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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sriyan

Hi.... Firstly a big sorry bcz aap 15 days lekar itna bada khoobsurat part likhi hai aur hum lalchi readers 15minme use padkar... Nxt update ki request karte hai... Par kya kare apne hume apke sameer naina se aise band diya hai ki kya kahe jab woh saat hai toh hum khush jab woh alag toh hum dukhi... Anyways ur today's update was splendid the way u connected it with the past... Was superb.... N thanku ki nupur apna fast pura nahi kar payi... 😜😜😜 u know ajkal updates ka bahot jyada intezar hota hai... Par padte waqt literally mere haath shake hote rehte hai... Ki pata nahi aur kitna dukh hai naina ke liye... Janti ho this phase is necessary for the story to go further par emotionally bahot bura lagta hai naina ke liye par aj nupur ke liye bhi... I agree sameer had a bad phase but naina also didn't have anything gud... Except diya n with it came pku at least sameer got his family under this pretext... Anyways a last request kya agle kuch updates fast fast ho sakte hain.... Taki ye phase jaldi jaldi Gujjar jaye abhi toh arvind ka bandaphod (secret) baki hai....😊😊😊bi.. Tc happy ganesh chathurti to all 🙏

Hello dear...aww that's so sweet!! I'm really humbled. Yaar thoda time zyada le liya maine I know, isliye socha update ko divide nahi karti...vaise bhi flow disconnect hota...it is seriously double of the usual length hehe.

Koi baat nahi dear...writers se demand aap kar sakte ho...aap itna pyaar dete ho itna encourage karte ho to yeh aapka haq hai :)

I'm sorry main itni regular nahi hun...but koshish kr rahi hun ki story ko ache se wrap kar paaun.

Hands shake hote hain...whoa...yeh padhke mujhe gazab feeling aayi...thanks yaar...mujhe ab ehsaas hota hai ki mere Samaina se readers ka kitna deep connection hai ..maine aisa kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha.

Naina ke past ka thoda idea diya and ab thodi thodi krke revelations karungi.

Noopur bechari ki koi galti nahi bas use Sameer se pyaar na karna tha...:( I actually like her character. But itna nahi ke Samaina ke beech me aa jaye.

And thank you for your wishes dear...wish you all a happy Ganesh Chaturthi as well!!

Love,

Sur

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Happy Ganesh chaturthi, Sur di🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Suparna13

How to write? Matlab Mai ye likhne pe to concentrate nahi kar pati hu.... aur ek Baar, aur ek Baar phirse update padh leti hu😭😭.

Awww!! 😳🤗Firse padh li!

Sur di, delay ki kya compensation hai...! Itna bada update.... Happy me🤗!! I am very much happy how the story progresses❤️.

Hehe good!! I'm happy to hear that .. pichle do updates me tensed thi na thodi...ab better feel hua I hope? Haan actually flashbacks ke sath story aur lambi ho gayi...I was thinking to cut it down into two parts...but fir disconnect hota flow mein...n yeh mera compensation hi tha...bahot late kiya na is baar! 🤗

Apt title 😍❤️. Noopur.... isse pyaar to hoga nahi, par nafrat bhi nahi hota, dubhidha. Slowly, she falls for Sameer😭. Mujhe na lagta hai Sameer Ko khud pata hi nahi what's going on his life. Iski batti to jalne se Rahi...🤔!!

Aww haan yaar... Noopur ki galti nahi kuch...vamp bhi nai hai bechari...beech me atak gayi hai dono lovers ke...Sameer thoda kamzor hi hai dimag se. 🤔

Karwachauth... Bengalee culture mein to hota nahi... Serials mein dekhi thi but itni detailing mein maine first time padha. The whole scenario regarding Karwachauth was phenomenal. How Naina is preparing herself for Sameer (indirectly hi sahi, subtle mein khush ho jaate hai), she did not need heavy saare, heavy makeup... Her simplicity talks❤️!

Hehe kabhi koi Karwachauth ke culture wala banda pasand aa jaye to kaam aayega info...😆Haan Sameer ke liye hi sab keh rahi thi...n uski simplicity hi uski khoobsurati hai...❤️...glad you liked that whole sequence!

