Forgiveness-Ss ( Chapter 10 updated on page 18 ) 10/02/2020 - Page 5

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Part 4

As Angad was telling Akshat all this Angad’s eyes floodedand he bursted into tears.Akshat hugged him,he consoled and assured him that hewill fix all this mess soon as he has created it bass ab ek baar Guddan se baatho jaaye.

It was 3 days since she left the house and he hasn’t seenher,nor talked with her,he was continuously trying her phone but it wasswitched off.Here Angad too tried to arrange an talk between Akshat and Revtibut has failed.

So,now akshat was left with no option,the next morningRevti was in her baking school in which(Akshat made her admission.She wasdecorating her cake,tabhi

An peon came and called’Revti Gupta’.

‘Jee’Revti replied I am Revti Gupta.

Peon-Principal has called you right now.

To this Revti was shocked,innumerous questions occupied hermind like Why?I had cleared the fees too?I hadn’t even broken any stuff then….

Finally Revti gathered courage and asked but Why?

Peon-That I don’t know I have just asked to bring you inprincipal cabin right now.

Revti-Ok! She replied and said Aap chaliye,I will just bethere.

Innumerous questions in her mind and scared she reached theprincipal cabin.

Revti knocked the door and asked the permission to be in.

The principal asked her to be in.

She was too confused as she saw an man facing principal butdidn’t recognize him as his back was facing her.This confused her more.

Revti(mindtalks)-Why did he called me that too infront ofan stranger.

Principal- Are Revti aao aao.,Look who has come to meetyou.

The man sitting on the chair turnedand this shocked hermore,Yes it was Akshat.

Ji ji Revti stammered.

I will just take your leave Akshat you guys have yourfamily time.

The principal handshake and hugged Akshat,while Akshatthanked him.

As the principal left the cabin Revti too tried to leavefrom there but failed as Akshat grabbed her wrist.

Revti- Dekhiye,humara haat choddiye,hum bata rahe hai shormacha denge hum.

Akshat left her wrist and said Ok! Sorry but you will haveto talk with me,tumhare aur tumhari di ke aise behavior ke wajah se hi mujheyahaan tak aana pada.

Akshat-Look Revti I know very well that you and your familyis too upset with me and you all have rights,but Revti look I can’t leavewithout my Guddan,please once just once bass ek baar mujhe usse mila do,Ipromise I won’t trouble you more.

Revti-Kya bakwass kiye ja rahe hai,How can I arrange anmeet with Di jab Di aapke khud ke ghar main hai.

I guess you forget that because of you she broke all therelations she has with us and abb humara bhi unse koi lena dena nahi.

So stop fooling me.

This had shaken Akshat.

Akshat-What?Guddan kya karegi humare ghar main,dekho RevtiI know you didn’t want to let meet me with her but aisa mazaak mat karo…….Achhachalo tumhe nahi milwaana mat milao sirf mujhe itna bata do who kaisi hai.

Revti-How would I tell you? I told you na I actually don’tknow and yeh aap kya behki behki baatein kar rahe hai,who kaisi hai and all.

Akshat could not bear this more he holded Revti tightlywith her arms and shaken her.

Akshat- Don’t Don’t you dare to invoke the cruel old AkshatJindal I was before Guddan entered,tell me how is she?I want to meet her at anycost.

Revti got scared and cryingly she replied.

Revti-Leave me,it’s hurting I really don’t know where isDi?Di toh aapke ghar par hi thi.

Akshat- Achha tumhe nahi pata ki Antara ke arrest hone kebaad who ghar chood ke chali gayi huh,wooh puri duniya se chupa le par tumhe jaroor batatihai and you are saying that you don’t know about her whereabouts.

Don’t you dare to fool me,you think I am an fool.

Revti couldn’t hold this more and she bursted into tears.

Revti(cryingly)- I really don’t know,please leave me,What Iknow is just that day Di came to house but Papa was out of Indore and Mummydidn’t allowed Di to stepin the house.

Mummy told her as she broke all relations with papa she hasno relations with us and this house belongs to Gupta’s that means us,so she hasnothing to do here and we didn’t give shelter’s to strangers.

And she left from door I thought she would have went toJindal Bhawan but aapki baton se toh lagta hai that she didn’t pata nahi kahagayi hogi….

This shocked Akshat more and he collapsed on his knees withthud.Tears rolling down from his eyes.

Akshat(murmuring)-Kitna hurt kar diya na maine tumhe thatwhen you didn’t had shelter tab bhi tum mere pass aa na saki,I am sorry guddanso sorry how how could I do this to you?

