Forgiveness-Ss ( Chapter 10 updated on page 18 ) 10/02/2020 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Bhumi1992

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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Late update mila bt bahut hi mast hai it was worth waiting

sorry I know ek toh wait bhi karwaati hun upr se you have to msg me tab jaake main thoda bohot update kar deti hu.,I am glad that you liked it

I can feel Akshat pain ab to bechare ka guilt aur pain aur v increase ho gya

he he abhi toh aur bhi papad bilwayenge unse

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Originally posted by: Mrihika

Awesome update

thankyou doctor sahiba

Finally update mila

Bechara akshat jindal sach mein bahut mehnat krne pari aur age v krni paregi inhe akhir inki guddiya v to bahut smart hai

Continue asap aur agar aap baki stories ko v update krne ka time hai to sochna qa hai krdo upate😛

Last but not the least happy frndship day🤗

Long way to go Mr Jindal 🤣 Guddan asani se nahi manege 😛

Happy friendship day Gayu😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰

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Akshan ka tashan padhkar mazza aa gya

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Haay! I am getting super bored pata nahi kyun movie bhi dekh li toh I thought to update the story so please pardon me……….

Chapter 6

As the child hugged akshat and ran to his house.

@NIGHT-

GUDDAN WENT TOWARDS HER WINDOW JUST TO HAVE A PEEK THAT WHETHER AKSHAT HAS LEFT AS SHE KNOWS HIM VERY WELL.

SHE WENT TOWARDS THE WINDOW AND PEEKED THROUGH THE WINDOW MAKING SURE HE COULD NOT SEE HER.AS SHE PEEKED THROUGH THE WINDOW SHE FOUND HIM SITTING ON THE BENCH AND EATING SOME JUNK FOOD AS DINNER.

GUDDAN(MINDTALKS)- WHAT ARE YOU DOING JINDALSAAB? KYUN ITNI ZIDD KAR RAHE HAI? I KNOW THAT YOU DON’T LIKE THIS JUNK FOOD BUT YAHAAN AAP KO AUR KUCH MILEGA BHI NAHI.TABHI HUM KEH RAHE THE TO RETURN BUT AAP TOH ZIDD PAR HI ADD GAYE.SOMETIMES YOU REALLY BEHAVES AS AN ZIDDI KID NAHI BACCHE BHI BAAT MAAN LETE HAI BUT AAP.........

AS SHE WAS LOST IN HER OWN THOUGHT HER COUSIN CAME.

GUDDAN’S COUSIN- WHAT HAPPENED? YAHA KYA KAR RAHI HAI?

GUDDAN- H H HUM KYA KARENGE.HUM TOH BASS YEH PARDA KHEECH RAHE THE.SHE CLOSED THE CURTAINS.

GUDDAN’S COUSIN- ACHHA HO GAYA NA AB CHAL,LET’S HAVE DINNER MUJHE BOHOT JORON SE BHOOK LAG RAHI HAI.

SHE AGREED AND WENT.

AS HER COUSIN SERVED HER THE DINNER,SHE JUSTLOOKED AT THE PLATE IT HAD DAL MAKHANI,JIRA RICE,MATAR PANEER AND HALWA.

GUDDAN’S COUSIN- KYA HUWA? AAJ SAB TOH TERAFAVOURITE HAI..WOH ACTUALLY I KNOW JO SUBAH TAJ MAHAL MAIN HUAA USKE BAAD YPURMOOD IS TOO OFF,SO IT’S JUST AN ATTEMPT TO LIFT YOUR MOOD UP,EK CHOTTI SI KOSHISH.

SHE SMILED AND AS SHE TOOK A MORSEL SHEREMEMBERED AKSHAT HAVING JUNK……

SHE JUST TOOK AN SINGLE MORSEL OF EACH DISHAND AFTER JOINING HANDS INFRONT OF PLATE SHE GOT UP.

GUDDAN’S COUSIN- KYA HUAA,I ORDERED ALLTHESE ESPECIALLY FOR YOU AND ALL OF THESE ARE YOUR FAVOURITES.

GUDDAN- NO IT’S NOT YOUR FAULT,IT’S JUST KIAAJ HUMARA MANN NAHI HAI,HUM SONE JAA RAHE HAI.

GUDDAN’S COUSIN- GUDDAN GUDDAN GUDDAN…….

AND SHE HOLDED HER FOREHEAD.

HERE GUDDAN WENT IN HER ROOM AND LOCKED THEROOM.

SHE SAT ON THE BED AND STARTED CRYING.

