Forgiveness-Ss ( Chapter 10 updated on page 18 ) 10/02/2020 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Akshan scene nhi hai to qa hua mjhe akshat ka tadapna bahut accha laga😈

Dadi i just hate her she is really a selfish women🤢

Bechare akshat ko ek aur jhatka ab next part ke liye wait nhi ho rha mjhse plz plz continue soon

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Gosh!!dadi is unexpectable..hdd h dadi ki😡...it was an awesome chapter..loved it..guddan kaha gai hogi??🤓plzz crack the suspense soon 😃

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Chapter 9

As the call ended,Akshat broked down and went on knees, an trail of tears started rolling down from his cheeks,Angad holded him and tried to encourage him.

Angad- nahi bhai, you can't break like this,if you will break like this then who will bring guddan bhabhi back in home.Who will handle this house?, this family?

Akshat- Nahi Angad , I know my Guddan very well if she had told in Agra that she is leaving for indore then she has,this means she is in Indore itself. But the question is Where? Aakhir kahaan?

Angad- Agar aisa hai na bhai toh think this has went much easier for you if Bhabhi really is in Indore,because

A It's our own city,many people knows you and Bhabhi we had much better contacts in Indore and the area to be searched has went too minimal,So bhai get encouraged and let's find Bhabhi asap.

Akshat just looked at him proudly, He put his hands on his shoulder and said

Akshat- When did you grown up much? Angad,tum kab itne bade ho gaye kuch pata hi nahi chala, itne bade ke aaj apne bade bhai ko sambhal rahe ho, I am proud of you and both of them hugged.

2 days later.@ RadhaKrishna mandir.

Akshat holding his hands infront of Lord Krishna's idol eyes fully closed.

Akshat(prays in mind)- You know very well what Guddan means for Akshat in his life. The way you are incomplete without Radha, I am without my Guddan. Please give her back to me. I won't be able to live without her.

It's been said ki aaj radhashtami ke din aapse jo mango aap de dete hai. , Aaj aap sabki manokaamnayein puri karte hai,toh meri bhi kar dijiye. Aaj pyaar ke iss parv main mujhe apne pyaar se mila dijiye,mujhe apna pyaar meri Guddan lauta dijiye.

And from behind Guddan is praying in mind, she is exactly behind Akshat.

Guddan- Pyaar ke iss parv main har pyaar karne waale ki manokamnayein puri kijiyegaa lord Krishna, Jindaal saab ko khush rakhiyegaa aur humare pure pariwaar ko bhi. Warna aap toh jaante hi hai iss ke liye toh Guddan aap se bhi lad jayegi. Lord Krishna aaj humara interview hai, sab theek kijiyegaa I need this job immensely, aakhir kab tak kisi aur par boj bane rahenge,Ok bye ab late ho jayenge baaki baatein phir kabhi kar lenge.

Guddan turns back and a breeze came He could smell her,he can feel her Guddan a husk echoed from his throat. He turned back but couldn't find anyone or anything.He again turned back and closed his eyes and thanked the almighty for the ehsaas. Baass abb iss ehsaas ko bhi jaldi se jaldi haqiqqat bana dijiye. Jiss Tarah aapka pyaar humesha ke liye aapke pass hai na mujhe bhi apna lauta djiye. Thankyou! and he went from there.

In the evening, Guddan again came back in Mandir with flowers and thanked lord Krishna.

Gudddan- Thankyou,thankyou lord Krishna aaj toh manna padegaa aapko wakai aaj aapse jo maango aap woh aap de dete ho. Thankyou jo aapne yeh job dila diya. Hum promise karte hain aapse ki aapko niraash nahi karenge pure dil se mehnat karenge. Aur lord Krishna yeh choccolates aapko thanks kehne ke liye.

and Guddan's facial expression changes tears get formed in her eyes. Lord Krishna chaahte toh hum mithaaiyaan hi laana chaahte the par aap toh jaante hai na ki Jindal saab humare saath nahi hai warnaa.

AAj toh aapko pakka motichoor ke ladoo khilaate who bhi Jinda saab ke haath ke bane huye. She wiped her tears and said par koi baat nahi isske compensation ke liye yeh chocolates hai naa.

At the moment Panditji came and handed guddan Prasad, She was amazed to see ladoo,she took it in her hands and went out on the stairs of mandir she tasted the prasad and tears started making their way out from her eyes to cheek. She bursted into tears and uttered Jindaal saab…..

Flashback...…...

Guddan is trying to make ladoos since early morning but has failed, Though she has tried all the possible ways out but has miserably failed.She started crying,Akshat who was making his way out nearby kitchen listened her sob and came inside kitchen. His heart went through severe pain seeing his guddan crying and sobbing.

He just went nearby, and as he put his hand on her shoulder she immediately hugged him and crying.

Akshat- Hey,guddan,what happened? Aise ro kyun rahi ho. He made her quite away and wiped her tears, guddan sobbingly Who Jindal saab kal humne naa Janmashtami ke liye prasad ke ladoo bananae ki responsibility li thi as Dadi told ki aap kabhi bhi prasad ki cheejein nahi banaate,so humne socha aap nahi toh hum h sahi. But dekhiye naa yeh toh hum se ban hi nahi rahe subah se bana rahe hai aur abb toh pooja ka bhi time ho jaayegaa…..she said sobbingly.

Akshat wiped her tears and said bass itni si baat.

Akshat- Indore ke sabse bade chef ki biwi aur ladoo na banne par ro rahi hai.Don't forget AAp Mrs Guddan Akshat Jindal hai.

He took out his blazer folded his sleeves and said,

Akshat- Chaliye Mrs Guddan Akshat Jindal aaj aapko ladoo banana sikhaate hain.He holded her from her stomach and rested his chin on her shoulder.

Guddan- Kitchen hai Jindal saab, koi dekhegaa toh kya sochegaa?

Akshat- Yahi that how much I love my wife.

Guddan- Kyaa Jindal saaab kuch bhi, sach main koi aa jayegaa.

Akshat- AAne do, I don't care Ghar mera,kitchen mera biwi bhi meri aur pyaar bhi mera kab kahaan kaise jataana hai yeh bhi main hi decide karungaa. and waise bhi you have taken the responsibility of ladoos toh ladoo toh tumhare haath se hi banenge.

His fingers crawling on her stomach was giving her goosebumps while he holded her one hand and taught her to make ladoos.. As he was going to add almond powder in it. Guddan stopped him

Guddan- Yeh kya kar rahe hain Jindaal saab? Motichoor ke ladoo hai inme badaam nahi kaju yaa magaj dalta hai.

Akshat resting his both hands on her shoulders. Mrs Guddan Akshat Jindal yeh naa Chef Akshat Jindal ki secret tip hai iss main bilkul thodi si mix karo and you will get the difference in taste.

They both made ladoos Guddan smiled,while he said

Akshat- Aindaa aise choti choti baat par rona mat, I hate your tears and they are more precious, so aise choti choti baat par inhe waste mat kiya karo……...

Present-

Jindaal saab aap humare saath na ho kar bhi saath hi hai naa.,Thankyou lord Krishna aapne toh humare bina bole hi humari muraad puri kar li. Shaayaad koi restraint se laa kar Chadha gaya hogaa.

But in the end Jindaal saab ke haath ke bane ladoo aaj chadh hi gaye prasad main.

She wiped her tears and made her way out to her house as she has an immediate joining of tommorrow.

Finally mil gaya thank you Gayu🤗

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Finally mil gaya thank you Gayu🤗

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