That thodu past revealation... Preeti was getting prepared for shaadi... that time Naina was pregnant... Aisi dikkat kisi ladki ke life mein na ho😭😭🤧. Jab family aur closed ones ki Sabse zyada zaroorat thi... Tab to koi tha hi nahi. Na jaane kitne baar Maine ye single update read ki... Every time I just can't control my eyes😭😭. She faced a lot... aur abhi bhi jhel rahi hai. You mentioned some Arora Aunty... Abhi bhi bahot dots Milne baki hai. Arvind ka to alag hi kissa hai, bhai😳.

Haan yaar...bahot dikkat jheli hai Naina ne...n uski family jitni conservative thi to aur bhi socho...glad tujhe wo emotional scene pasand aaya...ab bas uski musibatein khatam hi hain...haan Arora aunty n Arvind ka qissa bhi pata chalega....😊!

Naina's endless talks with her unborn child 🤧🤧❤️. Indirectly, her teez and her prayer were not in vain... She felt relieved, Sameer too💕🤧🤗. Yeh pyaar nahi to kya hai. Ab to mujhe Aisa lag Raha hai ki Naina ki kabhi shaadi hui hi nahi Arvind se... Mujhe ek baat lag Rahi hai....

Wo mera khud ka fav scenes me se ek hai...Diya se baatein karna...haan sab prarthna suni uski bhagwan ji ne...saccha pyaar hai na! 😳

Mandir scene... Noopur is unable to doing pooja, sachi mein itni Khushi mili! Noopur aur Naina Ko ek saath dekhkar bechare Sameer ke Nazar hi dhundla Ho Gaya... Mai royun ya hasoon😂😭😭. Car conversation was soo good!

Hehehe...kya karein...car convo thodi fun type banayi n romantic...glad u enjoyed it.

Acchi to noopur Naina dono hi dekh rahi thi... Par Sameer ke aankhon mein, Dil mein Naina ka jaadu chalta tha, Naina ka hi jaadu chalega...😍💕💕.

Bilkul....dil ki nazron ke samne aur kuch nahi! Bas Naina hai! ❤️

Diya, I just love her sooo much💕🤧. She is the only solace for Naina. Sameer-Diya bond... This father daughter duo have my heart ❤️. Mere biology padhai mein jab kabhi PKU ata hai... I only remember Diya🤧💕. She just wanted that bottle... Bacchi ko kya din dekhne pad rahe hai🤧😭😭.

Ohhh PKU ka kuch naya info mile to mujhe bhi samjha dena dear! Haan vaise wo zamana bhi alag tha..us time cheezein itni easily nahi milti thi.

Noopur ki to vrat hi complete hui nahi... Thanks to her tiredness and Deepika! Arvind is not at home. Apni uske paas hoga....

Yup! Haan uske hi pass tha! 😆

And naina completed her vrat... She takes water from that bottle which was given to diya by Sameer 💕❤️🤧. Oh! It was subtle... But I feel content. Sachi mein, Sameer is soo lucky man!

Glad you liked it dear ..mujhe laga kaisa lagega logon ko aur Suman ne yeh bhi bataya mujhe ki Naina ne Sameer ka jhootha bhi pi liya!

Ab bas apni diya ko uski biological father mil jaaye... ❤️🤧🤧. I cried... But I love this update so so much! You create magic... just magic😍😭.

Mil jayenge dear...aww...so sweet of you dear!! Love you!! ❤️

I know... Bahot hi bakwas tha meri ye comment... But I really don't know what to write this update and what not. And this update will be my most favourite update of EU for sure❤️🤗.

Bahot acha comment tha dear ..ekdum seedha dil se tha! Loved it! ❤️🤗

And and again Happy Happy birthday Suman di❤️❤️🤗!

Will be eagerly waiting for next update... Intezaar mushkil hai.. Lekin is story ke liye kuch bhi😘❤️.

Awww thank you so much dear! ❤️

You take care, Di❤️🤗


With love, Suparna

Thank you for such a heartfelt comment dear! My response in bold.

Love,

Sur

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Posted: 6 years ago

Lovely update

Looking for next update

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi Sur,


First of all, I am glad you did not break it into two parts, it would have definitely affected the flow and continuity of thoughts for the readers.


You have used the Karwa Chaut Pooja and Katha so beautifully in such a symbolic manner. I did not know about this vrat in such detail, so it was very good information as well.


Shayad Naina aur Sameer ke naseeb mein itne dard likhe hai. Aur vidhi likhit toh talta nahi hai. Chalo dekhte hai what God proposes or disposes for them.


