KALMA FF - A promise .... Part 5 updated. Read author note pg 17 - Page 13

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Originally posted by: Vermilion

Teaser chapter 5

When there is a dark inside you and outside you. There will be a ray of hope in your heart ignited by lord . This ray is very small but a lot brighter than anything. This can lighten up the life of many.

This same ray of hope is ignited in sarthak heart. According to Indian constitution they can't borrow atharv eyes for Anupriya.

Sarthak was standing with kalma.

Kalyani ::: Kaka aap kaise bina chachi ki permission ke ye kaise karoge. ( Still tears in her eyes).

Malhar ::: Kaka kya chal raha hai apke dimaag pe.

superb teaser Neera

will wait for chaptert

hanks for writing

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Teaser chapter 5

When there is a dark inside you and outside you. There will be a ray of hope in your heart ignited by lord . This ray is very small but a lot brighter than anything. This can lighten up the life of many.

This same ray of hope is ignited in sarthak heart. According to Indian constitution they can't borrow atharv eyes for Anupriya.

Sarthak was standing with kalma.

Kalyani ::: Kaka aap kaise bina chachi ki permission ke ye kaise karoge. ( Still tears in her eyes).

Malhar ::: Kaka kya chal raha hai apke dimaag pe.

Seems so exciting

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I also want to know...kya karne wale hai Malhar ke Kaka

Originally posted by: Vermilion

Thank you purru ,what is your name. I will pm when I post next chapter

My name is puru only bas yahan ke name mein extra UU hain 🤣

And what is yours?

Yes sure, thanks alot

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My name is puru only bas yahan ke name mein extra UU hain 🤣

And what is yours?

Yes sure, thanks alot

My name is Neera

Originally posted by: Vermilion

My name is Neera

Hello neera 😀

Chapter 5

Ff ::: A promise to keep you with me till my death overcome my love for you.

When there is a dark inside you and outside you. There will be a ray of hope in your heart ignited by lord . This ray is very small but a lot brighter than anything. This can lighten up the life of many.

This same ray of hope is ignited in sarthak heart. According to Indian constitution they can't borrow atharv eyes for Anupriya.

Sarthak was standing with kalma.

Kalyani ::: Kaka aap kaise bina chachi ki permission ke ye kaise karoge. ( Still tears in her eyes).

Malhar ::: Kaka kya chal raha hai apke dimaag pe.

Sarthak ::: Malhar aur Kalyani Mai tumko sab badme samjhata hoo. Abhi malhar tum atharv ko hospital refer ko Kar do. Vaha Dr Sahil ko kehna ki Vo atharv ki eyes ko preserve Kar dey.

He continued,

Sarthak ::: Kalyani tum Anupriya ji ke pass jao. Aur unka khayal rakhna. Aur Maine unhe yeh nahi bataya ki unki aankhon ki roshni chali gayi. Maine bas itna kaha hai ki unki aankhein do din me sahi ho jayegi.

Kalyani ::: Theek hai kaka, aap par vishwas hai aap aai ko kuch nahi hone doge. Mai jaati hoo.

Malhar ::: Haa Kalyani Mai bhi Sahil ke pass jata hoo.

Sarthak ::: Mai bhi chalta hoo. Mujhe bahoot kahi hai.

Malhar went to Sahil and ask him to remove atharv eyes and preserve them. Sahil preserve atharv eyes. This all done without any knowledge of Pallavi. All family members are still admitted in neighbouring hospital.

Kalyani with a heavy heart went to anu ward. She slowly opens door.

Anu ::: Kaun hai. Saarthak ji aap ho kya. Kuch boliye na.

Kalyani ::: Nahi aai, Mai Kalyani hoo . Kaka kam se bahar gaye hai.

Anu ::: Are Kalyani udhar kya khadi hai. Idhar Beth.

She ( anu) tried to sit but her body moved to a bit more towards right of bed. She loose her balance. She was about to fall. But Kalyani take a hold of her.

Kalyani ::: Are aai abhi tumhe nahi dikh raha hai. Apna dhyaan rakho. Abhi gir jati toh.

Anu ::: Aise kaise gir jati Mai, tum ho na. Meri Bacchi.

Hearing this, Kalyani give a tight bone crushing hug to anu.

Kalyani ::: ( in her mind) Aai tum Kitni pyaari ho , Bappa thank you for cutest aai in the world. Tumhari roshni chali gayi phir bhi tum purani wali aai ho .

Anu ::: Kalyani Chodo Mujhe, meri haddiyan todogi kya.

Kalyani broke her hug.

Kalyani ::: Are aai, tum bhi na ( both chuckles a little ).