GUDDAN PUNCHING HER PILLOW SOBBING KAISEKAISE KHA LE HUM YEH CHAPPAN BHOG JAB JINDAL SAAB WAHAAN BHUKE HAI,I KNOW VERYWELL HOW MUCH HE HATES JUNK BUT AAJ HE HAS COMPELETELY DEPENDENT ON JUNK FORHIS SURVIVAL AUR HUM YAHAAN MAJE SE KHA LE,NO NEVER YEH TOH GUDDAN SE KATAI NAHO PAYEGA.BUT JINDAL SAAB ZIDDI BHI TOHITNE HAI.IN WHAT CROSSROAD I HAVE BEEN STUCK NEITHER I CAN SEE HIM LIKE THISNOR I CAN FORGIVE HIM. SHE JUST SLIDED ON BED AND SHE FELT ASLEEP WHILE CRYING.

@ AROUND 2 AM

GUDDAN’S EYE OPENED AFTERALL SHE WASHUNGRY.TEARS HAD MADE MARK ON HER FACE SHE REMEMBERED IN NIGHT HE WAS THERE.SHEJUST WENT AND CHECKED HIM OUT.AS SHE LOOKED AT HIM TEARS STARTED MAKING THEREWAY OUT FROM HER CHEEKS.

SHE SAW HIM HE WAS STRUGGLING WITH MOSQITOESIN HIS DEEP SLEEP THAT TOO ON THE BENCH.

GUDDAN- KYUN JINDAL SAAB,WHY ARE YOUPUNISHING US LIKE THIS PLEASE CHALE JAIYE YAHAAN SE.

SHE TOO WAS RESTLESS FOR THE WHOLE NIGHT,INTHE MORNING HER COUSIN ASKED HER BUT SHE ACTED LIKE SHE HAS JUST WOKEN UP.

HER COUSIN GOT READY AND LEFT FOR WORK.ASHER COUSIN WAS LEAVING THE SOCIETY SHE SPOTTED AKSHAT THERE.

GUDDAN’S COUSIN- AAP YAHAAN,AAP TOH BADEBESHARAM NIKLE,WHEN GUDDU HAS CLEARED YOU KI SHE IS NOT GOING TO COME WITHYOU,SHE HAS ENDED UP ALL THE RELATIONS WITH YOU TOH WHY ARE YOU TROUBLING HERNOW.

AKSHAT- TROUBLE,NO I JUST WANT TO EVOKE THELOVE JO WHO APNE AAP MAIN DABA RAHI HAI.I KNOW SHE HAS WENT AND IS GOING THROUGHLOT OF PAIN,I KNOW I HAVE HURTED HER ALOT.

BUT I WON’T LET BOTH OF US SUFFER,WAISE BHIOUR RELATIONSHIP HAS ALREADY WENT THROUGH A LOT,NOW IT’S ENOUGH,NOW IT’S TIMETO BE TOGETHER.

GUDDAN’S COUSIN- KHAIR JO BHI KAR LO AAP KIDAAL YAHAAN TOH GALNE NAHI WAALI,SO MR.AKSHAT JINDAL YOU BETTER LEAVE THISSOCIETY OR FACE THE TERRIBLE RESULTS,SO MR JINDAL WITH ALL OF HONOURS,BEHADTAMEEZ SE I REQUEST YOU KI AAP YAHAAN SE CHALE JAAYE.

AND SHE LEFT FOR HER OFFICE.

THIS CONTINUED FOR FEW DAYS…AKSHAT HADSTARTED TO LIVE IN THE GARDEN HE HAS SHIFTED HIS LUGGAGE IN HIS CAR AND ONECOULD NOT NOTICE HIM WHEN HE WENTS TO FRESHEN UP.

GUDDAN HAD TRIED HER EFFORTS TO MAKE HIMLEAVE BUT HAS SUCESSIVELY FAILED,WHEN GUDDAN COMPLAINED THE ELDER MEMBER’S OFSOCIETY AS AN ATTEMPT TO MAKE AKSHAT LEAVE BUT AKSHAT JOINED ALL OF THEM IN THERE PARTY THROUGH HIS BEHAVIOUR.

HE ASSURED THEM THAT THERE WAS NOT ANYTHREAT TO ANYONE IN THE SOCIETY.HE JUST WANTED HIS WIFE TO BE WITH HIM.

NOW ULTA ALL THE SOCIETY MEMBERS WEREADVISING HER TO GET BACK WITH HER HUSBAND,AS HE IS HER TRUE TREASURE,SHE SHOULDTREASURE THE DIAMOND SHE HAS GOT,ALL AUNTY TYPES.