How can I hurt you to this much extent.

He got disturbed from his thoughts as revti offered him aglass of water and asked him whether he was alright?

First he refused but then he drank a sip as Revtiinsisted.He joined hands infront of Revti and begged her to help him to findhis Guddan.

First Revti hesitated but as she too was tensed where herDi was and how was she as she came to know that her Di hasn’t reached the home.

Akshat went to Jindal Bhawan,he was completely shatteredand lost.

Angad saw him entering,

Angad- What happened Bhai? Aap revti se mile?what she saidyou?How is Bhabhi? And such innumerous questions and Akshat was just standingthere lifeless he couldn’t even walk without support.

Angad- What happened Bhai? Are you alright?

Akshat nodded in no and this was the time he broke,he brokein his brother’s arms and cried his heart out.

Akshat- Nahi nahihai who wahaan,kahaan chali gayi kisi ko pata nahi,kahaan hai,kaisi hai kuchbhi pata nahi.

Akshat started slapping himself,

While slapping he uttered,

“Sab sab meri galati hai,pehle us pe trust na karna then tolet her go,I couldn’t stop her then though her father didn’t allowed Gupta’s sefinal baat kar ken a aana. Sab sab meri galati hai”.

Maine yeh tak notice nahi kiya that even jab uske papa kitabiyaat bigdi tab bhi who wahaan nahi aayi jabki I know how much she loves herfamily,Sab se pehle daud ke aati.

He got up and started smashing his hand on wall,His handsstarted to bleed,but Akshat wanted to punish himself.

Angad anyhow grabbed Akshat’s hands and said no bhai,Ithappens aap ne jaan bujh ke nahi kiya…………

And bhai let’s leave this jo ho gaya who ho gaya,now let’sfocus on finding where Bhabhi is and how is she? Don’t forget Aap Akshat Jindalhai… and finding information of anyone is so normal thing for you.Chutkibajaate hi kaam ho jayega aapka

Akshat wiped his tears and said you are right Angad.hecalled the Police commissioner and filed an missing complaint of his wife,Hehired some private,professional detectives too.

But in the couple of days all he has achieved was they hadcaught the driver of cab in which Guddan left and he told them that he haddropped her on railway station.

Akshat was too restless now ek toh his guilt and then worryof how guddan was as no one knew where she was and how was she?

Akshat(mindtlks)- Where are you?Kahaan chali gayi apne Jindal saab ko chod ke,Please wapasaa jao,I can’t survive without you,Jo saza deni hai de do but aise khafa matraho please.

And tabhi his phone rang..

He took it desperately as now with each ring he feels thatit might be Guddan or any news about her but his hope vanishes day by day.

The person on phone- Sir Contract ki saari quotations readyhai just have an glance once.

Akshat(in his rage and anger)- Aap salary kis baat ki letehai,if I had to look at these quotations too,for god sick I have some importantworks and worries to to be dealt with and after few minutes he realized thatthe employee was just asking him to have an glance…………He apologized to him.

“I am I am extremely Sorry I didn’t intend to hurt you I amreally sorry”.

Now this has started happening very often he scoldseveryone even if they hadn’t done an mistake,earlier he used to scold only whenthey have done mistakes but now he scolds ersons even when they are right,hewas just so frustrated that he even bursted on his employees many times.

His phone aagain rang and he shouted.person- I am sorryjiju,

Revti-Ohh I hope you are fine.

Akshat again apologized Revti.

Revti- Wooh jiju yesterday when we was having tea tabhipapa said that earlier we used to iive in Bhopal and there with us used to liveDi’s mama and mami,badimaa’s brother and his wife they are only relatives of Diand Di were quite close to them.

Akshat-Ok thank you Revti.main pata karwata hun.

So So Sorry ek toh itna late I hope this is worth of all ofyour’s expectations?

How was it?

Batana mat bhuliye please………….

Chappalein bhi maar sakte ho…………..

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Forgiveness chapter 5

An very happy friendship day to all,Isat to write an another story on akshan but then came to read kajal’s messageunse wait nahi ho raha toh I changed my plan and began writing this after allfriendship day hai and aaj toh kisiko bhi naraaz nahi kar sakte toh if possibleI will try ki who 2 ri story bhi aaj hi update kar du but I am in confusion ifall of you will be Ok toh I will post it,toh ab finally next chapter pe badhtehai….