Anu ::: Aur batao Kalyani, malhar ne tumhe kaise bachaya aur atharv ka kya hua.

Kalyani ::: Are aai apko pata, malhar ji toh super hero hai. Kal gundo ki dishoom dishoom pitai ki. Atharv bhi malhar ji se dar Kar bhag gaya but fortunately pahadi ( hill) se gir Kar Mar gaya Vo. Malhar ji ne Mujhe hug bhi kiya bahut der tak. Par unko bahut chot ( wound) lagi toh Maine bandage bhi kiya unko.

Pata hai unhone ek naya rule bhi banaya hai. Jab bhi mai sorry bolungi na toh Vo Mujhe hoto par kiss karenge. Subai se 4 times kiss bhi kiya. Pillu se bhi mili. ( she speak in one breath).

Anu ::: Chup, pagal ladki, malhar sahi kehta hai. Pagli Ho tum. Theek hai tumne kiss kiya toh mujhe batane ki kya jarrorat hai.

Kalyani ::: Vooooooo sorry.

Anu ::: Vaise such kahoo tum bahut khushnaseeb hoo, Jo malhar jaisa pati mila tumhe.

Kalyani ::: Sach kaha aai apne. I love my malhar ji. 😘😘

Anu ::: Hmm or batao.

Kalyani ::: Kuch nahi aai.

Kalyani ::: ( in her mind) Accha hai aai jo apne kano se hi baatein sunkar enjoy Kar rahi. God bless her.

They continued their conversation.

While sarthak knew what he had to do save the most important lady in her life.

He went to his office and prepared some documents and file a PIL in high court.

All the day went, malhar was collecting evidences against atharv. Kalyani talking to anu. And sarthak in court.

Next day

What he filed in the PIL was covered by the media. Headlines of ‘Times of India:’ read as ‘A new Law proposed by Sarthak , The Trial Lawyer.’ The entire article reads as below: ‘Sarthak rane , one of the leading lawyers in the country filed a unique petition yesterday. He called it, “Tit for Tat.” According to him, the court should order the person which are responsible for a vital organ failure to bestow his functional eyes to Anupriya .

In fact, saarthak demanded that all the prisoners who are announced a death penalty due to their crimes should donate each of their body organs to the patients admitted in the hospitals waiting for organs. This will help overcome the scarcity of organs needed for transplant in our country. If anybody causes damage to humanity which leads the victim in the jaws of death, then it is his accountability to aid human in repairing at every feasible cost, even if it means donating his own body organs,’ Saarthak says.

When asked more about it, Saarthak said to the media, ‘we are killing them anyway by hanging them till death. And that way it is a pure loss of the human organs which is a rare virtue.’ ‘The only difference in my demand is the prisoners will die doing something good at least by their death.’ ‘The person who did nothing good in his whole life, who killed people; can't we give him a last chance to do good at the time of his death? Wouldn't it decrease his sins for their next birth?’

Saarthak got the earliest date for the hearing of his petition. He had to get it approved in the first hearing itself; Anu can't wait for too many days.

At late night he was restlessly sleeping on the bed. A phone call, disturb his sleep.

‘Hello Mr. Sarthak ,’ Sarthak got a call late at night on the next day he filed the PIL. The female voice sounded familiar to him, but he couldn't make out whose voice it was. ‘Who is this?’ ‘I am Nimisha Dutta here, from “Sidhi Baat.”’

Sarthak ::: Hey Nimisha kaisi ho, bolo kya kaam hai.

Nimi ::: Hello, sarthak. Actually you know the petition you filed, I want to take a interview on that.

Sarthak ::: Nimi, I am sorry, but I am not interested .

Nimi ::: Saarthak Pehle decide mat Karo. Listen me first. This interview help you to win. As it will spread your views to whole country and empower your case.

Saarthak ::: OK will do.

Nimi ::: OK, meet you tomorrow sharp at 9am.

Saarthak ::: Yupp......

He again back to his sleepless sleep.

Next day...

Saarthak , the sober-suited lawyer reached the studio half an hour before the shooting began.

Nimisha was wearing a dark grey body fit blazer and a trouser of the same fabric with a buttoned-up white shirt. She was looking pretty and elegant, a complete businesswoman. ‘Good evening ladies and gentlemen. I, Nimisha Dutta, your host for the show; welcome you to the most viewed chat show of the Nation “Seedhi-Baat.” Today, we have a very special guest here. He is neither a politician nor an actor. At 40 , the guy is having a stellar career that's not only talked about in the legal circles but has made headlines around the country . He fills the room wherever he goes. He says what's on his mind. And very often, he will guess what's on yours. You either love him or hate him, but there's no ignoring him.

