Ariya FF: Electrons Cannot be friends, New Chapters added Pg 101 - Page 50

Really awesome chapter...liked d way shree vent out his bottled up emotions to arjun...arjun need this reality check to understand what riya must hv gone through...really liked it...will be waiting for the nxt chapter...

Mind numbing update

Shree's outburst on Arjun and rathod was eye opener to the both of them

Much needed frustration venting

It was an important part for Shree

Hurting ones best friend is something very hurtful for the other one

Sakshi's outburst was exaggerating yet funny, she is one stupid woman

ACP's convo with sexy salon reminded me of one when riya did the same and said Aurat ki kabiliyat pe kabhi Shaq nahi krna chahiye😍

Last scene was intense

Amazing update

Thanks for the pm

Cont soon

Loved the update

Thank you for PM

Arjun doesn't seem to keep his jealousy in check

Along with accepting it

Shree's outburst give him some reality check though

This Mohit is full on his Romeo mode

And Riya too is adamant on playing to hard-to-get

I hope Shree give Riya a chance at friendship again

Looking forward to the next update

Continue soon

Originally posted by: Mdmadona

Past was drastic

They didn't trust her n also made her stand as criminal in court n in front of public

No wonder she turned this cold

She shouldn't forgive them soon at alllll

A very very long way to go for them

Hated arjun's arrogance n rathore in trial n hospital

How can they expect her to be normal now???

I really hate both of them now, com sir, raghu sir also

Can't wait for the moment when she proved herself innocent n came out of this mess n her seniors reaction

Awesome update

Loved it

Cont soon

Anyone in her place would have turned cold.

That moment is coming very soon.

Thanks for the reply 😳

nice part

omg shree and sweet 😆

loved the update

thanks for the pm dear

update next part soon

Awesome n mind blowing update

Especially shree was awesome

Love it

Plz continue soon

Thnx 4 pm

It was a splendid update.....

I don't know how to show my gratitude to you for writing such a master piece. I hope next time if we will see ARJUN season 2 (for which we all Ariya fans are eagerly waiting)the creative team should contact you. I just wish because there are writers like you who makes the Ariya even more beautiful even if we got less than 20 episode of ARIYA together.

You are simply mind blowing.

I like how you have penned down all the emotions of Arjun, Shree, Rathore, Ayesha and Shakshi. (even if I don't like the character)

And RIYA's Character, thats a complete different story.

I am a fan of your writing.

The Elevator scene was my favorite from the update.

I am liking it very much how you are building up the story how you are slowly showing all those pent up emotions of ARIYA.

Can't wait for the time when ARJUN n RIYA will be together.....

And last but not the least Thanks a ton for the pm..

Originally posted by: kurkuresandwich

Part -15

Nice update

Riya is badly hurt because of Arjun😭😭😭

I just hope everything will settle down between them. They both are suffering. Riya 's tough outlook is only a facade she is hurt and she is in pain beyond imagination.

Feeling like hitting Arjun 😡😡

I always felt like hitting that guy 🤣

How could he do that how he didn't trust Riya.

He had his reasons but how justifiable it will be only time will tell.

Flashback was heart breaking how Arjun was not listening to Riya for once.😭

I think Arjun himself bought the flowers for Riya but still he is not being very expressive and verbal about his action.

I was literally crying while reading the story. Its so heart breaking and full of emotions.😭

Aww! I didn't intend anyone to cry but I am glad that I could portray the story in a way to bring such emotional outcome from you.

Looking forward to updates...

Continue soon...

Thanks for the pm..

Sorry for the late comment.

Dont be sorry yaar. I understand! 😳

Originally posted by: kurkuresandwich

Part16

Loved it.

The flashback😭

So The Flowers were not from Arjun😒

Sakshi😡

lieutenant is really Riya's boyfriend or ex boyfriend.

Ha ha Arjun n his curosity🤣

Continue soon...

Thanks for the pm

Something has managed to make ACP arjun Rawte curious. Ab usko haath se Jane kaise de🤣