Forgiveness-Ss ( Chapter 10 updated on page 18 ) 10/02/2020 - Page 9

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Chapter 8

As she wentin cab he was standing there left shattered never in his wildest dreams he hadthought that the bubbly chulbuli Guddan who he thought was more like an kidwill make him suffer like that,that she will behave with him so coldly andbrutally but he knew whatever has happened forgetting it and moving again backwith him was not easy too.

He droveback to Indore,though he was hurt atleast he was contained and happy thatatleast she was in Indore.

When hereached home,all the family members greeted him he too responded Akshat tookblessings from Dadi. Tears started making their way out from Dadi’s eyes.

Akshat wipedDadi’s tears and calmed her.

Dadi(sobbing)-I can’t see you lalla like this,dekh jara apni kya halaat bana li hai tune. Aurwo ladki usse mai kya samajhti thi aur who kya nikali. I wanted you to marryher because I thought she will be the one who will bring happiness back in yourlife,but this girl is hurting you the most.I am sorry lalla I choose the wronggirl for you,This all is my fault Naa toh Guddan ki umar hai naa who itnisamajhdaar hai ki iss ghar ki saaas ban sake,but apni zidd main I spoiled yourlife,I am extremely sorry lalla.

Akshat- Nahimaa,kaisi baatein kar rahi hai aap,ulta the gem you have gifted in my life naaMain aapka yeh ehsaan iss kyaa naa jaane kitne janmmon main bhi nahi utaarpaaungaa.

Don’t thinklike that maa and jara Guddan ki jagaah bhi toh reh kar dekhiye,maa she was theone who has suffered and is still suffering alot maa.aap usse aise blame matkijiye.

Dadi- Parlalla.

Akshat toldthe whole truth to Dadi that how everyone in this home including him madeGuddan forced to make preparations of his and Antara’s marriage,when her fatheropposed Antara and her bahu’s insulted him a lot that too infront of Guddanunhone toh Guddan ko bhi bezzat karne main koi kasar nahi choddi,Bhushanjicouldn’t stand this he tried to take Guddan along with him but she refusedwhich resulted in breaking of Guddan and her Dad’s relationship.

Maa stillshe fought for us for our family alone against Antara,maa I just want my Gudanback,I know who bohot naraaz hai hona bhi chaahiye but abb I can’t live withouther.Maa mujhe meri Guddan dila dijiye.

Dadi- Oklalla,I will see if I could do something teri khushiyoon ke liye main kuch bhikar sakti hu………

And dadileft from there.

Akshatwent,freshen up and dined with the whole family.After all went in their roomsAkshat changed to his night clothes and was standing near the glass window wasstaring the moon.He closed his eyes and let his face feel the breeze,afterhaving an deep breath while staring the moon,he said

Akshat- Abbkahi jaa kar mujhe Indore ki hawa sukoon de rahi hai,now it feels like beinghome,Thanks Guddan tumhe nahi pata jahaan tum hoti ho na wahi mera sukoon bhihota hai naa jaane kitne mahinon baad aaj sukoon mila hi sirf yeh khayaal kitum issi city main ho itna sukoon deta hai toh jab tum mere pass wapaas aajaaogi tab kya hoga and I promise you Guddan I will bring that day too soon.

Here Guddantoo was staring the moon from the window.

Guddan- Humkabhi wapas nahi aana chhahte the yahaan Jindaal Saab,yahaan ki hawa bhi abbnasur ban kar chubhti hai,tadpaati hai issiliye toh yahaan se itna dur chalegaye the par aap, aap ne wahaan selautne par hume majboor kar diya.

Aana toh humkabhi nahi chaahte the par uss din uss saap ko dekh ke…..

She holdedher neck as like she was suffocating nahi hum aise appko kuch kaise hone desakte hai,par hum bhi kya kare hum chaah kar bhi koshish kar kar bhi nahi bhulpaa rhe hai jo aapne humare saath kiya.Nahi Jindaal saab yeh Guddan bhale hiaap ki zidd kea age Indore wapas aagayi ho par aapki zindagi main kabhi nahi.

She closedthe window and left to sleep,while Akshat slept on Sofa holding pillow andstaring Guddan’s empty place,bohot jald tum yahaan wapas hogi Guddan merepass,the place where you belongs.

The verynext day Angad came and greeted Akshat,kyaa bat hai bhai kal se notice kar rahahu, bade khush hai aap kal se aisa bhi kya ho gaya bhai Agra waali deal mainand the manager told me that you checked out from hotel last week,toh where wasyou?

Akshat justhugged Angad and narrated the whole incidence happened in Agra. Angad too washappy matlab Bhabhi man gayi?

Akshat- nahiAngad abhi nahi but I promise you soon mana lunga…aakhir jayegi kahaan….

Angad- Butbhai abb Bhabhi kahaan hai?I too wanna talk with her. It’s been months I haven’ttalked with her.

Akshat- Whyare you asking me? Akshat- Why are you asking me? You know your answers andwhat you have to do Angad.

Angad- Okbhai.

Angad tookout his mobile phone and called Revti.

Akshat askedhim to keep the phone on speaker,as he too wanna listen his Guddan’s voice andAngad followed his instructions.

Revti pickedup the call.

Revti-Hello.

Angad- Kaisihai mohtarmaa aap,aap toh hume bhool hi gayi.

Revti- Aisibaat nahi hai Angad ji, you know na papa kitne naraaz ho jaate hai kisi Jindaalka naam sun kar hi.

Achha whydid you called me? You know naa I can’t talk with you agar papa ko pata chalgaya toh?

Angad-Chalne do…main nahi dartaa unse, Pyaar kiya hai koi chori nahi.

Revti- bassbass abb makhaan lagana band kijiye.

Angad-Revti..

Revti- Achhaabb sahi sahi bataiye why did you actually called me?

Angad- Haatoh kya kartaa abb aap toh apni behen kea ate hi hume bhool gayi so I had toremember you achha abb nakhre chodo aur meri bhabhi se baat karao.it has beenmonths unse baat nahi huyi hai.

Revti- Kyaa?

I guessthere is some misunderstanding,Di yahaan nahi hai.

Angad- Revtinahi I am not in mood of mazaak toh apna mazaak band karo aur meri Bhabhi sebaat karao.

Revti-Mazak? Koi Mazak nahi kar rahi hu main.Sach main Di yahaan nahi hai,aur yahaankya Di kahaan hai kisiko nahi pata.

Akshat wasleft shocked.He replied.

Akshat- NahiRevti I know very well Guddan wahi hai Dekho agar Guddan ne kahaan hai tumseaisa kehne ke liye toh please samjhao usse aise na kare.

Revti- Nahijiju why would I lie?Agar di ne bhi kahaan hota toh hi nahi kehti Di sach mainyahaan nahi hai and not only me but family main se bhi kisiko nahi pata ki dikahaan hai?

Akshat toldRevti everything happened in Agra and the way she has returned back to Indore.

Revti-Indore ka toh nahi pata jiju but Di ghar par toh nahi hai…………..

TheEnd!!!!!!!!

Pata haijutiyaa marne ka dil kar raha hai as Akshan scenes nahi hai isme. Toh ab hipata chalega how I writes ya kitni bakwaas karti hu main? Meri bakwaas aaplogon ko achhi bhi lagti hai ya nahi………etc etc questions. Toh let’s see.

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