So guys put your hands together, for none other than Sarthak Rane .’ There was a roar of clapping by the studio audience, which welcomed Ssarthak in front of the camera. An inner strife had been popping up in his mind. The camera zoomed in on his face after the opening music.

Nimisha shook hands with Sarthak and hinted him to take the chair placed in front of the camera behind the coffee table. Hundreds and thousands of Indians were frozen in front of their TV sets to witness the most interesting TV interview of the time.

It was a revolution in the country, something more than a candlelight vigil or a hunger strike. Nimisha knew how to drive the interview very well and how to amplify the TRP of her show. She had been the host for over ten years after all. She asked the first question from Saarthak to start the show. ‘Sarthak , as we all know you are here to discuss the very strange PIL filed by you in the court. First of all, please tell our audience what is a PIL so it will help them to understand what we are talking about.’ ‘PIL is Public Interest Litigation. It itself says this is litigation for any public interest. In the words of some learned people, we can say it is a litigation which can be filed in any court of law by any public-spirited person for the protection of public interest.’ Sarthak explained himself. ‘What is public interest? Can you clarify?’ ‘Any act for the benefit or general welfare of the public is the public interest " said Nimisha. . For instance, an act raising concerns about pollution, terrorism, road safety, constructional hazards, etc. In all these activities we can clearly see the concern is the public interest. It is not necessary that the petitioner has suffered some injury of his own or has had a personal grievance to litigate. PIL is a right given to the socially conscious member or a public-spirited NGO to support a public cause.’ ‘It means anyone can file a PIL, there is no need for the person to be a lawyer to file it.’ ‘Yes.’ ‘And where can we file it?’ ‘It can be filed in any High Court or directly in the Supreme Court.’ ‘Thanks Saarthak , this is a good piece of knowledge for us. Now, since your PIL relates to organ donation, let us call Dr. Jatin Kothari, a Nephrologist at Hinduja Hospital to share some facts and figure about the condition of organ donation in our country.’

A man in his forties, wearing a well-ironed formal shirt and trouser emerged out from the audience as the camera focused on him. He was wearing spectacles and had wrinkles on his face. He took his seat in front of the camera. An extra chair was kept to accommodate him. ‘Dr. Kothari, first of all, tell us how many people die in a year because of the lack of healthy organs?’ ‘Lack of healthy organs causes 3,000 needless deaths a year. The problem is most of us don't think of our organs as a potential gift of life. If we can get people closer to organ donation, thousands can receive a new lease of life each year.

Regrettably, there is a huge gap between the need for organs and the supply in our country. As of January 2008, there were at least 44,185 people waiting for donor organs, and 31,576 of them were awaiting kidneys. The other 12,609 needed hearts, livers, eyes or other transplantable organs. Last week, a young man died in a road accident in Mumbai. His brothers were willing to donate his organs, but couldn't. They wanted us to not inform his wife about it as she wouldn't be able to bear it. We obviously couldn't retrieve organs without her consent, so we refused,’ said Dr. Kothari. Every year the pool of end-stage kidney -failure patients in India, who need a transplant to stay alive, swells by three lakhs. An equal number suffer from a failure of the eyes, the liver the heart, lungs or intestines.

Worse, however, is failing to offer these patients a simple cure: an organ transplant.’ Continued Dr. Kothari. ‘That's really ano big crisis. Supply is much less than the demand. Now we need some miracle to control the state of affairs,’ interrupted Mrs. Dutta.

‘And also the cadaveric transplants, in which a brain-dead person's organs are retrieved and transplanted into an organ-failure patient, are still unheard of in most parts of India.

In fact, the Indian Society of Organ Transplantation's website says cadaveric organs account for less than 4% of the 21,000 odd kidney transplants performed so far. In other words, the 4,000 kidney and 500 liver transplants carried out in our various hospitals annually are the results of live donations in which the patient's relative donates an organ. A donor can live with one kidney and in case he donates three-fourth of his liver, it regenerates to its original size in six weeks .

The apathy is apparent when one looks at heart and lung transplants which can only be carried out with a cadaveric or deceased donation. Barely 20 of these transplants are performed every year in India.

The demand-supply ratio is pathetic even with regard to corneal blindness: 2 Lakh corneas are required every year; barely 50,000 are donated.’

‘Thanks, doctor Kothari for enlightening us on such a serious topic. We really need a good solution to this problem, and I hope that Sarthak 's PIL is the required solution.’ The doctor went to sit in the audience again. Mrs. Dutta said, ‘Saarthak , now please put some light on the PIL which you filed.’ Sarthak looked into the camera as confident as always. However, the soreness in his eyes was evident. ‘I will explain it shortly but before that, Nimisha, you have to answer a simple question.’ ‘Sure, ask me,’ Nimisha smiled a little.

