H×B OS : Vachan- Page 2

Wow... Amazing yaar...

Hope wean see such scene or at least something like this in the show..

This was beautiful and sweet mishti, just like your name 😳. I hope this is what will be shown. Both hs and babes are perfect for each other, inspite of all their flaws.

This was beautiful and sweet mishti, just like your name 😳. I hope this is what will be shown. Both hs and babes are perfect for each other, inspite of all their flaws.

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Wow... Amazing yaar...

Hope wean see such scene or at least something like this in the show..

Thank you so much! :D

CVs will do much much better ;)

Mish!!!!!  

Long time! How have you been?

About the scene, it is fabulous. I want such a Hanita conversation before they take their marriage vows.

Khudko khokar, tujhko paaya,

Aisa tera mol

Aaj jo tune haath lagaya

Ho gaya main anmol

My favorite lines..... love the os hope to see aisi Babita someday in show....

Originally posted by: shruti_luvs_msk

this is such a beautiful os. brought tears to my eyes. i could feel the emotions while reading this.

i wish the cvs show something like this. while reading the os, i could imagine it and it would be so beautiful if something like this ever comes on screen.

please write more such stories. would love to read.

This is such a lovely lovely compliment!

Thank you soooo much!

I'll try :)

Thanks again.

This was gorgeous Mahi! 🤗

I liked these little vows that they made. HS should have asked for some promises too. 😉

Just one little thing, if you'll allow. 😳

When you're quoting anything, all your punctuation are supposed to go inside the quotes. I noticed that you had some commas outside of them, they're not necessary. Put them all inside. And for dialogues where you have a period, question mark or an exclamation mark, you don't need a comma following it.

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

This was gorgeous Mahi! 🤗

I liked these little vows that they made. HS should have asked for some promises too. 😉

Just one little thing, if you'll allow. 😳

When you're quoting anything, all your punctuation are supposed to go inside the quotes. I noticed that you had some commas outside of them, they're not necessary. Put them all inside. And for dialogues where you have a period, question mark or an exclamation mark, you don't need a comma following it.

I'd been waiting and finally!!!!!

HS will ask na, perhaps later. ;)

Thanks a lot for the correction, Gur! I didn't even realise where and how I picked up the understanding that commas are meant to be outside the quotation. Gosh, such huge blunders!

I'll sure keep this in mind. :)

Originally posted by: LoveInAutumn26

Love it 🤗

Thanks a lot!😃