Chapter 5

As revti told akshat about guddan’s mamain delhi,very next day akshat flied to delhi in search of guddan.when hecommunicated with guddan’s mama mami he came to know she was not there,he triedto take out information from both of them about guddan’s whereabouts but failedas both of them didn’t even spilled a bean about it.

After lot of efforts he could take outinformation from their neighbours that Guddan’s mama mami has an daughter wholives in agra.as he even has a deal to be cracked in agra he went there anddecided as he will get free from his work he will check out guddan’scousin,atleast he could get an idea about where she could be?

As he went to there flat it waslocked,he went to his work as the deal got cracked the clients insisted him tojoin there tour to tajmahal.he rejected but they forced him,akshat wasrejecting constantly but one of his client said.

Client- atleast for the person whom youlove mr.jindal,afterall it is symbol of love.

Akshat(in mind thought)-Kya karungawahaan aakar jab my love,mera pyaar mujhse naraaz aur dur hai.

Finally he agreed and went to taj mahal.

Here guddan was standing and staringtajmahal.

Guddan’s cousin- kya huwa madam,chalo ektoh jabse aayi ho you didn’t steped out of flat aaj bhi itne jabardasti se leaaye toh yahaan ruk gayi,kya huaa jaan.

A lone tear escaped her eye.

Guddan’s cousin hugged her,hey kya baathai guddu jab se aayi ho tab se dekh rahe hai,you are not the guddan I knew.asthe guddan I knew was full of life and yeh guddan.

Guddan- and yeh guddan zinda laash haihai na yahi kehna chahti hai na tu……

Guddan’s cousin- no guddan,but it’s justthat you are not ok.

Guddan(sobbingly)- nahi sach hihai,laash hi ban gye hai hum,kuch feel hi nahi kar paa rahe,dekh na hum yahaaniss pyaar ke city main who bhi pyaar ke sabse bade symbol ke samne khade haiaur apne pyaar se dur bohot dur.

She hugged her and said.

“guddu,when you misses him too much,jabunse itna pyaar karti hai toh laut kyun nahi jaati akshatji ke paas,pleasedon’t punish yourself like this…………

Guddan- nahi,hum nahi laut saktewhaan jahaantrust didn’t exist.Guddan still sobbingly aur yeh dard,yeh na humari saza haiakshat se beinteha pyaar karne ki ek aise insaan se pyaar karne ki joh humperatti bhar bhi bharosa nahi karte.

Both sisters hugged each other and wipedeach other’s tears and smiled.they changed there topic as guddan’s cousin’sfriends joined them.

Guddan was capturing the beauty of tajin her eyes,”kitna pyaar karte honge na shahjahaan apni mamtaj se”,joh unkiduri bardaasht na hokar unki yaad mainyeh tajmahal banwaa diya”,kya akshat bhi mujhe miss karte honge?” she thought.

And here akshat too was looking tajmahallifelessly,his mind was occupied full of guddan’s thoughts.

When he was looking here and there hiseyes felt on a couple,they were so happy with each other,they were roamingin serene surroundings of taj,with therehands intertwined.

Akshat smiled a little by looking atthem,”I wish guddan ki hum bhi aise hi yeh place enjoy kar rahe hote”.kitnekhush the na hum ek dusre ke saath,par humari khushiyoon ko uss antara ki nazarlag gayi.

A client came and took him with him comeakshat let’s see this place from backside,I have heard we get an excellentriver view from there.

As he went there he clicked some ofphotos with there clients and excused himself as he was not interested in itand here guddan too left her cousin and her friends alone and was staringriver.akshat too holded the beautifully sculptured verandah and looked at theflow of river as he was done even the flowing water too couldn’t calm him.

Akshat-“itni ajeeb se bechaini kyun horahi hai”…….

As he turned he couldn’t believe hiseyes his guddan was standing therestaring the river she hasn’t noticed him yet.

He was standing there staringher,smiling and tears making their way from his eyes to cheek.as guddan gotbored she turned and her gaze felt on akshat.

As both looked in each other’s eyes timestop for them,they stepped towards each other both’s lips smiling and eyescrying,each step was taking like ages as they approached each other all of theirmemories danced infront of both of eyes.

As both were close,and infront of eachother akshat tucked an hair stand behind her hair,how dare it to come inbetween that too when akshat Jindal wasdrooling his precious guddiyaa.

G…G…Guddan akshat uttered in small voicean lump formed in his throat,both’s eyes were shading tears,as he tried to cupher face and she ran from there.

Guddan guddan stop he cried but shedidn’t listen and went from there.

