Broken Hearts#2 updated LAST PART on Pg 76 / 16-12-2019 - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
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PART - 31



Blissful morning. Life starts with a new day. Geet quickly brought milk before Piya awake. But like always Piya sense her mother's absence and awake. She put aside her soft blanket and glance all around. Her little eyes searching for Geet all around.



"Mumm Mumm.." She called her and when don't got any reply her face turn stern. She turned cranky easily if she doesn't found Geet near her after waking up. Piya pouts and called her many times. Her eyes turn wet and she was about to cry a loud,when Geet entered inside. Geet bite her tongue seeing her daughter's gestures, which clearly told her that she was angry. Geet thought to distract her and quickly. Geet quickly hide behind the curtains.



"Piyu where is Mumma?" She called Piya to find her. Piya's tiny eyes widened and she was listening to her carefully. Geet again appears to her,so Piya noticed her and then again hide near bed. "Piya where is mum mum? Dhoondho,mumma kaha hai?" Geet again raised her head,gave her glimpse to Piya and then hide again.



Piya smile wide. "Heeee..." She made happy sounds. "Mumm Mumm eeeee..." She crawled towards the side where Geet hides and touch her head. "Mumm Mumm heeee ihiiii" Piya felt proud as she found her mother.



Geet raised on her knees and face her baby doll. "Awwww my baby is very smart. Mumma ko dhoondh b liya. Now baby's turn and Mumm Mumm will find her." Geet glance here and there and took her stole. She covered Piya's face and start playing. "Where is my baby? Piyu hiding. Mumma trying to find her baby. Where is she...." Geet walked her fingers towards Piya and she removed stole from her head. Geet tickled her and she giggles more and more loudly. Piya was happy with Geet. She is true mother to her. Know her baby in and out. She read her silence. Hear her unsaid or broken words. In a minute she made her mood. Piya slipped towards Geet and hold her face. Geet nuzzle her tiny nose and she kiss her mother. Maan was came but not interrupt their moment. He smiled seeing both happy and amazed at their bond.



Piya saw him and raised her small arm. She curled her fingers again and again. Geet slanted her neck and found him stood behind. "Apko bula rahi hai." She told him and Maan join them. He too bow down on his knees and Piya kiss him too. Maan kiss on her palms and cheeks so was Geet. Then Piya embarrassed both. She patted her palm on Maan's lips and then patted Geet's cheek with same hand. Both stare her amusingly.



"I need to go." Maan tried to stood up but Piya start screaming.



"Uuuu uuuuu...." She screamed in anger as Maan denied to obey her.



Maan turn numb and stare Geet helplessly. Geet noticed denial in his eyes and decided to help. "Aap jaiye,main handle kar lungi." She was hurt but not showed to Maan. Geet snuggled Piya and Maan went from there.



After breakfast Maan went to office and called Adi. He told him about last night incident. Adi's forehead squeezed.



"It means they came with full homework. They know very well you don't accept him and tried to throw them out."



Adi was tensed and noticed by Maan. "Adi find some solution. I don't want to see that man in my house." Maan commands him strongly.



"I know Maan and I was working on this only. But we need any loop. Till,we have to bear them." Both think for a while. "Maan we are very small but may be Daija can help us."



"Nahi Adi first she don't know anything about that creep. Second I also don't want her to disturb by any kind of interrogation." Maan denied to involved Daija in all this.



"Hmm then we have to find some other way. Maan itna stress mat le. I will find something. Jada dinn wo us ghar me nazar nahi aayenge." He assured him one more time.



"I have full trust on you." Maan leave this matter on him.



Few days passed. He was busy in office but at home Rahul have his eyes on Geet. He tried to get close to her in any way. Geet was walking through hall area when Rahul grabbed her forcily into his room. Geet grew angry on his courage. "How dare you?" She asked stiffly.



"Easy Geet easy. No need to make a scene. Listen I know it may awkward for you but we need to cooperate with each other. Then every thing goes well" Rahul roamed around her and put his proposal to her.



Geet was confused with his words. "What do you mean?" She asked straight forward.



'You know what that's what I like about you. Jitni beautiful tum ho itni hi bold bhi." He compliment but it only enraged her anger. "Okay I come straight to the point. See I like you and I know now Maan don't have any interest in you." His last words alerts her ears. Her pupils widened. "Its okay baby no need to give this shocking look. Tum log kitna b pretend karo but I know he is no more interested in you. Normally man get bored from their woman after having a child. It's okay leave him. Main hu na. I will fullfill your all needs. I don't mind you have...." Rahul get closer to her and rubbed her bare arm with his rough palm. His eyes were dark and having lust to get her. He leaned to kiss her but she swirled in no second and whole room echoed with a sharp sound. She slapped him hard. May be more harder than he got from Maan.



"How dare you?" his eyes shot glares so was of Geet but before he do any mischief she slapped him one more time.



"Next time kuchh b karne se pehle ye thappad yaad rakhna. I love Maan only. Hope these two slaps are enough to make you understand."



Hearing the noise Sakshi to came there. She saw her son,who stood holding his cheek. "What happened?" She stare Geet suspiciously.



"Better you ask from your son. And yes told him to stay away from me and Maan. In fact all of you stay away from my family or else you can't even imagine what I will do?" Geet shot glare to both mother and son and left from there.



"Did she slapped you? Why?" Sakshi asked but he left the room while fuming.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

Awesome 👍 maan geet scene was nice and geet done right with Rahul update next part soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Nice update

Priya is cute

But Geet was hurt when Maan didn’t show his love to her

Maan was angry and he want his so called uncle family out of his house

Rahul deserve slap from Geet and it’s good that’s she did that

Let see what will Maan do when he know about this

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#44

Part 31

amazing update! thanks for the pm!

Liked Piya and Geet's bond! she is really Piya's mom! both are inseparable!

great that Maan admires them!

lovely family moments!

can understand Geet's sadness when Maan did not kiss her cheek as Piya wanted!

at least that Maan told Adi everything! liked Adis advise to Maan! I am sure Adi will find something soon!

of cos Maan trusts Adi!

disgusting Rahul! how dare he suggest that to Geet?

Her anger is justified! loved that she slapped him! he deserves this! she sets him straight!

hope Geet tells Maan!

nice that she warned them!

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Maaneet scene were good. Piya turns restless if geet is not around her

Maan wants that evil family to be out of his life

Rahul has an evil eye on geet. I think his hopeless act might bring maaneet closer

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice update... Geet n piya moments were so cute... That rahul is such a leech.. geet should tell this to maan... He n adi should take action against them soon...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Geet piya bonding getting more strong as piya now knows she's hr mom Maan loved daughter mother moments

Maan told adi everything adi trying to found way to get rid of aseem ASAP

Rahul got what he deserve

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Posted: 5 years ago
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maan jaldi kuch karo...........nehi toh woh log kuch kar denge..........


superb update...............


loved it................

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Piyuu and geet ,just love their bond

Hope soon adi get some loopholes

Geet slaps Rahul,he very much deserves that

❤💜❤

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks for pm dear

Love Geet and Piya's bonding ❤️

Maan talking to ADI asked him to find solution to this problem . Adi assures him that he will soon make them to leave KM

Rahul 😡that disgusting fellow misbehaved with Geet but teaches him a good lesson . But I know he is not going to digest this easily he will try to harm them again

Waiting for next

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