KALMA FF - A promise .... Part 5 updated. Read author note pg 17 - Page 12

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Puruuu

Read them all together, i am very less active nowdays, but loved reading it, great work šŸ˜āœŒšŸ»

Will definitely come more frequent now šŸ˜›

Thank you purru ,what is your name. I will pm when I post next chapter

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

good work keep going neera

Thanks gayu .

😃😃 Will pm you

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Hey Neera

It’s written very beautifully...

I loved it so much

Thanks priya for loving it.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Beautiful update

totally enjoyed long update

you explored everyone's emotions perfectly

AnuSarā¤ļø

I know Anu thik ho jayegi

liked how Sarthak kaka was worried for Anu

KalMa are so cuteā¤ļø

liked how Kalyani took care of Malhar ji

liked how Malhar teased Kalyani

Pillu is so cute

glad he is found and is fine

loved Kalyani-Pillu conversation

ab uski custody bhi KalMa ko mil jayegi

KalMaSh hug šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜

Atharva is really dead. Good uski deadbody mil gayi

ab uski eyes se Anu ki drishti vapas aa jayegiā¤ļø

Sarthak Kaka Anu ko thik karenge

thanks for writing

and ha I will wait

your studies are important šŸ‘šŸ¼

all the best for your exam!

OK bhagu, thanks for liking it.

Actually I had involve both kalma and anusar.

Let's see, what happens next.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hello all, I am here , will post teaser tonight .

Thanks all the one who like it and commented. Thank you

For liking the chapter 4 . And guys plz read which didn't read till date. This ff is not best but a good ff.

Thanks all.

Will post teaser tonight.

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Posted: 5 years ago

I just realised that my reply post was in the draft. I don't know how but few of my posts were being saved in drafts rather than posting...I had tried two times but ERROR 404. So finally, decided to go with a new post

Coming to the chapter, It was beautiful.

You explored their emotions perfectly.

The whole scene was playing in front of my eyes.

I loved the way you did detailing.

Malhar and Kalyani's kiss...šŸ˜šŸ’

KalMaSh moment was so adorable...šŸ‘Øā€šŸ‘©ā€šŸ‘¦

Finally, Pillu got rid of cousin Papa...šŸ˜†

Sarthak...Loved his desperation for Anupriya. His unspoken love...šŸ’–

The best part was Kalyani taking care of Malhar. This is something that I want to have in the show. We had seen Malhar taking care of Kalyani but we never saw Kalyani taking care of Malhar.

Hope that Sarthak's idea works and Anupriya get her eyesight back.

Update Soon

Waiting

Waiting

Waiting

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Posted: 5 years ago

Teaser chapter 5

When there is a dark inside you and outside you. There will be a ray of hope in your heart ignited by lord . This ray is very small but a lot brighter than anything. This can lighten up the life of many.

This same ray of hope is ignited in sarthak heart. According to Indian constitution they can't borrow atharv eyes for Anupriya.

Sarthak was standing with kalma.

Kalyani ::: Kaka aap kaise bina chachi ki permission ke ye kaise karoge. ( Still tears in her eyes).

Malhar ::: Kaka kya chal raha hai apke dimaag pe.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: InkAndFable

I just realised that my reply post was in the draft. I don't know how but few of my posts were being saved in drafts rather than posting...I had tried two times but ERROR 404. So finally, decided to go with a new post

Coming to the chapter, It was beautiful.

You explored their emotions perfectly.

The whole scene was playing in front of my eyes.

I loved the way you did detailing.

Malhar and Kalyani's kiss...šŸ˜šŸ’

KalMaSh moment was so adorable...šŸ‘Øā€šŸ‘©ā€šŸ‘¦

Finally, Pillu got rid of cousin Papa...šŸ˜†

Sarthak...Loved his desperation for Anupriya. His unspoken love...šŸ’–

The best part was Kalyani taking care of Malhar. This is something that I want to have in the show. We had seen Malhar taking care of Kalyani but we never saw Kalyani taking care of Malhar.

Hope that Sarthak's idea works and Anupriya get her eyesight back.

Update Soon

Waiting

Waiting

Waiting

Thanks di, and updating the teaser today.

Di plz like the teaser.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Heelloo all, I have posted teaser for 5 th part. Hope you like it. I know this teaser didn't give any hint but next part will do.

So guys please like the teaser. I am not going to pm everyone. Am sorry for this, it is very hectic to pm each one. So will do to some readers.

Guys this chapter is also quiet long. Guys now I don't want anyone bound for the likes now. If you like my work then comment and like teaser and all chap. If not plz give me your advice..

So guys this chapter will be updated tomorrow.

And guys may be this story last from 2-3 parts more. I am working on them.

Hope you like it..

Thank you all

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Posted: 5 years ago

Waiting for it dear...

Update it soon

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