In the evening the bell of the flat rangand akshat asked her cousin to call her as he nees to talk her.but her cousinreplied she had already denied to have an talk with you,baat toh kya she idn’twant to look your face.

Just once he pleaded but her cousindidn’t melt and sked him to leave the house but he was adamant.finally she cameout of her room,he smiled and said,guddan dekho na she was saying tum mujhsemilna nahi chaahti”,iknew meri guddan aisa nahi kar sakti who apne akshat semilne ke liye mana nahi kar sakti hai na guddan”.

Guddan- sahi keh rahi thi who,I told herto say you like that but aap shor macha rahe the toh hume aana pada,I guessaapko ek baat kehni thi jo aapne keh di, aur humne sun li toh abb with all dueyour honour,please leave my house and she folded her hands.

Akshat- guddan he was hell shocked howcould she so coldly react to him he went from there and guddan went into herroom she wiped her tears as akshat was starting his car he just looked up andhe couldn’t believe the scene he saw,guddan his guddan was crying she wassobbing so heavily he could see the pain on her face through the window of herroom which was mistakenly left open.

He went from there.”abhi ke liye ja rahahu parjald hi tumhe main apne saath lekejaunga”and yeh promise hai akshat Jindal ka,main tumhari mujhse dur jaane kizidd puri nahi honi dungaa……..

The very next day as her cousin went toher office,someone rang the doorbell of her flat,as guddan opened akshat wasstanding there with a smile and a rose in his hand she started to close thedoor but he stopped and said,jitni bhi koshish karlo apna pura zor lagalo butmain yahaan se tab tak nahi jaaunga jab tak tum indore nahi chalti.

He left the rose there she took it andthrowed in the dustbin infront of him.he was standing in the garden and afterevery 3 minute the doorbell of her flat rang as she opened the door she found differentkid each time.the kids holded an red rose which dentils were covered with anpaper rolled on the dentils.the kids handed her the rose and kissed her cheekeach time.when she rejected the kids handed her roses forcefully and ran fromthere.guddan opened the chits and read”I am sorry” with a puppy face waswritten,her lips widened a little but she was not in mood.

She asked the kid to stop,but they saidthat uncle was giving them an chocolate with each time so they won’t stop.sheasked where is he? And they replied he was in garden of the society,sheremembered that he had said he won’t go back until she comes to indore.she promised the kids to gift them morechocolates.but they were still denying as akshat won’t listen to them.

She told the kid that go and tell himthat I had asked for all the roses ek saath toh you too won’t have to run.thakgaye honge na aap.

That kid smiled and hugged her.he kissedher cheek. She too returned the kid’s kiss.he went and told akshat that she haddemanded all the roses at a single time.

Akshat smiled and thought”itne jaldi mangayi”,nahi kuch toh chal raha hai iske dimaag main,par kya”.and again that kiddemanded roses.

Kid- uncle uncle de do na saare rosesaur saare chocolates bhi,mumma dategi aur late ho gaya toh.

Akshat smiled and gave all the roses andchocolates he had and kissed that kid and thanked him.

He went and gave guddan all theroses,guddan in returned gave him more chocolates as she has promisedhim.guddan asked the kid to wait and came with an bag in her hand.she asked thekid either to give the bag to his mother and when she will ask tell her that I sendedher the gift or to directly throw this in the dustbin.

The kid took it and leaved.here akshatwas desperately looking for the kid.as the kid came akshat grabbed hisshoulders and asked him.

“kya kahaan usne”.

Kid- usne,kisne uncle.

Akshat- are beta wahi jinse aap abhi milkar aa rahe ho.

Kid-ohh who didi.

Akshat- haa wo hi.

Kid- she handed me the bag and told meto throw this in dustbin.

Akshat suspected and opened the bag,hefound it was the roses he had sent her,he asked the kid not to throw and togift this in his family and friends.

That kid said are abb yaad aaya didi nebhi kaha to gift this to mom.

Akshat(smiled) and thanked him.

It’s way long to go akshat Jindal “,lagtahai mrs guddan akshat Jindal itni aasaani se nahi maanne waali bohot mehnatkarayegi yeh.

Koi baat nahi agar tum ziddi ho toh mainbhi kam nahi,main bhi tumhe indore liye bagair kahin nahi jaaungaa. Aana tohtumhe padega hi.

Agar tumhari zidd hai mujhse dur jaane kitoh abb meri zidd hai tumhe wapas lane ki ,main tumhe mujhse dur jaane ki ziddko kabhi pura hone nahi dunga……

Toh now both akshan had went intozidd.kkiski zidd puri hongi?will guddan agree?

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