept holding her hand. He is speechless when she asked about the sameš. I loved Kukki scene, she is loveā¤ļø. The trust she has on her husband that he would only do good for hours loved ones. Now waiting for the first attack from the King. Please do continue soon.
Thanks to all of you for such lovely compliments for this ffš¤š
Will update the teaser in half an hour's time