‘In your childhood days, when you were in pre-school, had some bad boy broken your toys what would you have done?’

Nimisha passed a louder chuckle. Had this question asked by somebody else she would have overlooked it considering it to be a joke, but as it was asked by the most prudent person in that room, she tried to answer. ‘I would have broken his toys too.’ ‘But what good will happen if you break his toys? You won't get new toys anyway.’

Nimisha and the studio audience passed an obvious gesture. They couldn't come up with a better solution. ‘I have a solution to this problem. Instead of breaking his toys, take them home. In that way, you will get new toys, and he would get punished too by losing his toys.’ Sarthak then looked towards the audience and asked one gentleman, ‘if you are travelling in your brand new car and a truck comes and crashes your car from behind. What will you do?’ A gentleman stood up from his seat, he was a little hesitant to answer, maybe he was nervous thinking he was on TV. He still replied, ‘I will ask the driver to pay for all my loss.’ ‘Exactly,’ said Sarthak and stood up out of excitement to express his feelings, possibly as a habit of him in the courtroom. The cameraman adjusted the camera instantly to capture him into the frame. ‘Exactly the same way my PIL is. What I want is simple. When someone hits our car, we don't damage his or her vehicle, we simply ask them to pay for the loss and buy a new one. An eye for an eye is never a solution.’ ‘“An eye for an eye,” you quoted Gandhi,’ Nimisha interrupted. ‘Yes, I support Gandhi's quote, but I want to modify its meaning a little. Gandhi said if someone makes you blind; don't do the same to him. I say take revenge. Make him blind, but by transplanting his eyes back to you.

Police catch murderers and terrorists. Court gives them capital punishment. We kill them because they kill somebody. What good we get out of it?’ ‘Do you want to say we should not kill them?’ Nimisha interrupted again. It was getting interesting.

Sarthak came back to take his seat again. ‘When we catch prisoners who are charged with murder, we should force them to fix the damages they created to human. Just giving them capital punishment won't fix the already caused damage.’ ‘Then what should be done according to you Sarthak.

How can they fix once it is destructed?’ Hundreds of thoughts were running through the mind of Sarthak . The more he was trying to forget everything, the more he had to remember all those bad events. He had to say loud and clear, no matter how many times it is required him to say.

After all, the fight for truth and justice is always more painful than that of false and injustice. Sarthak was about to elaborate his perspective in details when Nimisha interrupted him, ‘it's time for a small break. Don't go anywhere; we will continue to talk to Sarthak about the latest sensation in our country after a short break.’ The show was live, so they had to wait for three minutes until the advertisement was telecasting. ‘You want coffee,’ asked Nimisha as the spot boy offered them coffee. ‘No thanks,’ said Sarthak. He sat keeping his head down .

Nimisha took one cup of coffee and checked for her makeup in the break. After the commercial ad, Nimisha said, ‘ladies and gentlemen, welcome back to your very own show where our special guest today is Sarthak , and we are talking about the one of its kind PIL filed by the best lawyer in our country.’ She sounded repetitive, but this is how they fill the time. After a very small pause, Nimisha requested Sarthak

to further explain his perspective. TV anchors have an awesome presence of mind, for which they get handsomely paid. ‘What I want is, if we kill them, because they kill innocent people, it will be similar to the situation where we break the bad boy's toy because he broke our toys.

Prisoners destroy someone's body organs, we should take their functional body organs and use them for medical purposes. In the hospitals of India, people die every day because they don't get the organ for transplantation at the right time.

We are killing the criminals anyway, so why don't we use the organs of their body to give new birth to many of our people. In this way, we will be able to utilize the body which we are killing anyway. It is like organ-recycle.’

The thud of claps filled the room. Audience from all over the country was getting goose bumps. It sent shivers down Nimisha's spine too. Those who have lost their loved one because of the lack of organs in hospital beds termed it as a miraculous idea.’

Interview gets over. Both malhar and kalma watching interview on TV.

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A chapter dedicated to AnuSar.

I loved Sarthak here.

His unrequited love (right now).

Hope Anu understands how much Sarthak loves her.

I loved Sarthak's idea.

He was a superstar...🤩

The way, he thrilled the audience. It was fantastic.

Loved AnuYani moment.

Kalyani was so caring and Anu, our darling, wishing for her daughter's happiness even when she was herself going through a tough phase.

I loved the way you explain things. I can feel each and every scene playing in front of my eyes...😍

It was outstanding overall

Loved it so much...💖

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Waiting eagerly for next part

Hey neera.

Too much hard work n amazing work you did...

Loved sarthak here....

keep writing ✍️