Ariya FF: Electrons Cannot be friends, New Chapters added Pg 101 - Page 52

Originally posted by: swaasp

nice part

omg shree and sweet 😆

loved the update

thanks for the pm dear

update next part soon

I really get horribly hungry when I am mad over something. I don't pull such sweet stunt though🤣🤣🤣

Thanks for the reply😘

Originally posted by: nitris23

Awesome n mind blowing update

Especially shree was awesome

Love it

Plz continue soon

Thnx 4 pm

I am happy you liked it dear.

Thank you for reply.

Originally posted by: kurkuresandwich

It was a splendid update.....

I don't know how to show my gratitude to you for writing such a master piece. I hope next time if we will see ARJUN season 2 (for which we all Ariya fans are eagerly waiting)the creative team should contact you. I just wish because there are writers like you who makes the Ariya even more beautiful even if we got less than 20 episode of ARIYA together.

Ooi Maa! What have you said😳I am glad you liked this story to such an extent. But all credit goes to the writers of the show who gave such amazing characters as Riya and Arjun who left permanent Mark's in our heart. You are right, less than 20 episode and they still feel like forever❤ I'd really love to see Shana working together if ever Arjun S2 is coming😍

You are simply mind blowing.

Thank you dear😘

I like how you have penned down all the emotions of Arjun, Shree, Rathore, Ayesha and Shakshi. (even if I don't like the character)

And RIYA's Character, thats a complete different story.

I am a fan of your writing.

I am flattered 🙈🙈🙈🥰

The Elevator scene was my favorite from the update.

I am liking it very much how you are building up the story how you are slowly showing all those pent up emotions of ARIYA.

Can't wait for the time when ARJUN n RIYA will be together.....

And last but not the least Thanks a ton for the pm..

I am really happy to receive such a pleasing response from you dear. Thank you so much for the reply 😘😘

PMs sent for next part.

O my god...that was one hell of a chapter...really loved the intensity of the face off....awesome, wonderful, marvelous...hats off to u dear...eager to read the nxt part...just hope ariya relationship take a turn henceforth...in a good way...offcourse. do update soon.

mind blowing one👏

loved it

thnx for pm

do cont soon.... eagerly waiting

Whoa! That was just a amazing and wonderful chapter. Liked it to the core.

First the emotional break-down, then the confrontation!

At such a turn of events, the break-down was quite expected. He poured out the turmoil, the guilt he had kept buried for all those years. I liked the way you described his vulnerable side, so well written.

It's said, Love fades away but never dies. Riya's love is something like that. Which she had thought gone but it was never. Both care each other so much. Liked the scenes.

Finally the confrontation. Arjun's desperation for forgiveness was fully visible. I think Riya was right, he had been stuck in that time. And if he really wanted Riya to be safe then why he did that in trial? Did he think she'll be good far from him, far from ETF's danger?

Will it take a drastic turn in the relationship now?

I liked the edit Di. Why you said so? Your all edits are beautiful. And I liked the yellowish mash.

Thanks for the PM.

Try to update soon. Eagerly waiting for next.

Great update

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

Thanks for pm

Fantastic update

Waiting to read next

Continue soon