But what stood out to me in terms of humans nature or behaviour for almost all characters in this update was the instinct for self-preservation and the greys we are willing to allow in our decisions because of it.


Sameer is willingly misleading N. On the surface he is probably trying to justify his actions that he has already been upfront with her and told her about his love for Naina and his past. But he is conviniently not giving her the true picture that Naina is still very much a part of his life. I guess he is doing what he can to shield himself from the emotional pain associated with Naina. But while trying to move on himself he is introducing turmoil in another girl’s life.


Naina seems to have already decided that she will not tell Sameer about Diya. I understand her anxieties too. After all, Diya is the only person/family in her life. If she tells Sameer about Diya, he will want custody and he has a lot more to offer in terms of stability, both financial and family. But, Naina seems to be making a decision which is again about what she needs to keep going, rather than what is in Diya’s self interest in the long term. Also, not that she owes anything to N, but she is still taking away her choice to decide if she wants to get married to a man who already has a five year old.


But, such is life and human behaviour. So many of our choices are driven just by a need for survival. You have kept it very real. Obviously these two characters are fairly flawed and at their core live with a big fear of rejection. But, aren’t they already at a point where there is actually nothing more to lose? I feel so, at least for Sameer.


That bit where she woke up restless as he battled for life and kept the fast for him for the first time, was beautifully written! Bahoot feel hua Naina ke liye. I was already imagining her in labour and crying out for him. Did he ever sense her pain or turmoil?


N’s place in Sameer’s life and home, seems to be very much in place. She is making a real effort to do right by all her in-laws. Seeing Samaina, willing to move on so easily, so afraid to take a risk for the sake of deep love, it made me wonder.. would I be rooting for Samaina so strongly if Diya wasn’t in the picture? But, she is and at least for her sake, I hope things work out for Samaina.


Will be eagerly waiting for the next part!

Edited by SixteenAgain - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Suparna13

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Happy Ganesh chaturthi, Sur di🤗

Read n replied dear! Thank you! 🤗 And wish you a very happy Ganesh Chaturthi too!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina12

Lastly if fanfiction writers have freedom to write, i have freedom to criticize too. This is a free forum not someone's personal blog

u knw wht sach sunne ki himat ap ma ni ha...is story k bry ma ap khuch janti to ho ni...hum ya sur kis k fan ha kis k ni ye ap ko btna zarori ni samjhty so u better stay away from this story!! or ye persnal blog ni ha but ap ko yu hate cmmnts krny ka right b ni diya forum walo ny...so plzzz hmra or apna waqt barbd krny k lye dobra cmmnt na krna plzzz stay way!

Edited by hj42928 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina12

All butthurt preedit and Ayera fans seem to derive sadistic pleasure in bashing me for stating the obvious. Anyways keep writing your fanfics with sameer getting married to 19 women who cares.

This forum has no longer got samaina fans. All are Ayesha fans only here. Hope they lock it down for good

Yeah they'll do what they have to do. At least when the forum is shut down, people won't have to entertain bad mouths like you. It's not a blog that is why people like you are able to read and comment on it. And there's a difference between voicing one's opinion and being rude and using crass language. You must be unaware of the difference.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Yeah they'll do what they have to do. At least when the forum is shut down, people won't have to entertain bad mouths like you. It's not a blog that is why people like you are able to read and comment on it. And there's a difference between voicing one's opinion and being rude and using crass language. You must be unaware of the difference.

choro sur aisy logo ki moti akal ma khuch ni jata ap apna din or mood kyu khrab krti ho just report that person or u can block her also...

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Originally posted by: hj42928

u knw wht sach sunne ki himat ap ma ni ha...is story k bry ma ap khuch janti to ho ni...hum ya sur kis k fan ha kis k ni ye ap ko btna zarori ni samjhty so u better stay away from this story!! or ye persnal blog ni ha but ap ko yu hate cmmnts krny ka right b ni diya forum walo ny...so plzzz hmra or apna waqt barbd krny k lye dobra cmmnt na krna plzzz stay way!

Humera,

Don't waste your time on this person. She's one of the known bullies here... she's always rude n snappy and is really narrow minded. She stoops low to denigrate other characters and people just to prove her point (which she doesn't obviously). Isne story padhi hogi to pata chalega na ki Preeti ka story me kuch role hai bhi ya nahi. I think she's unaware of certain decorum rules on IF.

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