THEN TIRED OF ALL THIS GUDDAN MADE AN POLICECOMPLAINT AGAINST HIM BUT THE SOCIETY MEMBERS SAVED HIM AND WHEN SHE TRIED TOLAUNCH AN FIR THE POLICE OFFICER REJECTED AS AFTER ALL HE HASN’T HARMED ANYONEAND HER FIR WILL LAND HIM UP IN JAIL.

AKSHAT CONTINUED TO LIVE IN GARDEN,ALL OFTHE SOCIETY MEMBERS HAVE OFFERED HIM THE ROOM,BUT HE REJECTED SOME OF THEMOFFERED HIM ON RENT IF HE WASN’T COMFORTABLE IN LIVING JUST.

BUT,HE REJECTED POLITELY.

AFTER 2 DAYS HE NOTICED IN THE GARDEN SOMEOF MEN WERE SPRAYING MOSQUITO REPELLANTS.WHEN HE ENQUIRED HE CAME TO KNOW THATSOMEONE IN THE SOCIETY HAS COMPLAINED THAT MOSQUITOES HAVE INCREASED IN THEAREA SO SIR WE HAVE ORDERS TO SPRAY ALL THIS AND MAKE THIS AREA INSECTS ANDMOSQUITOES FREE.

OK-AKSHAT REPLIED!

WHEN AKSHAT ENQUIRED ABOUT THE PERSON WHOHAS COMPLAINED.

BUT THE WORKERS SAID THEY DIDN’T KNEW ABOUTTHE COMPLAINANT THEY JUST KNOW THAT THE COMPLAINANT IS SOMEONE FROM THESOCIETY.

AKSHAT SMILED A LITTLE,AFTERALL HE KNEW WHOWAS THE PERSON.

HERE FROM THE WINDOW OF HER ROOM,GUDDANSMILED

GUDDAN- CHALO! 1 PROBLEM TOH SOLVED ABBJINDAL SAAB WON’T HAVE TO STRUGGLE WITH THE MOSQUITOES WHOLE NIGHT.

SAAP BHI MAR GAYA AUR LAATHI BHI NAHITOOTI,AS JINDAL SAAB KA PROBLEM BHI SOLVED AND HUMARA NAAM BHI NAHI AAYEGAA….

AT MIDNIGHT FROM THE DAY HE HAD STARTED TOLIVE IN GARDEN EACH AND EVERYDAY A KID OR SOMEONE ELSE FROM THE SOCIETY USED TOCOVER HIM WITH COMFORTER OR OFFER AFTERALL NOW HE HAS BECAME AN MEMBER OF THEREFAMILY.

GUDDAN WAS SAD,SHE HAD TRIED ALMOST ALL OFHER EFFORTS TO SEND HIM BACK BUT HAS FAILED,HE USED TO HANDLE HIS BUSINESSONLINE THROUGH HIS PHONE AND GADGETS BUT DIDN’T LEAVE THE SOCIETY.

BUT SOMEWHERE NOW SHE WAS CONTAINED AS HEWILL NOW WON’T HAVE TO SUFFER THROUGH INSECTS AND ABB TOH COMFORTER BHI MILJAATA HAI.

SHE REMEMBERED THE DAY SHE SAW HIM SLEEPINGON BENCH AND WITHOUT COMFORTERS,

SHE TOO LEFT SLEEPING ON BED,SHE USED TOSLEEP ON GROUND AND SHE TOO HAD LEFT BLANKETS AFTERALL HOW COULD SHE ENJOY ALLTHE LUXURIES WHEN HE WAS GOING THROUGH ALL OF THE PAIN………..

SO JALDI SE JOOTE MARNA SHURU KARO,KAISAHAI! WAITING FOR ALL OF YOUR’S PRICELESS COMMENTS.

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Finally update mila😊

Bechara akshat jindal sach mein bahut mehnat krne pari aur age v krni paregi inhe akhir inki guddiya v to bahut smart hai

ABHI TOH AUR BHI MEHNAT KARNI PADEGI HAA TOH HUMARI GUDDAN ISI SE KAM THODI NA HAI.AFTERALL SHE IS WIFE OF THE AKSHAT JINDAL

Continue asap aur agar aap baki stories ko v update krne ka time hai to sochna qa hai krdo upate😛

I WAS ASKING ABOUT A NEW STORY BUT LET IT BE AS PEHLE MAIN KHUD BAAKI TOH STORIES COMPLETE KARLU AUR BAAKI SAB BHI PHIRSE TAG LAGAYENGE TOH CHODDO.

UPDATED!

BTW HOW'S YOUR SISTER NOW? KAAFI DINON SE HUMARI BAAT HI NAHI HUI...AND VIVA KAISA GAYA?

Last but not the least happy frndship day🤗

SAME TO YOU DEAR!