AkshAn OS: Barish

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I will upload my SS & FF soon. For now enjoy this.

Jindal House

After Guddan returned from hospital, Akshat took special care of her & now she was perfectly fine. As she was away from her family for a long time she went to her house for a week. In this one week Akshat was hopelessly missing her. He was sitting in his room & working in his laptop but his thoughts were occupied about Guddan, he still couldn't tell her how much he loves her.

AJ(in mind):Paanch din bara ghante pachas minute hogaye Guddan ko gaye aur in paanch dino mein Guddan ne ekbar bhi call nehi kiya.. fikra nehi hai kya meri usko

Just then Akshat's phone rang & he thought it was Guddan but it was a client. After talking on phone he kept his phone.

AJ(in mind):Jab use meri yaad nehi ayi mein kyun use yaad karun

Again Akshat's phone rang & he picks up without looking who was calling.

AJ:What

G:Arey gussa kyun horaha hai

Akshat realizes it was Guddan & he smiles.

AJ:Guddan?

G:Aur nehi toh kaun

AJ(acting angry):Yaad ageyi issh dost ki

G:Arey gussa kyun kar rahe hai.. hume toh sabko yaad arahi thi isliye toh call kiya

AJ:Aur meri?

G:Apki toh sabse zyada yaad ayi hai

AJ(smiles):,Sach?

G(smiles):Muuch

Akshat was smiling like a idiot.

G:Acha humne isilye call kiya tha hum aaj raat ko wapas ajayenge bash late hoga

AJ:Tum kyun akeli ayogi mein tumhe leke ayunga

G:Iski koi zaroorat nehi hai hum

AJ:Bash kehdiya

G:Acha baba thik hai.. Abhi rakhti hun

Saying this both cuts the call. Akshat was happy that finally Guddan was returning home & Guddan was smiling as the reason she came to her house was fulfilled.

G(in mind):Inn paanch dino mein ek cheez toh hume pata chal gaya ki issh Guddan se apse dur rehna na ho payega Jindal Saab.. pata nehi par kyun inn paanch din apke bina paanch saal jaise lage issiliye hum thoda jaldi apke pass wapas jaraha hai.. aur aaj hi hum apko apne dil ki baat kehdenge

With this thoughts she started her packing.

Night

As promised Akshat picks Guddan & were there way to Jindal House. During the drive both were restless to speak.

AJ&G:Woh

AJ:Tum pehle bolo

G:Nehi AAP batayi

AJ:Ghar pe sab kaise hai?

G:Sab thik hai

AJ(in mind):Mujhe abhi himat kar ke batadeni chahiye apni dil ki baat

AJ:Guddan mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai

G:Haan batayi

AJ:Guddan woh..

G:Haan

AJ:Guddan mein woh..

G(in mind):Jindal Saab ab bata dijiye

AJ:Guddan mein.. I.. Lo

All of a sudden car stops. Akshat tries to start the car but it fails.

G&AJ(in mind):Issh car ko bhi abhi baand hona tha

AJ:Lagta hai ki car khrap hogayi hai

G:Koi baat nehi ek kaam karte hai ghar yahan se zyada dur nehi hai chal ke jaaten hai

AJ:Haan wahi karte hai

Both of them got down from car, locks it & started walking towards home. As they were walking Guddan remembers Akshat was saying something.

G:Jindal Saab aap kuch kehrehe the

AJ:Haan woh

Both stops & Akshat faces her.

AJ(in mind):Kehi deta hun

AJ:Guddan mein yeh kehraha tha ki

Guddan was waiting for him to say when all of a sudden it started raining. Akshat looked around & saw a big tree & quickly went towards it. Guddan just stood under the ran facing her face upwards, closing her eyes.

AJ:Guddan idhar aao barish mein bhigogi ki toh tabiyat khrap hojayegi

Guddan looked towards him and nodded her head in negative.

G:Arey Jindal Saab saal ki pehli barish hai aap bhi ayi acha lagega

Saying this she started to dance in rain. Akshat looks at her lovingly.

AJ:Iska kuch nehi hosakta

Akshat started walking towards Guddan who was busy to dance. He went near her & pulls her holding her waist, Guddan hits Akshat's hard chest & looks at him. Akshat with another hand removes her hair which was falling on her face & caressed her cheek.

AJ:Tum kabhi bhi meri baat nehi manogi nehi na

Guddan nodded her head in negative. Akshat brings his face towards her face & looks into her eyes for permission. Guddan just closes her eyes & Akshat further any delay kiss her. Both were showing their love in that kiss. After few moments both broke the kiss & Akshat keeps his forehead on her forehead.

AJ:I love you Guddan

G:I love you too Jindal Saab

And both of them hugs each other.

Later

Dadi & Laxmi were sitting in hall & talking with each other.

Da:Kitni der hogayi yeh dono ab tak nehi aye

L:Arey chinta maat kijiye Dadi ate hi honge

Just then Guddan & Akshat entered fully drenched. Dadi & laxmi went to them.

Da:Yeh kya lalla tum dono bheeg kaise gaye

AJ:Woh gari khrap hogayi toh chal ke ana para

Laxmi noticed Guddan was in a disheveled condition.

L:Aye haye sasuma aate samay kisi se maarpit karte huye arahe the kya aisi halat

Guddan & Akshat realized what Laxmi was talking about.

G:Woh aate samay hum gir gayein toh bash issiliye

Dadi & Laxmi noticed Guddan's lipstick marks on Akshat's lips & her eyes got wide. Guddan noticed their reaction & looked at Akshat face & was stunned to see the lipstick mark.

G(in mind):Arey bapre yeh inn dono ne yeh kya dekh liya

Akshat by this time also realizes what had happened he started rubbing his chin.

G(embarrassed):,Hume bohat thand lag rahi hai hum fresh hone jate hai

Saying this Guddan runs to room.

AJ(embarrassed):Mujhe bhi fresh hona hai

He also leaves from there quickly. After they left Dadi & Laxmi looked at each other & started laughing.

The End

Sorry for grammatical mistakes. Hope you guys like it.

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Akshan kiss☺️...ho ske to ek part aur likh do...about dadis teasing...loved it....❤️

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It was so sweet

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tum can update karoge😭

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